A Chinese Exchange Student at Hogwarts

Africa has its own unique magic, and India has its own unique magic carpet. There is no reason why the East should be exactly the same as the UK, right? Those who use Shensan to talk about things are really drunk. Rowling is a typical nationalist, and that's okay. She writes her own books as she likes. In her books, Britain is the center of everything. To be honest, people have never considered the East at all. After all, the country's sense of existence was not strong at that time. In the era of Fantastic Beasts, everyone is greedy for the Chinese market. They begin to add Chinese elements to movies without making any effort to understand them. They just put in some specious things. You say it is a unicorn, but who is willing to admit that the local dog is a unicorn! As for the Qing Dynasty magician and the Chinese Minister of Magic, there is a high probability that it is for Chinese elements. I would rather believe that it is a wizard from cnhk and cntw than a local wizard. According to Rowling's own setting, British wizards participated in the World War. There is no reason that Chinese wizards are all weak traitors, right? Judging from China's population base, it is not a problem that the number of wizards exceeds that of Britain by ten times. Even if there are only a thousand people out, fighting the Opium War is just like playing the game, it is all bugs So I think the correct answer is to abandon Rowling's oriental setting and see if the author can construct a logical and self-consistent story.

I hope there won't be a heroine, I'm really disgusted with the heroine Hermione (just my personal opinion) The author's writing is really good! ! I almost didn't click on the book because of its title. It feels like it's the most logical and consistent book I've ever read about the fusion of Eastern and Western Hogwarts settings!

If the author finishes writing this book, it will bring about an epic change in the entire HP novel world - just like the sister next door's "Hogwarts on the Bite of the Tongue", which will become a long-lasting legend - this is my conclusion. Undoubtedly, the author worked hard to write this book - Taoism, as a native religion in China, is indeed a good entry point. Moreover, the author revealed his efforts between the lines - such as the protagonist's Taoist background and magic (very authentic), and the conflict between the protagonist and Malfoy, which shows the difference between Chinese and British culture (although there is a stereotype - but this stereotype is more of Rowling's original creation - especially the arrogance of Angsa culture embodied by Rowling - this is chauvinism doctrine and the influence of the British Sun Never Sets era, as well as Rowling's history and mathematics, which can be said to be against the five scum, have little to do with the author), and the author has tried his best to make up for the loopholes caused by Rowling's subconscious "Orientalism" as a "Western" person, and tried to improve "China" under HP's world view - China with the Han nationality as the main body. This is a historic work. In a small way, it improves HP's world view; in a big way, it cleans up the colonial cultural legacy of the colonial empires in the 19th and 20th centuries to a certain extent. The Sinicization and decolonization of HP is a long-term work. The author and {"NickName":"Half a Fat Chicken with a Round Face","UserId":9720762} next door have discussed this topic from some aspects, which can be said to be a milestone. But - as I said before, the author also has stereotypes - such as classic Western family problems (the reflection of Malfoy and the protagonist talking about family), and so on; this is a product of the resurgence of nationalism in the country under the Internet today, and it can be seen that the author tried his best to overcome it, and we do not need to be overly harsh. Legend, as a legend, is a milestone and a groundbreaking one. The emergence of the author's book has proved that we Chinese people have reflected on this IP and even the modern world system dominated by the West, and has also laid a foundation for future generations. Regardless of whether the book is finished or not, its meaning has been realized. I hope that in the future, more high-quality fans will appear to achieve further development for the Chinese interpretation and decolonization of HP IP. Justinian III Serisnus on his travels. Chengdu, Sichuan, 2024/2/12.

The writing behind it is really messy. I would rather the author didn't write about eunuchs. Some scenes give people the aesthetic feeling of opening a supermarket on Chang March Road.

The front part is pretty good, and the integration with the East is relatively natural, and it can basically achieve logical self-consistency. But the recent point of whitewashing the Dursleys and setting up a church and letting Dudley join is really unacceptable... What Harry did to the Dursleys in the original book was at best relief and forgetfulness, but not forgiveness. The only person in the Dursley family who changed his attitude was Dudley, because he was saved and realized his mistake, so he bowed his head first. Petunia and Vernon can't be cleared up by just saying "I lost my sister too". Because Petunia is jealous of Lily and hates Lily. When Vernon's sister humiliated Harry's parents, she didn't feel inappropriate or angry because one of them was her sister. From the beginning to the end of the contact and interaction between the two families, it was Petunia's own attitude and words that determined Vernon and Dudley's attitudes towards the Potters. And her usual attitude towards Harry was more like she was angry at his mother and used her child to find balance - it doesn't matter that you are beautiful and can do magic, you are not dead and you expect me to give your son a place to live. It is said that Dumbledore forced her to raise Harry. Harry's blood magic was extended to her by Dumbledore, which means that Petunia herself is also protected by Lily's blood magic. The Dark Lord's life and death were uncertain after he went to the Potter's house. Wouldn't the Death Eaters take it out on Lily's Muggle sister? Even the pure-blooded Aurors of the Longbottom family had not escaped. Petunia did not support Harry and blood magic did not take effect. How could she and her Muggle husband save their lives from the Death Eaters? Wouldn't the letter Dumbledore left explain the reasons and stakes? As for the cost of raising a child, have you forgotten that Lily is a legitimate Muggle and has a household registration record in ordinary society. Harry can go to school normally, which at least shows that the adoption has gone through a normal process in ordinary society. Then, the relevant British welfare system will take effect on Harry, and the Dursley family will receive the subsidies that should be given. Their family didn't spend any money on Harry either. Saying that Harry's magic riot caused trouble. If Dudley didn't chase Harry and bully him, he wouldn't have the idea of ​​hiding, and the magic wouldn't take him to the roof. As long as he is friendly to Harry, he will not want to resist or contradict others. The magical troubles the Dursleys encountered were all due to "flirtation first" and abuse first. If Harry hadn't been suppressed into an Obscurus and blown up their family to the sky, they should have been enjoying themselves secretly. Of course Harry can reconcile with the Dursleys, but it should be the Dursleys who realize that they have made mistakes first. The church was originally a very suitable opportunity. Harry put the Dursleys in danger because of his own reasons. Although the Dursleys treated him badly, he still felt guilty because of his kindness. Putting Petunia's "lost sister" remarks here, it makes sense for both parties to face Lily's blood protection and realize how much advantage their family has taken, thus prompting reconciliation. But what's the point of making up a plot where Harry first uses magic to bully Dudley... Does it mean that to whitewash Dursley, do you have to discredit Harry? Dudley had the same experience of being rescued by Harry in the church. He had just begun to grow up and ease the relationship, but then he was fooled by the church again. After all, the church doesn't have a positive image here, and what it says is more effective in sowing discord... I can only say that I hope Dudley will really have some brains in the author's writing, and think clearly about the relationship between closeness, distance, and interests. Don't give him a plot where he doesn't differentiate between good and bad, confronts the protagonist group, and causes trouble and delays.

