Bringing Fairy Tales to Hogwarts!

Dry food is edible but not delicious. The setting is okay, and it takes advantage of the dark fairy tale. The problems are not trivial. First of all, the writing style is mediocre and the characters are not flexible. They all rely on the Riddler's set of descriptions. Secondly, the time advancement is too slow. The time advancement of the fan fiction should be combined with the original work. When reading the fan fiction, you only see the "big events" and the main characters. This simple refreshing point has not appeared in this book for a long time, and even deliberately avoids it. The protagonist will deliberately not care when encountering the classic scenes, objects, and characters of the original work. Thirdly, I disagree with the specific content. For example, in the Malfoy prophecy, will there be a scene that only appears in the finale if there is a protagonist? After all, in Western fantasy, prophecies can be said to be certain to happen in the setting. I think this book has the same meaning. It makes me a little worried about the development of the subsequent story. Maybe it is the kind of novel that dare not touch the original plot. There are too many fans who will not write without the original line. It is expected to go down, especially after the motivation and purpose of the protagonist are clearly explained, the protagonist's B character that was spent a lot of time to raise in the early stage may collapse. After all, the character's ability is limited to the author. I have read countless novels that make the protagonist mysterious. The bigger the hype, the harder it will fall when the intelligence reduction operation appears.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, why did I see this book so early? 😭😭😭 There are very few HP fans who can do divination, and even fewer who are into fairy tales.

Fairy fuck seedling🌱, the protagonist maintains his character and does not poison himself, I am determined to follow it. I just came across this book too early and it was not enough to read!

The early stage was fine, and the minor problems were not hidden, but Hermione was very obvious. She obviously had the mermaid's singing voice, so why did she still have to rely on Yuga to beat the troll with a stick? What everyone wants to see is actually written in the comments at the end of that chapter. Whether Hermione tames the troll with her singing or controls the flowing water with her singing, they are all very fairy tale performances and very consistent with the theme of the book. But the author does not dare to write or deviate from the original work. Fans must respect the original work, but they will not attract readers if they only follow the original work.

It's rare to encounter a novel Hogwarts fanfic, but it turned out to be a eunuch 😓

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you are at the fifth watch, the reader's defense spontaneously forms, and the voice of praise becomes louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Still lack of stamina. Amazing at first sight, It's a pity that the follow-up was not well written, In general, there should be constant surprises and ups and downs, but the presentation is anticlimactic, and the more you read, the less attractive it becomes. In fact, you can feel that the author did write it well at the beginning, but did not think about it well. After that, the story unfolds, and there are various selling points in the early and middle stages, including how to gradually get better and what exciting plots are blended in.

The prediction was basically successful. I have this feeling when I see the author writing a protagonist who is powerful and has no tricks left - the more he writes, the more difficult he becomes. All the conflicts, contradictions and villains in the original work are nothing more than ringworm for the protagonist. How to write this book? Unless you forcibly reduce your intelligence or create a relatively crazy protagonist. The author prefers not to. Other invincible genres are more daily, but HP fan novels are destined to avoid the fateful showdown between the so-called Dark Lord and the Savior. There are also invincible fan stories, most of them are in the comprehensive genre, with the main line being about women. How can a long-standing demon, a master of manipulating people's hearts, and a powerful wizard accompany Voldemort in this book for at least a million words? I'm not optimistic at all. With this kind of power, it's already popular.

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No, it's the eunuch again. It's rare to find such a wonderful HP fan