The Warden Who Guards the Witches

Comments are personal opinions and are for reference only. I just read this book not long ago. I came to read it today. How did it end? I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the part has just been released. It's not much, so I can only give a preliminary evaluation, but I think that the free part can almost determine the score of a book. Speaking of which, why is this book so lukewarm? In my opinion, there is actually only one main problem: lack of purpose A friend once told me that the popularity of online novels is mainly due to two factors, one is a clear upgrade route, and the other is that the protagonist upgrades faster than others. I didn't delve into where this statement came from, but I believe it. It doesn't necessarily mean that you will be popular if you have these two factors, but if you don't have them, it will be difficult to become popular. The latter is a plug-in. The adventures of martial arts talents in the early years, the knowledge and technology of traveling to other worlds, and the increasingly brainless system. In short, it is the protagonist's method of becoming stronger quickly that is different from ordinary people. This book can be considered to have it, so I won't comment too much. The former "clear upgrade route" is actually aimed at the online articles from a few years ago. Now it can be extended to "clear goals and foreseeable means to achieve the goals", which is the ultimate goal, general direction, and core highlights of a book (the core purpose of most online articles is equivalent to various forms of "becoming stronger"). But after reading the paid chapters of this book, I still can't figure out what I want to read. To give some examples, the ultimate goal of immortality novels is usually to cover the world with one hand and become invincible. In farming novels, the ultimate goal is usually to have one overlord rule the world. In urban novels, the ultimate goal is usually to have both career and emotional success. Others, such as Infinite Flow and Lord of Mysteries, can generally predict the writing direction of the novel in the early stage. This "direction" and "big core" are the fundamental factors that drive readers to turn the pages and read on. But in this novel, I can't see the fundamental purpose, at least I can't see it until I pay. You talk about developing power, but the prison does not belong to you, and the prisoners themselves are not suitable. You mean improving your abilities? The male protagonist was already powerful, but after traveling through time, he became weaker and "unmotivated". Did you say "operation and management"? In fact, there is no "change" process in the 100 chapters, they are all in the completion tense. So, what is my desire to read the next chapter? What did I want to see to read this book? Personally, what I want to see are "using the power of witches to change the world structure (similar to the book "Let the Witch Go") and "opening a harem (but all the prisoners are evil and inappropriate, not to mention that the male protagonist is also a gentleman with no desires and desires (derogatory meaning)") "Running a prison like a business simulation (but it is not suitable for a prison that is no different from reality)" "Exploring the customs and customs of another world (as long as it is a different world theme, you can easily bring it with you, but obviously this book does not write about these at all", the above highlights , almost none. You may say, why did the male protagonist travel through time, and what is the sealed god? Isn't this the "main line" that is buried and needs to be explored? But I have to say, first of all, the early roots? I don't see this as the main plot. The problem of God is neither urgent nor critical. Without her, it is just a different solution to the problem, which does not affect the plot. Secondly, this kind of pit is not suitable to be used as the "core" of an entire online novel. It is too small. It's a side dish. What is a side dish? Fighting to break the sky, becoming a fighting emperor is the main course. How to "don't bully young people who are poor" in the early stage, and how to win back childhood sweethearts in the later stage, are the side dishes, and the conspiracy of God is the same as the "fire" in fighting to break the sky. People are curious, but it is not the driving force to read. In today's environment, readers no longer care about how to travel or where the system comes from. The focus is on what to do with it. Chen Dong's books also have many such pitfalls, such as "big horror" and "surprise". "Heaven's Conspiracy" and "The Layout of the Supreme Being". He either didn't fill in these pitfalls or filled them in a mess, but it didn't affect the popularity of the book at all. I used to read it and was addicted to it. These books, the first chapter and the 100th chapter, regardless of power or strength, are guides in light novels. Regardless of the progress of the heroine, there will be changes after all. When readers read the book, they are actually subconsciously looking for their favorite "points of interest". If it is not suitable or simply not available, they will leave on their own.

