I Can Extract Proficiency

{"TopicId":"596145397492350976","TopicName":"Remarks on Completing the Book"}Unknowingly, the proficiency is about to be completed. The author of this book, Yun Dongliu, has written about the online game: The Escort Bureau and the online game: The Chivalrous World. The first books I read about Dongliu were pirated copies. I felt that this person wrote good martial arts. Later, I discovered that after more than ten years, he actually wrote online martial arts games , and I immediately followed the book with great anticipation. The background of the game is that the Earth Federation sends millions of people to colonize alien planets. These millions of people have nothing to do on the spacecraft and play games in the life-sustaining cabin all day . The male protagonist Ye Weiming joins the Divine Catcher Division at the beginning and becomes the number one peach in the world. Oh, no, it's a secret agent! Obtain the special skill of corpse burial method, and you can obtain the secret book on the corpse of the boss to practice and increase your proficiency. The character of the male protagonist is a top-notch Lao Yinbi, who is on par with the other eunuch Jianjiu (who ward off evil spirits from the palace), and has top-notch cooking skills . The heroine has Xiaoqiao, Daomei, Sanyue, Xiaoxiao, etc. Who like him. They are basically book friends or other authors who make guest appearances. The male protagonist has too many martial arts skills, ranging from Huang Shang's to Wujue to Dugu's. It is said that the martial arts in the game can be brought into reality later. All in all, this book is between dry food and fairy grass. I always feel that it is not as good-looking as The Escort. Maybe it's because my life is just like the first time I saw it. I followed this book immediately. I also read the BGM one, but I didn't get into it. I first knew that Yundongliu was an online game called Escort Bureau. The first time I read it, it was a masterpiece. I used the name Wind, Rain and Setting Sun on QQ for a long time. I can extract proficiency very well from this book, and the results are also very good. In fact, I feel that Escort's writing is better (hehe, don't hit me, maybe it's because of the first impression). I would like to add a few words. The protagonists of the book "Proficiency" are well written, but the villains have no sense of existence. The characters are all concentrated on Ye Weiming, Tianqiao, Dao Mei, Yue Yue, Xiaoxiao, and Jinjiu. However, this is normal. It is not perfect. I hope "Proficiency" has a perfect ending.

Personal opinion: The fact that the protagonist joins the Divine Catcher Division without martial arts is a poisonous point for me. The book also says that the Divine Catcher Division is the merger of the Jinyiwei and the Six Gates. Just talking about the Six Gates, it is impossible for the four great Catchers not to include martial arts in the Six Gates. Jinyiwei does not I know, but there are definitely martial arts created by masters. That sect can't have its own martial arts. Even if you only have martial arts from other sects, you won't have to learn martial arts by yourself. I've read at least dozens of online martial arts games, and I've read both good and bad ones. Most imperial courts also have their own sects, such as Jin Yiwei, Six Gates, Shenhou Mansion, etc. This book is the first official sect that does not have its own martial arts. If the author's protagonists and supporting characters are well created and the writing is good, they can withstand such a situation. It's set, but I don't see that the author has this kind of strength at all, so why should he be different from others if he doesn't have the strength? Of course, some people may like it, but I can't see it anyway. That's all. Again, this is just a personal opinion! Personal opinion! If someone wants to argue with me, that's fine, but don't rant, okay? Finally, this comment represents only my personal opinion!

After leaving the inn and arriving at the foot of Changbai Mountain, Brother Ye only told me that ginseng is in Changbai Mountain. Where should I look to get the best one? I will find an NPC nearby and knock (cross out) to ask. There is a ginseng picker in front! Let me ask, I hope you won't go on a mission. 'Old man, I came to Changbai Mountain to look for ginseng. Where in Changbai Mountain can I get ginseng of good quality? ? ' 'What did you say? I can't hear, what are you talking about? ' 'Ginseng, where is the best ginseng? ' 'What the hell, what ginseng? ' 'Ginseng! Ginseng! Ginseng! ' 'If you want to talk about ginseng, don't I understand? Repeated so many times, why are you shouting so loudly! Today's female dolls really don't have manners. I'm hungry, give me something to eat, I tell you. ' Task Feed the Changbai Mountain ginseng pickers with deaf ears Task requirements: Give a piece of food to the Changbai Mountain ginseng pickers Task reward: The whereabouts of Baluo Snow Ginseng Do you accept it? Of course I accept the pull Fortunately, there is not much else in the backpack. I eat a lot I will give some food to the ginseng pickers in Changbai Mountain 'Look at you, why don't you be polite! Come and let me tell you about this Changbai Mountain ginseng! The best one is definitely in Tianchi, which is the legendary Eight-channel Snow Ginseng, but there is a guardian spirit beast in Tianchi, so you have to rely on yourself. You girl has such a loud voice, I don't know if you are strong enough. ' The ginseng picker in Changbai Mountain told Xiaoqiao in a timid manner. 'Thank you, sir. ' Xiaoqiao said angrily, and he was going to go to Tianchi to see how strong the guardian spirit beast was. If he couldn't beat me, he would just sway him! To predict what will happen next, please listen to the next episode

