Invading the Mortal World

I've finished reading it, it's well written If there were only the sun and the stars, then it can only be said to be a second-rate story. Only the monitor, a third party, joins in and realizes that what she wants is the sun and the stars as a whole, and despicably possesses the sun while leaving the stars. This book can be considered complete This is a comment I saw: Only in this way can this book fully exert its charm.

Currently, I'm watching the showdown between the male protagonist and Lin Xingjie. I really have a lot of feelings about it, and I want to share my thoughts with you book friends. Let me talk about it in general. The setting of this book is relatively new to me. Especially the very gloomy description of Jie Bao at the beginning of the book. I have only had a slight exposure to the concept of Cthulhu in the book Lord of Mysteries. The two parts that impressed me most about the Lord of Mysteries are the one where Adam drank the golden potion and was promoted in the torrent of time. Also, I found out that the Sequence 0 of the demonic enemy surrounding the continent was called "Mother", which really gave me an inexplicable feeling of shock. The author's beginning is really attractive, and the delicate writing style and wonderful characters made me couldn't help but keep reading. Although this feeling of restraint faded in the later stages, I will never forget that part at the beginning. I accidentally digressed, now let's get back to the topic. The part before the subscription chapter of this book describes the emotional drama between the male protagonist and the female protagonist very well. It made me wonder how this book was written with two female protagonists and how the author allowed a third party to intervene in this relationship. In fact, when the role of monitor first came out, I was very resistant and didn't want to accept it. But because I liked the beginning of the book so much, I continued reading it, and I was lucky enough to continue reading it. It's really an honor for me to read such an excellent work. The author's setting and foreshadowing of the squad leader is really completely different from what I imagined. My original idea was that the squad leader should be a girl who prefers justice, and she should be both an enemy and a friend of the male protagonist. This was really my first impression when I saw the monitor appear on the stage. I never expected that it could be written like this, and that a "bad woman" could be written so charmingly. Especially her ability to control others through threads and her character reminded me of the comic image of the dominating demon Makima. The author's writing skills are really excellent and he designs every plot very carefully. In order not to spoil anything, I will only describe my subjective thoughts. As the chapters changed, my psychology towards the image of the squad leader gradually changed from resistance to acceptance, and then to love. I really felt sorry for and liked such a girl. The author made the two heroines really charming. Of course, the reason why I really wrote this long review is the plot of the male protagonist Jiebao's showdown. From the lines, you can see how carefully the author did not make the characters OOC, took actions that were most consistent with their settings and the most reasonable, and successfully transitioned this stomach-ache plot. It's hard for me to describe my feelings now. It's a feeling I haven't felt after reading a book for a long time. The author didn't regard the Bai Xue scene as a joke, but really carefully constructed the world in the book. I don't want to talk about it anymore. If the book readers like this book like harems, they won't be very resistant, but those who like a single heroine can also stay and accept this dual heroine format. This book is really well written. Next, let's talk about the male protagonist. The setting of the male protagonist is more in line with the normal psychology of a high school boy. When watching it, I often think about what I would think if I entered this kind of character. He is a very delicate boy rarely seen in online novels in this era. He has the courage of a boy, the self-confidence of a boy and the inferiority complex of a boy. He is a very three-dimensional and likeable character. Although I really wanted to kill this "scumbag" when I saw the knife, but I have to say that what he did in this scene was really right and appropriate, and it was really hard to dislike him. I'm also glad that this male protagonist is not the conventional light novel classic male protagonist. Such a male protagonist role is a very good thing for the two heroines. I am a reader who has a wide range of interests. In the field of online novels, I like to read single-female protagonists, such as My Wife Please Peace Out, Tribulation at Dawn, Daily Life, Desperate Deskmates, Falling in Love with Qingmei, and a series of excellent single-female protagonist works. But I also read harem novels, but the harem novels I read are at least the type of harem novels that are based on the theory that three wives and four concubines are reasonable in ancient times or in different spaces. The only ones that I have a deep memory of now are The Inheritance of the Shrine in Kanagawa and the two books about the world of mortals. On this basis, there are some that are more delicate, and there are also those that just look at the pictures and they are mindless. There is only one type, that is, those who force a harem in the city. It may be a kind of mental mysophobia. I think that is an insult to my IQ, so I won't go into details here. I personally don't think this book can be classified as a harem work, but if you want to say it has a single female protagonist, it definitely doesn't belong. But at least what I read in this book is reasonable. It's not a plot where the male protagonist cheers up, says there's some crisis event, and then hello everyone, hello, me, hello, this kind of plot is barely reasonable but uncomfortable to watch. The author describes how the male protagonist maintains the relationship between the three people from the most difficult angle, and the writing is really good. I think this is a rare thing and something to be proud of. In short, having said so much, I hope that book friends who have reached the conclusion to read such a long paragraph of my text can see: This is a very excellent work that can be read by readers no matter what kind of female protagonist you are. I like that you can also find the emotion I felt when reading.

