Hogwarts: I'm Really a Model Wizard

If the love line is not well written, why not consider not writing it? After all, there is little impact without a CP. If you write a random CP, you will end up with Conan. And if you have magic, what kind of girlfriend do you want? Do you still want to be a great magician? Look at the three black and white devils, which one has a girlfriend?

Just don't be Hermione as the heroine, I'm tired of aesthetics

How about setting the pig's trotter Animagus as a crocodile? It feels like it has a strong beauty.

Personally, I think this is a very good HP novel. Mainly, I like the warm daily life on campus, the sincere friendship between friends, and the sense of ignorance and innocence. But it's not just ordinary school life, so that's why I read HP fanfiction. This book perfectly meets my requirements. The daily writing is written, the plot is complete, and the details can show that the protagonist is strong but not outrageous. It gives people the feeling of slowly growing up from the first grade (maybe because there is less pretense). Originally, I wanted to say more, but after thinking about it, it's not necessary. The protagonist is very powerful. He doesn't deliberately pretend to be a pig or "show his holiness", and he can protect the people around him from being bullied. I personally like these ordinary and real daily life, which makes me yearn for and bring me in, come on. Writing about daily life also requires skill. If you are not good at it, it will be ok (some HP is really high). At present, I personally don't seem to be good at it most of the time. I hope the author will make more updates🙏🏻

The author is considered a good hand at writing fan fiction, and it fits the original work very well. Whether it is the character design or the protagonist's ability or magic application, these are all in line with the atmosphere of the original work. The only time the author messed up the secret room chapter with his own imagination, but overall it's a good fanfic and the next one is worth looking forward to.

Just change the magic, and the heroine will be determined. Tom Riddle. Naruto has a snake aunt😏😏😏, and the magical world is not a bad idea. Tom's sister is strong, has been on the throne, has an iron-blooded struggle experience, has a firm belief, and has countless fans. She only wants to return to the throne and dominate the European magic world. The protagonist can be a strategist, a general, and a king😏

The Chamber of Secrets chapter is poorly written, and the protagonist's behavior is unbelievable. Many HP fans will write Dumbledore as a villain, but not many will write Dumbledore as Alzheimer's disease. The author is one. This precursor was already present in the Philosopher's Stone chapter. The entire Philosopher's Stone test level was carefully designed by Lao Deng. Lao Deng will definitely keep an eye on Harry at all times. The protagonist deliberately chooses the day when Harry takes action to complete the entire level. He must ask Voldemort directly about the Horcrux while Lao Deng is watching. At that time, I felt that the plot had exploded. Later, the author patched it up and said that Lao Deng didn't even see what Voldemort was doing, so he reluctantly endured it. I can't stand the secret room chapter anymore. The entire plot has exploded, and even the patches from the Big Four can't make up for it. The protagonist travels through time and attacks with a basilisk. What's the logic of his behavior? In the original work, Harry was besieged by dementors and was saved by someone using the God Guard. He traveled through time to go to that place to see who it was, but there was no one. Harry saved himself with the God Call. This logic is complete. The author's plot is that Harry is besieged by dementors, and then the dementors are deliberately attracted by Harry from the future. Why? Oh, Harry in the past was besieged by dementors, so Harry in the future has to ensure that this event will happen. How funny is that?

I read it in one go, let's talk a little bit about it. First of all, I think this is a good book. It has flaws, but the flaws do not hide the good points. It is worth reading. I write this in the hope that it will help the author improve. After all, the author writes wonderfully and it is a pleasure to read. The obvious advantages of this book. The author has indeed grasped the writing style of the original work, and it feels like the "original work" when reading it. Reading between the lines can always make people feel that this is in HP. The characters of the original work have also been expanded to varying degrees without being OOC. The thing that impressed me the most was Snape's two or three things about expanding his private arsenal of medicines. There was a sense of joy and it really seemed like something Snape could do. The various expanded interpretations of the details of the original work are both interesting and do not feel abrupt or foreign, which is rare. The flaws in what I have read so far, I feel, are mainly caused by one problem. I summarized it as "the author over-introduces the protagonist into the book". In other words, when writing a book, I failed to separate myself from the protagonist well. As a character in the book, the protagonist's own "personality" is not independent enough. But fortunately, only the protagonist is like this. I think the author still brought the other characters to life. This point reflects at least two points in the writing of this book: First, the protagonist is relatively too calm and omnipotent. 2. Some plots are slightly unclear in their writing. The protagonist is too "calm" in the face of everything that happens. At present, the plot is largely original due to the intervention of the protagonist, and the plot of the original work has been broken and can only be used as a background board. Even though the protagonist is a time traveler, he behaves too calmly. Because the author knows what is going to happen next, the protagonist also "knows" it. It is shown in the article that he is confident and does not panic at all, and can do anything with ease. There is no need to consider the negative consequences of any action taken by the protagonist, because the author has already arranged it, and subsequent development is locked, even if there are other possibilities in theory. The most typical example of this is that the devil's vine is replaced with biting cabbage in the early part of this article. According to the development of the story, the person who jumped down the trap door may be Rocky or the trio, but when the protagonist is replaced by cabbage, there is no text description to express this concern. Because it had been arranged, Wen Luoqi would jump down first and fall half to death, so the trio took the initiative to prepare brooms and fly down without being able to fall. The second point is that occasionally the description is not clear. The overall reading of this book is quite smooth, but there are always descriptions of some plots that make people feel that the context of things is not clear enough. This feels like the author has confused his own understanding with that of the protagonist. As a result, "known things" that the author has not stated before are mixed into the description, causing the reader to feel that the description is missing and the context is confusing. Fortunately, this situation does not occur frequently, and the actual expression can be basically made clear by contacting the context. This is my reflection after reading. I hope I can attract the author with my nonsense~

I can say that the first half is the best I have seen in HP, but the second half is too bad. I prefer to watch the protagonist explore the magical world. I am tired of watching all kinds of gauzy Voldemort plots. I originally came here for the protagonist to explore the magical world, but the rest of the book is full of fighting with Voldemort. Why don't I read the original work? I've judged it to be a low-grade HP fanfic in recent years. Anyone who still writes the plot of the original work is already unfavorable. Other fans may not have as delicate a writing style and plot as this book, but they at least jumped out of the framework of the original plot. One Voldemort wrote half of the book, which makes it hard for me to believe that this is a new HP fanfiction. The front part is very exciting, especially the magical beasts, but the back part is disgusting. I skipped to finish reading.

Beautiful, recommended. The author grasps the character of Hufflepuff very well. The little badgers are kind but not stupid. The little badger written by the author is the kind who provokes the lion and the snake to fight against the fake, then watches the show from the side, and finally sends the injured one to the hospital. So everyone remembered that the little badger would send people to the hospital, while the lion and the snake would only fight...😂 Very interesting. Actually, I feel that now, the little badgers are the kind of heroes who can both "I am a student and send me this" on the Internet😂 and at the same time, they can share seeds😜