Continuing from last time. For the sake of reality, Dongliu temporarily put aside his dream pursuit, and it will not be too late to pursue his dream again after he settles down. Time flies, and it quickly came to 17 years from 10 years. Eight years have passed, and Dongliu, who has temporarily settled down, has not forgotten his dream! So, he logged into his writer account again and wrote his first book in eight years - "Zhutian Office" It is still a game category, there is still martial arts, but it is no longer the original online martial arts game, but Zhutian Infinite! After the completion of "Zhutian Office", faced with unsatisfactory results, Dongliu, who had long been accustomed to it, laughed it off. But deep down in my heart, there may be a little bit of unwillingness! Afterwards, Dongliu released "Shinto Reward", which was probably inspired by the river god's plot in "Ten Cold", which was popular during that time. Although the performance of this book is not very good, I have seen it several times in recommendation channels such as Qidian. Com and Hobby Recommendation. After this, Dongliu released "Bringing BGM to Marvel". No one can beat me in my BGM! This book has been recognized by book friends and recommended by many book list leaders. "Bringing BGM to Marvel at Any Time" was finally completed in July 2019, and the results are almost as good as those of the previous books combined! Dongliu is full of joy and has been pursuing his dream for more than ten years, and finally his dream has answered! 86,000 fans is a good result! After receiving the response, Dongliu was in high spirits. After pondering at home for two months, he decided to give it a go and use the martial arts online game theme he originally wrote to realize his dream! The result after that, as everyone can see now, he succeeded!

I have been following this book since the new issue began! It's almost half a year since I caught up. Starting from the new book issue, this book has done well! It was on the new book list and attracted a large number of book lovers even before it was put on the shelves! I fell into the trap from the new book list! At that time, Dongliu was very happy that he could be on the new book list, and he attached great importance to the performance of this book on the new book list. From time to time I will say a few words after the chapter. For example, it ranks high on the new book list, how many recommendation votes it has, and various words of thanks. Before it was put on the shelves, Dongliu made various PYs for this book. I still remember that Dongliu pushed seven books in a row before it was put on the shelves. In the end, he joked that he had collected the Dragon Balls, summoned the dragon, and pushed the new book of Decadent Dragon! At that time, I just thought it was funny. I thought the author was very interesting and I attached great importance to this work! Later, out of curiosity, I clicked on his writer's homepage and saw the unsatisfactory results of his previous works. It's hard to calm down... Another dream chaser who has persisted for ten years! It's admirable and pleasing. No, the dream is coming true!

What I always like to watch are netizens like Tianyun Old Cat and Lost Leaf Master. They have high combat power, no exaggeration, cool writing, no harem, fantasy, and martial arts online games. There are very few online games, and there are also some unlimited streaming types, plus some jokes. To be honest, I really watch them. It flows smoothly, very comfortable, not too exaggerated, and the plot is interspersed very well. When I saw Chapter 601, I didn't skip chapters or skip reading. It's really a very good online game novel. In my reading experience, this online game novel can stand out in my impression. It ranks fourth in the middle. Why is it fourth? Firstly, the number of words did not meet my needs. Secondly, can the author write a perfect ending? I really look forward to what kind of abilities everyone will have when they get off the spaceship, and whether their status on the new planet can be as analyzed by Feiyu. To be honest, I felt that Feiyu was very annoying at first, but later because of my friends and my overall view, I gradually felt that Feiyu is also quite cute. The author's description of the characters is not particularly vivid, but if it is more vivid, it will be too few words, hahaha! , But among the novels I have read, they are already very good, each with its own distinctiveness, Qiqi's determination to drink, Yin Buqi's strategy, Dao Mei's weirdness, Tang Sancai's curse, Yue Yue's seriousness, Xiaoqiao's inexplicable Love, Niu Zhichun's rogue, Tibetan profession's game attitude, etc... The NPCs are also very vividly portrayed. There are no RMB players, no vulgar routines of pretending to be pigs and eating tigers🍺, just masters, just cool, great! I would give 82 points out of 100, and the remaining 18 points would be given to the author in the form of 666.