Thoughts after long reading (1) Overall feeling and structure Overall, this is a book worth my time and fully ordered. I will describe my feelings in the following pages. Note, it is just my feelings. Therefore, I write a book review not to recommend or not recommend this book. Whether this novel is suitable for you can only be determined by reading dozens of chapters. Likewise, it's not about teaching authors to write books - like an ordinary netizen, I like to point fingers at everything, but it was only after I conceived and wrote my work that I realized that if you want the author to follow your ideas, you'd better know how to write a book, or at least how to write an essay. In the remaining time, vote with your feet. Speaking of which, the first time I learned about this novel was on the NGA, which is known as the shit porn forum. After winning World of Warcraft A, I lurked in the Big Times stock section to watch the old buddies talk nonsense. Each of the old buddies spoke very nicely and had unique skills. They could do anything but make money (of course there were exceptions. I witnessed Brother Long reaching 2E and making a few hot pot bucks with me). By chance, I clicked on Uzumaki Academy and found out that it was a subreddit discussing online novels. I visited Longkong a long time ago. Later, the forum exploded several times, and the atmosphere became increasingly unsuitable for me, so I stopped logging in. Reading online novels relies solely on recommendations related to the works you are currently reading. Whirlpool Academy is also known as the Love Locking Academy. Old friends always miss the Love Locking Spell. As for the reviews of this book, at first they were "feelings of youth", "Iruma", and "I want to be Miss Qingyue's dog" that hit the screen, but later they were the same as "it's okay in the first and middle stages, but it collapses later on". I found this book because of the former reason and do not agree with the latter view. Before talking about my feelings, let me first clarify my evaluation criteria for excellent online novels. First, the work must be complete, and second, the most important elements of the novel, the background, characters, and plot must be outstanding. Note, this is just my standard, neither a standard recognized by the public nor a standard recognized by academics. As for the first point, I think this completeness does not mean that all the pitfalls have been filled in, nor does it mean that all characters have a clear ending that meets the readers' wishes. The integrity of the work should lie in the integrity of the structure and the integrity of its succession and transition. That is, for what reason, what the character did, what result he got, and what kind of experience he felt in his heart. From this point of view, this book may not be excellent, but it will not "collapse in the later period". I forgot whether the author said in the announcement or in the group that this book has multiple female protagonists, and the college chapter will continue to unfold. But at present (the first volume is over, and the author claims that there will be a second volume similar to what will be discussed later), it is obvious that the original plan has become a waste of paper, and further development is impossible. I guess that this huge change seriously affected the outline, and perhaps also gave many people a feeling of chaos in the middle and later stages. Having said this, I have to emphasize once again that I have no direct communication with the author, and there are very few chapters. The views I expound have nothing to do with the author. They are just my own guesses, which may be very different from the author's ideas. As for the QQ group, there are no people in the group discussing the plot or pictures. The reader group exploded a few times and I didn't bother to join. You may think, how can such a hasty ending be called complete? I think the look and feel is acceptable, and it's a good way to handle it. Xing and Yue's pasts were revealed in detail, and with their own efforts and mutual help, they reconciled with the factors that hurt them one by one, and overcame their fears and inferiority complex. Looking back at the beginning, why am I attracted to such a work? I just like the subtle interactions between young people, their awkward conflicts, their first rebellion against parents and authority, their childishness and innocence in expressing their feelings to each other, and looking forward to the unknown future. Maybe silly, but extremely pure. What are my memories of youth? Fireworks take off in the summer night, autumn leaves fall on the campus paths, and winter snowflakes fall on her hair. No, this is not my memory, it is just my fictional imagination after reading many works. The memories of my youth are very simple. They are a mountain of books and a sea of ​​topics, and they are reviewed day after day. Winter is long and there is no spring. Go to school under the street lights, go home under the street lights. I admit, I have benefited a lot now. However, I was a serious person at that time, but therefore I was also a pitiful person. I only had exams and better grades in my sights. I didn't make friends sincerely and respond to good intentions in a timely manner. So now, I am more interested in the people who were hidden in the wind in those years, leaving only their backs. I am interested in their stories, their past, and what they are thinking in their hearts. This story begins with two children having an quarrel and ends in the millennium. Without the other people in the promise, there would be no more grand and shocking development. But their past responded to my expectations and curiosity; their future left a wonderful imagination. The logic of the story is basically self-consistent and the structure is basically complete. This ending wraps up most of the clues and has a beginning and an end, which I think is acceptable. This reminds me of another online novel "Chen Yuan". If you ask me what the best novel in the world is, I will hesitate between a series of novels such as "The Hunchback of Notre Dame" and "Don Quixote"; but if you ask me about the best online novel, I think it is "Chen Yuan" by Yanyu Jiangnan. There are readers who like "Chen Yuan" and some who don't. In fact, there are indeed a few big holes left unfilled at the end, which is very consistent with the characteristics of the smoker. But the real core content, "fate", has been fully reflected. The grievances and grievances of various characters have returned to dust, and dust has returned to dust, so it can be called complete.

After reading Chapter 162, I feel that this old gentleman was probably in charge of socializing for older unmarried young workers in a dating agency or in a state-owned enterprise trade union. The arrangement of the haunted house is very considerate. First let young men and women who are suitable for each other live in a small single room, and then create some small conflicts to create a sweet atmosphere and deepen mutual understanding; when the two people have an initial tacit understanding and their relationship begins to heat up, the haunted house is very considerate and upgrades the room for the two of them to a deluxe double room. Maybe in the near future, the haunted house will also launch value-added services such as warm honeymoon suites and holiday parent-child suites, so stay tuned.

