Necromancer

The writing is getting more and more confusing and poor. Does the author know what he wants to write and what he is writing? Very poor at writing people. Let's briefly talk about a few shortcomings: 1. Sif's character change Sif's character change is too sudden and there is no detailed description. Not to mention being stained with demon blood, the part that stains the protagonist with a mark is considered a description. There is no description of Sif's mental journey at all, yes, not at all. Some readers will say: This is a novel. If you are infected with the blood of the devil, you will become violent and impulsive. OK OK, I understand this is a novel, but what about the twist and foreshadowing. Only talk about the results, not the process? To give an example, in our society, there is already enough stress and anxiety. Have we ever had sex or something like that happen? The most we can do is complain about it on the Internet. In reality, there are still many good people. You are a normal person, and someone pours a bucket of blood on you, and you become a villain? There is obviously a chapter where the protagonist Matthew and Sif go to "Old Man City" (the city that is about to end its life, forgive me for not remembering the name). That chapter can obviously write the inner monologue between Sif and the protagonist. You can directly write out your inner changes in the form of dialogue. Why not use such a good opportunity? What a waste of a great opportunity. A quasi-heroine, written like this... 2. Matthew's character Author, I want to ask you, what kind of character do you want to describe the protagonist? Which of the nine camps is there? From being lawful good at the beginning, what does the protagonist become now? Sometimes he is decisive and decisive, sometimes he is submissive, and sometimes he is wavering. To put it bluntly, in other novels, the protagonist learns wisdom and grows up from events. Our Matthew grows up by preaching to the protagonist from his mentor Isabel and others. Really... Tsk tsk. Human character is and should be complex, but there must be a basic point, a basic criterion. If the whole is good, then it is kind, and if the whole is evil, then it is evil. The author's description of the protagonist's character is not outstanding, which makes it seem that the protagonist's character is wavering. 3. Lei Xiu The author wants to describe Lei Xiu as a noble lord who dares to be the first, to serve the country and the people, and to make selfless contributions. With all due respect, the description sounds like a "silly b". All I see is a funny, irresponsible, idiot with low IQ. If you dare to be the first to stand up for the people in your territory, then if you mention rushing forward and being stopped by others, then you really agree and don't come forward. Really, so funny. 4. Ultimate Goal I would like to ask, does the author know what he wants to write? Here comes the funniest part, the protagonist has no ultimate goal. The plot has no ultimate direction. The main character of Gu Zhenren is eternal life, while the main character of Xuanjian Xian clan is family glory. This game is too real for world peace. Our novel has no ultimate goal. You said the protagonist's goal is to plant a tree. What kind of tree does it have to do with other people? Just get a shovel and plant it. Do you need to care about other things? Is it still necessary to manage relationships? A book has one main contradiction and many secondary contradictions, which is a main line and many sub-lines. Our novel has no main line (book friends, please don't argue with me yet, please try to figure it out carefully) 5. Author, what kind of novel do you want to write? Plot direction? Lighthearted and funny type? Or is it based on the protagonist's personality transformation? Or is it a group image? Or is it the same story as the game? Did the author not understand it at all? ? It is recommended not to write about group portraits. The author's description of the characters is too poor. It is said that Buddha writes about third-rate people, and you are not even close to the third-rate. . Author, you are too confused. Your outline is too complex and confusing. Calm down, think about it, and go through the outline from beginning to end.

Readers kidnapped the first volume and abandoned the book in the first few chapters of the second volume. I was bored in the middle of the night and wanted to see how I was holding on to my ideals. Why have I stopped updating for a month? Is it because I was kidnapped?

