Hogwarts: What Could a Little Wizard Possibly Do Wrong?

The first hundred chapters were great, but chapter 110 felt like it was written by a different person. First, it introduced the concept of Aether, then devoted entire chapters to its worldview, connecting it to alchemy. I managed to read about 50 chapters, but it was all about boring American politics and the author's own research on Aether. He got carried away writing his theoretical system and completely abandoned any connection to Hogwarts.

People like Harry Potter because they enjoy the mysterious magic, school life, and adventure… or maybe a bit of face-slapping and showing off. But after it was released, there were a lot more educational books explaining magic from a scientific perspective, and they were much longer, even including political intrigue later on… Are you sure this is what Harry Potter's target audience likes?

Ultimately, the enforcement of the secrecy law can be resolved. The protagonist's fundamental reason for wanting to promote social integration is his belief that wizarding society is disorganized and unusable for his purposes, in order to explore the true meaning of magic. This really confuses me.

I initially thought it would be another undrinkable wish-fulfillment fanfiction... But it turns out it is indeed wish-fulfillment, but the author is definitely not a newcomer. The writing style, story structure, and setting all feel quite mature. Without self-destructive elements, this book is a definite Harry Potter gem. It's not easy to find decent Harry Potter fanfiction these days. You should check this out.

Two hundred chapters, and the second year hasn't even started yet. The protagonist's power and strength have already developed to a certain level, but he's constantly being suppressed, and the story revolves around political matters. To be honest, the beginning was amazing, but the last few dozen chapters feel like a completely different person. Let's wait and see.

Hmm, another one who wants to abolish the Secrecy Act and promote the integration of wizarding and Muggle society, and this time they want to resolve it through war. You really want integration? Muggles are more likely to become worse than house-elves... It's really making me sick of it. And don't tell me about the information revolution or how the Secrecy Act is hard to maintain.

The beginning was good, but the later explanations of concepts like the ether theory became quite boring. Other fantasy novels also feature power levels and map changes, but Harry Potter fanfiction is inherently set within the school, so the power levels don't change drastically due to map shifts.

Why push for the werewolf class when the werewolf virus is only being suppressed and its infectivity has not been completely eliminated? I don't understand at all Are the benefits so great that they can disregard all risks and obstacles? It felt like they were just adding scenes out of nowhere to increase conflict and advance the plot; it was all so pointless. He's only just finished first grade, bro.

What's outrageous is that after writing for so long, he hasn't even finished first grade. Also, starting to date in first grade, that's pretty impressive.

One female lead, Hermione, is enough!