The Mage of Type-Moon

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

There is no need to write such an event book. The amount of science popularization exceeds the standard. This is already more than the amount of plot. You are writing fan fiction, not a setting collection.

The biggest problem with this book is that despite the huge plot, the main character always looks like a clown🤡! You can cheat, you can lose, but you can't be a clown. Just when you're about to get excited, I'll give you a big BOSS. Everything about the protagonist is under the control of others. Do you think it's interesting?

In the second part, it can be seen that the author's attention has returned to the protagonist, which is good. The description of the big scenes is also impressive. The so-called magicians are people who prefer a sense of ritual, aren't they?

It feels like it has become a group drama. The novel and the game are still different, and it is a bit off topic.

It's so unbelievable that a Lancer without a Master just killed an Assassin with a Command Seal with just one command spell, and he was still able to survive until a new contract was signed. Is this the heroic version of "people are more annoying than others"?

This is a rare TM fanfic that has no system, no nerds, no bad jokes, and no ambiguity. I hope the author writes more 🌹

Seeing that everyone is talking about how to summon the heroic spirits from the Lostbelt, here is a unified explanation. This demon orchid is not that demon orchid. The one here is the remaining spirit of Albion. With the help of the Holy Grail ritual, it created a spiritual base for itself. It observed this image and directly applied it as a template. Just like Caster, the inside of the big dog is sometimes not the big dog himself. The inner being here is not the Orchid from the Lost Belt. First of all, I would like to thank my readers for their support. Thank you all!

In the first volume, the protagonist had a dream, a dream that lasted for several chapters. At that time, this dream broke away from the main line of the first volume and was a foreshadowing of the second volume. However, because it was separated from the main line of the first volume, the reading experience was not very good. In the second volume, the protagonist uses someone else's perspective to obtain information, and the protagonist is taken offline for about ten chapters at once (I don't know if this plot is based on the original work, but I have always been in the clouds, and I was confused when reading it). The protagonist is not seen in these ten chapters. Although these ten chapters have promoted the plot, is such a long and detailed foreshadowing too much? It feels like a very poor experience.

Any world with Chaldea is a Lost Belt, and there is no Chaldea in the history of pan-humanity. So who is Chaldea and who is embarrassed? They even said that they would cut off the Lost Belt for the history of pan-humanity, which even made Zeus laugh.