A relaxing and funny game about farming in another world, a Western fantasy novel based on the DND worldview. However, the author has great imagination, fresh ideas, clear thinking, and innovative settings. He integrates the necromancer and the druid. Through system bugs, the protagonist becomes a necromancer who loyally protects the forest and an archdruid who rides a bone dragon. The contrast is full and more attractive. The beginning is a bit slow, and there are few characters, but the subsequent development is colorful and not too compact. Each conflict point appears just right, and the story rhythm is very comfortable. The characters in the novel have online IQs and the writing is witty and humorous. The protagonist's upgrade route is clear, the world map has different styles, the characters are different, the spells and various upgrade routes are introduced in a serious way, the abilities and personalities of several summons are cute and interesting, and some jokes are also played well. Compared with the previous work "I Really Didn't Target Master", the game attributes of this book have been greatly weakened, the alien elements have been fully strengthened, and the overall atmosphere has been created more in place. The writing style has also improved, and the excellent character descriptions and detailed descriptions also make the story more interactive, which at least allows readers to think that this is a real other world rather than a false game background. This traditional Western fantasy theme with a bit of a two-dimensional flavor is not easy to write. When I first looked at the setting and the beginning, I thought the book was going to be a jokey crazy lich style or a nonsensical Nigaru style, but after reading it, it was actually more of a traditional Western fantasy, with elements of games and light novels added to it. It is a bit like the type of "Lord of the Abyss" and "Night Ranger", but it is not completely similar. This book is not so purposeful and strategic. I can only say that the style is very unique, and it is worth seeing based on the overall comprehensive level. Highly recommended to all Western fantasy fans to try.

This book is a mess about the relationship between men and women. This book describes how the male protagonist relies on the system to grow, but it does not write about how people without the system grow and advance. The author expresses all growth as a system, or that whether it is a goal or the so-called enlightenment, it is all the credit of the system. He does not write about the protagonist's talent and understanding directly, and the author cannot distinguish the difference between talent and understanding. There is a paragraph about two genius academics. A side comparison shows that the male protagonist's talent and understanding are probably in the poor category. But in the latest chapter, there is a conflict, a teacher dies, and then he has an epiphany and even finds the final way? (Here the author clearly states that this is out of the system.) The process of resurrecting the teacher later lacks more research, and the theoretical support is completely insufficient. It ignores the internal distortion caused by the evil god's pollution to the soul, and does not provide relevant explanations. It is taken for granted (there are also biological issues). I can only say that there are many problems, but they are not big. But after the latest chapter came out, I can only say that the problems have exploded. There are obvious conflicts before and after, and there is insufficient foreshadowing.

I like this book very much. I won't talk about the style and type. I think the best thing is that the author can construct a grand world view and characters without going into multi-faceted writing. This makes me feel very immersed in the book. It doesn't take a lot of thinking, and it is easy and comfortable to read. Too many books these days are getting more and more complicated, wanting everything and digging holes, which makes the readers exhausted and unable to fill the holes. I hope we can maintain this rhythm and style. Good review!

The book I spent the most money on at the beginning turned out to be so big that I feel sorry for so many deacons and helmsmen's follow-up monthly subscriptions.

Recommendation: The dual professions of Necromancer and Druid are the basis of DND online games. The progress is very good at the beginning. Similar to Amber Sword, the NPC character descriptions are more interesting, and Xixuan's writing is a bit like Devil's Rhapsody: Tomorrow's Sun with a sense of humor. Unlike the previous Master, with the coordination of the supporting characters, the boring feeling of upgrading is gone. Now the rhythm of the story of serious management of one's own "territory" makes me very comfortable. The supporting characters each have their own characteristics and fit the personality. So far, there seems to be nothing particularly witty about them. Although some settings are relatively cliché, such as a small town craftsmen's association and Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon, etc., They are well written and not inconsistent at all. Evaluation: Liangcao Category: Game - Game Alien Tags: Necromancer Druid DND Online Game {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

If I were to ask which novel made me really feel that the writing style of the new era of online writing is really changing, then I would definitely say this book "The Necromancer" (the original title of the book is "The Necromancer Just Wants to Plant Trees"). I have been paying attention to this book since I first started writing it. The setting is to travel to the game, but it is not like adding a mage profession like traditional game alien novels, but a fusion of the dual professions of the Necromancer + Druid. The protagonist improves his skills by planting trees. It seems that The conflicting elements are perfectly combined to create contrast and information gap. It was considered a trendy writing method at the time. The plot has a bit of a two-dimensional style of traditional Western fantasy. Every conflict and rhythm appear just right, and it is naturally not stiff. The author should have had a structure that will be more exciting in the later period before writing this book, and it is also very in line with the reader's preference for the structure of the later period. It is suitable for all authors who want to get started with this kind of subject.

