The Hogwarts Bard

The writing is very good, but I only have one wish, not that the heroine is Hermione. I really saw enough. Hermione's character is not good enough as a friend, but as a girlfriend, only Ron can stand her. The protagonist obviously has his own secrets and style, and I don't recommend giving him a female lead.

This plot is too difficult to stretch. I ignored some small bumps in the front and suddenly pulled a knot. The emotional scene was originally stiff. It would be okay if Hermione usually interacted with HP. You have to strengthen it. If the strength is low, it will be worse. Why, do you have to bring your wife to fight with you? Wouldn't it be nice to have a fantasy world adventure for couples, add a heroine role, and write about the sweet daily life of love? Okay, the emotional scenes are not well written, so the scenes are forced, right? π_π

The heroine Hermione is boring at first glance. I haven't seen the movie and I don't understand what's so good about her.

When I look back at this book now, it seems that it was caused by the heroine issue. I feel like the author was mentally disturbed at the time, and all the posts raising this issue were deleted (including me). The heroine shares the golden finger of the protagonist. In order to strengthen the heroine by writing her to death during the decisive battle, these two points are fundamentally in conflict, let alone whether they are poisonous or not. If the female protagonist can share the golden finger of the male protagonist, it means that the author or the readers like this character very much, and then in order to strengthen the female protagonist and take her offline, this writing method is usually used for female protagonists who are not very popular... In short, I hope the author can learn a lesson and write a better book.

This month, I was really disgusted. I ordered more than 350 chapters of this book, and I got a huge one. There is another book, "The Warm Dragon", which has been updated to 700 chapters, and it also gave me a lot of trouble. I'm convinced. I really fucking regret subscribing to your books. When I see your books in the future, I won't read them in the introduction. Block directly.

The heroine was forced to be established, and she had to write it to death. The comments even asked me how to take her to the hiding place without dying. This is the most disgusting novel I have read in recent years.

Are you saying that the protagonist has the same strength as the world's final boss? Surrounded by three of the world's top magical creatures who can teleport Both himself and his girlfriend can use the Iron Armor Curse to avoid damage Let the world's final boss, a subordinate who has only taught a few times and hasn't learned magic for a few years, kill his woman? Classic, so classic The protagonist was able to react to Voldemort's Death Curse. He didn't have time to finish the little guy before he raised his hand. He didn't have time to put an armor spell on his woman. He didn't have time to let the phoenix teleport to the rescue. And teleport Hermione away to save her life The world's top combat power cannot protect her own woman when she is less than 2 meters away. If she hadn't tried her best to become a ghost, she would have lost my love forever This plot is so reasonable. Our author is the best at arranging plots. There is no more reasonable plot in the world than this.

If you have subscribed, I will jump into the trap later Generally speaking, there are a lot of self-feeling articles in the literary youth books with HP cover. The author is very happy with the writing, but the readers are not happy with it. The best example is that Hermione was written to death and resurrected in this book. I am sure that a lot of people gave up on it at that time, including me. In the follow-up, I inferred that it was definitely a bad ending or a eunuch, and sure enough At that time, I remember that the author also said that the follow-up plot had been thought out. As a result, I looked at the title, and it seemed that the writing was alive again This author's book feels disorganized. He has not thought about how to write the follow-up content, how readers will react, and it feels good even if it is badly written I have reviewed this book out of 10, which is probably 1 point I suggest this author wait for the book to be finished, or not to subscribe. Even if it is finished, if you want to subscribe, read the discussion first, so as not to be disgusted after subscribing

The more I read, the more I feel that the heroine is awkward, sharing the protagonist's cheats, no, why, she really doesn't deserve it as far as this book is concerned

After reading Chapter 120, I feel that the protagonist does not need a heroine, and the development of the story will be more reasonable!