The Card King of Cataclysm

First of all, the protagonist has no main plot, and he inexplicably traveled through time without any ideas. He looks like a wise man who is indifferent and crazy. Later, he found out that he has a brain but not much. The plot just goes with the flow. The protagonist wants to show off his layout, but it all depends on passers-by. Anyway, I was caught off guard. As for the cunning and wisdom of the clown, why not change his name to a berserker who has a brain but not much? There are many typos and the author does not have to proofread the writing again? Secondly, the description of the combat power is not clear. Even if you play with data flow, you still kill people at the second or third level. I won't say much about the superior combat power. There are hangups, but others also have hangups. Writing a hangup that can absorb attributes is the same as not having others practice faster than the protagonist. This reflects a problem. It's not exciting and makes people uninterested The interaction with the heroine at the end is also inexplicable. We met just after time travel. The background is clear at first glance. It is the background of the wasteland and the apocalypse. After teaming up to fight two monsters, we have the bond of friendship. The first heroine is relatively normal, but the second one is just disgusting for readers. Against the background of the protagonist described by the author, she is no different from a brainless one. This does not make her very cute, but only makes me hate stupidity. The men we meet are all villains and killed, and the women we meet are teammates and form a team. The protagonist goes to the black market to buy exercises. By chance, he meets the heroine, a gangster. She looks at the protagonist's passerby's attire and feels very good. She gives special guidance to her own store. She can also borrow her famous name to get credit. She is really discerning. I don't understand why she saw it Finally, I want to say that the layout of the protagonist relies on the intelligence of the supporting characters. I rely on my brain a little in the front, and then go straight to the work. I have read the book review section, and eight of the ten posts are complaining and swearing. It is a waste of my time. Your book has nothing to do with 🤡. If it does, it is 🤡 that you have traveled backwards to the computer.

Let me tell you about my thoughts on this book. Let me talk about the advantages first. This book is very exciting in terms of combat, exploration, and puzzle solving. The various supporting characters are also very three-dimensional and the plot is smoothly connected. Then there are disadvantages. The protagonist's combat power is too suppressed. He has the ability to swallow such a golden finger, but his attributes are not much higher than others. Moreover, in many battles, the protagonist takes the initiative to seek death. When he is in the first level, he dares to take the initiative to ask for a fight with the third level. Many battles are unnecessary. There are not many benefits. It purely satisfies one's desire for self-destruction. Then the protagonist is clearly hostile to the government in the early stage, but later chooses to join forces with the government due to the invasion of foreign enemies. It is clearly stated in the previous article how rich the government is. When he cooperates with the government in the later stage, he does not need anything at all. The key is that the protagonist's job is to spy on the enemy's intelligence and go deep behind the enemy lines to sabotage. It is very important and dangerous. He works as a white powder seller, takes the money from selling cabbage, and works for them at his own expense. He is really a clown, right? Also, we were attracted by the title. We came here to see the kind of clever clown who understands the beauty and ugliness of human nature. He can manipulate others with his wisdom. I didn't see the protagonist having such ability at all. It really depends on recklessness. It's a waste to give him the clown's career card. Just get the Berserker. There is also the issue of the heroine. Every woman who is ambiguous with the protagonist has been online for a few chapters. , And then quickly went offline. They had no idea what they were thinking. They were obviously ready to go to bed, but they just wanted to go somewhere else to hang out. After the sex, the protagonist had to rescue her. The plot in the front was quite compact, but later it became more and more boring, wasting coins, going high and going low. Finally, there was Song Yu's problem. The previous article was very good, but you just wrote her to death in the end, so you gave us a knife, right? To sum up, the combat aspect is pretty good, but the plot aspect is just pure badass, and the protagonist is a real "clown".

