Necromancer

This post commemorates the first fairy jump I experienced at the starting point

This is the first time I have seen an author write the opposite of his grades. It's awesome. The only one you're criticizing is the deacon hall master. You have to show off your adult thoughts, social theories and interests, right? Why don't you write prose if you like to instill your values ​​so much?

In a two-story house along the street in an ancient town, Matthew had just gotten up. After leaving the room on the second floor, he was instantly attracted by the dishes in front of him. But when he got really close, he suddenly remembered what Peggy said last night. "Come here early, I have a surprise for you." At that time, he was eager to deal with some things, so he agreed casually without thinking carefully about what the surprise was. Until he returned in the middle of the night, he got drunk in a wine shop in the town and successfully completed the system task. It was as if he had forgotten those things, and he didn't even notice what Paige's face looked like when she saw him drunk and sleeping soundly. Of course, he didn't have time to pay attention. After all, the system-breaking task had been bothering him for a long time, and he really wasn't in the mood to care about it. After all, nothing is as powerful as small money. But when he saw these exquisite dishes, he still tried to recall the surprise that Peggy said, and also remembered that Peggy's face didn't look good when he came back. After thinking about this, he walked slowly to the first floor, saw Peggy who was busy, and then smiled. Slowly walked towards Peggy and said as he walked: "Beautiful lady, I am deeply sorry for my behavior last night. Please forgive me for my negligence towards my lady yesterday when I was running for a great plan." As a result, Peggy turned around, holding a knife and fork, with a blank look on her face. In reply, Matthew said: "Mr. Matthew, are you too drunk? We didn't meet yesterday. Where can I apologize?" After hearing her words, Matthew was a little confused. He looked at Peggy and then looked back at the stairs in the distance. He didn't know how to answer her question for a while. Even he himself doubted whether something was wrong. Did she really not say these things? After thinking about it, Matthew said: "What is the dish above? The great and kind cook?" Peggy stepped aside and pointed at a plate of beef with the knife in her left hand and said: "I just prepared it for Mr. Matthew. Mr. Matthew worked hard yesterday." Matthew could only nod and thank him, and then went upstairs. Matthew kept looking at Paige during the meal, and then Paige looked directly at Matthew. Matthew could only say: "Paige... Peggy, did you really not say anything yesterday?" Paige thought about it seriously and answered: "No! Everything is normal. I came back when you were already sleeping." Matthew could only nod, reluctantly admitting that he was confused. After eating, Matthew left here. After he left, Paige raised a smile of victory. It turns out that Peggy did prepare a surprise for him yesterday, but when she saw that Matthew was drunk, he did not bring out the surprise. She decided to let Matthew know the price of being drunk. It was already midnight when Matthew came back. He was not drinking at this time, but he found that Peggy was missing. Seeing that he couldn't find Peggy, Matthew could only sit on the first floor and wait for Peggy. However, he noticed that the room suddenly became dark. Then a beam of light lit up, and Matthew looked there and found that it was Paige. Matthew, who was sharp-eyed, noticed that her image had changed. Paige, who was originally a skeleton, has returned to her human form. This change surprises Matthew. After all, as far as he knows, there does not seem to be a spell in the world that can turn a skeleton into a human, even if it is only temporarily. When Peggy walked in, Peggy said in a standard tone: "Am I beautiful?" Matthew said with bright eyes: "Beautiful! So you..." Before Matthew finished speaking, Peggy returned to her original state, and then said: "Happy April Fool's Day! Mr. Matthew!" Afterwards, Matthew realized that it was not that he was confused, but that he was being played by Peggy. He even forgot to ask Peggy what the secret technique of turning back into a human was. This is a fun "surprise" for April Fools' Day.