In the current novel environment, online game writing has basically been developed to the extreme, and then declined I saw a friend recommending this book in the space, so I came to read it Some readers complained about the beginning of the interstellar opening But I think this is the necessary story background to pave the way for online games for all In fact, the author wrote a very traditional online game writing, even It is a somewhat retro martial arts online game, and the protagonist has an old-fashioned name; Ye Weiming, in the grand environment where everyone is respected by the world, has joined the imperial eagle dog and the imperial guard, and has also chosen the Tianzihao skill that looks like a must-have skill for tomb robbers But the author is relatively smooth in setting up the environment, setting the combat power, and switching the story branches, including the connection to the main line. Maybe the author didn't do this deliberately, but from the reader's point of view, it feels very comfortable and smooth to read. Even if I read fifty chapters in one breath, I feel like I haven't read much. Although there are still some old antiques in the plot... Such as the hero saving the beauty and so on, but now it is all old wine in new bottles, and it still depends on how to write it. This book still has a lot of room for improvement. So, online game writing is either dead, and online game writing still has a considerable number of potential fans, or it lacks the injection of fresh blood. The predecessors have written all the routines of online game writing, and it will be difficult to attract current readers without coming up with something new. Come on, author!

How many fifteen years can there be in life? In fifteen years, everything is changing, the whole world is changing. Yun Dongliu has also changed from a youthful young brother to a middle-aged uncle who is stable and responsible for the family! The only thing that remains unchanged is the heart to chase dreams! It should roughly start like this: A dream chaser with some vision and yearning for the future uploaded his first novel on Qidian in 2006! Dreams are beautiful, but reality is cruel. The number of readers who have been chasing books has just finished, which should be a big blow to Dongliu who is full of expectations. With the expectation of his dream, Dongliu persisted. After finishing the first novel, Dongliu published his second novel, which, like the first, is still an online martial arts novel. The results of the second novel are still not ideal. After finishing the second novel, Dongliu thought about giving it another try and started a third novel. The third novel, Dongliu changed his career and wrote fantasy. At this time, it is already 2010. During the writing of the third book, for some unknown reason, Dongliu stopped and disappeared. This disappearance lasted eight years! As for the reason for the disappearance, although I don't know, it is nothing more than: getting married and starting a business. For the sake of reality, let go of your dreams for the time being. Once everything is settled, it's not too late to pursue your dreams again!

Crown of Sound and Imagery (Artifact): The elephant is invisible and the sound is loud. Seemingly ordinary things often contain the most extreme martial arts principles. Defense is +2000, so resistance is +1000, internal strength level is +1, and unarmed martial arts level is +2. When fighting in a scene with music, different levels of martial arts increase will be obtained depending on the music. Comments: It is said that the hat on the head of Qiao Feng, the leader of the Beggar Clan, he will never take off wherever he goes. People speculate that there is something called a "sound" hidden in it. This is the source of Qiao's undefeated record of being invincible! After giving it to Night Bitch →_→, he will get the title "Walking DJ" 🤤

To make a difference today, I will give you two monthly passes.

This book has the feel of a book written by Xia. It is relaxed and happy. The protagonist is a little smart and a little shady. I haven't read such a comfortable book since the online game Xia wrote. Thank you to the author. Please keep up the good work!

What is the relationship between the author and Yi Dao Zhan Zhan😅

Just to make a rant, why do interstellar immigrants want the entire martial arts arena? It's inexplicable that he still engages in martial arts after everything has gone to heaven

Can the author please briefly describe the world view and various settings of this book? It's more straightforward 🙂

Well ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪It's just water experience to get active

What an experience! 🙂

I finished reading it in one go. It has been a long time since the last book before I found such a good-looking and appetizing book. I have to wait for a while.

