Surviving on Mars, Connected to Earth Seventy Years Ago

Writing about this era is too crazy. If the protagonist were to mention anything about the future, it would be a cataclysmic event.

The author's writing skills are decent, with accurate descriptions and a smooth narrative. The overall framework is also quite excellent, with engaging plot twists and dramatic conflicts. Bai Xuan's character is well-developed, and the environment and dialogue are at least immersive; however, the characterization of the 1970s is a serious flaw.

I read a few chapters. The premise is good, but the writing isn't very good. In Chapter Six, a passerby imagines the protagonist was part of a secret plan to land on Mars. This passerby is supposed to be a carefully selected national elite at the launch site! Isn't that incredibly illogical? Did these national elites not know the level of their country at the time?

It's perfectly fine to clearly state the difficulties in establishing mutual trust between the two sides at the outset. But if you choose to start with a person from the bottom of society and spend 20,000 to 30,000 words writing about how this person escaped, took a train, encountered thieves, and staked out a place, then there is a big problem. Nobody wants to see this.

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In short: a novel about individual heroism 🙂

Alone on Mars, gazing at the azure Earth, and looking back at the desolate and empty universe, the protagonist's perspective lacks a sense of pessimism amidst the vastness and sense of having no homeland. Some parts just feel out of place when you read them. Is this a knowledgeable astronaut from the future, selected through rigorous processes to perform a mission in outer space?

Is this the old aerospace team where Qian Xuesen was still alive? It's a complete makeshift operation.

I'm torn between wanting to write and not daring to, and I'm also afraid to enjoy the thrill of it. So I'm stuck in this limbo. If I'm too afraid to write, why even bother with this subject?