After reading the first 10 chapters, I wrote a simple book review to talk about several problems with this book. 1 I feel that the management of the so-called most dangerous women's prison in the world is too loose and is not as good as a real prison. At least the description does not reflect the strictness of the prison at all. For example: prisoners can escape from prison at will without stopping them immediately, and the punishment for being caught is almost zero. Succubi can use their supernatural abilities to read dreams in prison without triggering magical wards or other measures. The so-called dangerous prisoners can actually take a bath together, without separate containment measures, shackles and other restrictions. The prisoner's status is too low: Can a pimp and a murderer both go to this kind of prison? As the warden, the protagonist can actually receive letters from residents pleading for mercy from the female werewolf? 2 At least the first 10 chapters do not reflect the characteristics of the witch. The main female characters described are a pimp, a female vampire who does not look very smart, and a female werewolf who was framed. Judging from the descriptions, none of them give people a feeling of evil and danger, and they are not in line with the scope of the prison at all. It would be fine if you wrote a funny farming style like this, but unfortunately this is not the case with this book. 3 The influence of extraordinary factors is too low. Anyway, the author's descriptions in the first 10 chapters do not reflect the difference from the normal world at all. There is no magical way to monitor the prison, and your subordinates still need to report anything when something goes wrong? A female werewolf actually uses a gun as a police officer? Or a trooper? A werewolf can't run as fast as a bicycle/motorcycle? No magic was used to summon spirits at the investigation site? There is no magic spell for revealing the truth in the court? It's not that I'm deliberately trying to find faults to use as reinforcement, but that many of the author's descriptions are awkwardly applied to reality, and they don't reflect a world with all kinds of extraordinary beings at all. 4 The description of the protagonist is too little and the main line is unclear. The protagonist only briefly mentioned how he could become the warden by improving the treatment of prisoners and the prison mechanism? Or is it this otherworldly prison for dangerous felons? Unconvincing. Also, it is very inappropriate to use the female werewolf as the first main plot line. When the protagonist is a warden at the beginning and the reader doesn't know anything, why do you actually run out of prison and become a detective or vigilante? What's the title of your book? What are the benefits of this for the protagonist? Besides satisfying his moral high ground? Can such a person be a warden?