Unknowingly, I have become a fan of this book. Let me share my thoughts. There is a big difference between the beginning of this book and where we are now. I'm not talking about the writing style, but the attitude. I can accept typos. Everyone is careless sometimes, but you should at least change your martial arts moves. I remember that there was a chapter (Slaying Dragons and Seeking Dao, a Shocked Glance) with a sharp glance in the title. As soon as I saw this chapter, I poured cold water on it, and my enthusiasm was extinguished by you (I don't know if it has been changed now). Secondly, I used to have three chapters a day, and the number of words may not be much different from now, but can you stop mentioning the two-in-one? The page count of your two-in-one is not as good as that of a single chapter. I don't know where to combine it. Just write two chapters. You are like telling people that it is still three chapters for me, which is boring. I am writing a review. I haven't thought much about the words. If there is anything inappropriate, I hope Haihan

It's a great book. It's very comfortable to read. I ordered it directly 😁

The plot is quite interesting, please can the male protagonist not be so naughty?

The character of the protagonist is a bit fresh. According to the officialdom, he is a corrupt official with a bottom line. If you can get it, don't be merciful, and if you can't get it, find ways to get it indirectly. What cannot be touched is taken out to deceive others in an attempt to maximize profits. No penny of ill-gotten gains will be taken, but if righteous gains are obtained by unjust people, then they are spoils of war. The most unpleasant part of the whole book is that there is no item that can fit the existence of Golden Finger, such as a recyclable coffin and a shovel that can be buried with one click. The second dissatisfaction is that Rhubarb's presence as a pet is too low. It is completely a tool dog. As a dog lover, the dog is more important than the girl. The dog that is usually useless should at least be taken out and petted and fed. In the winter, you can warm your hands and use the quilt, and in the summer, you can breathe in the wind. Wen can be cute and lovable, but martial arts can scare away bears. It's sad that such a versatile dog is actually a tool dog 😟

I hope I don't deliberately suppress the plot of the main character just to make things better. This book is not finished yet, so I will continue with the next one. Maybe the next book won't be finished yet, right?

Please give me a reply and a like!

Hard work will eventually pay off. After ten years of writing a book, it's finally a masterpiece. It's not easy for an author. Come on 🤭🤭🤭

I've given you the monthly pass, so I'll give you some extra points for the swordsman 🙂

If you have any questions, you can ask them here and Dongliu will answer them uniformly. |˛˙꒳​˙)♡

The character of the protagonist is uncomfortable to watch. It's not what I like. The author doesn't seem to know how to distribute according to work. Every time he teams up with others to fight monsters, he has to give equipment to others, and he always gives up the benefits he deserves. It is obvious that he basically fights by himself every time, and his teammates basically can't. Isn't it better for you to be a lone ranger than now? ? ? Also, every time someone encounters something, you have to help them out, especially the women who love to help, the housekeeper.

I recommend this book. It is simple and relaxing. There are not so many disgusting villains, there are no intrigues, and there are no complicated descriptions of literary youth. It is most comfortable for everyone to play the game happily. I recommend everyone to try it. If you don't like it, you won't be poisoned.

As soon as the protagonist is born, his parents must die first. My talents are astounding from ancient times to the present, and I can do everything. There was a fiancée who came to break off the engagement. The protagonist is unconvinced and bullies the young man into being poor. If you go out to study art, you will definitely have the opportunity. There must be a story about becoming a disciple of someone so-and-so, and being a disciple was jealous of others, and all the senior brothers were dissatisfied. The protagonist is slapped in the face, and the senior sister comes to help. Advise him to be patient for a while, and a chance will come. As magical weapons and magical skills come, so must the magical beasts. Once the magical skill is mastered, the enemy will appear. The two of them are like fire and water, and someone must come to persuade them. The sect held a grand competition and got the top three in revenge. The master invites me to meet you and go out to travel around the world. There are beauties in the world, and beauties have troubles. The protagonist comes to help and the trouble is solved. Then she told her origin, she must be a daughter of aristocratic family. The family then arrives and the beauty must leave. The protagonist wants to find her, but the power gap is too great. The auction house will definitely gain something later. Then find your teammates, who are beautiful women. When you leave the city and change the map, you can get air every second. The beauty is found, and the head of the family comes to test her. There is a strong enemy in the test, and the protagonist has to solve it. After all, the clan members praised me for being so awesome.

First of all, I have not turned on my privacy. I don't like to troll people when looking at my profile! Okay, let's start. There was an author who wrote something toxic. I told him that he would permanently ban me. I changed my account and asked him why. He also blocked my account. I decided that every time I read a book, I would leave a trace of him in the book circle to let everyone know!