Hogwarts: What Could a Little Wizard Possibly Do Wrong?

The author writes well. The story of North America is very exciting. I just hope that the length of my hometown can be reduced in the story (because it is difficult to write well). I can write more about the remaining things about other countries, similar to North America.

The first 100 chapters are very interesting, and the 110 chapters are as if they were written by another person. First, they introduce the concept of ether, and write about the world view of ether in chapters and chapters, connected with alchemy, and then I endured and read about 50 chapters. They are all about some boring politics in the United States and my own research on this ether. I am so excited to write about my own theoretical system, which has nothing to do with Hogwarts.

Everyone likes to watch Harry Potter because they like mysterious magic, campus life, and adventure... Or adding some pretense and slap in the face is fine, but after it was put on the shelves, there began to be a lot of popular science books, using a scientific perspective to explain magic, and there are a lot of words, and there are political plots in the back... Are you sure this is what the audience of Harry Potter likes to read? There is a reason why this book sucks. Some of the author's characters are indeed very similar to the protagonist's. He insists on going his own way and gets into trouble.

Ultimately, enforcement of confidentiality laws can be addressed. The fundamental reason why the male protagonist wants to promote social integration is that he believes that the wizarding society is loose and cannot be used by him to explore the true meaning of magic. I'm really confused. Isn't this because the social class of magic is solidified, the concept of magic > everything is not deep enough, and there is a lack of urgency that it is difficult to survive without magic? Hey, after the war with Muggles, all the above can be solved? I feel that the male protagonist simply wants to create a war quagmire - far more terrifying than Voldemort's, so that he can become a greater "savior", become a leader, and then gain popularity while condensing the power of the magical world to explore magic - ah, yes, yes, after Voldemort dies, will everyone in the wizarding world listen to Harry Potter and work hard to do something they are not so passionate about? Or do you want a pure arms race to promote magic research? That would be even more disgusting. Wizards and Muggles are both glass cannons, which means that the outcome of the war will be decided quickly. Either humans are reduced to something like slaves (the lower level is actually very easy to deal with, see squid people, not to mention wizards really have the power of gods), or Muggles take out a few combined brigades or take advantage of wizards not being prepared, and use nuclear bombs to wipe out the major wizard gathering points. , There were not many wizards in the first place, and 1/3 of them were caught off guard and died, and their vitality was severely damaged. In addition, more complete household registration information is locked - if you abnormally enroll in an ordinary school at the age of twelve, it will be regarded as a crime against humanity for the whole family to be bewitched by the devil. In this case, if the male protagonist wants to prolong the war, he can only sell people on both sides, witch rape + human rape, right? This is so disgusting And if tmd is used in war magic, it doesn't represent the fundamental source of magic? So, such a decision is both stupid and bad.

I originally thought it was another Shuangwen fanfic that I couldn't read. It turns out that Shuangwen is right, but the author is definitely not a newcomer. His writing skills, story structure, and setting feel are all quite sophisticated. If you don't want to commit suicide, this book is a good HP product. It's not easy to find HP fanfics that catch your eye these days. You can read this book.

The early stage is good, but the popular science concepts such as ether theory are very boring to read. Other magic and fantasy novels also have strong and weak upgrades, and map changes, but Harry fan fiction is destined to be written around the school, and the strength level will not change greatly due to changing maps. In the end, the division of strength in Harry is not obvious. Most of the difference lies in the spells mastered, typically the three unforgivables, and the Iron Armor Curse. The level of strength, except for the two at the top, is more about the ability to adapt to real-time battles I say so much, just to show that the first grade begins to expand the power, the map is too early, writing these in a huge space, it is very boring to read Let's take a look at the same Of course, people are looking for familiar charming characters, familiar scenes, and events, rather than innovations that are almost half of the original content. It's not that you can't be innovative. After all, there are a lot of ideas and ideas, and there are too many innovations. I feel that I didn't see what I wanted when I read the fanfic.

Two hundred chapters, the second year has not yet started. The protagonist's power and strength have developed to a certain level, but he is suppressed every day and writes some political things every day. How can I put it, the previous chapters are amazing, but in the past few dozen chapters, it seems that the character has changed. Let's wait and see.

Emmm is another person who wants to abolish the secrecy law and promote the social integration of wizards and Muggles, and he wants to solve it in the form of war. Do you want to merge? It's more likely that Muggles will become inferior to house elves... It makes me sick. Don't tell me about the information revolution. It's hard to maintain confidentiality laws. No, buddy, I won't talk about other settings. Just according to what you said before, nuclear bombs are a dead tool and can be solved by a wizard with one shot of confusion, so why can't the network? It would be easier to directly create a thing similar to algorithmic recognition and bind it with a confusion spell and a Muggle expulsion spell. This would make it easier to keep it secret - anyone whose online posts are exposed will be confused and the poster will be locked. The wizard can add a forgetting spell to perfectly solve the problem of slipping through the net.

