Ravenclaw Is Like This

I have a good idea for writing a novel in the early stage, it looks good. But in the end, I just relied on this idea, the general manager and the transformation skills, and an extremely boring and boring technology line to survive. The author lacks the ability or ability to advance the plot to a climax and then let it explode. The various exciting and exciting plots at the end that should be the explosive point are obviously lackluster, not exciting enough, and not climax enough. The fictitious and wonderful writing style of the narrative, and the psychological changes of the protagonist that only you can understand, make this novel a very poor reading experience. The author is suitable for writing about daily life. He can still write more about water in the future. I like to read it. Come on, your conjecture and understanding of transfiguration is really interesting. It is the motivation for me to pursue it. I want to see the protagonist rely on transfiguration to change the world, but changing the world requires feedback to be realized. Looking forward to the next work, I believe you can let me see a HP world that no one else understands, but it is not just daily life that builds this world, but also the climax of the next book.

More of a surprise, I didn't expect that hp would finally have another human faction fanfic, which I call the mortal faction. The protagonist is an ordinary person with some talent. He takes on HP as a normal person. He is somewhat original and does not bring too much into the original plot (I don't like copying large sections of the original text). The protagonist has his own thinking, which is really good. He goes to study like a normal child instead of falling in love every day. There are also shortcomings. I think the update is really a bit slow. And because the daily writing is relatively plain, it can describe more of the magic of the magical world. I hope there will be less confessions or psychological descriptions of the protagonist. Being an author is very interesting. I hope to keep up the good work and wait for you to put it on the shelf to support the genuine version.

I hope there will be no love scenes, and if there is, it shouldn't be Hermione. There are too many Hermione wives. It feels like all HP fan protagonists are sharing the same wife, which makes me cry to death.

Invented a magic spell to tie your dick into a knot. If it doesn't hurt, it's not long enough.

Ravenclaw is like this. Students who go to the library only need to concentrate on their academic work, while students who join clubs have a lot to think about.

An excellent Ravenclaw obviously has sufficient wisdom, ultimate knowledge, perseverance, patience, self-control to control desires, and most importantly, a strong body and a running speed that surpasses strikers and Aurors. Run away, economic criminals, your legs are your most reliable friends - said Ravenclaw. I wish all the Ravenclaws had their legs broken after graduation, so it would be much easier to catch them - said Ravenclaw. True wisdom never puts investment in one place, allowing some people to take advantage of the loopholes and some people to repair the loopholes, a perfect balance - so said Ravenclaw.

"Dumbledore: A Legend" written by the protagonist can be a huge reinforcement for Lao Deng. In fact, by the time of Harry Potter, Lao Deng was just a symbol in the wizarding world. This is exactly why a lot of people questioned Lao Deng in the original work. The Ministry of Magic said that Lao Deng was confused and everyone immediately believed it. The most important thing about Lao Deng's deeds was his fight against the two Dark Lords, but Grindelwald was too far away from the people of Harry's time, and because of the influence of the saints, Grindelwald's deeds were undoubtedly blocked to a certain extent. Although Old Deng was the main force in fighting against Voldemort, the Ministry of Magic of that generation also made great efforts in fighting the Death Eaters, and the most important thing is that Voldemort did not die in the hands of Old Deng. These factors led to the fact that Lao Deng's reputation among the people during Harry's time was just a symbol. The label of the greatest white wizard may not be as recognized as the principal of Hogwarts, but as we all know, the real principal of Hogwarts is Professor McGonagall😏 As soon as the protagonist's book was published, Lao Deng instantly became three-dimensional, and he was no longer just the label he once was among the people. Now if the Ministry of Magic still wants to use public opinion to attack Lao Deng's reputation, it is basically impossible to succeed! Of course, I believe that the author will continue the operation of the previous book and add some intelligence to the Ministry of Magic. There should be no counter-purpose situations at all.

I feel that if you continue to write the biography of Dumbledore, even setting up an observatory in Grindelwald will be a luxury.

Everyone wants to read Dumbledore's novel, but you don't write it. When I saw the third grade students starting to work on technology, I felt it was a bit too dramatic. If there is a little bit here and there, it doesn't matter, but if you take dozens of pictures at once, it will be like reading a textbook to popularize science. After mastering technology, you will be like a living saint, and then go back to study. There is a big gap. Auto-purchase is now turned off.