I have read a few. To be honest, my senses have gone from being very comfortable and unable to put it down to now being a bit bored. I also read other people's comments. Whether it's the emotional line as the main focus, the weirdness as a supplement, or the protagonist's character, I don't think these are actually the key crux. It is very obvious to focus on the emotional line, supplemented by the weird line, but everyone's judgment standards are different, and their senses are also different. If the character is not broken and the style is obviously stable, it will have its audience. Even some illogical pornographic novels have a large audience, so this is not a problem The same is true for the latter. Although by my standards, the protagonist of this book is not very likable, he is not annoying either. There must be people who like the protagonist's character and people who hate the protagonist's character. This is inevitable. The only difference is which side has more people and which author has created a more likable character. Having said so much, I actually want to highlight the core issue - the strength of the protagonist. When I saw it at the beginning, I didn't feel much about it. Maybe the protagonist's ability only becomes stronger later on? But I have read more than 100 chapters so far. The two heroines are both powerful spiritual coals, and although the protagonist is a bit special, he is very weak in comparison. Although the article mentions several times that the protagonist can independently solve some weird things, there is no corresponding performance. It seems that the performance is not worthy of the setting. It feels weak no matter how you look at it. In fact, no matter which line is the main line, as a male video, the strength of the protagonist is very necessary. It is very affecting people's senses. I don't know whether the author is a boy or girl (personally, I feel that Xue Feng is more delicate, like a girl). But based on this alone, I can tell that the author has definitely not written a few books on male channels. Of course, it is also possible that the protagonist's strength has grown explosively in parts that I haven't seen yet. However, I think that even though I personally prefer this writing style, it still made me feel uncomfortable. This will obviously drive away a large number of readers, so if there is any explanation on this aspect, it is better for the author to explain it in the comment area first

It is no exaggeration to say that this book is the best book I have ever read in my life. I have always been pursuing Riqingli's profound description of the twisted and youthful, sour and sweet love between boys and girls. Watching the three people grow up, I really felt a huge impact. Different from those cliché articles about rebirth and time travel and coming back to fry fish, this is a real teenager, with two female protagonists. I I like Xingyue very much. They are the most three-dimensional and vivid heroines I have ever seen in my life. (This is supposed to be a parallel sentence to praise the author, but the level is not good enough and it feels awkward after reprinting it several times.) But what impressed me the most is Xiangyang. This is a real boy, this is real bravery. I really don't understand how those people who say Xiangyang is a scumbag read the book? If he is a scumbag, he should choose to enjoy the current life and hurt the two girls, but he didn't. The period when he confessed in the rain was the most real and mature thought I have ever seen in my life. From that period, I really realized the greatness of this boy. I never imagined that the best Riqing I have ever seen was found in a domestic online novel. I am a person with a very low defense, but this work did not make me feel the slightest discomfort. I can only say that the author is really into the details. Almost no sentence is redundant, no one is redundant, and everyone's appearance has its own belonging and meaning. I'm sorry, my words are very messy, and I have tears in my eyes at this time. After writing this inexplicable text, I still have a lot to say, but I don't even know what to say. I only know that my life will definitely change because of this book. This is the best work I have ever read in my life, and I also firmly believe that it is impossible for me to see a better work than this. Thank you very much, author, and I hope the boy you write will always be that boy. "The full moon surrounds the stars, and everyone looks toward the sun." Thank you, author, you are my Xu Xiangyang. I firmly believe that my life will be changed because of you and your works.

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words The foundation for such a delicate and exquisite story is a solid triangle relationship. First, Xiangyang is close to Xingjie and Qingyue. They both provide a shining point of human brilliance at a certain moment. After that, they are regarded as the first sunshine of salvation in the dark world, and then enter the youthful desire to possess beautiful things. Qingyue felt sympathy for Xingjie, who was also a monster. But what about Xingjie versus Qingyue? I don't seem to see what unique part of Xingjie's desire for Qingyue? I think part of the reason why some readers are disgusted with Qingyue's insertion into Xiangyang and Xingjie is because Xingjie doesn't have a good enough reason to need Qingyue. I think the best and most exquisite scene here is Xiang Yang's hesitation before entering the haunted house, and the few days before he decided to confess to Xingjie. Readers from God's perspective know the unwillingness in Qingyue's heart. No matter how clever and perfect the cover-up is, it can't cover up the jealousy in her heart. And Xiangyang saw here that he didn't have a perspective like ours, maybe because of Qingyue's hidden records in the past, maybe because of Qingyue's increasingly weird behavior, everything was like the sincere cry of the cat girl under the perfect porcelain doll appearance. So Xiangyang gave up on making a decision right away. We can say he is a scumbag, we can say he is carefree, and we can say he is hesitant. From my point of view, he chose not to hurt either of the two. Even though we know that this kind of delay only makes the result worse, this kind of delay is indeed the only way for an older boy who is still a little childish to wait for a miracle. Actually, I have been thinking about another story while reading. If it was Qingyue who met Qingyue first and then saved Xingjie, would Xingjie do something similar because she did not want to leave the relationship between the three of them? Maybe not, it will develop according to the answer given by Qingyue, so I probably have no choice but to wrong Qingyue. "To be honest, even if you really choose me, I am happy, but I am afraid I will still do it according to my own ideas. It will only make it more difficult for you, right? After all, I don't have a bottom line like Xingjie. , She would not be crazy enough to force her boyfriend to like another girl, and Xingjie might have been heartbroken at that time, and the situation would definitely be a hundred times worse than it is now." Several details of the dialogue between the characters in