The early stage is okay, the pace is pretty good, I won't comment much later. There are always some authors who have very good settings in the front. After the writing, their butts occupy the high ground. The writing is too fragmented. I didn't believe it when the book friends first scolded me. It wasn't until God King didn't pull me back that I realized that the scolding was really not unfair. You have eaten up all the previous rhythms. You can write whatever you want. I have withdrawn it. I can't stand it anymore. It's inexplicable.

I caught up to the latest chapter in one go At the moment, I feel a bit confused, or maybe there is too much information and too many to-do items? It makes me feel a little overwhelmed, focusing on one thing and not the other. I am so anxious that I may have to let it go first. Maybe see you after 1 million words? Things that have been revealed but have not yet been developed include: 1. It may be the main line of necromancy, nature and harmonious upgrades 1. The upgrades of assassin skeletons and zombie archers and the stories behind them 2. The unfilled bound summon slot seems to be 2/6 now? 3. The story behind the most important supporting character, the mysterious Minotaur Skeleton Girl 4. The Bone Dragon's dominance of the dead world 5. The unknown exploration of being kicked out by the masked man twice after entering it 6. The tree planting branch and follow-up tasks that are about to be completed still have exhausted seeds 2. The internal upgrade of the Seven Saints Alliance and the rivalry with the problematic teacher 1. Continue to lead the younger brother to do projects to raise funds, the protagonist is still too poor 2. The teacher's mental problem or the "real world" 3. The follow-up of Brother Bailong and the skeleton in his hand are "resurrected" 3. The mayor and his elusive former teammates (most likely involving purgatory) 4. [Tianlun Palace Shengque] and the gods are mentioned repeatedly in the background 1. Cooperation and fighting with [Moonlight] 2. There are no clear gods of good and evil. It seems that many good gods have become dark, which has led to various evil and harmonious cults 3. The follow-up of the gay demigod (it's related to gods, let's put it here) 5. The management of the "Scar of Death" that is currently being dealt with (if I put it in other books, such a big thing with a boss would probably take a whole volume) 6. The story of the Sioux tribe across the sea 1. The charm of the seabed (maybe a story with Naga) 2. The follow-up of reconciliation and Across the sea where you may go 7. Place names that you have already visited and those that appeared many times in the background but have not been to yet but have follow-up stories when you hear them 1. Zeshui City and Rainforest (the follow-up of Little Fox Suya may also be placed here) 2. [Cyber Dragon] and Artifact Master Bobo 3. Riptide City (Ghost Castle on the road) White Rock City (other necromancers) 4. May go to Watcher's Highlands (Druid) Jade Cangting (Wood Elf) 8. With the unlocking of [Intelligence Puzzle Lock] and [Civilization Puzzle Lock], various forces gradually became chaotic and impacted Rolling Stone Town 9. The extinct cosmic-level forces (Oh my! There are already so many things in the main world that there may be things in other worlds. I don't know if it includes the author's ambition to directly change the big map) Next is Pure! Indivual! People! Host! Watch! Feelings and some random thoughts (I only represent myself, and I am definitely not teaching the author to write a book) I am your old reader since the last book of "Faye"... Right? It feels like this book is relatively linear, one map after another. This book only has 670,000 words, but there are so many interesting points. My subjective guess is that you, the author, seem to be challenging the writing method of "moving forward simultaneously at multiple levels"? For example, several specific cities and rainforest islands are on one level, the Alliance of Seven Saints is on another level (the opponents at this level may be internal or gods?), The main Great Fortress and across the sea and underground and in the purgatory subspace are on one level, and the main world and the rest of the universe are on another level. The protagonist has opponents or things to deal with at each level. There are many things to watch, but I feel a little tired. I always remember these things in my heart and dare not forget each one. I hope if there are some If things are not important, just set a landmark level or event or item so that I don't have to think about these to-do items all the time. For example, the card level card items commonly used in the game allow the protagonist to have a plan that I can see, so that I can temporarily ignore some things, such as needing a legend to help Rhaegar or needing xx items to stay with the bone dragon. It can also be multiple nodes so that I can temporarily let go of some things. Otherwise, it would be very uncomfortable to feel that everything is just a little bit without follow-up. Although "please come and explore the following maps at level 20" is a bit old-fashioned, but it's easy. You can do other tasks regardless of it. The above content is all my subjective thoughts. It is just a discussion, not an attack or a pointer. I will still read it after saying so much, but it may take a little time to cultivate. I wish the author will write better and better! ! !