"No, we can't continue like this. If this continues, my position in the novel world will be completely replaced by Dumbledore." I need to update! Even better! A more legendary story..." The hurried and panicked steps wandering on the wooden floor finally gradually regained their former calmness and dignity. Pushing the door open, came to the banquet hall, took the champagne from the waiter, and the blond gentleman revealed his face Her smile is as perfect and charming as ever. ➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺➺ In order to "come up with" more eye-catching stories, Gilderoy Lockhart traveled to England. Glen was getting farther and farther away, an eastern country he had never been to. As soon as he stepped into the local wizard tavern, a strong fragrance rushed into his tall nose. Lockhart glanced calmly. The mysterious herb hanging on the door, imitating the people around me, asked the bartender for a bowl of realgar wine, and then calmly talked to the elder brother who was drinking alone, asking what kind of herb was hanging next to the door frame of the tavern? "Watt? "The elder brother moved his gaze away from the waiter and moved it to this rare Western face. He drank the remaining half of the bowl of wine in his hand and then looked out the door in the direction of Lockhart's finger, "Oh! Zite, a trace of Aiglass, it, look Exorcise evil!" Although Lockhart's second best spell is about language translation (after all, there are so many stories, not always the language he can understand at first), but this string of rap (?) Really makes him a little incomprehensible. But this still does not prevent Lockhart from acting like this He expressed his approval and said that the eldest brother can communicate in his native language. People who are willing to learn about the local culture and learn the local language are especially popular with the locals, aren't they? The eldest brother and the waiter asked for another rice dumpling, and looked into Lockhart's eyes and said that his surname was Xu, who was from Xihu. It is a traditional custom of the Chinese nation to hang mugwort on the door to ward off evil spirits and repel insects, and he also came here to watch another traditional custom - dragon boat racing. Before the Spring and Autumn Period in Jiangsu and Zhejiang areas, there was a custom of holding dragon totem sacrifices in the form of dragon boat races on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month; later, due to the poet Qu. Yuan's death on this day has become a traditional festival custom for the Chinese Han people to commemorate Qu Yuan, and it is also one of the representatives of the Han dragon totem culture. Brother Xu took the rice dumplings presented by the waiter and slowly untied the string on them, "What ordinary people don't know is that Qu Yuan was actually a great witch who inherited the witchcraft of Southern Chu. The "Chu Ci" is a magic book written by him. As for the specific method of casting spells, it has long been lost. The wizards tried to use dragon boat racing as a sacrifice to communicate with Qu Yuan's spirit and let the leader obtain Qu Yuan's inheritance. " Speaking of this, Brother Xu slightly changed the topic with interest, "Does your magic world also have a similar ceremony, called, I remember, it seems to be called, Goblet of Fire? " Lockhart nodded obediently and hurriedly urged Brother Xu to continue telling the story of the dragon boat race. Wizards and magic secrets from thousands of years ago. Isn't this the story of Dumbledore and Gryffindor meeting each other and collecting books in the Hogwarts library? "Walking with the mysterious wizard from thousands of years ago"! If I could... Lockhart took a sip of realgar wine, suppressed his thoughts, and was wary of the wizard on the other side reading his thoughts through spells such as Lemenmimesis. Then he continued to ask Brother Xu for follow-up. Brother Xu raised the corner of his mouth, swaying the newly replenished realgar wine and looked at the tower by the lake, "Where are you talking about? Oh, remember - but they never succeeded. They felt that perhaps the scale of the sacrifice was too small and the effectiveness was too low, so they passed this sacrifice to mortals. What's funny is that wizards have always been physically weak, and few people can win the leader from mortal hands. Occasionally, those who are lucky enough to win the leader are those who work hard and forget the principle of witchcraft. In this way, they will not get this fate. " After saying that, Brother Xu turned to look at Lockhart and asked, "Do you want to see the dragon boat race we have here? It seems that no foreign wizard has participated in our dragon boat racing. " Lockhart blushed and nodded quickly. Brother Xu stood up and led Lockhart, who was swaying, to the upper reaches of a certain river. Looking down, he could just catch a glimpse of the bustling scene of people. In contrast, there was the loneliness and silence upstream, and Lockhart was consistent with it. Like the eyes of a burning forget-me-not. If no one knew that I, Lockhart, learned this story from an Eastern wizard, even if someone later discovered that the story was similar to an Eastern legend, I, Lockhart, had conceived the story first, and everything was at best a coincidence! "I forgot to tell you, I am also the realgar wine!" A kind of our Dragon Boat Festival culture, it has a similar exorcism effect as mugwort. In addition, it can force monsters to reveal their prototypes, and it can also prompt humans to reveal their truest desires..." "Oblivia..." Lockhart's wand just flashed a blue light, and a thin rope snaked from Brother Xu's sleeves jumped out and tied Lockhart tightly from top to bottom, leaving only a pair of eyes that were extinguished in shock. Brother Xu's smile did not change, "Eating rice dumplings is also our Dragon Boat Festival custom. In ancient times, people had the tradition of throwing rice dumplings into the water to replace Qu Yuan's body being eaten by fish. " Zongzi leaves also emerged from Brother Xu's sleeves like snake probes, and one by one they wrapped around Lockhart's surprised and frightened eyes. "Since you entered the tavern, I noticed something was wrong with your eyes. When you drink realgar wine, the greed in your eyes is even more undisguised. " Brother Xu waved his hand, and the huge "zongzi" jumped into the water obediently, "I don't know if the fish in the river can get used to eating this imported product. " He habitually looked towards the tall tower from a distance, and his voice sounded more like a sigh, "Forget it, after all, I haven't really committed anything wrong, so I just let you go back to where you came from. " Hearing this, the huge rice dumpling swayed eastward with the water. The people inside had already lost their minds due to drunkenness in the bumps. As for the driving force that allows the rice dumpling to sail along the ocean current to the west without sinking? Then the only way is to use the rice dumpling. The magic power of the magic spell and its most relevant element - memory is the fuel. In the setting sun, the spire of the tower in the distance seems to be shining with golden light? " Whether Brother Xu meant "Suisui" or "Susu", even the wind passing by could not hear clearly. Not to mention the delicious rice dumplings Lockhart-san made with seven meat and eight vegetables. Note: The oblivion spell is Obliviate, and Lockhart failed to finish it. {"TopicId":"1013798573471236096","TopicName":"Every year I will be in good health until I reach Ruiyang"}.

