Ghost Gate Coffin

I held myself back until I read more than 90 chapters. I comforted myself by saying that the protagonist was a fw in the early stage and could understand it. The more I read, the more frustrated I became. The more I read, the more I felt like a clown. This is so different from the previous two books. I even wondered if someone else had written it. Nan Beng

Let's fix the settings of the stupid goose. I have experienced the Ghost Bride before, got the plug-in, and understood the worldview Now I still don't know anything. It has been written that I realized it was a ghost, but it is superfluous It has a very bad impact on the reader's perception. It feels like the protagonist has not been clearly defined yet. In other words, the plot of the regular game is the beginning of the novel, The ghost bride is the plot that follows. Changed positions? Otherwise, it would be more reasonable to add some patches, such as game rules affecting thinking.

If you continue like this, your reputation will be lost.

The design of the opening paragraph is not to say amazing, but it is also above average. It gets more and more complicated later on, and I don't feel the protagonist's sense of urgency at all. It stands to reason that I know that my parents are missing, I have experienced the powerlessness of being unable to resist and can only wait to die, and I understand how the other side of the world will change. But the protagonist is just passively involved in supernatural events, without any thought at all unless he takes action. Not to mention the above inducements, just the soul replenishment that your body needs regularly is enough for you to be more proactive. The same goes for the plot, which is forced to bring down the wits. The protagonist knew there was a problem and didn't take any action, just like he was fine. It can only be said that a good start was wasted.

The author's idea is good, but the writing style is average, some plots are logical, and the readability is not high. Overall, it is average and can be read. It would be better if it can be modified and improved.

It's the traditional kind of protagonist who is very useless and doesn't understand anything. Then there are powerful relatives and friends who know something and various riddles. Do you still write novels like this in this day and age? Just what to watch on Douyin "My family has been selling glutinous rice for generations, because my grandfather said that glutinous rice can ward off evil spirits. One day, my grandfather came back after being outside for a long time. He was covered in blood and dragged the body of a black dog back. He tinkered with the black dog's blood: "Guawazi, I originally thought that if I didn't teach you these skills, you would be able to avoid these things. "………………

Not looking for trouble, I voted specifically for the comment. As I read on, it didn't attract me at first. I think some of the settings and systems in this book are pretty good, and they remain true to their original roots, but they also have new twists. The writing was very attractive to me at first. The three-party melee, the confusing camp, the strange ritual, and the mysterious postman reminded me of the books of Cong Xin and Chunfeng. I was surprised that Blind Hou changed the style of writing, but after reading it, it became boring. Let me tell you a few things that I felt were wrong when reading the book: 1. I always felt that the writing style had declined, and the content was a bit more streamlined, like a narrative. From a visual point of view, maybe as a reader, what I want to see is "the protagonist is in action", but what I see is "the author is telling me that the protagonist is in action", which makes me not so immersed in watching it. 2. The writing style is a bit intellectual, a bit silly, or too down-to-earth. I remember that a blind man can write about a smart person, and even someone who is not smart can write about a person who is unclear and powerful. However, many of the characters in this book are doing actions that are inconsistent with their image. The protagonist, cousin, and buddies are all stereotyped. They don't look very much like the heir to the coffin shop, the special department, or the rich second-generation college student. On the contrary, the third uncle is more fitting, with a casual personality, and occasionally appears to be serious and wise. 3. Some connectives are used abruptly, and the scene changes are too strange. Just like the previous sentence, changing some to a little will make it appear more formal, and adding one after the scene transition will make it appear smoother. In the article, I feel that there are quite a few paragraphs like this that make me jump a bit, not so smooth connections and short sentences that start on a new line from time to time. It is like a speed bump on the road, which does not affect driving but always makes people slow down and bump. That's about it. I don't have any objections to the plot and setting, and I can't think of anything better. Authors with imagination are worthy of admiration. I just hope that the design is more reasonable and the writing is smoother. In my humble opinion, if there is any problem, change it, and if there is no problem, add more encouragement. It will not be built brick by brick overnight.

It's still a somewhat good work at the beginning, but various problems are completely exposed later on. The most obvious problem is the supernatural background. The protagonist and Western methods are completely hand-to-hand combat, which seems to have nothing to do with supernatural beings. It feels like the urban warrior king ten years ago. Secondly, the protagonist's subjective initiative is too poor. He is completely led around, which is not fun at all. Third, there are too few supernatural beings. From the moment the little fat boy ascends to immortality, I feel that the whole plot has completely collapsed, and the ghosts that follow have no sense of ghosts at all.

1. The author wants to write about the protagonist slowly growing up, but he always encounters high combat power and several levels of crises. He is passive throughout the whole process. Isn't it frustrating? He is either playing soy sauce or waiting for others to save him. The rest of the book is the same as the previous book, with infinite leapfrog fights (I gave up the previous book for this reason); 2. The rise of Dongda? The writing is bad to the core 3. This kind of subject matter, between copies, daily life, basically an ambiguous plot with a woman, is out of place

The setting is very good and attractive. There is a supernatural revival, the door of hell is wide open, and then it is full of emotional ambiguity. The more you write, the more obscene and the plot becomes more and more clumsy. I can't finish writing about the things in my crotch. I suggest you just change it to an emotional novel.