What's outrageous is that it took me so long to write, and I haven't even passed the first grade. In addition, starting a relationship in the first grade is also awesome.

When the werewolf virus is only suppressed and the infectivity has not been completely eliminated, why should we insist on pushing the werewolf class? I don't understand at all Are the benefits so great that they ignore all risks and obstacles? It feels like the drama was forced to add conflict and advance the plot, which is inexplicable I have just passed the first grade, brother.

Just one heroine, Hermione, is enough!

There are always some people saying that Hermione is the heroine, and they are tired of seeing it. Can others follow their lead? I don't deny that HP fanfics did have a lot of Hermione as the heroine at the beginning, but in the past two years, this kind of fanfic has not been popular. There are less written and less popular. They are all following other abstract routes, either pursuing a career, having no heroine, or trying to be original. Does Hermione account for one-third of the heroines? Don't get tired of it. If you read too much, you will believe what others say. You have to see it for yourself What's wrong with having another Hermione? Isn't the original movie beautiful? If you want originality, can it be as beautiful as real Emma? The charm of the characters is there, how much of your own original work can fill the gaps? One more thing, HP fans cannot avoid contact with the protagonist group. There are always people saying licking. The HP world is so big, and the main events are in schools. If you don't interact with anything, then why are you writing fan fiction? It's better to just adapt the original. Marvel can travel everywhere because they have a big universe, but they also stayed in Novice Village for a while in the beginning.

You are not a great person. There are not so many fans who bring their own filters and think your writing is cool.

After one hundred and ten chapters... Emmmm, my desire to read is rapidly declining.

There are too many branch plots. One plot is not resolved and five or six plots are opened at the same time... It is quite the ancient style of digging holes without filling them... From the Werewolf Association, American rescue, potions, alchemy, to the development of Hermione and several people, the protagonist develops various abilities of Goldfinger, completes tasks, and even magical animals, studies the nature of magic, etc… There are too many protagonists to go to There is nothing I can do without procrastination, and the plot is almost stuck. There are so many branches that cannot be packed into chapters at the same time, so most of them can only be frozen for later writing. So much so that a certain supporting character is waiting for the protagonist to rescue him in America, but the result is far away... Including the protagonist's most important potion, which has not been touched in almost a hundred chapters... In the future, the author will open two or three lines at most. . . 🤤

A good book is ruined by the author himself. If he doesn't want to write well, no one can save him. After a hundred pages, he starts to write books with AI. It is a large piece of theoretical science that is obviously not written by him, and it has completely lost the story. Did I buy the book to ask you to teach me the basic concepts of university physics, quantum mechanics, etc. It's a pity that the subject matter and the writing style at the front are good.

An adult soul has thoughts about an eleven or two-year-old child.

It started to become very weak around chapter 70, and some book friends said it would reach more than 100. In fact, the decline started very early, probably around the time of Wolfsbane Potion. The plot progresses very slowly in each subsequent chapter, often a small incident fills the chapter, and the route begins to run counter to the readers' expectations. For example, in order to use black magic freely, you are actually planning to use memory magic to weave a false life? Does this big melon have to be chewed? There are many others. The author can read the novel from the beginning like a reader and read the feedback posted in between. I have ordered about 30 chapters, right? There are still a few chapters that I haven't read yet, and I don't plan to read them either. Because I just read the comments, the plot behind it is even more serious.

I want to pay to see you teach science when I come to see magic. Alchemy is something that cannot be popularized without talent. It has its own limitations. The first-year voodoo has not yet solved it. Moreover, he wants to combine alchemy with modern science even before he has started learning runes. Is your step in starting a magic potion business too big? Are you really not afraid of writing it?

In a world where great power belongs to oneself, there are laws, so what's the difference between you and an army of 300,000 being sent to death by the emperor?

It's so colorful

Not much about magic, more about starting a business and playing stocks in the United States

It's more in line with what I think

It's boring if you hang too much. You're only in second grade.

After reading more than ninety chapters, I felt it was too watery, the pace was too slow, and the frequency of exciting content was too low. It's so boring that I can't stand it anymore.

The book is very interesting, but I'm really not interested in the WAC part.

The overall world view has been greatly expanded, but wav and potions are a little delayed Others are pretty good, the plot and characters are all good.

Extending a new worldview based on the original work is like colorful flowers blooming on a strong tree. This has always been the most attractive part of fan fiction for me. So far, I think the writing is okay. 👍

I am so tired from reading this novel.

This is offending people, the first few comments are obviously arrogant, and they are made out of nothing. Why are they doing stock trading in North America? The protagonist doesn't let his sister go. Is there such a plot? 😥