It doesn't look good when it's linked to Muggle technology. I think Harry Potter is here to see magic, and the writing behind it is so ugly. The results should reflect that, right? I'll abandon the book now. I'll come back and read it after a while.

This book was good at the beginning, but now it is getting boring. The protagonist should have a clear self-understanding of his own contribution. He is already the greatest wizard of this century, not the most powerful but the greatest. In terms of contribution, he can compete with Dumbledore and Nico, and it is even more meaningful... So... The monthly ticket explains everything. Before, it was ranked among the top ten in the same genre. It is a rare and good work. Now...

The club activities in this book are outrageous. Before you enter the college lounge, you join a so-called club. They don't tell you that the questions you ask are club-related questions, and they don't tell you that the group you are in is a club. Everything related to the club is informed afterward. If you don't pass before entering the club, you can't find the lounge. This is TM is outrageous, okay, the proportion of clubs is too high, and the proportion of dormitory life is too low. I don't know if the author has gone to college. Most of the people in the club have stopped coming after a few times. You are outrageous if you don't join the club and don't have the right to know the way to the dormitory. Can the dean allow you to do this?

Wish the principal a good sleep🌙

The fun part of the game in the middle period has shifted a bit, and it has become the main character talking about the simple application of subjects in the Muggle world, and then immediately driving the great development of the wizarding world. . . . . How to put it this way, it just feels a bit awkward. If the wizarding world is completely closed, it would be reasonable to have an independent technology tree with the Muggle world. But didn't the author yourself add that wizards and Muggles communicate with each other? Especially when the wizard used starry sky divination, he didn't expect ordinary people to use the starry sky for positioning. 😅 It's like you use chopsticks to eat, and suddenly someone tells you that chopsticks can also hold other things. It's weird, okay?

It's also the Triwizard Tournament, with the protagonist watching from the sidelines, and four warriors working together. Author, your previous work was much better than this one. I don't know why, but it does look extremely confusing.

