The Great Voyage: Steel Fleet Island

Come on, the performance of this book is indeed not directly proportional to the writing style. If you promote it more, there should be hope, so please persevere!

To be honest, I really like this book. It's much better than other Pirates fics. It's not a blind imitation. It's all written according to my own script. I hope the author can make more updates.

The beginning of the book is good, but then there are all kinds of inexplicable plots. I was upset when I read it, the characters were completely destroyed, and the power system was also blown up. There was no upgrade in more than a hundred chapters. The writing was so wretched and arrogant that I became more and more angry as I read. It's a good subject. If you don't develop it slowly, you have no strength but you want to soar into the sky. You can know the plot from the beginning of this book, but it's not as good as the beginning. The road is narrowed by yourself.

If this book is viewed as a refreshing novel, one of the more contradictory aspects is that Pig's Feet has been participating in games at many levels beyond its own level from the beginning. It seems that the character is full, but Pig's Knuckle is a small character at the beginning, and it is a bit too deliberate to be rescued by the boss at critical moments. I haven't had time to read the new book, but I feel that if the logic on this point is more consistent with common sense, I will have better results.

After reading Chapter 50, I really can't help but wonder how toxic the rest will be. I feel like I won't be able to handle it anymore. First-class layout and world view, third-rate plot, and subpar character creation.

To be honest, the poor performance of this book is directly related to the cliched and awkward moments after getting off the ship! If it weren't for the huge mixed worldview that kept me watching, the Three Sisters would have been successfully persuaded to quit after just one episode. Except for the slap-in-the-face plots, this book is definitely an above-average level among game alien novels. Especially after the story unfolded, I felt that it was very appetizing. It's a pity that classifying games is really thankless. People who read games are all old bookworms, and they have seen too many routines... If the author of this book is not crazy, he will pretend to be awkward and continue to push the main line with the story. If the book does not collapse, I think it can be improved... If nothing else, subscribe and support. Come on, author, you write well.

Already fully booked, author, if you want a eunuch, I will bring my 40-meter machete to block the house

At the beginning, I felt like giving up several times, but I became more and more comfortable later on. Come on, author.

The author is great, come on, the subject matter is very good, it is a masterpiece. Never be a eunuch. Already supported.

This is because the introduction has dissuaded a lot of people. If they weren't really bored, they would have entered. I really can't believe how good this book is! !