Hogwarts: The Journey Home

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​I do is give a fair review to this book is that the author has quite a solid foundation and the details are well described, but it is this kind of accuracy that makes me feel that the details of this book are completely different from the original book. It's not that the protagonist forgot the plot, it's that the author himself has never read the original work. This can only be said to be an assembly line follow-up. The author is actually better at writing fantasy genres himself, his skills are quite good, the plot design is different from the original work, and there is no difficulty

If you don't want a heroine, wouldn't it be nice to be single? The mysteries of magic are worth exploring with all your energy. . .

Regarding the heroine issue, here's how you look at it. If you choose Hermione, some people will definitely abandon it. But if you don't choose Hermione, most people will abandon the book just because Hermione is not the heroine.. This statement depends on the author's perspective.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that the author wanted to change the protagonist to give him a different position, and put the protagonist into Harry's group. I can only say that it is not necessary. The protagonist's current position is fine. He will be more handsome if he focuses on magic.

Or the protagonist's moral bottom line is too high, or maybe I'm too low. Think about it, the priestess wants to resurrect Voldemort because she wants to save the tribe. You just pack up the tribe and take them away, throw the minors into Hogwarts, throw the adults into your factory, and kill them if they don't listen to you. In this way, the priestess' tribe will be saved directly. How reasonable

No matter how good the heroine is, she won't die without her, but a bad emotional line can ruin the whole book. Those who only want Hermione to be the heroine just like her looks, but they can't find a girlfriend in reality. From what the author is writing now, having a female protagonist just feels like a drag. (I'm not misogynistic, I'm a woman myself. I often see heroines in novels who just mess around every day and do nothing. The key is that the writing is so embarrassing that it really makes me vomit. I came to see the beauty of the magical world, not to see you fall in love!) (However, If the author can control the frequency of the heroine's appearance, it is not unacceptable. But in this way, the setting of the heroine will be very troublesome)

Stop arranging Hermione to be the heroine, having a teacher-student relationship is too disgusting

Strange memory. It was said earlier that the memory of the Harry Potter world was blurred, and later it was said that the memory of the Harry Potter world was blurred because he had extracted the memory himself. However, after looking at the extracted memory, he still didn't know anything. . . .

After seeing the paid chapters, I am not ready to continue subscribing. To be honest, the book seems to be well written. The author has derived a lot of his own things based on the original work. The character creation is also good. Overall, everything seems to be good. There are no major shortcomings. The only one I can't accept. It is a foreshadowing of amnesia that runs throughout the whole text, and the memory is restored at the end, but it is of no use. It may not have much impact on readers who have not read the original work, but for readers like me who are very familiar with the original work, it is uncomfortable. Watching the protagonist's various efforts and analysis feels very awkward, and there are too many dramas. I don't know why the author wrote this. Does he think the idea of ​​sealing memories is a good one? I won't say whether this idea is good or not. I'll just say that the amnesia caused all kinds of embarrassing "additional scenes" for the protagonist. It's really unfriendly to readers who are familiar with the original work. I originally thought that the foreshadowing of the amnesia would be filled in soon. In that case, I could keep reading. But I didn't expect that this foreshadowing runs through the entire text, burying more than 3 million words, and only comes out at the finale. What else is there to read 😅. When reading fan fiction, what you see is that the protagonist uses a prophetic perspective to do things. If the protagonist doesn't know anything, he loses a lot of fun.

I caught up on the latest update, and it looks good. The content and the scenes described are also great, and the parts about the black market and Merlin's treasure are also very interesting. Come on, the author, I will continue to follow up, and there will be more updates! 😄