the play: "You are afraid of us now. The environment we live in has changed because not every superpower can keep his peace, right? ""... At least I can't. I am different from Xiangyang and you. In the past, I would become a bad girl in the eyes of others. In the end, it was my own choice." "-This may be because I was born with it. He is this kind of person." Xingjie, who has a low self-esteem, reveals her inner feelings to Qingyue. This type of description of close friendship is actually great, but these relationships have deteriorated because of Xiangyang. There are almost no such descriptions in the future. It is a pity to think about this, but maybe without Xiangyang, the two people would never have known and recognized each other. The classroom seemed to be shaken like an earthquake. The windows in the corridor were shattered, and a sparkling waterfall ran across the sky; all the desks and chairs were knocked away, and stationery and books were scattered everywhere. Bathed in the moonlight, the long-haired girl smiled and stretched out her hand to the two people hiding in the corner. And when she saw with her own eyes Xiang Yang rushed up and knocked down the possessed person who was about to attack her... This was the moment when Qing Yue was deeply impressed by Xiang Yang and Xingjie. What is written here is very clear. Only the two of them left indelible memories in Qing Yue's heart. But she didn't. I think this is missing, especially for Xingjie. For Xingjie, the status of Xiangyang and Qingyue are not equal, which resulted in this entanglement never placing them on an equal footing. Xingjie always seemed to be on a high ground, looking down on Qingyue. "That's why I'm deceiving myself." "I'm not being left behind, but I haven't been able to stand on the same starting line as you from the beginning." "If you answer 'yes', I will help you untie the thread. I will never do such a thing in the future. If there are other... Shortcomings that make you unbearable, I will work hard to correct them. I I will listen to you carefully. So..." "——Xiangyang, after you leave this house, don't confess to Xingjie, okay?" "——I don't want to." This is Qingyue confessing in front of Xiangyang in the haunted house that she cannot accept it, that she is jealous, that she is deceiving herself, and that she has not been on the same starting line with the two of them from the beginning. On the surface, this agreement seems to lay a solid foundation between the three of them. Qingyue is willing to compromise and change, but this actually puts Qingyue's status at the bottom. She is born to cooperate with everything that follows in order to achieve the ultimate goal. What about Xingjie? Is this a small gang of two people looking for a way to lure Xingjie into the sea? So it's actually unfair to Xingjie, and it's also unfair to Qingyue who is willing to fulfill her promise. I think Xiangyang's refusal in this paragraph is really the best way to describe the concept of reciprocity. "Because he felt that he was not as good as the two of us in terms of ability, he had the idea of inferiority and took the initiative to do a very dangerous thing: invading the minds of evil spirits through channeling..." "Have you... Ever had this thought?" "When I accompanied you to school today, I happened to bump into your classmate apologizing to you. I was thinking that sometimes I would really feel lucky, if Qingyue Miss, you are a girl who has been popular since childhood, so I may not have a chance to be friends with you." "... And the same goes for you, Xingjie." If this girl didn't have a pitiful background and was pushed to the edge of the cliff by her family, with her appearance and personality, she would be surrounded by people like the monitor, and it wouldn't be my turn to protect her, right? "To be honest, I feel quite happy about other people's eyes and the feeling of being jealous." "... I can understand Xiangyang's thoughts." "The three of us were not equal from the beginning." There was a slight tremor in her voice. For an adolescent girl with strong self-esteem and sensitive mind, it is not easy to admit this difference. "Even in the past, when we didn't know each other and had no friends, you were able to walk on the right path, and I... Still rely on you to this day." The whispers in the box, how to say this, let Xingjie also know what they did in the haunted house, and Xiang Yang inside I can strongly feel Xingjie's gratitude to Xiangyang, but if it is the same reason for Qingyue, it seems too weak. And it is indeed the same later. Both people in the threesome fell in love with the same person, and that person accepted one of them. What should I do with the remaining one? "You, what are you talking about... Why should I leave..." "Why do you want me to move to Qingyue... Xiangyang, you, do you want to drive me away?" Lin Xingjie stretched out her little hand and pulled his sleeve, with a strong look of sadness in her pupils. "You don't want me to stay at home anymore?" Xiangyang suggested that Xingjie go live with Qingyue's house. To be honest, it was a reasonable choice, but it was too late. On the eve of the confession, how could you drive away someone you were used to. At this time, it was too late to bring the starting point back to the same point, and it was too late for Qingyue and Xingjie to establish a sufficient bond. She knew that Xu Xiangyang had rejected Zhu Qingyue's confession, and it was the other side that kept insisting on her. It was really expected that things would end up like this. This is because she believes that no boy can refuse Qingyue's approach, and she also feels that Xiangyang cannot leave her alone all the time. Therefore, from the most reasonable perspective, what she should do is to cut off this connection as soon as possible... But she couldn't do it. She resisted this choice from the bottom of her heart. The result is that they hide their ears and steal their bells, clinging on to their current life. Xingjie actually understands the distortion of this relationship, but in this distorted part, all she can think about is the sunny part, and there is no part that is particularly related to Qingyue. I think it is just such a violation, one line of one side of the triangle is not as solid as the other two lines. As a lover, Lin Xingjie's inner sorrow is far more than that. Except for the part that can be expressed in a joking way that is not actually angry, most of the remaining sadness can only be buried deep in her heart. "If you think about it in this direction, it seems that I already knew that she would come back. Even if the relationship breaks down and we break up, Xingjie will still not choose to leave me. We will continue to live under the same roof and always have a closer relationship than others... So it will gradually I gradually felt that it didn't matter, I could betray her without restraint and consume her trust in me endlessly. "However, the solution we saw in the end was the same. I think this is the most regrettable part of the whole movie. It is precisely because Xingjie lacks a relationship that is bound to Qingyue, so her acceptance is less logical. After all, if the breakup hadn't happened, the two of them would