Before the end of the first volume and the elf dungeon, it was actually pretty good, relaxed and interesting. Although the characters were seriously distorted, there were so many characters written that we couldn't ask for too much. Even though it feels toxic to write about some female characters, in the relaxed writing style, it is not that hard to accept. Some of the stereotypes that are repeatedly used in the article can actually make people smile. But obviously, when the point of exploding the moon was reached, the joyful and humorous content of the book decreased sharply. When it came to the chapter on the elves, it was even more boring to me. It's not that I didn't like it if it wasn't joyful, but at the same time that the author was unhappy, the advancement of the plot made me feel urgent and suffocated. It was like schizophrenia when it was constantly escalating from the previous article and expanding the world view. After seeing the point where a student becomes a saint, I basically stopped reading the book for the first time. The next time I read it was the author's explosive chapter 😄😄😄. I think it does not hinder anything if the writing is enjoyable. On the contrary, it is some private stuff that thinks it has depth, which is particularly harmful to the readers' interest. Repeatedly discussing the way out of the Immortal Seed in the Elf chapter only made me feel bored and ridiculous. It tastes like nothing, this is how I feel about this book now.

Sorry, I haven't read it after nearly a hundred chapters. It started when the evil god of the void gave Matthew a blessing. It was a very confusing period of time. I don't know what the author wanted to express. Now I suddenly saw the statement issued by the author, the first part is finished? No! Do you still want to write a second part? You are already crazy about this plot, and you still want to kill the readers in the second round, right? Wake up! This book is rotten! I have been reading online articles for more than ten years and I still can't figure out how this book will end. What you have to do now is to change the outline or change the subject, not to continue this piece of shit.

I gave up the book and couldn't stand it anymore. I only had it for a few days and it suddenly became a god? What is written behind this?

It's a new year soon. Let's offer some incense.

The contact between Matthew and the characters is written too politely. It is always written that Matthew has a good relationship with so and so, but between friends, it should not be that if you give me something, I will gladly accept it and feel grateful. When Matthew gives something to a friend, the friend will say: "No, I already owe you too much." Occasionally, this is okay, but I feel that there are too many plots of this type, which makes the relationship described in this book a bit too rigid and unnatural.

The setting is very interesting. The protagonist travels to a different world in the game to adventure, and the world view is a very traditional Western fantasy theme. But this article is still very innovative and eye-catching to read. First of all, in terms of the identity of the protagonist, the combination of Necromancer + Druid has a great contrast in itself, which brings great expectations to people. I am curious about how the protagonist, an unpopular necromancer, can shine in another world. The second is the writing style. The author's writing style is humorous and interesting, occasionally a bit nonsensical, and looks very happy. But it is not purely funny, the writing style is still very mature and smooth, and it looks very comfortable. When reading the book, you can feel the relaxation of farming novels and the excitement of adventure. It is not clear whether the final plan is to have a harem, 1v1 or no cp, and there are many ambiguities between female characters and the protagonist in the article, which is quite confusing.

I saw Chapter 77. The first few times I see the title of the book, I just skip it. Later, when I read the book reviews and someone recommends it, I will read it. Then I went straight to Chapter 77 The first part was really interesting, but then it started to become a light novel. The content becomes cluttered and the characters become flat and facial makeup. The author really wants to highlight "truth, goodness and beauty", especially when you read later, you will find that the author forcibly tells this story of truth, goodness and beauty, instead of letting the readers realize it through the storyline. Some plots are particularly rough, such as the episode where the elves break up, which is very abrupt. The author really wants to express various concepts, but if he writes a fantasy novel about the duality of good and evil, adding realistic social concepts will be very fragmented. I hope that the subsequent plot can flow naturally. If you want to express more social concepts, it is more suitable for the character design to be more realistic, otherwise it will be a simple binary of good and evil. A fairy tale is also very interesting

I prefer fantasy fairy tales similar to farming novels. After reading this book by mistake, I was deeply fascinated by Matthew's great cause of planting trees The setting of the book is novel, the writing is not procrastinating, and the plot is unfolded little by little. Every new character who appears has a three-dimensional sense and is not abrupt. Now it is a problem. The plot has reached another climax point, the updates are not strong, and the chapters are broken and I want to lose the blade.