The author has really made no progress in writing books in the past few years. Apart from the excellent setting, the plot arrangement, enjoyment, and reading experience are really useless. After all, I have written several million words. Why can't I improve on my old problem? As the protagonist, he doesn't look like a protagonist at all. The plot is nothing but digging holes. Several plot points are meaningless. The protagonist has integrated so many evil things and still gets crushed everywhere. And the cliche background outline is instantly recognizable.

Not a bad start. But the current plot is too retro. Written 10 years ago. Everything must be done in a small way. . Is it okay to have a bigger layout?

I suggest the author stop writing about other things and just write about urban emotions! A good spiritual practice, it's all about ambiguity, it's an ambiguity with the person who almost killed you at the beginning, it's an ambiguity with your sister, even if you're not your biological sister, haven't you ever seen a woman in real life? Don't miss any of them! Can't you write the role of a sister well? It really needs to be cool and ambiguous, and logical and ambiguous!

Sorry, it's a big lump. It grosses me out.

I couldn't help seeing the inanimate ghost mother being digested into spiritual energy. A top-level SSS ghost that could only be suppressed by an old man with pig-footed ancestors using 9 ancestral treasures was digested and used to upgrade the top SSS-level skill. The result was raised to four levels. But, you, the top SSS-level skill of yours, can kill a small zombie at three levels. The fourth level of the skill is only a little higher than the third level (three or four levels). The description says that two inanimate ghost mothers are needed to reach the fifth level, ah? What do you want to do, author? Um? If it doesn't work, just don't use this technique or use this ghost to charge. Aren't you a disgusting person? Normally, thugs like Wu Sheng Gui Mu can kill at will? After charging you, you can't even beat a little Yakuza, right? I still have two Inanimate Ghost Mothers, so I have to be polite, right? I want to give you this defense technique to upgrade to the fifth level? Ah? Author, do you want to feed readers💩?

Forget about being self-indulgent, all kinds of brainless whispers, this batch of supernatural skins

Be careful, the protagonist is a fool, and the whole process is so witty that anyone can treat the protagonist like a dog. A variety of plots to reduce intelligence come one after another. My nearly twenty years of drug resistance can hardly stand it anymore! ! ! !

Every time he enters the virtual realm, the protagonist himself is a little minion! And he likes to dance very much, but those evil people let him go for the sake of his ancestors. Once or twice is fine. After doing it too many times, I feel like my IQ is gone. It's like a robber who robbed a bank. The sons of those high-ranking officials jumped in the bank and said, "If you dare to touch me, you try it first. Believe it or not, I can't let you out of this door?" I'm already involved in the beheading business. It's hard to say whether I can survive tonight. I'm still worried about your background.

How can this plot be so abstract? This was a routine many years ago. It has always been emphasized that the protagonist will not interfere with the affairs of the office, and then directly arranges the plot to be forced to deal with it. Who likes to watch this kind of forced plot? If you don't have the ability to handle it, then you can't handle it, and I kept saying several times that the protagonist didn't want to handle it. The protagonist is also written like a dull puppet, watching supernatural events happen in front of him, with a mentality like a bystander, as if nothing matters. When supernatural events happen, they just happen. Let me see what happens. The main character's abilities are not explained clearly, are you still a novice and just watch the show?

I came to this movie after watching Your Alchemist before, but I felt a big gap. The protagonist was too abstract, and it didn't look like something written by an author. To give you an example: Instinct: My body after fusing the evil object tells me something is wrong here. Brain: No problem. Instinct: This Lucky Cat is too weird to be part of the script. Brain: Don't worry, it's a script. Instinct: A paranormal incident has occurred. Brain: Oh, it turns out it's haunted. This is how it feels to me

After reading Chapter 82, the book states that foreign secret service organizations use sniper rifles and other heavy weapons in China to catch the criminals they say, and it also emphasizes that the country does not know! ! I just want to know what the author thinks! ! ! !

I have read more than 190 chapters. It seemed fine at the beginning, but the more I saw the protagonist and my sister Sese later, I felt extremely disgusted. I really can't complain about a good family and my sister Sese. I'm afraid it's because I'm stupid after watching Japanese comics.

Did you see the one behind it? ? So why didn't you tell his sister? ? His third uncle doesn't know his sister's job, so he can't do anything! Since he knew the nature of his sister's work, why didn't he say anything? Even if it can't be solved, at least let me know! ! Let professional problems be solved by professionals! ! I can't understand it! !

Another folk custom says that crows are gloomy and represent death. Crows and suns, do you understand? What you write about is folklore, not fantasy. It is an auspicious bird.

When will there be another book similar to Cataclysm Card King?

This is a good book, but the censorship made the author exhausted and unable to do anything.

When will there be new books? It's better to like the amber flow of steampunk with a hint of the secret wasteland.

I got into trouble after reading the author's last book. Why is this book written like this? I felt unspeakably uncomfortable watching it.

I beg the author to write another novel of the Steel Ship Island type. I can't get enough of it. The Alchemist is also good. I beg you, I beg 🙏

The author is very good at writing about the science fiction punk genre, and three of his books have entered the boutique channel. This book in another style is also a fine product.