I was so angry that I didn't want to sleep. To be honest, I really liked this book at the beginning. In the middle period, the entire world view really became grander. The addition of characters, the expansion of the setting, and the foreshadowing one after another made this book more and more exciting. It also brought about rhythm problems. The first dissatisfaction was that Matthew was unwilling to contribute to Margaret's resurrection. As one of the few characters who is both a teacher and a friend, Matthew's psychological activities in that entire chapter were all about himself, and he suddenly changed from a humane and loving character to a selfish and dark protagonist. But in the end, everyone has a happy ending, but it's just a matter of pacing and not enough characterization. In the future, the stall will become bigger and bigger. It can be understood that Matthew also wants to grow and pursue power, and the story also needs to develop. Although these things don't look that good to me, they are still within an acceptable range, and some of the ideas still make me enjoy talking about them. But the last few, from going to the wood elves to the whole Lost Paradise plot, are really confusing. A fantastic story in the style of Western fantasy instantly transforms into a pretentious and profound sociological discussion of human nature in an imaginary world. Matthew's whole person is so thin that he is like a piece of paper, with no bonds and no emotions. All he has is the pursuit of his own strength and path. It ended in a hurry, leaving a mess of chicken feathers on the ground. Finally, I saw the so-called cruel background that the author wanted to write, and the expansion of the power of immortal immortals and their eventual metamorphosis. It is true that there is nothing wrong with this statement, but what is so attractive about this kind of character? To put it more seriously, which of the immortal devil villains does not have this setting? Moreover, this is an example of the selfish power expansion of the superiors. Why don't you just grab a lot of free news, or just look at the rich boss of your own company? Why do you still need to spend money on online articles to feel it? The protagonist that everyone wants to see is because he is different from others, not because he is also a transcendent and a mage, so he only thinks about himself, is selfish, and pursues power, just like a supporting villain. At the end of the entire first volume, the person close to Matthew, Rhaegar, died in Matthew's absence. Sif came to kill the monster, but did not see Matthew having any feelings for her. She was a female licker in the new era. In the magic guild, the two mage camp members and Matthew split into different camps. Apart from being tools, what on earth did the protagonist help them with the other "friends". The crisis is coming. I'm really unfamiliar with what Rolling Stone is. The protagonist has figured out his own path, and runs over to grab money. When encountering danger, the protagonist thinks of himself first. If necessary, he can quickly call his friends for help. If there is no need, Matthew will respect their personal lives. In fact, it is "none of my business." The whole sense is getting worse and worse, which makes me think what is so good about this protagonist? Does the author want to write about the development history of a lucky upstart and his several dog-licking tools? The current writing of this book is just a boring reality wrapped in an imaginary world. Matthew has also completed the transformation from very likable to very unlikable. This may be the growth that the author wants. In addition, I think the epic feel is not the reason why the whole book cannot maintain its style. The protagonist team of "The Record of Abnormal Creatures" made jokes along the way, but it didn't make me feel that it was not a grand epic adventure. Although Toward Krima is a eunuch, it still has a saint-like protagonist who still brings tears to people's eyes and makes their blood boil. The core is that the protagonist has enough sparkle and appeal. The author said that the character cannot have only one personality and cannot be too thin. It is okay, but this is not the reason for Matthew to gradually become an ordinary bad person. Now I feel that any ordinary person, a passerby supporting role, can do this if he gets the opportunity of Matthew, which is boring. At the beginning of the second volume, I saw no emotions towards my dead friends, no bonds to the characters who were still alive. I didn't want to care about my girlfriend's disappearance. I was very anxious if someone was slandering my reputation. The alliance was weird, but I could only chase and lick it. I can only say that it is a pity that this book makes me feel indignant. It took several months from getting into it to liking it. But from pinning it to the top, chasing and removing the bookshelf every day, it only took an hour. If this Matthew's final ending of the book is a winner like the traditional ending of online novels, I will feel disgusted and leave after taking one sip.

Running Peggy Picture

Who else, like me, comes back to visit after seeing the likes Stealing Guevara. Jpg

Why did you delete my comment? Did I say it wrong? The author's writing is indeed a bit watery, a bit vulgar and a bit ordinary 🤔

I'm still thinking about coming back to see how epic you are. It turned out that he died a few months ago 🙂. Oh, look at what a fuss this has caused. I, the helmsman, am here for nothing.

Have some necromancer jokes🤫

Aren't you going to continue writing your light epic masterpiece? Now no one is kidnapping you by reading, you should be able to write smoothly 🙂