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified, please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words The first impression I got from the title of the book is that this book must be full of fragrance. It starts with many unforgettable charming characters, and then supplements it with small stories to flesh out the characters, and at the same time let us experience their endlessly memorable stories. However, after I actually started reading the book, I realized that it was essentially a short story, an antique story about a judge handling a case, but by the year 1202, the completely crushing chivalry could no longer attract readers. Therefore, the characters and the tone of the story were adjusted, from radiant light to dim tones, and from straight-line absolute crushing to careful exploration. The impression this warden gave me was that he was very ordinary but a little lucky, almost as if he was happy. The subsequent chapters are slowly advanced with a rational and logical script. The whole process can only be said to be a slow rise. The main line is how the protagonist strives to break away from the identity of the god's chess piece. In the end, it comes to an abrupt end before the character is affected by increasing power and breaks the rules. The story is interrupted. I like the initial chapter better. Although it is a clichéd plot that leads to a plot from the background of the characters, and the plot is not too novel, the new charm brought by old wine in new bottles made me watch it with relish. The warden is not particularly outstanding, so it is closer to a worse and more realistic development. Just like us ordinary people can't do anything well, we can only get some not-so-bad practices from it as at least not an unsatisfactory ending. Reality constrains us and constrains this warden's fairy tale, making everything not so beautiful, but it has a bit of charm. After the chapter on mantra and divinity started in the middle, I felt that the plot strategy and reversal were relatively ordinary, and the short story became less touching, and the more childish parts of various plots were revealed. Generally speaking, novels also have many such blunt turns, but there are usually other highlights, such as particularly funny, or special surprises to cover up these blunt parts. However, this book has always been relatively dull, which makes people pay attention to this part. The final battle is also a battle of authority. The concept of authority is really a surprise at first. I thought about what surprises there would be after it became more complicated and stacked different situations. But later I felt that this was a battle of explanation. It is the same as the rules of the Yu-Gi-Oh Card. It is complicated. In the end, it was boring for most people. I offset your trump cards and you used a loophole to bypass mine. Then I used a method that restricted you from bypassing my loopholes to bring the situation back to a draw. This detour process was really not very interesting, a bit like the late battle of the Lord of Mysteries. The most impressive character is Professor Dodge, a character who sacrifices everything for his son. He is evil, cold-blooded, and cruel, but everything he does is for his son. He takes up all the sins and only hopes to leave his son a clean future. In the eyes of outsiders, he is an inhumane devil, but in the eyes of his son, he is a hero who cannot help but identify with, even if his hands are full of blood and sin. Tony's new life will presumably live to pay for his father's sins, even if it's not nearly enough. The other is Sophie and Susan. Even if their fate has been arranged, even if they tell themselves that accepting the arrangement of Smiling Balance rationally is the best ending, they have no ability to betray the organization, but even so, Sophie still hopes that Susan can survive. Maybe they won't see each other again, maybe Sophie won't have the chance to say sorry to Susan, but she still hopes she can survive. The other characters are also very interesting, but I personally think that they are not portrayed deeply enough, just like the branch plots that were briefly explored without being explored in depth. Werewolf Veronica: When no one believed her, someone said that she wanted to hear what happened, giving her a chance to speak Evantha, the Bloody Death God: She was raised as a killing tool since she was a child, and only after entering prison did she know that she can also make choices Silk Lain, the Corpse Demon: She will never know the truth until she dies. Phase Blood Prince Ophelia: A stupid, willful and arrogant eldest lady, but at least she found someone who has been paying for her The highlight of the prisoner is only the few chapters in which he appears. If he does not appear, he has no characteristics. The character creation is really not too profound. At the end, the thing that I remember most is the mascot Succubus Faile? Almost all the other prisoners and witches who have helped can't catch up with the protagonist due to the updates of the protagonist's version one after another and therefore lose the opportunity to appear. Dessert-loving Dai Li and the Necromancer Arsena are the representatives of the powerlessness of the prisoners. The representative of the witch is Kiki Mora, who is considered a witch. The party is the most useful character who appears the most, but she has nothing about her character or background. She only appears because her authority is most useful to the protagonist, not because the plot gives her any important meaning. It is really difficult to like such a tool character. The identity of the warden is both a highlight and a constraint. In the early stage, the identity of the warden aroused curiosity about the warden's life and interactions with prisoners, but I am not sure whether it was written in depth enough or because the elements were not enough. After the introduction of God's Word in the middle period, this identity completely became a constraint. The enemy always There are all kinds of forced and reasonable reasons to break into the prison, and there are almost no chapters where the warden goes out on adventures. It is always at home, but there is no new exploration of the prison. Instead, it has been stuck on some small things, such as obeying after entering the prison, and the witch who cooperated with the prison always violated some minor rules, etc. To complain about the whole book, all the main things are the turmoil caused by the ruler wanting to cause trouble after being bored forever. This is also very boring to read. After immortality, only this hobby is left, and only the role-playing plot brought by the arranger is left? I think the plot of the whole book is meaningless when I think about it. Realistic technology is still so low, people are still fighting each other in the Middle Ages, and the rulers of the top power can only do boring things. Then their eternal life is not as good as the slogan of the witch coven, pursuing the truth and doing research. In addition to the conspiracy goddess behind the scenes, the fantasy artist is even more disgusting than the conspiracy woman in my opinion. Was this unusual character written to prepare a deus ex machina? Deborah's Justice Messenger chapter and the final chapter were completely ruined by this character. He made the persistence of the bloody suit meaningless, and instead controlled the protagonist to slowly obtain the final power of the law. I really hate this kind of character plot arranged here and there. To summarize, the interesting chapters are the first few, including overturning the case, riots, and revenge. However, after the introduction of the word of God, it began to lose its charm, and the prison was in order, until the wordless code came out and the ability was completely broken. There is almost no danger in any action. The protagonist only needs to slowly investigate, complete preparations, and catch the opponent off guard. This kind of plot advancement without surprises makes people tired of watching it. It wasn't until the protagonist of Nemesis finally left prison to face an unstoppable opponent and took the risk of taking chestnuts from the fire that the story started to become interesting again. I think no one would like to read that kind of story. It's like a well-arranged eight-part essay. When you hear the wind, trigger events, investigate, make arrangements, and the enemy comes to die, this plot development is really boring. Being interrupted by unpredictable accidents in the process is an interesting story that the public likes to hear.