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In the second chapter of the second volume, the dead people still have fire and various foreshadowings to pull up. I didn't see the urge to abandon the book when Peggy and the old elf died But I don't have the feeling of chasing after them all the time. Let's keep it for now Maybe it's too blunt, or maybe it's something else.

Nothing has changed yet, the results are just like this

I feel that most people can't get this fan title. There are many people who like this book, and there are hundreds of people participating in the event. But based on the current fan value ranking, there is basically no chance of all bookings. What's the point? It's better to give them one by one in the rankings and hold an event 🤔

I have to admire the author's strength, it makes me feel itchy to read it out of context.

Standard stuck points.

This is how it should feel, with not many rings on the hand and a touch of elegance,

This post commemorates the first fairy jump I experienced at the starting point

This is the first time I have seen an author write the opposite of his grades. It's awesome. The only one you're criticizing is the deacon hall master. You have to show off your adult thoughts, social theories and interests, right? Why don't you write prose if you like to instill your values ​​so much?

In a two-story house along the street in an ancient town, Matthew had just gotten up. After leaving the room on the second floor, he was instantly attracted by the dishes in front of him. But when he got really close, he suddenly remembered what Peggy said last night. "Come here early, I have a surprise for you." At that time, he was eager to deal with some things, so he agreed casually without thinking carefully about what the surprise was. Until he returned in the middle of the night, he got drunk in a wine shop in the town and successfully completed the system task. It was as if he had forgotten those things, and he didn't even notice what Paige's face looked like when she saw him drunk and sleeping soundly. Of course, he didn't have time to pay attention. After all, the system-breaking task had been bothering him for a long time, and he really wasn't in the mood to care about it. After all, nothing is as powerful as small money. But when he saw these exquisite dishes, he still tried to recall the surprise that Peggy said, and also remembered that Peggy's face didn't look good when he came back. After thinking about this, he walked slowly to the first floor, saw Peggy who was busy, and then smiled. Slowly walked towards Peggy and said as he walked: "Beautiful lady, I am deeply sorry for my behavior last night. Please forgive me for my negligence towards my lady yesterday when I was running for a great plan." As a result, Peggy turned around, holding a knife and fork, with a blank look on her face. In reply, Matthew said: "Mr. Matthew, are you too drunk? We didn't meet yesterday. Where can I apologize?" After hearing her words, Matthew was a little confused. He looked at Peggy and then looked back at the stairs in the distance. He didn't know how to answer her question for a while. Even he himself doubted whether something was wrong. Did she really not say these things? After thinking about it, Matthew said: "What is the dish above? The great and kind cook?" Peggy stepped aside and pointed at a plate of beef with the knife in her left hand and said: "I just prepared it for Mr. Matthew. Mr. Matthew worked hard yesterday." Matthew could only nod and thank him, and then went upstairs. Matthew kept looking at Paige during the meal, and then Paige looked directly at Matthew. Matthew could only say: "Paige... Peggy, did you really not say anything yesterday?" Paige thought about it seriously and answered: "No! Everything is normal. I came back when you were already sleeping." Matthew could only nod, reluctantly admitting that he was confused. After eating, Matthew left here. After he left, Paige raised a smile of victory. It turns out that Peggy did prepare a surprise for him yesterday, but when she saw that Matthew was drunk, he did not bring out the surprise. She decided to let Matthew know the price of being drunk. It was already midnight when Matthew came back. He was not drinking at this time, but he found that Peggy was missing. Seeing that he couldn't find Peggy, Matthew could only sit on the first floor and wait for Peggy. However, he noticed that the room suddenly became dark. Then a beam of light lit up, and Matthew looked there and found that it was Paige. Matthew, who was sharp-eyed, noticed that her image had changed. Paige, who was originally a skeleton, has returned to her human form. This change surprises Matthew. After all, as far as he knows, there does not seem to be a spell in the world that can turn a skeleton into a human, even if it is only temporarily. When Peggy walked in, Peggy said in a standard tone: "Am I beautiful?" Matthew said with bright eyes: "Beautiful! So you..." Before Matthew finished speaking, Peggy returned to her original state, and then said: "Happy April Fool's Day! Mr. Matthew!" Afterwards, Matthew realized that it was not that he was confused, but that he was being played by Peggy. He even forgot to ask Peggy what the secret technique of turning back into a human was. This is a fun "surprise" for April Fools' Day.

