Mechanical Alchemist

The early stage is very exciting, and you can't stop watching it. However, you can discard it after exiting the cave. Severe loss of intelligence. Wasted my subscription

I just wanted to ask. Did someone change the writing after 250 photos? ! ? ! ? ! Taste it for yourselves. The behavior of pig's feet after they come to the surface is completely different from how they behave underground. I'm not trying to spray anything. How is the quality of the work? Everyone should be aware of this.

This kind of writing style in which the pig's feet are always in a state of dissatisfaction is really disgusting, which means that the author's writing skills are not bad, or it is really easy to abandon the book. I have ordered them all so far, but I deleted the books and haven't read the rest. I don't want to read them anymore. Goodbye!

I've watched exactly half of it. The first plot is okay, it's basically a good read, and then it uses some old-fashioned routines. Overall, it's watchable, at a medium level. But when it comes to Chapter 364, the episode about the Black Sun Priest of the Hidden Mountain Country, the plot before and after is extremely poisonous. The protagonist and two female supporting characters were sucked into a copy, and the owner of this copy killed his two female supporting characters. One of the female partners I met recently, and the other one I met from the beginning. This female partner has the most scenes and has the deepest relationship with the protagonist. The two female partners are also close friends in life and death. At the end of the dungeon, the script writer met with the male protagonist and told him a costly way to resurrect the two female protagonists. And then the protagonist happily said goodbye to the script writer? ? ? The script writer is also a loser, and the protagonist just does nothing and says goodbye? ? ? What kind of coward can be so cowardly? It's so painful to watch. Even if you have a little bit of courage, you can't do what a green turtle does. It's really unbearable. It's too poisonous. I suggest that if anyone reads this book later, they must skip the plot of the Black Sun Priest in the Hidden Mountain Country. It is too poisonous and really disgusting.

In the end, everything the protagonist has is just picking up the wisdom of others, and it is all something researched by the predecessors. Although the author has always written about the protagonist's various efforts and hard work, what has he researched? What kind of little puppets? Finally rely on gargoyles. There are too many bugs, not to mention the many typos that make me feel like I'm watching a pirated version. The ending is too hasty. With such a big setting at the beginning, the final battle is basically over within a short time. The only mythical material is activated silver? The activated silver from the plane of gods is also called this name? When the mountain was hidden, the same materials still had different names. And if the protagonist's previous life was on our earth, how could he not know about Japanese monsters? If not, how can we explain so many things that we only know? There are too many holes left unfilled. Although there are so many shortcomings, I really like this book. I can only say that if the author can change some details, this book really has the potential to become a masterpiece.

The world view is huge, the plot is pretty good, the pace is not too slow, the character of the protagonist is also to my liking, and I don't dare to post updates for just two thousand or three thousand Then I read it on the spot. Monthly tickets, recommended tickets, and I will give you a 10,000 reward after all the monthly tickets and recommended tickets are filled up.

Ah, it's finished. Let me tell you my personal opinion (personal opinion). I can give it 5 out of 10 points. The early writing is really good. I really like it. But when I read it, I felt that the author was a little anxious in writing it. The pace suddenly became faster. I felt that I was slowly exploring and digging according to the rhythm of the early stage. Talent, then highlight the fact that you are a puppet master, and work more on puppets. There is really a lot to write about about the various ways of playing puppets. But it has gradually changed since I left Old Lingdun. Talent is not very useful anymore. The main usage is to collect intelligence. What about the other rules of the collection! What about magic! It feels like I have really collected it. It would be great to change it and give these to the puppets I thought about giving it up at one time, but I told myself that I would finish writing it later, but I was still disappointed. All the puppets of the theme were written out, and the puppets had no sense of existence. At the end of the finale, an army of millions of puppets came out and strolled around. I still can't forget that when the woods were killing people with puppets, please don't use the magic or force yourself! There are still Qianjo, why didn't I hold back at the end? The defense was broken! ! ! Forget it, stop complaining, there are too many I hope I can write a new book that will be better

