My Brain Is 100% Developed

Bringing the protagonist's father into the spotlight is a mistake. The protagonist's father is a senior engineer at an electric motor factory, which makes it difficult to protect the patent for the electric motor technology invented by the protagonist...

Transition away from this childish, make-believe-like plot as soon as possible.

This looks so much like the content of a book.

Does the author not consider public opinion when writing a book? Recently, there have been numerous reports of professors stealing students' research, and just a few days ago, the shocking scandal involving Zhu Yuejun has left many who want to serve their country feeling disheartened. Writing about this is tantamount to defying public opinion.

What's the point of all this plot development right now? It's just filler.

This kind of science fiction really doesn't need romance; I almost couldn't continue reading since it didn't lead to extraordinary achievements in the end.

Based on the description, this ability will definitely be researched towards genetic ascension (with the power returning to the individual); everything else is secondary.

Hurry up and skip ahead. You can start acting recklessly when you're fifteen or sixteen and going to college, instead of playing house at seven or eight.

This is too much! Skip a grade, go straight to university! What's the point of playing house with a 7-year-old?

With so many landlords in China acquiring land, are you sure you can keep what you own?