The Mage of Type-Moon

When you update once, minor flaws will be magnified, and your writing style will be criticized. When you're up two hours in a row, a little patience is born, and the plot's progress becomes more important. When you're up past midnight, small praises begin to emerge, and the number of dead harvests begins to decline.

There's no need to write such a detailed event log; the amount of background information is excessive, even exceeding the amount of plot content. You're writing fan fiction, not a setting guide.

The biggest problem with this book is that despite the protagonist having a huge advantage, he always comes across as a clown 🤡! You can be weak, you can lose, but you can't be a clown. Just when things are getting exciting, a big boss pops up, and the protagonist is completely controlled by others. Do you find that interesting?

In the second book, it's clear the author's focus has shifted back to the protagonist, which is good. The descriptions of large-scale scenes are also quite effective; after all, a magician is someone who craves ritual, isn't he?

It feels like it's turned into an ensemble drama. Novels and games are different, and it's strayed a bit from the main theme.

That's incredible! The Lancer, without a Master, managed to kill the Assassin with a Command Seal with just one Command Seal, and even managed to survive until a new contract was signed. Is this the heroic spirit version of "comparison is the thief of joy"?

This is a rare fanfiction that doesn't have a system, doesn't rely on otaku tropes or overused tropes, and doesn't feel out of place at all. I hope the author writes more! 🌹

Since everyone is asking how to summon Servants from Lostbelts, here's a unified explanation. This orchid is not the same as that orchid. This one is a remnant of Albion's spirit, who created a spirit origin for himself through the Holy Grail ritual. It was this image that Albion observed and used as a template. Just like how the inner self of Caster the dog is sometimes not the dog itself. The interior here is not the Lostbelt's demon orchid. First of all, thank you for your support, everyone!

In the first volume, the protagonist had a dream that spanned several chapters. At the time, this dream deviated from the main plot of the first volume and served as foreshadowing for the second volume. However, because it deviated from the main plot of the first volume, the reading experience was not very good.

If Chaldea exists in any world, it's a Lostbelt. Since there's no Chaldea in Pan-Human History, who is Chaldea would be embarrassed. And the idea of ​​eliminating Lostbelts for Pan-Human History is laughable even to Zeus.