I followed this book along with other novels, but the others were all unfinished, which is a pity. In fact, the front part is really good, with a fusion of steampunk and some gram flavors, and a sense of immersion at the same time. Most people think that it started to get bad after leaving the tower (I actually don't like it at all in the gods, mainly because my poison resistance is still to a certain extent, but I really read too much later and couldn't bear it). I read this book and some people thought that the heroine was "cheated". I don't care. Then there is the exit from the tower. Because the map has become larger, the author can't connect it well, but I think it's okay. The most important thing is that the author later fell into the pit of constantly opening up the harem and upgrading without thinking. So it's a pity. In general, a good novel will score over 90 points in the first part, but really only 60 points in the later part. Damn, what a pity.

It is really spiritual food. The last one was like Lord of Mysteries. Although I don't know how to describe it, it was very enjoyable to read. I hope the author will not be influenced by some people with problems in their heads. There will always be people who criticize novels for various reasons. I personally feel that they are not brainless and I don't want those that are rigorous and boring. The logic is also very clear. It is very suitable for people like me who like to read refreshing articles. I believe that the author can definitely fight to become a god! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's a bit off-putting at first, but then it's exciting and definitely worth watching.

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It looks good, keep up the good work 👏👏 The routines in novels come and go, but you can combine the routines into something of your own to attract readers. Just a good novel. Ignore the trolls

This book can be regarded as a high-quality product, but not a masterpiece. There are no poisonous points in the book. The shortcoming is that the author's writing style is a bit poor. I will give some pointers. I hope the author can learn to supplement these shortcomings of writing style and improve his writing skills. After all, this is a must for a masterpiece. 1: The descriptions of characters, scenery, etc. Are in a compositional style. Previously, Some people have said that the protagonist is relatively wretched, and no wonder others say that your compositional description does seem a bit straightforward. If you want to improve your writing skills and become a master, you have to use novel-style description. For these, you can read more works of masters or buy books to learn from it. After reading Fat Wu's book today, I realized that you use the description method of writing. 2: The detailed description is too vague. For example, you don't know when the puppet was made, and its origin and origin are unclear. It is too vague to use it when needed. Advantages: The chosen subject matter is relatively good, and the plot and story are powerful.

This book is really good. It has the same flavor as when I read Lord of Mysteries.

Don't add a bit of refinement?

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Before leaving the cave, you have a clear goal, dare to fight hard, don't provoke anyone you can't afford to offend, upgrade as soon as possible, the plot is reasonable and compact without being depressing, the plot is thoughtful, all the tricks are calculated, revenge is taken when there is a little succubus, and the gun is ready when you have a little succubus. It is an absolute IQ online reading. After coming out of the cave, I have developed my brain but it seems that I have been deceived. I have no goal and am joking around. I have no idea in my mind. You are a male protagonist after all, and you get beaten all the time when you get into trouble. Every time you show up, a woman helps you, so you can't be powerful on your own? Even if we follow the underground routine all over again, it would be better to find a force to join in and cause trouble in a low-key manner than to be beaten all day long now, right?

Everyone is welcome to come and experience water when you have time! Layer up new books🤓

The first two hundred or so chapters are a masterpiece. After reaching the surface, a bunch of forest druids and ninjas began to pile up in a mess, and the map was constantly changing. If you can continue the previous Western fantasy background of the steam era and explore various skills, you will definitely become a god. The result is a hodgepodge, which is a pity.

The talents that appear in the book up to Chapter 635 will be added later, and all book friends are welcome to add them

Interesting abilities, talents, traps, forbidden objects, and mechanical equipment can all be written here. The more interesting the ability, the higher the chance of using it; the better the name of the secondary player, the longer it will live 🤓 Friends, please help me think about it.