probably still have maintained their past status as good friends who were harmonious on the surface and as close as sisters to outsiders. It's unclear how long this friendship, which is extremely fragile and unstable in nature, will last. When Xu Xiangyang is not present, and one of the parties (Lin Xingjie) decides to act recklessly, the unspoken rules will fall apart in the blink of an eye. They are no longer friends, no longer partners. Zhu Qingyue discovered this terrifying scene, and her pupils suddenly shrank. The girl untied the silk thread from her body without hesitation, and then her whole body fell from the night sky. Both sides exerted force almost at the same moment: the person landed on the dark clouds; at the same time, an invisible force pulled her directly to move more than ten meters, and came to the top of Lin Xingjie... But when Lin Xingjie put her hand on the other person's shoulder, her fingertips suddenly felt a slight tremor. That was Zhu Qingyue's body trembling. In her impression, this person was always fearless, calm, and calm to the point that she found it a bit annoying. What was she afraid of now? Qingyue used her desperate actions to gain some intimacy from Xingjie, only to realize that they had never been so close before. In fact, this kind of reconciliation was quite good, but it always felt that it was not long enough, not deep enough, and did not develop the key plot. "I don't know whether I should call it stupid or brave to let myself fall down to save the person who jumped from the building." "It was an action that happened in a split second. I believe you didn't have the time to worry about anything else." "——That's because my desire to please you has been deeply rooted in my bones." "Even if you are a psychopath, you are still a psychopath who has me at heart. At least you don't care about some of your words. Just talking... I came here to prove this, and it seems to be enough now." "I don't know what will happen in the future, but the time I spent with you was not wasted, and I am still very happy after knowing this. So -" "I am the one who should say thank you." Lin Xingjie affirmed the emotion in her heart, which was very important to Zhu Qingyue, because it was also her affirmation of herself. "Yes. After all, isn't it just because of your persistence that Xiang Yang came up with the idea of "stepping on two boats"? If it weren't for you being there to nudge him, pestering him and the two of us and refusing to let go... Even if he would inevitably have thoughts about you, he would just pretend he didn't notice it, let alone say it out loud. . I believe that he will abide by the standards of a qualified boyfriend and only get along with you as a friend. Without you, he will never go beyond the boundaries of his life. ""So, both me and Xu Xiangyang are actually "accompanying you". This has always been the case since the three of us met." "Think about it carefully, sometimes I will go crazy with you. , Maybe it feels good to do ridiculous things together... I think I won't go out of my way to resist this kind of happiness." "But please don't get me wrong, Zhu Qingyue. I'm not used to anything that makes me uncomfortable. I won't agree with your weird thinking, and I'm not interested in your ridiculous suggestions. I don't intend to compromise with anyone, even if it's someone I like. People, or my best friends." The competition between Xingjie and Qingyue is clearly analyzed. There is indeed no bond between her and Qingyue that must be Qingyue. However, I want to say that the dialogue in the later period is becoming more and more obscure. Maybe the author has matured and hopes to express it more obscurely, but it feels a bit too literary. For me personally, in addition to the exquisite and delicate interaction that makes people happy, the sticky part is particularly poorly written for me. I am not sure that the sticky part is a great plot for the people involved, so for me Looking at it from a third party, it seems particularly boring. The inner guilt caused by having to worry about the third person makes Xiang Yang look dirty. It's the kind of thing that you obviously should do, but you choose to do nothing. The other thing is that Xingjie here is like a machine for serving sticky people, or a template for showing off her temper, which makes me very sad. Another point that is inconsistent with their delicate relationship is the mismatch of the main plot. It can be a background that makes people breathless and unable to remember the pressure of their twisted relationship, but in the end what comes out is more like a side plot exposition like a family wine. I think part of it is that Meng Zheng, as the villain, is too riddle-like and uncharacteristic. One person creates all of Xingjie's tragedy, and part of it is that the two heroines are too powerful, making people think that as long as they are calmed down, the world will be saved. The last pity is the story behind Qinglian and Xiangyang. I really didn't understand it clearly here. Qinglian was mourning Xiangyang's parents. She felt guilty and felt that she had harmed them, but in fact it had nothing to do with her? Finally, when Qinglian Xiangyang solved the mystery, Qinglian felt that it was she who opened the door that caused the strangeness. The unexpected feeling was said but not said. Xiangyang's parents really had nothing worth reconciling. This is probably why Xiangyang showed that the depth of the plot was not enough to compare with the other two heroines. Li Qinglian, except for wearing a police uniform at work, usually only wears formal attire even on her days off. As a young woman, she has almost no decorations on her body, except for occasionally wearing a white tie or floral ornaments. It was as if what she was wearing was not an ordinary suit, but more like... Mourning clothes for a funeral. To summarize, this is a two-heroine novel with a delicate relationship and interaction. The first 30% of the ambiguous interaction is exquisite to me. The entanglement and bitterness in the middle period are actually not bad, but it is not as good as the beginning. The last part, the background and the main plot can only be said to be a pity. There are problems that the story is not fully developed, the rhythm is messy, and the main plot is weak. The only redeeming thing is that at least the three of them have said goodbye to the past, and they all still have a good future.

Before Chapter 305, the focus was on emotions and daily life, with very few fighting scenes. The writing was really great and deserves praise. However, after Chapter 305, there were long fights and memories mixed with a few bits of dog food. It was very disappointing to watch - it was like the author was rushing to the end. It took 7 or 80 chapters to solve the problem of Xingjie here, and then there was another problem with Qingyue over there, and it took another 4 to 50 chapters to solve the problem. Then, at a glance, it was only 6 chapters away from the end😓. What should I say? There is also a side story, which seems to have a lot of words, but it doesn't feel like there is much content when reading it. What I prefer is to watch warm daily life, such as traveling, or three people dating.