When the author is writing, he should not overestimate the power system. Things like cultivating immortals will be very strange when they come out. However, traditional folk customs can be added, such as Feng Shui, painting talismans, raising ghosts, zombies, etc. Just refer to the Maoshan Celestial Masters and Feng Shui Masters from before the starting point. It is absolutely antique and can match the level of power. In fact, the painting style can be more biased towards that of the Pre-Qin Qi practitioners. The painting style of the Pre-Qin Qi practitioners and these wizards is the most suitable. The same is unsystematic, the same seems crazy and primitive, the same is the study of various magical creatures (The Classic of Mountains and Seas)

Let me talk about the evaluation first. It is good-looking (limited to challenging Aurors in front of the stadium). The world view of this book has a certain originality. The early stage is still within the scope of Harry Potter, and the later stage is direct. . . No evaluation. First of all, the author is very careful and fills every pit, which is very good. But later on, he fills in the pits for the sake of filling them, regardless of whether the plot is reasonable or not, which is terrible. Secondly, as a fanfic, you can create unique features and spread your imagination, but if you go from a magic novel to saving the world and fighting the doomsday, is it too far-fetched? There are many characters in the original work, especially Snape. You are just a passerby here, and even the beloved with unforgettable eyes, you play riddles all day long. Most of the fanfics are meant to make up for the regrets of the original work, rather than digressing too much into the later stages of the story. From the early stage, the writing style is very good and the story is compact, but I don't know if it is for other reasons. The later content is completely compiled for the sake of editing. It has been separated from the magical world and gives people the feeling of a doomsday novel. I thought the Slytherin explanation from the beginning would be carried through to the end, but it turned out that there was a wave of forced explanations at the end, and the true Slytherin spirit that was particularly good in the early stage disappeared in the later stage. Starting from the Goblet of Fire, you can feel that the author is trying hard to express a grand atmosphere, but you are just a passerby. Occasionally coming to a few paragraphs is completely coping. Instead of doing this, it is better to emphasize the writing and make the characters more full and three-dimensional like the original three schools. The battle in the stadium, especially the death of Voldemort, is a bit like Qiao Shan's version of three fights with white-bone demons. What's the matter, rush to reincarnate, why are you in a hurry. The bad ending brought down the whole work. I think you wrote very well before Goblet of Fire. Because of this, shouldn't a good child pay more attention to its later development? Especially the groundbreaking creations of Aunt Petunia, Sirius, Malfoy and others make people feel reasonable, unexpected, and particularly excellent. But in the end you were really speechless, so I patiently forced myself to finish reading the ending. I hope the author can have time to think about the plot at the beginning of Goblet of Fire and rewrite it. It can be longer and slower, and the characters in the original work can be three-dimensional. Slytherin, Uncursed, etc. At the beginning can be slowly filled in. Don't finish it in one or two chapters. This is not worth the long foreshadowing. However, generally speaking, the work is remarkable. The first few volumes are very exciting. Just because of the deep love and deep responsibility, the later volumes are deeply hated. The words may be a bit blunt, I hope the author doesn't mind. Alas, I really think of your ending. . .

What can I say? The author has a lot of ideas, but it is very disturbing to watch. He obviously lost control later on and started to run wild. Church, mold, modern weapons, he obviously wanted everything, but he didn't put it together well. The part after fourth grade is really unwatchable.

After reading two chapters, um~ the mortal protagonist who can evade the Death Curse many times, um, he thought the Death Curse was as fast as a turtle crawling... And then he could kill the wizard who was a Death Eater with one shot. The wizard didn't know that he had never seen this pistol. I pfft... Xiao Bai Wen

Well, I don't know what to say, so let's talk about why I like this book When I was a child, I read the original book written by Aunt Rowling. At that time, I was thinking, there is magic in the West, but what about the Taoism of my ancient Eastern country? Which one is strong and which one is weak? Since then, I have been looking for HP fans from time to time, and finally found this book a few months ago. During this period, I also read many HP fans. This one perfectly fits my imagination, so I highly recommend this book 👍