The Warden Who Guards the Witches

Well, it was well written. The criminal who committed the most heinous crimes has been imprisoned for a full hundred years, one ten thousandth of her lifespan. The protagonist is also a very professional prison guard who never mistreats prisoners and allows them to escape and then catch them back.

Although I understand that the protagonist is suffering from a serious existential crisis, he has no desire or leisure to find a partner. But which one comes to mind based on the title and introduction of this book is not an LSP? You can add some joy and relaxation, it doesn't have to be so depressing, and it's not overly restrained.

How about it?

Comments are personal opinions and are for reference only. I just read this book not long ago. I came to read it today. How did it end? I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the part has just been released. It's not much, so I can only give a preliminary evaluation, but I think that the free part can almost determine the score of a book. Speaking of which, why is this book so lukewarm? In my opinion, there is actually only one main problem: lack of purpose A friend once told me that the popularity of online novels is mainly due to two factors, one is a clear upgrade route, and the other is that the protagonist upgrades faster than others. I didn't delve into where this statement came from, but I believe it. It doesn't necessarily mean that you will be popular if you have these two factors, but if you don't have them, it will be difficult to become popular. The latter is a plug-in. The adventures of martial arts talents in the early years, the knowledge and technology of traveling to other worlds, and the increasingly brainless system. In short, it is the protagonist's method of becoming stronger quickly that is different from ordinary people. This book can be considered to have it, so I won't comment too much. The former "clear upgrade route" is actually aimed at the online articles from a few years ago. Now it can be extended to "clear goals and foreseeable means to achieve the goals", which is the ultimate goal, general direction, and core highlights of a book (the core purpose of most online articles is equivalent to various forms of "becoming stronger"). But after reading the paid chapters of this book, I still can't figure out what I want to read. To give some examples, the ultimate goal of immortality novels is usually to cover the world with one hand and become invincible. In farming novels, the ultimate goal is usually to have one overlord rule the world. In urban novels, the ultimate goal is usually to have both career and emotional success. Others, such as Infinite Flow and Lord of Mysteries, can generally predict the writing direction of the novel in the early stage. This "direction" and "big core" are the fundamental factors that drive readers to turn the pages and read on. But in this novel, I can't see the fundamental purpose, at least I can't see it until I pay. You talk about developing power, but the prison does not belong to you, and the prisoners themselves are not suitable. You mean improving your abilities? The male protagonist was already powerful, but after traveling through time, he became weaker and "unmotivated". Did you say "operation and management"? In fact, there is no "change" process in the 100 chapters, they are all in the completion tense. So, what is my desire to read the next chapter? What did I want to see to read this book? Personally, what I want to see are "using the power of witches to change the world structure (similar to the book "Let the Witch Go") and "opening a harem (but all the prisoners are evil and inappropriate, not to mention that the male protagonist is also a gentleman with no desires and desires (derogatory meaning)") "Running a prison like a business simulation (but it is not suitable for a prison that is no different from reality)" "Exploring the customs and customs of another world (as long as it is a different world theme, you can easily bring it with you, but obviously this book does not write about these at all", the above highlights , almost none. You may say, why did the male protagonist travel through time, and what is the sealed god? Isn't this the "main line" that is buried and needs to be explored? But I have to say, first of all, the early roots? I don't see this as the main plot. The problem of God is neither urgent nor critical. Without her, it is just a different solution to the problem, which does not affect the plot. Secondly, this kind of pit is not suitable to be used as the "core" of an entire online novel. It is too small. It's a side dish. What is a side dish? Fighting to break the sky, becoming a fighting emperor is the main course. How to "don't bully young people who are poor" in the early stage, and how to win back childhood sweethearts in the later stage, are the side dishes, and the conspiracy of God is the same as the "fire" in fighting to break the sky. People are curious, but it is not the driving force to read. In today's environment, readers no longer care about how to travel or where the system comes from. The focus is on what to do with it. Chen Dong's books also have many such pitfalls, such as "big horror" and "surprise". "Heaven's Conspiracy" and "The Layout of the Supreme Being". He either didn't fill in these pitfalls or filled them in a mess, but it didn't affect the popularity of the book at all. I used to read it and was addicted to it. These books, the first chapter and the 100th chapter, regardless of power or strength, are guides in light novels. Regardless of the progress of the heroine, there will be changes after all. When readers read the book, they are actually subconsciously looking for their favorite "points of interest". If it is not suitable or simply not available, they will leave on their own.

Entering my store, I feel as happy as a fairy 😚 (You can't pass the review without coding)

This title reminds me of a book

After watching it, the male protagonist is a eunuch and the ending is not very good. There are so many female characters but I didn't recommend any of them. I feel weird that Melissa is not dead, right? The combat power system is really stretched. The entire combat power relies on saying "God's Word" to fight. It is said to be a prison. In the middle period, there is no detailed description of the plot of the prison. It is almost all written in one stroke. However, the author's writing style is indeed good, and the plot logic can be regarded as the two biggest advantages.

Fortunately, I came in and read the comments. Surrounded by beautiful women, there is a single female protagonist. Are there so many female character cards to mislead new readers?

Disguise of God

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