The Eerie Star Witch

Disadvantages: The first worldview is unclear. How big the world is, such as the number of provinces in the country, is not stated. The strength of the city where the protagonist is located is not stated (although it feels like it is just a small county). The geographical conditions around the city are not clearly explained, so the level 3 guide who appears seems a bit weak. The number of people at each level can be explained, such as the mysterious low, middle and high sequences. There are also strengths and weaknesses of each approach. Secondly, too much description of the protagonist can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. You can add more psychological descriptions of other characters to increase the personality. For example, the wizard who is fleeced by the protagonist can add some guesses about the protagonist like the mysterious Alger. To be honest, I don't know what level he is. I also feel that the protagonist and his party level up a bit too quickly. Finally, the protagonist's map skills are too strong... Of course, I think this book is very good. The subject matter and writing style are all online. The last thing is that the monetary system must be stable!

The pig's feet described by the author are incapable and do not try to improve themselves. The Holy Mother's heart is overflowing every day, and the result is the death of those close to oneself. After killing relatives and friends, Pig's Foot ran away like a dog. Afterwards, he fled all the way and was promoted. Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi, Pig's Foot was promoted to a high position and then he turned around to settle the score. (The Virgin bitch must die) (If you have the ability to call yourself the Virgin, but if you don't have the ability, you still show off that you are the Virgin bitch)

I just came across this. A big boss on Douyin thought this book was good enough and made a video of "Weird Star Witch". You can like it and search for "Weird Star Witch" to find it and promote it together. Video author: Meng Jue.

Can you save more manuscripts before sending them out? Why not update 50 chapters of the new book at once?

The plot and setting are top-notch, but the ability to mobilize readers' emotions is a bit lacking (the pretense scenes are average). More than a little bit better than the previous one. Sure enough, my taste is as good as ever

In the early stages, the writing, settings, and plot were all good, but in the later stages, it started to falter around chapter 280. First, the previous description of the power of the kingdom was seriously inconsistent with the plot, and then the career system completely collapsed. Can you imagine that a group of elite bosses in the protagonist group were defeated by a novice profession who is one level higher but has not changed in quality with basic skills? This is very speechless. It's like when the poor god was at the police station, and the witch who had just changed his gender killed the entire police station in half. A person who has just entered the mid-level witch profession can outsmart men of the same level and lower-level men by just relying on her charm ability? Then why is Silver Snake not one of the four top professions? Level 1, 2, and 3 people can only confuse the same level profession by having a relationship with a man for a long time. At the fourth level, one look can completely defeat the same level and the lower level. The other four top professions (Wizard, Church, Knight, Alchemist) have not changed so much at level four, right? This is what you described yourself.

Star Map (detail)

This is the wizard!

The author asks a question, must low-level werewolves win by hunting high-level werewolves? So there is a question. The death of high-level werewolves among low-level werewolves should not be higher than 50%. The rest should be killed by other apostles. Then the number of werewolves will be reduced by half with each change. Are there still werewolves after all these generations? Even if 100 level 6 werewolves are killed by level 5 werewolves, there will only be 50 level 6 werewolves in the next generation.

Author, you write a poisonous witch in a weird way, but a good guy, an assassin, makes you a barbarian. Secondly, it's so easy for someone as brainless and self-righteous as the protagonist to level up. Can you believe that those people who have the brains to talk about interests and know how to cooperate just can't get promoted? ! ! Third, author, do you have any misunderstanding about the national critical attack agency? If you can't reach level 2 divination, switch to level 3 divination. If you can't reach level 3 divination, switch to level 5. There will always be someone who can beat you. Who is playing tricks with you here? What the country is playing is an upright crushing game. Finally, I believe everyone can see what you want to express, the author. But you can't write a novel with this as the core. I believe that a good novel must first be a good story, and secondly we are talking about ideas.