The Hogwarts weightlifting champion Andrew said this (since there is no specific description of the appearance, so I chose the blue color of the 🦅 courtyard, so Andrew has blue eyes!) He is the security manager who randomly transformed a swamp!

This journey finally has an end...——We will carry magic on our backs and move forward.

The main points of this book are novels, transfiguration, and the principal's assistant. Recently, I haven't written any novels. I haven't practiced transfiguration for a long time, so the principal's assistant just took care of boring things and turned into a pure tool. Keep it first.

? ? ? ? Okay, okay, you're not going to invite brothers to support you when you open a new book, right? You damn pigeon.

I picked it up from William's book. The early part was pretty good, but the later part was too bad. It was bland and boring. A lot of baggage was not shaken and there was no conflict. The rhythm was too chaotic and the writing power was insufficient. It can be seen that the author wanted to write something new, but the writing power was not enough to support the originality. Overall Not as good as William's book There is no doubt that compared to those mindless and cool articles, the author is very smart. His thinking about magic is very interesting and very reasonable, but the problem is that it is too reasonable to be magical enough, and each level is restricted to death, so it is not cool enough.

Boring, this book is really mediocre. The main character is set to have played Hogwarts Legacy, but the information related to the legacy is completely gone. Even in the early and middle stages, it seems that this setting has been deleted, and it has become an ordinary person who has only watched speedrun HP movies. The changed plot is just for boring school daily life, and it is inseparable from the transformation technique. It's really boring to leave the original content, so writing articles is a little bit fun. Why not develop the search for ancient magic as a hidden line? Find the hidden corner of the HP world line and learn more idealistic and ancient ancient magic. Just like in the game, it is hidden in different places, even around the world. Collect ancient magic bit by bit, and then renovate your own personal magic.

When will I publish a new book? Although the back part of this one is a bit too boring, I think the author's writing skills are still good, but maybe he doesn't have too many creative ideas.

@Author, there's a new book 🤔 There's an up on Bilibili called "Publishing in the period". I really want to see the scene of rocking out at Hogwarts, can you write it 🥺

In fact, when I saw Dumbledore traveling into the past in the novel written by the protagonist, I somehow thought about why I didn't copy Doctor Who. Although the British TV series Doctor Who had already been aired at this time, many of the new version of Doctor Who could also be sewn into the past, and even the wizard could be written according to Grindelwald. Time The lord's rebirth can be magically changed into the resurrection spell (passive) invented by Dumbledore when he studied the Phoenix. The sonic screwdriver can be turned into a wand. Aliens can turn into various magical races or even aliens. It doesn't matter if the doctor's various classic quotes are also applied to Dumbledore. It doesn't matter if the book is written in a book.

A large number of main characters are invisible, and the characters who show their faces are homogenized and lose their own characteristics. All the characters are: Voldemort, Barty Jr., All the villains of Azkaban are invisible, Snape, Hagrid, the three little twins of the Order of the Phoenix and most of the decent ones are invisible, Grindelwald is invisible, roommates have very few scenes, and there are almost no daily elements; the characters who show their faces, including Taylor, Dumbledore, Nick Lemeka, and other principals and classmates are all obsessed with research, and there is no interaction like NPCs. Ravenclaw is like this, but Gryffindor, Slytherin, and Azkaban should not be like this. Skip to the end and find out that Voldemort had a chance to strengthen himself by cloning or stealing dream trees or going to the moon to steal Horcruxes, but his exit was even more hasty than Lockhart or even Quirrell, alas.

Ah? ? How did you end up raising and raising🤫🤫🤫

I want to say that I haven't seen an update notice for this book for a while, but when I looked for it I found out that I have finished it! ? Although there are a few plots that are indeed not exciting enough and too bland, but generally I still like it~ When does the author expect to release a new book? Looking forward to the author's next new book~

The new book is so popular, when will I publish another one?

I came to read this one after reading the last one by Professor William, and what interested me was "The Legend of Dumbledore" which the author didn't like to write. I originally thought that the protagonist would write one novel after another in the process of studying, constantly changing the magical world and the specific plot through the content of the novel, hiding behind the scenes. Who would have thought that later, especially the appearance of dreams, I felt that it had nothing to do with magic. It was just a change of science and technology route. I skipped it after reading the opening paragraph. The author wrote the book for money, and the content he wrote was not money-loving. It is useless no matter how much you write.