Savage Wizard

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and there aren't as many problems as some people said. I feel pretty good. I guess it's because I didn't recommend it.

Be innovative and creative, not routine and imitative. Downplay the strength training system. Downplay individual combat capabilities. Multi-racial civilizations compete for hegemony. The protagonist can not only use technology, artillery battleships, and steam engines, but also use fantasy racial biological magic to tame Warcraft mounts to form cavalry, tame flying dragons and rocs to form an air force for bombing, and fly biological aircraft carriers to power steam engines. There are those who can conquer girls and their tribes, families, and races, and the mother and daughter can unite their bodies together, those who are infatuated, gentle, generous, intellectual, and elegant, as well as those who are dark and sinister, and those who are extremely paranoid and perverted and want to imprison and force the protagonist. Some women have multiple personalities, good and evil, good and bad. The emotional plot must have tension and impact, cold-blooded rationality to the extreme, heart-piercing unrequited love, and extremely paranoid and perverted liking. The weak ones annexed and conquered, while the powerful alliances attacked far and near, and formed a multi-racial sea, land and air alliance camp. Don't develop technologies like airplanes, steel battleships, and tanks. Airships are of limited use. Of course, the air force in the fantasy world must be dragons and birds. Just focus on artillery and steam engines, otherwise it would become a military historical novel. The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carriers, and sail battleships are not suitable for aircraft carriers. They need to develop steam engines or magical arcane power or sea monsters and ocean monsters as the power to pull the ships. They can carry giant dragons, giant eagles, and giant bats as bombers. The air force's technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is that there should be no gods, demons, legends and extraordinary things. The combat power level system is downplayed and a real fantasy world is presented. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. Not only the Western magical and fantasy race, Warcraft, mythical and legendary creatures, but also ferocious beasts, giant beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas and various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels for creative inspiration. Also, the worldview must have depth and impact. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races.

Some of my suggestions are, first of all, you must have an outline. Only with an outline can you write with ideas, and secondly, you must not interrupt the novels, because many bookworms will read the novels written by the author before, how many have been written, whether they have been interrupted, and whether they are eunuchs. Once they find out about eunuchs, many people will leave immediately. And I also hope that the author will write a long one, preferably 2 million words. Once the author writes this number of words, first of all, many people who like to read long articles will definitely come and read it. Once they find it good, they will read it. , Of course there will be piracy, and many people will read it, but the author will definitely become famous. Once he becomes famous, the author will gain a large number of loyal fans, and the subsequent novels will be much smoother. When it is put on the shelves again, many old people will come and spend money to read it. In addition, this novel has not yet been put on the shelves, so the author must start hoarding manuscripts and make a name for himself when it is put on the shelves. For example, the American comic World Shadow Trail, as soon as he was put on the shelves, it was updated 100 times on the day it was put on the shelves. I blinded my eyes and gained a lot of fame and fans. Now many bookworms know his title of Bai Geng Niang. Anyway, I spent money on it on the day it was released, which is really awesome. In addition, the author writes wizard novels, a genre pioneered by the wizard-style novel Gun Niang. Later, Egret's wizard journey expanded its world view and turned it into a war between civilizations, and the black wizard Zhu Peng, written by half-wizard and half-cultivation salty fish, are both wonderful works of the wizard-style. They also left many features in the wizard-style. The most important feature is knowledge. Knowledge determines the future of a wizard. On the path of a wizard, only knowledge is the most important. Everything else is a derivative of knowledge. Wizard There is a famous saying in the journey, "Give me endless knowledge, and I will only focus on myself to move the endless world." In addition, because of the preciousness of knowledge, every outstanding wizard in the wizarding world has its own characteristics, such as Green's fundamental method of annihilation, and another feature of the wizarding world is pseudoscience. The path of each protagonist is clear, and every bit of power knows where it comes from. There will be no unclear power that appears all of a sudden, even if it is blood. In addition, every protagonist in the wizard style must know one skill, which is "alchemy". What should I do if the protagonist's qualifications are not good? Drink medicine! Myrrh must play with your mother. I haven't read this book yet, but from the comments of other book friends and the title, it seems that this is a Gandalf style, big brother Zhu Peng, who is indifferent to life and death, and will do it if he doesn't accept it. When he sees the enemy, he will tear open the wizard's suit, which contains either all the muscles or the muscle-weighted armor, swinging the wand with the enemy's irresistible power, or blowing the enemy's dog's head with a giant sword. It is full of masculine power, and it can be fought cleanly and neatly, without any sloppiness. This point is very important. Normally, you rely on giant swords or wands and strength to defeat enemies. Once you can't defeat them, you immediately rub elemental curses on your face, which makes people look hearty. The protagonist has a thick blood and can fight with big bosses from all sides. It is full of Hong Kong style. Various buffs are added to it, unlike ordinary wizards who attack with high blood. Moreover, another characteristic of wizards is to plunder everything. What to do if the blood is low, what to do if the attack is not enough, and what to do if the talent is not good. What to do, what if you want to be able to travel through space in the early stage? No problem, potions, bloodlines, witchcraft, superimposed professions... Various ways to make up for it. It can be said that every powerful wizard has no outstanding shortcomings, but they are not as exaggerated as you. This also establishes the strong status of wizards in various professions. Compared with each profession, he has a strong position, or crushing status, and other professions can only be in Wizards are a profession that is struggling to survive, and the wizard profession is not a profession that focuses on destructive power. It is a profession that focuses on knowledge, and it can create powerful subordinates like an assembly line. It can be said that except for cultivators, which is a mid- to late-stage profession that can compete with wizards, other professions cannot beat wizards. Of course, wizards are the dominant profession in the West, while cultivators are the dominant profession in the East. The key to the wizard profession is knowledge, so wizards pursue knowledge feverishly. Every great wizard is a damn scholar, and they are all fucking cheats, and they are also good at making cheats. It can be said that as long as wizards have knowledge, other power, wealth, power, and beauty will follow. So I hope that the author will not write the protagonist as a barbarian, but as someone who looks like a barbarian, but is actually a creator. When the enemy thought he was a barbarian, he rubbed an elemental cannon into his face with his backhand. This contrast is very refreshing, and Xianyu's novel also added a feature to the wizard genre: my superimposed profession. Of course, the superimposed profession is only worse than the wizard. The above remarks are personal opinions and I hope they can provide some help to the author. I also wish the author will write better and better and become a platinum master. I hope to see and hear your name in the online literary world in the future.

A great and thoughtful western fantasy work

The sixty-year-old protagonist may have the mental capacity of a fifteen-year-old and is simply mentally retarded.

I feel like the protagonist is a bit brainless and the reading experience is not good.

Come on, author, I think it's pretty good, but I don't know why not many people read it.

Chapter 59: I feel like the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded. I would never agree to it if it were me. Are there any good experiments in witchcraft? You can peel off your skin even if you don't die! The protagonist has no brains to put his own safety in the hands of others for profit.

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It was so frustrating at the beginning. I didn't have any savagery. I was tricked and walked away in despair. My self-created witchcraft didn't have the wizard style. So I used Ironforge Body in the first and second phases to upgrade step by step. After leaving my old club, I first transformed into a wizard with the ability to create witchcraft, so that I can be a guest wherever I go, and then