Thoughts after reading a long novel (2) Elements As I mentioned before, the works that I recognize must be complete first, and secondly, the novel elements must be outstanding. Speaking of which, there are too many things worth mentioning about the background and characters. The story took place in the 1990s in mainland China. To be honest, I have not experienced it completely, but I have no romantic imagination. At least I feel that even though there are many bad things now, it is much better than then. Generally speaking, when an era passes, we romanticize that era. I think what I miss about the background of the novel lies in its hazy beautification, just like the lost youth. I do not agree with anthropomorphizing any group, but if I am just using an analogy, for the society I am living in now, that era (the 1990s to the 2000s) can be called adolescence. Conservative, radical, advanced, and backward appear at the same time and are intertwined, just like the chaotic emotions of young people, unpredictable and full of passion. In front of such a stage, the protagonists appear. Which one, characters or plot, should be the core of the novel? Judging from the results, this question does not matter, because good novels are good at both. But when it comes to structuring my own work, it's really hard for me. For the sake of the characters, you have to sacrifice the rationality of the plot to highlight its unique charm; for the sake of the plot, you have to obscure the image of the characters. It is difficult to create a unique and charming character. I don't think you need me to elaborate on the author's ability to create characters. The wonderful thing is that not only the characters are created in line with the readers' expectations (I like cool and gentle girls, but also bad and fragile girls), on the other hand, the details filled in, even a description of the stars and moon's gaze, make the created image accessible, as if it is right next to you and me. This novel reminded me of many past experiences, things deep in my memory that I thought I would never look up. That was a girl I met in middle school. She and I were both transfer students. For the high school entrance examination and college entrance examination, I returned to the small county town of my hometown from the big city. What about her? Why? I don't know. She arrived half a month earlier than me. Like a gloomy small town, she has short straight hair and wears old-fashioned square-rimmed glasses. When I first entered the classroom and introduced myself, I noticed her. Unlike other classmates, she looked at her new classmates with curiosity and scrutiny. Instead, he glanced at me and looked out the window boredly. It was a look I had never seen before, with a look of indifference or something. She held her chin, and her beautiful oval face was slightly pointed. There were no birds flying outside the window, only gloomy clouds and the sky divided by the security windows. I also glanced at the sky and introduced myself with anticipation. Unsurprisingly, I failed to fit into any cliques in the first month. She and I sat at opposite ends of the last row in the classroom, without deskmates (opposites of the opposite sex were not allowed to sit together). I had the habit of reading online novels when I was in elementary school. Maybe it was because the first online novel I read was "Bad Guy" and I thought it was cool to have an expressionless face, so I became bored and expressionless. When I was studying in a big city, there were more than 30 people in a class, but here, there are nearly 60 people in a class. I sat in the back, and the cramped seats made me feel like I was entering a kayak every time I entered, so crowded that I felt like vomiting. Also, for the first time here I saw a teacher punishing students corporally and hitting them with a ruler; for doing meaningless copying homework, the Chinese teacher punished us to copy textbooks just because the class was noisy. In this way, every day life is like a swill bucket in the cafeteria. It's disgusting and you can't kick or hit it. Her hair slowly grew longer. According to school regulations, girls can only wear a single ponytail, wear a black headband, and cannot wear any headdress. She did it obediently, but her eyes were still the same, with a look of indifference that I couldn't understand. When I looked at her, she seemed to be dragging her chin with her wrist and looking somewhere unknown. We didn't sit close to each other at that time, and we only exchanged a few words occasionally. It was like people who couldn't make friends were exchanging experiences. As one of the few good children sitting in the back row who knows how to do homework, my homework will be passed on to her. I would go to Internet cafes on weekends. There are advantages to small places, it only costs 2 yuan an hour, and it only costs 1 yuan when you encounter a newly opened one. In the Internet cafe, most people are playing CF, DNF, and Meng San (a game very similar to Dota1), and shouting with their friends. I played the pirated version of StarCraft 2 by myself - my old computer could only carry StarCraft 1, so I had to endure the smell of cigarette smoke and go to the Internet cafe to play. I still clearly remember that Hearthstone was a qualification test at the beginning. The understanding of the version at that time was that the priest was the strongest hero, and 2-cost milk 2 could snowball, which was too hot. The Internet cafe is underground and the air conditioning is not turned on enough, making it really stuffy and uncomfortable. One weekend, I walked to the door of the Internet cafe. I wasn't as coy as I was when I first went to an Internet cafe, and I walked in leisurely with my pockets in my pocket. Suddenly, someone slapped me from behind. I have never seen her like this. In the early autumn season, she wore a white shirt and a loose red plaid jacket. Her hair style was still a ponytail, but she changed it to a red hair rope with a small bell. Looking further down, I'm not sure if she's wearing black high-D stockings or pantyhose. She stood in front of me with a smile, no longer the same as before, and asked me: "What are you going to do?" I pointed with my index finger at the stairs to the basement Internet cafe. She was obviously surprised, but immediately said with a smile: "Good students also go to the Internet cafe. Okay, I will go today too!" She pulled me with her hand, and we turned to the stairs and walked down step by step. At that time, in Internet cafes, you first chose where to sit, then went to the front desk to pay, and no ID was required. I said: "C34, two hours." She also repeated happily: "D34, two hours!" I hesitated for a moment, usually I never drink in Internet cafes because it is much more expensive than outside, but I still asked her: " Do you want something to drink?" She still smiled and asked me: "What do you want to drink? You invite me to go online, and I will treat you to something to drink." I nodded and asked for a bottle of water, and she took a can of Coke. In the following time, I played the campaign and practiced playing against the computer (at that time, I could push the highest difficulty computer 1v1 through operation); as for her, she clicked on some mini-game on QQ Pets and played for a while, and then clicked on games like Moore's Manor or Obi Island to play for a while. Finally, I clicked on the video website and watched TV series and movies. I wonder if she was curious about what I was playing. We didn't have any communication and time passed like this. There are still 15 minutes left to get off the plane, and the computer prompts. I quit the game and spent the last bit of time reading the guide. She might want to leave directly, but seeing that I didn't make any move, she stared at the computer screen in silence. We were walking on the road, waiting for the traffic light, and I asked her: "Is it your first time to go online? How does it feel?" "It's okay, but the smell of cigarette smoke is too strong and it's too stuffy." She smelled her coat and frowned cutely. I nodded, convinced, but I didn't know how to continue the conversation. Now I can chat with the financial and human resource sisters in the functional department for a whole day, but that was how I behaved at that time. After thinking for a long time, I squeezed out a sentence. "Your home is in this direction, right? Are you going home?" She didn't answer me. Because of the sunset, her face was red, and her slightly squinted eyes seemed to be slightly drunk. She returned to the familiar her again, looking into the distance with nothing in sight. I was a little embarrassed and a little embarrassed, so I asked: "Why are you here today? Are you going shopping?" This street is full of Internet cafes and small restaurants, and there is no place to go shopping in a small county town. She still didn't reply to me, and nodded along with the question. The light soon turned green. She turned her head and smiled at me, waved her hands in her sleeves to me, said goodbye, and walked forward. The figure seems to be submerged in the warm sunset and the sound of car horns. Just like Remedios riding the wind in "One Hundred Years of Solitude". Novel needs causes and consequences, life only has consequences. Later, in the mid-term exam, I got second place in my grade, sat in the front, and made new friends - I was tall, not ugly, and had good grades. Friends are always easy to find. I have no contact with her anymore, just a nod of acquaintance. Later, when I went to college, I returned to the big city that I had always wanted to work in. But today I am still thinking, even if I chat with her a few more words, will it be completely different later? This short story is also my feeling and evaluation of the characters and plot of this book. If you don't have my experience, you will only feel bored when reading this little story I wrote; but the author's writing power is enough to make everyone read and feel the things and emotions that he has not experienced himself. This is what I think is the best thing about this book.