I was so angry that I didn't want to sleep. To be honest, I really liked this book at the beginning. In the middle period, the entire world view really became grander. The addition of characters, the expansion of the setting, and the foreshadowing one after another made this book more and more exciting. It also brought about rhythm problems. The first dissatisfaction was that Matthew was unwilling to contribute to Margaret's resurrection. As one of the few characters who is both a teacher and a friend, Matthew's psychological activities in that entire chapter were all about himself, and he suddenly changed from a humane and loving character to a selfish and dark protagonist. But in the end, everyone has a happy ending, but it's just a matter of pacing and not enough characterization. In the future, the stall will become bigger and bigger. It can be understood that Matthew also wants to grow and pursue power, and the story also needs to develop. Although these things don't look that good to me, they are still within an acceptable range, and some of the ideas still make me enjoy talking about them. But the last few, from going to the wood elves to the whole Lost Paradise plot, are really confusing. A fantastic story in the style of Western fantasy instantly transforms into a pretentious and profound sociological discussion of human nature in an imaginary world. Matthew's whole person is so thin that he is like a piece of paper, with no bonds and no emotions. All he has is the pursuit of his own strength and path. It ended in a hurry, leaving a mess of chicken feathers on the ground. Finally, I saw the so-called cruel background that the author wanted to write, and the expansion of the power of immortal immortals and their eventual metamorphosis. It is true that there is nothing wrong with this statement, but what is so attractive about this kind of character? To put it more seriously, which of the immortal devil villains does not have this setting? Moreover, this is an example of the selfish power expansion of the superiors. Why don't you just grab a lot of free news, or just look at the rich boss of your own company? Why do you still need to spend money on online articles to feel it? The protagonist that everyone wants to see is because he is different from others, not because he is also a transcendent and a mage, so he only thinks about himself, is selfish, and pursues power, just like a supporting villain. At the end of the entire first volume, the person close to Matthew, Rhaegar, died in Matthew's absence. Sif came to kill the monster, but did not see Matthew having any feelings for her. She was a female licker in the new era. In the magic guild, the two mage camp members and Matthew split into different camps. Apart from being tools, what on earth did the protagonist help them with the other "friends". The crisis is coming. I'm really unfamiliar with what Rolling Stone is. The protagonist has figured out his own path, and runs over to grab money. When encountering danger, the protagonist thinks of himself first. If necessary, he can quickly call his friends for help. If there is no need, Matthew will respect their personal lives. In fact, it is "none of my business." The whole sense is getting worse and worse, which makes me think what is so good about this protagonist? Does the author want to write about the development history of a lucky upstart and his several dog-licking tools? The current writing of this book is just a boring reality wrapped in an imaginary world. Matthew has also completed the transformation from very likable to very unlikable. This may be the growth that the author wants. In addition, I think the epic feel is not the reason why the whole book cannot maintain its style. The protagonist team of "The Record of Abnormal Creatures" made jokes along the way, but it didn't make me feel that it was not a grand epic adventure. Although Toward Krima is a eunuch, it still has a saint-like protagonist who still brings tears to people's eyes and makes their blood boil. The core is that the protagonist has enough sparkle and appeal. The author said that the character cannot have only one personality and cannot be too thin. It is okay, but this is not the reason for Matthew to gradually become an ordinary bad person. Now I feel that any ordinary person, a passerby supporting role, can do this if he gets the opportunity of Matthew, which is boring. At the beginning of the second volume, I saw no emotions towards my dead friends, no bonds to the characters who were still alive. I didn't want to care about my girlfriend's disappearance. I was very anxious if someone was slandering my reputation. The alliance was weird, but I could only chase and lick it. I can only say that it is a pity that this book makes me feel indignant. It took several months from getting into it to liking it. But from pinning it to the top, chasing and removing the bookshelf every day, it only took an hour. If this Matthew's final ending of the book is a winner like the traditional ending of online novels, I will feel disgusted and leave after taking one sip.

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