What can I say, the protagonist is not only weak in strength, but also has a low IQ. For this first incident, you have to hire a military advisor. The key is to hire a military advisor. After a night of discussion, you will come up with the idea of ​​hiring a killer to frame him. Generally, the protagonist needs to be very strong to become a big boss and fight wits to establish a character. This protagonist's B level has dropped a lot from the beginning, but the setting is good, you can see it if you put your mind down.

It's very hard at the moment... Why is the main character staying with Veronica? Personally I really can't accept it (I only like to watch dramas, not romance), but the plot is really attractive to me. I've read more than 600 chapters. It's really a pity for me to abandon it. I'm a little sad 😭

This is a book with great potential. It is designed to unfold like a harem, but in fact every step of the protagonist's life is walking on the edge of a knife. I am looking forward to the big chapters that will begin to unfold after it is now on the shelves, and what kind of feast the author will serve out in the end. The rhythm of the plot is very comfortable at present. The author writes slowly, don't be too anxious, and polish it patiently~ (Finally, I hope the mascot will have more roles_(:з)∠)_) ↑This is your goal! (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

As a reader, I would say that this book is super in line with my personal reading xp! My personal reading xp is that the logic is basically self-consistent, the flaws can be there but as few as possible, and then I like the character design and the world view setting, and the overall situation should not be too YY, nor too sadistic and incomprehensible. In short, as a reader, I like "light YY articles with few flaws". Let me briefly talk about this story. The background is similar to fantasy + Victoria + mystery + crime solving. The protagonist Aiden travels through time and becomes the warden of a prison in another world. He is responsible for guarding the "Rose Iron Prison" where dangerous beings such as witches and aliens are imprisoned. One main line is the dungeon stories of various witches, and the other is the line of authority of the gods involved in the later stage. Whether it's reality or fiction, I really like stories about hard-working but tragic characters who succeed. There are many beautiful, strong and tragic characters in this book. In the first chapter of the book, a female vampire prince escapes from prison similar to "The Shawshank Redemption", and then she is caught and deflated by the male protagonist when she goes out. Later, it involves the frame-up case of the wolf policewoman (after being rescued, she gained the love and loyalty of the little wolf girl!), The killer loli mother's riot and jailbreak, the revenge mother case, the witch soul exchange event, the witch gathering (similar to the Gray Mist meeting of the Lord of Friends), Vera's assassination, the destruction of the Reproductive Cult, the Blood Moon Cult... The unit drama copies of various cases are very good-looking, with full characters, gorgeous battles, good short plots, and occasionally some humanistic reflections. But there are also shortcomings. For example, I think the efficiency of character utilization is low. The little wolf girl in the first case is the main character in the follow-up, which is an experience with high utilization efficiency. However, in many dungeons, the characters are clearly well-created, but the subsequent dungeons disappear. It feels very pity. Obviously we can experience the dungeon missions together, or occasionally interact. Also, the main plot of the gods at the back is just average. The individual cult dungeons are actually pretty good, but once you get to the level where the gods fight, it's not that interesting. But I feel that basically the novel, when the combat power is high, is not as good as when the combat power is low. As a side note, this setting is similar to the mobile game "Lost". Later, I found several authors to write similar settings of prison + crime city + case group portraits, but unfortunately none of them were high-quality or above. Then I talked with the author of this book about changing the background of fairy tales and fantasy, and then after reading what he wrote later, it didn't feel quite right. He should write Western fantasy instead!