I have read the latest chapter and I like the plot very much. It is a very sweet plot. I wonder if there is a knife in the back. This book belongs to the kind of slow-burning plot novels with relatively delicate character descriptions and a very successful portrayal of the heroine. But I still feel that there are areas that can be improved. For example, the seventy chapters can be written at the beginning, and the superpower response department and the protagonist and his group can start a two-line plot. This rhythm may be better, and readers can understand it more clearly, so as not to be dismissed prematurely. After all, the starting point is still based on refreshing writing. It can be seen that the author probably doesn't want to write a cool article, so the protagonist has no aura, is not even as powerful as the heroine, is not as cool, or does not see growth, which may also affect the performance. But growth is not necessarily in terms of strength, it can also be psychological, or achieving a certain achievement, etc. Another point is that the character of the protagonist is actually a bit vague. He looks more mature and a good person with no flaws. Although this is a common problem in the industry now, I still hope that the author can keep improving. Actually, this novel is very consistent with the style of light novels. It is written in a very youthful way, but it feels a bit out of place with the light novels from Qidian. Maybe it would be better to read it elsewhere. I almost missed it when I first read the introduction. Finally, I hope there will be more updates. The author will take care of his health and not rush into the streets.

I found a real resonance for the first time after accidentally reading this novel. I have been reading novels for more than ten years. The emotional descriptions of novels with no heroine, single heroine, or conventional harem novels have made it impossible for me to have deep emotions. Symbolization of characters is a routine operation, which makes it awkward to read. Due to professional issues, I also had the opportunity to create a suspenseful horror comic about a triangle relationship, but it died halfway because it was too bloody. So I gave up on this dream. I didn't expect to see such a novel that directly hit my heart a few years later. I felt an indescribable touch. This may not be understood by others, but this kind of delicate emotional description, as the same creator, seems to bring me into the author's inner world, the kind of idea that really wants to create living male and female protagonists, their emotional entanglements, and a living world I sighed to myself throughout the whole process. In short, this is a novel with a lot of emotions. After reading this, I feel as if I am young again. Maybe if I have the opportunity, I will pick up the pen again in my spare time and want to create such a living world Continue to support the author and hope that the author can persevere. After all, he has the ability and willingness to put in effort to create a vivid world, not for purely commercial purposes. It is really... Too rare.

This novel is a world novel, and saving the two heroines means saving the world.

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words Qingyue's story is my favorite. The beautiful and perfect porcelain doll hides a dry and twisted soul, a strong desire to be needed and a self-destructive impulse to be loved. I can't help but feel that it is so familiar. The madness caused by the past misfortunes is like a dark cloud that will never dissipate. No one has ever discovered it, and no one has ever seen through the bitterness under that perfect disguise. I don't care who the unexpected intruder is at this time, I can only cling to him. As for Qingyue's growth, I think the only way to grow up is to abandon the baggage of the past. In essence, she is still the smart and twisted child. The only difference is that her need to be loved is satisfied, and she is willing to make compromises in order to satisfy her needs. Like a readme. What kind of love do you have for the two of them? She has been pretending to be a good girl in front of others for so long that even she almost believes it... Only in the dead of night can she not help but reveal her true colors. The girl in the mirror looks like a doll. Everything is perfect, but not human. It makes me think about why Qingyue likes Xingjie? Is it just the attraction of sharing the same fate? And I do like Qingyue better, her perfect mask hides her twisted heart. "... It's really hopeless." The girl wearing a mask and acting for evaluation: Qingyue acted in anticipation of the possible attention and comments, not because she cared from the bottom of her heart. "I can take the initiative to speak, not because I am brave. I wonder if you have noticed one thing. When Sun Xiaofang said those words, everyone... All looked at me subconsciously." In that case, if I had not spoken, if an accident happened afterwards, everyone would definitely discuss it in private after knowing that I did not take action. Do you believe it? " The girl who tried hard to stop her impulsiveness: "Even if you please me like this, Xiangyang, I still won't change my mind... No, it's precisely because I like you very much, and I like you more today than yesterday, that's why I won't let you go, do you understand?" "No, I'm just not good at it. I just rejected you." "I really worked hard to make the decision to do something that would make you hateful." Xiang Yang unscrupulously took advantage of the privilege of being loved. Even if Xiang Yang thought these two sentences were just Qingyue's joke, I confirmed that Qingyue said these two sentences extremely seriously Sincere blessings and anxiety A complicated girl with worries and jealousies: "My heart is filled with blessings and joy that you two can successfully become lovers. I know this emotion is sincere. Although I had expected it before coming to school, when I really got the confirmation from Xingjie, I was so happy that I wanted to be the first. Hug you two tightly - no one can stop this day from coming, I once said to myself. "But at the same time, my "here" is always filled with anxiety and uneasiness about feeling left behind... And jealousy, a kind of jealousy that is almost driving me crazy..." "I sincerely wish you, At the same time, I am jealous of you from the bottom of my heart. These two emotions sound contradictory, but they actually exist in my mind at the same time. Xiangyang, can you understand me? " The girl who can give countless opportunities because of her humbleness and thoughtfulness: "Okay, okay, don't be