The Iron Tide of Farming and War in Another World

Just think of a way to write down the protagonist in one chapter, then let the country control the plug-in, and then write a group portrait directly with the country as the theme. This way I feel that the book can be saved.

Even in a low-demon world. If the magic plague is any higher, humans will not be able to bear it. Technology is not private. Others can still learn. Magic is not necessarily the case. Humans may not have received private organs.

I saw the label "Cultivation", so I have to see what it was like at that time before I can decide whether to read it or not. Because cultivation is an extension of Chinese culture, it can easily turn into an extreme nationalist style of writing that depicts the highest prehistoric times and the invincibility of cultivation, making the work unbalanced.

It is written that elves have been used as wombs by the human kingdom for hundreds of years. Is this something humans can come up with? I have never seen this in a book. Can the author learn to draw? Waiting for your elf book 😏

1⃣️The government in the author's writing is slightly more efficient in collecting information. Considering the real news, it is not impossible. The problem is that those who develop alien soldiers, to be honest, understand that the author hopes to write more people-friendly. The problem is that it is too people-friendly and does not look like an elite selected from thousands. There are recruits who have been in the army for less than three years. They can almost fall asleep while guarding at night. There is no night combat plan, or in other words, it is not shown during combat. It's like playing, and there are words like "I'll come, I'll come". What does it mean to be elite? The grassroots consider how to save bullets in positional warfare, extend combat time, and kill the enemy efficiently. Even if they chat, they should pay attention to the enemy's dynamics😦. The top management arranges troops, decides when to invest which weapons and plans, estimates of the enemy, etc., Etc., Are not reflected 2⃣️The sun is very strange, so astronomers don't need to observe it? Is there a kingdom of God in the sky? Aren't the creatures so strange that biologists can't check them and give feedback? Didn't anyone think of the giant crow in the icy world of the magic world, the magic pet Druid? What's more, there have been military dogs controlled by magic. Didn't you think of the possibility of crows being controlled? Where is the talent? It feels like a beggar's edition😦 3⃣️The description of the environment is average, without the feeling of red steel entering another world. For example, in the virgin forest of ice and snow, a steel fortress appears, what does the fortress look like, the internal structure, etc., The work arrangements of scientific researchers, the army, and security personnel, etc. A very good subject matter, with many angles to play.

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes. It's really your fault for allowing a country to engage in aggression.

I have been following the book since I first opened it, and I feel that the more I read, the less interesting it becomes. The rabbit is written in such a retarded manner, and the main character either cooperates or fully cooperates, or plays by himself. The layout is too small, and it is both obvious and established. If it continues like this, I will abandon the book.

{"NickName":"Thirty-Four Years Cicada","UserId":323748508} Let's change the latest chapter. The only difference between Lei and Liu is that they were tricked by India when they went out without running. Besides, stealing WIFI6 to Qualcomm is a traitorous act. When buying reserve products, remember to read the small print clearly, otherwise it is easy to be tricked. In the end, everyone thought that not many people were honest now.

I really don't understand what the use of this protagonist is? Is it just a reflection of the author's self? There are many characters' perspectives that can be written here. I feel that this protagonist has a strong sense of overall destruction. Who would want to read this kind of book to see how you are doing as an individual? It's redundant.

It would be better to make the setting as if the rabbit suddenly discovered the portal, remove the protagonist and write a group portrait, it would be too fragmented.