Naruto: In Konoha, I Make Cards to Become a King

Kakashi in the Anbu stage has not yet gotten out of the depression and decay stage of losing his father, best friend, and teacher. He is generally indifferent. Besides, is he that familiar with the third generation eldest son? The book calls out one brother at a time, which is inappropriate. I think it's okay to call me senior or "sir". No matter how hard it is to work, you still have to call yourself your job title. If you have different opinions, the author can refer to it.

That's it? ? ? It's in vain that I just voted for nearly ten monthly votes...

Aha First. So exciting

Frequent cutting of texts can easily lead to bad feelings🙄

Recommendations, comments, and monthly passes are all fine... Especially for pursuing reading. If you don't pursue reading and test the waters, you won't be able to get on 😭

RT, please read the new book in another issue, thank you!

I have a new book to support it, it's actually a Naruto fanfic, great. So far, Golden Chapter 3 looks very good. The writing skills are there, the "main contradiction" of the story development is also well set up, and many of the fragments are described in a very graphic way, which I really like. Finally, the protagonist's waistcoat is also a golden viper, which is also an easter egg.

No, cut it if it's not on the shelves. At least put it on the shelves and see the results. The author is not a master, does not have a large number of sticky readers, and does not rely on early accumulation. It is too rare to reach success in one step.

There is a female protagonist out of nowhere, and it doesn't fit the protagonist's character. Besides, you can just put it in Hinata. But Neji's sister, isn't it forced on the original setting? This is not the case for secondary creations of fans. Emotional scenes are easy to play out, especially in Naruto fans.

It looked good, but then an original heroine suddenly appeared in chapter 27. I hate writing original characters in fan fiction.