This World Is Far Too Dangerous

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To be honest, it's really unnecessary to post this post now, after all, it's been two and a half years since the book was finished, but I'm still unhappy. If the author is unhappy with it, just think I'm farting It's mainly about the plot of the witch in the hundred or so chapters How can I put it, others don't know. I read Invincible for a sense of relaxation. It's because the villain looks like he has the victory in hand during the decisive battle. When he is strategizing, the protagonist goes up and punches him in the face. But there is no part of the witch plot. The protagonist didn't even touch the witch. The witch threw the control and the protagonist was frozen. Marianne put the magic seed into the protagonist's body and calmly took away the skull. Although the author of that chapter made a comment, it was actually Marianne who couldn't beat it. Control it and run away But from my perspective, what I can see is that it is elegant and calm. Playing with applause. To put it bluntly, you took the thing away, but I can take it back if I want to. It's not nice to say that. In front of Marianne, the protagonist may not be able to protect anything (as far as I have read more than a hundred chapters) Come up and give the protagonist control. Even if it is only for a moment, Marianne can find a hundred ways to kill Gu Tiantian. She can't kill Gu Yun, but she can kill everyone else. Gu Yun has no way, right? Gu Yun's current performance, Marianne wants to hide, he can't find it for the rest of his life, unless he blows up the earth. But who knows the earth explodes? Can Marianne die? This plot seems like the protagonist is forcing the witches away, but if you think carefully, Marianne is just for the skull and she gets it. It doesn't matter whether the other witches die or not, so it seems that the protagonist group has broken the witch conspiracy, but in fact it is of no use How can I put it this way? If you put Marianne's set of operations in a normal novel, the protagonist and the villain boss have a 50-50 ending, it is all because of the fact that he is the protagonist. If you were a sidekick, you would be like the administrator, who could die suddenly at any time But this book is an invincible book. It is outrageous to open it at 50 or 50. Secondly, there is the problem with your plot. The witch must have written twenty or thirty chapters. You probably laid the foundation for the Twilight Witch in several chapters. There is so much foreshadowing. Moreover, the battle between Gu Yun and Marian is the first shot of the battle in the book, but you only wrote half a chapter or even less than that much foreshadowing. So it's a tie... I don't know much about writing books, but I think we should have a small climax. As a result, the protagonist is being played by others and there is no way. What's the difference between not being able to guard the skull and being unable to guard Gu Tiantian? Maybe you don't have to use all your strength, but your plot is very frustrating when you watch it. Your emotions are all in place before, and they are just waiting to explode. You can't turn off the flames Oh, the protagonist of the invincible novel can still let the villain steal things from his hand calmly, without any injuries. It makes me feel aggrieved just thinking about it. It is an upgrade novel where the villain steals things from the protagonist. He has to suffer some injuries. It's very annoying

Doesn't this look like a silly pigeon😁

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The book is good everywhere, but the main character is a fool

The author's concept of money is annoying. If you save a rich man's son, you will be given a few thousand. If you fight off a witch who can stop, you will be given 100,000. In addition, the maximum standard bonus for thugs written before is also 100,000. I want to ask if it is still so painful in the middle and later stages.

First, there are endless girls in this novel, hey... Second, the strangeness in this novel is basically funny, including the protagonist, uh... The author's writing is very good and excellent, and the narrative is also very clear, but it's a pity that it went astray. Funny supernatural stories were a routine twenty years ago. It is very disgusting to read this kind of subject now. I want to take the style of One Punch Superman, but one punch makes me feel cold. What's more, there is still a big difference between novels and animations

Homegirl An Ling

I just started watching it, and it's a pity that it won't be animated. It's one of Qidian's works that is most suitable for animation.

The biggest problem with this kind of invincible novel is that it is bland and boring. It was refreshing to watch at first, but dull after watching too much, and boring to watch again. I don't want to pick it up once I put it down, it's like useless. If you are in love and adjust the harem elements, you can also look forward to Shura Field and dog food, such as "The Crown Prince is Very Fierce", but it is a pity that this book is frigid. If there is a funny plot, it can be softened, but it won't go far if it's just funny, not to mention that there won't be any funny scenes later. If there is suspense and the grand world view can arouse the desire to read, this book has done a good job, but unfortunately it is still too bland and cannot be read. If there is character creation, hatred: For example, the Bloody Mary senior in the first volume, dig deep into the relationship with Teacher Wu, the process of being sealed in the mirror, the mental journey over the past ten years, and what she has experienced to be so gentle and kind. What experience does the man in the trench coat have as the final BOSS? What crazy things has he done? Dora hates him, instead of just being a sidekick. His appearance rate is lower than that of the supporting characters. He is inexplicably killed with one move, which gives people an inexplicable feeling. JK Xia Mu, the yandere daughter of the underworld, has just left the scene, and such a good character is gone. You can even use your sword to kill Chang Hu's allies. I read Chapter 167, Hidden Dragon Temple, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Put it on the bookshelf to gather dust, waiting for that "read it next time".