The writing felt a bit bland, and the male protagonist didn't give me the feeling that he had a life attitude of dawdling about, so personally I didn't have that much desire to read it.

The book is very good, the plot and characters are well written. I think the only shortcoming may be that it is not very popular because of your title. Speaking of which, if there is a group, I will add one if you have one. If you are a fan and need it, I will just add some money.

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. This kind of plot setting is really interesting.

After seeing more than 130 people, I found that this book looks a bit like Bloodborne. I want to become a superior.

Well, it was well written. The criminal who committed the most heinous crimes has been imprisoned for a full hundred years, one ten thousandth of her lifespan. The protagonist is also a very professional prison guard who never mistreats prisoners and allows them to escape and then catch them back.

Although I understand that the protagonist is suffering from a serious existential crisis, he has no desire or leisure to find a partner. But which one comes to mind based on the title and introduction of this book is not an LSP? You can add some joy and relaxation, it doesn't have to be so depressing, and it's not overly restrained.

How about it?

Entering my store, I feel as happy as a fairy 😚 (You can't pass the review without coding)

This title reminds me of a book

After watching it, the male protagonist is a eunuch and the ending is not very good. There are so many female characters but I didn't recommend any of them. I feel weird that Melissa is not dead, right? The combat power system is really stretched. The entire combat power relies on saying "God's Word" to fight. It is said to be a prison. In the middle period, there is no detailed description of the plot of the prison. It is almost all written in one stroke. However, the author's writing style is indeed good, and the plot logic can be regarded as the two biggest advantages.

Fortunately, I came in and read the comments. Surrounded by beautiful women, there is a single female protagonist. Are there so many female character cards to mislead new readers?

Disguise of God

I have signed a contract, and two chapters will be updated every day unless there is any unexpected situation. The new book needs everyone's great care, please support me, thank you all 🙏

She is a wolf girl

Don't worry, everyone, this book is okay, it's a masterpiece. Most of the comments section are full of random comments, but few people really evaluate it. The plot is exciting, the characters are clear, and the environment is not bad. The current environment in Qidian's comment area is such that you can find fault with everything. If you really want to find a good book, you have to read it yourself.

Honestly, did I get the inspiration from you (doge)?

After reading the comment section for a long time, you told me it's not a harem? Grass😡

U1s1, the author's writing skills are indeed very good, and the writing is very smooth, but after reading about a hundred chapters, I found two problems that I don't know whether to count as problems. 1. The author doesn't seem to have any description of the appearance of the protagonist and the supporting characters in the prison? When I wrote about Veronica, I thought it was an ugly werewolf. Later I found out that she looked good, but there were no detailed appearance features at all, and the character creation felt a bit pale. 2. As someone said in the previous comment, it just didn't feel exciting. It was told in a straightforward way and it wasn't a running account, but it just didn't feel refreshing (not as refreshing as a refreshing novel, but the climax that a normal novel should have). Just a discussion, I hope everyone won't criticize 🤤

The true face of God

After surviving, he became Aiden's exclusive bodyguard

Aiden before he died (original owner)

Is it normal for me to wonder about this book? There are all the fun bits that should be expected, as well as the unique settings of this book. It feels like a Japanese novel. Why is the comment area so chaotic? Is the average number of users per capita primary school student really the starting point?

I switched from comics and suddenly found that comics seem more interesting.