The leveling is too serious. Level one is chased and killed by a bunch of level twos, level two is chased and killed by a bunch of level three and four, and level three is chased and killed by a bunch of levels four and five. From the beginning to the end, the weak fights the strong, and the protagonist doesn't use a few of his skills. They basically rely on banned objects or external forces. The debuffs actually bury a lot of debuffs for the protagonist, and he suffers from split personality and mental aberration. It still feels quite novel. When I saw it later, I found that it was still a fantasy nesting doll unfolding, small world → main world → high plane. Moreover, the concentration of underground spiritual energy was high, and there were a lot of antique materials. The result was that the highest level was only three or four. The spiritual energy on the ground was thin, and alchemy materials were harvested in large quantities. A silver level would become a treasure. As a result, levels four and five were as numerous as dogs, and levels six, seven, and eight were all over the place. Is this setting reasonable? ? ?

He became a god before leaving the tower, and became a stallion after leaving the tower. He fell in love with a girl for no reason, and the same happened to Senjou sister. If he is a brother, you should treat him as a brother. The ambiguous plot is really embarrassing. I gave you ten monthly tickets and slipped away. See you again in the world, brothers.

It's smell has changed since it came out of the underground, it doesn't look good.

What have you written so far? ! Does the protagonist have a plan for his future? ! After leaving the tower, the book was instantly unreadable. We agreed to become pirates with Senjou, but ended up drifting with the flow, writing wherever we went. There is not even a fixed force. I was originally looking forward to the story about the protagonist's family, but I don't think I need to look forward to it now. It's all an old-fashioned family inheritance story. And now at the third level, what kind of immortal enemies are you encountering? ? Level six and level seven. . The protagonist himself is only level three! ! ! The most speechless thing is that wherever the protagonist goes, trouble follows him. Please, are you the unlucky king? Can I still write about my daily life? The whole story is about fighting and killing, so long as I don't leave the tower to fight for my life. But now that you are in mainland China, you still have a lot of shit. He also accepted a disciple. . . I threw up. If you want to write about the protagonist's strength growth, write various dungeon adventures. If you want to write about the growth of power, write about imperial political battles and build your own power. . . Take a look at what you wrote after leaving the tower? ? ? Full of water! ! ! Taking on a disciple is the most vicious thing! ! ! I thought this book would be a little different from other vulgar books, but it seems that my expectations were too high.

After leaving the tower, there will be no sales of accounts. It obviously doesn't feel like it was written by one person. As amazing as it is at the front, it's rubbish at the back.

There are still twenty or thirty chapters left to read, and I really can't stand it anymore. This book was written by two people, "Out of the Dungeon" and "Out of the Dungeon". In the later stage, the career system, combat power system, treasures, and legion wars all basically collapsed. So many flesh-and-blood supporting characters were portrayed in the early stage, but they were all thrown away in the middle and later stages. In the later stage, a protagonist was highlighted to obtain equipment, and then show off, obtain equipment, and show off. God service, it's a pity that the early stage writing is so good, it's better to finish it after breaking out of the dungeon.

The title of the book deviates from the theme, and even writes about the Japanese system of living a good life, which is completely out of touch with the early plot settings. The mystery of this book has disappeared, as if the author had changed. In the early stage, it is mysterious, weird, gloomy, and strange. It is very attractive and has a lot of expectations. Why do you want to write Japanese mythology and write it like homework? How about playing it? You can just change the map. The system change is so sudden, and the addition of Japanese gods is amazing. The career setting of the protagonist has not been decided yet. I want to write about a mechanical puppet master, but the concept of magical technology has not been written yet. After absorbing so much knowledge, it is almost reaching the seventh or eighth level. Does knowledge only start at the god level? Or a time traveler! The author's inspiration can't be so bad, right? ? Even if you add some points to the settings, the machine gun with the puppet rune, alchemical element inscription, and alchemy egg will always be written somewhere. If the alchemy egg fails to hit, won't the launcher be magically modified? ? Puppet is also written there, doll, doll, can you change the type? ?

Update, update, update, hurry up and update, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this 🔨