Alas, there are so many poisonous points that it is deadly. If you see the author, can you go and learn the plot settings first? There are many places that are inexplicable. To become stronger just for the sake of being strong. For example, the secret cell technique. The settings are added at any time. You can't just give him an invincibility. And you really didn't give any settings for this level! The supporting character can take as many steps as he wants, and jump two steps to kill someone. Yes, the protagonist can reach level 30 from level 10, but you have to complete the framework and world view! You write that the protagonist killed a third-level weapons master solely by his own skills and first-level exaggerated attributes. Your combat power is too low. He is a weapon master, not a pig. You stabbed him in the eye so easily. Would his third-level guild have less combat skills than you? Sorry, I have read a lot of books about cultivating immortals. I just feel that practicing Qi can't help you build the foundation. Building the foundation can't defeat the golden elixir, let alone practicing Qi to defeat the golden elixir! If you set up levels, please explain each level clearly. He has magic power to protect himself and does not know how to break free from your arm, and the weapon master has all the combat power in his hands. You can write it like this. . . . The settings you added in order to forcefully kill a level 3 person are really true. . . And I beg you to learn some foreshadowing or write better foreshadowing. For example, how does the high priest's book of the girl with a round head help the protagonist and how to help him kill the weapons master? And for such an important supporting role, please write her in a better way! It's not like cats and dogs can just help the protagonist. In the large tomb copy, this girl is no different from the pendant. After a while, she became the daughter of the high priest of the subjugated country. With such a shameful identity, you wrote her in the early stage to be like a passerby. She would die without the protagonist, just like a passerby. Then, in order to create some confusion for the protagonist, you forcibly added an identity to her to show how she can help the protagonist. And the character of the clown must be more intelligent than crazy, whether it is DC or other writers who write about clowns. For example, a starting author is called "A Fatty in Yellow". Look at how he writes the character of the clown. You should have seen Batman. Most of the clown settings now follow this, and you also wrote in the beginning copy that the clown mocks the gods and has a thorough understanding of human nature. So will the clown who dares to mock the gods be a berserker? Will he directly attack a powerful enemy in the face? Would he forcefully kill a heavily protected young man? Wouldn't he use his strategy to create a suitable scene and conditions to kill him? And since it has written about human nature, I have not seen how the clown uses human nature to play with humans. And please write the settings in front, such as how to transform into a werewolf. It is better not to add the restrictions on your secret technique of cell boiling. You can write any protagonist, but the clown must be unique. He will never kill people based on his own madness. He is a calm creature, a master of tricks, and a devil in sheep's clothing. The clown has never been a master of justice. If you have to pay for your life, then it must be completed at the cost of your life. The first dungeon you wrote earlier was about the protagonist betting his life with the gambling monster. There is no problem with that, because the protagonist has nothing but his life. But in the Innocence City, there are so many resources and so many plans that can be implemented. Why do you have to rush into the battle to kill a big shot? The protagonist you wrote is not like a clown. He is a husky that bites everyone on sight. That's it. You can delete it if you want. #Please add some settings#

Overall, I almost feel like I can't pretend to be cool. . Clowns, playing cards, etc., All imply that the protagonist is very smart, but he has been working hard across borders, and his IQ is really average. There is a strong sense of fragmentation.

Thinking about it carefully, the book friend is indeed right. This book is not a gimmick, just full of bells and whistles. The handsome reader is right, The ugly author is in trouble. Stand at attention and get beaten.

Chapter 150, and they are still trying to prevent the protagonist from being promoted to level two. But he has always been involved in high-level things. Now we can deal with level 3, why don't we wait for level 2 and go straight to level 4? This power system is too poisonous. It feels like building the foundation of the Nascent Soul and the golden elixir turning into a god in seconds. What's the use of the realm?

Old authors will make some mistakes. When the protagonist is weak, he will participate in some battles and battles with all masters, which shows how powerful the other characters are. I think it is most taboo to deliberately limit the protagonist's level and strength when writing a book. A bunch of plug-ins add up, and it is better to have a supporting character of the same age. If you always write with early characters in mind and make them more powerful than the protagonist, you might as well change the protagonist.

Finally a new book, come on (｡･ω･｡)

Drive high and go low, the previous writing is really good, the various systems are very attractive, and the title of your book, brother, is that the Queen of Cards comes out with a bunch of mess, which makes you angry and weak, and it goes off topic, you know? What's more, the protagonist is really crazy for the sake of being crazy! Seeing that Song Yu is even more unreasonable, a top family in an extraordinary world with gods and demons can only live 100 years? Are you serious?

I have read Chapter 160. I won't say anything else, but I will say one thing: grin, big or small, raise the corners of your mouth, smile silently, grin, smile slightly. The protagonist is not 🤡, I am the one reading the book 👍