miserable. Don't worry, Xu Xiangyang, I said I'll give you three chances, but with my feelings for you and Xingjie, I can't give up and let go so easily." "However, I still hope you understand that every time I ask this question, I am very serious, and I only ask you with hope every time. I don't know. I don't know how long I can maintain this passion, maybe a few years, more than ten years... But in conclusion, I never believe that there is a permanent relationship in this world. ""I am not blaming you. I fell in love with a person who has a partner. From the perspective of others, I am the abnormal person. What I am doing is forcing you and... And I am very clear about the bad things that try to hurt Xingjie. Even when I wake up and look at myself in the mirror every morning, I will sigh, "What a hateful woman she is." So..." "-That's why I like to be so humble." "You... Have you ever considered having sex with her? Xingjie broke up and stayed with me? ""Just hearing you say that makes me happy!" "To be honest, even if you really choose me, I'm happy, but I'm afraid I will still do it according to my own ideas. It will only make it more difficult for you? After all, I am not as confident as Xingjie. Line, she would not be so crazy as to force her boyfriend to like another girl. Plus, Xingjie might have been heartbroken at that time, and the situation would definitely be a hundred times worse than it is now. ""Your willingness to stand by me is the greatest encouragement to me. I don't expect or need anything else... Anyway, thank you. You, Xu Xiangyang, no matter how much you blame yourself, or how others blame you, I will always be your companion." The ecstatic but guilty girl: "Should I tell you clearly, I am an idiot who will run back as soon as you wave. Man, after I realized that the love letter might be written by you, I was so happy that I almost wanted to fly to the sky. I tossed and turned in bed all night last night and couldn't fall asleep. After being rejected by you some time ago, I was completely lost. I tried to stay calm in front of you two and used all my strength not to cry. In fact, I was heartbroken. I went to the point where I wanted to go crazy, I was really hurt by you, it was so miserable, but now, all these emotions have disappeared - if I have to say this, will you be satisfied? Okay, if I do this, no matter how many times I say it, I will listen to you anyway, I like you, I like you, I love you! , Xu Xiangyang, I like you the most in the world! Is that okay? Why are you looking at me like this? I like you... Ah!" "When we kissed just now, I felt like... I saw Xingjie crying..." "Xiangyang, I feel so uncomfortable." Br> "What should I do, Xiangyang." "I found that I still thought wrong. It turns out that Xingjie's status in my mind is like this... When I thought of her crying after knowing our decision, I couldn't concentrate anymore. I just felt that what I did was disgusting, so disgusting that it was disgusting... Because I have been concentrating on how to get you to agree, I ignored this matter... No, I should say that I deliberately ignored this, right? ""Maybe it's strange to say this..." "But this is the first time I shed tears because of doing something bad." There are only a few betrayals that make Qingyue feel guilty. A happy girl who satisfies her need to be loved and sincerely hopes that this moment will last longer: Looking at her boyfriend's back disappearing into the crowd at the water station, Zhu Qingyue's mouth was grinning wider and wider, almost to the point of being unable to close her mouth from ear to ear; and when she realized her gaffe, she was almost drooling. The girl quickly raised her beautiful hand and lightly covered her red lips to prevent others from noticing her silly smile. Although Zhu Qingyue's heart was slightly tightened by guilt, an unparalleled happiness had already completely overwhelmed the girl's brain, leaving her with no time to care. Seeing her lover working so hard for her wholeheartedly, a sweet feeling as thick as syrup surges up from the depths of the girl's heart. This feeling is enough to make people bewildered and confused. "I originally thought that as long as you two wake up, it will be fine. Even if the two magic mediums fight and destroy the surrounding cities, it has nothing to do with us. As long as you take away the people you care about, you can go anywhere, even if you are taken abroad... I even started to imagine that it would be more convenient if you two couldn't wake up. Anyway, There is no point in living anymore. "But what should I do if one of them fails to wake up? What will happen in the future... In the past thirty minutes, I have completely different thoughts every minute and every second. I feel so anxious that I feel like vomiting. I feel that I have never prayed so sincerely in my life, hoping that the gods really exist."

Thoughts after reading a long novel (3) The so-called AИAΓKH (destiny) When we read a novel, what are we reading? In other words, why do we spend time reading novels? For me, through my works, I experience a world of imagery that is independent of real life and achieve solace for the real soul. Let me give you an example. The subtitle AИAΓKH (destiny) comes from "Notre Dame de Paris". This Gothic word is engraved on the church wall. Often, people who live a good life cannot think of their fate. People who have to mention their fate always have a story behind them that their wishes did not come true. ​ Esmeralda is kind, gentle, beautiful, but naive and even a little stupid. Faced with the tragedy she suffered, I undoubtedly have sympathy and resentment. But I cannot in my conscience blame her for the tragedy she caused. I can only say with a complicated mood: "This is AИAΓKH (destiny)." I guess you want to say, where is the password? In this case, how can the novel comfort you? Isn't this more depressing? For me, the answer "fate" is enough. Real life is more complex and consists of countless unsolvable problems. For example, you are not greedy for money, but you will feel desperate when faced with a long hospital bill; you are not keen on privileges, but when faced with a run on resources, you undoubtedly need it urgently. When you are engaged in intrigues and intrigues, people's energy is limited, and they will lose themselves and forget love. Where is the balance point in life? No one knows. Therefore, reading novels and experiencing another life is the answer for you. Even if this answer cannot solve your problem, a powerless answer is still an answer, and the powerless experience is also an experience. A novel can only go so far, but it is enough. Back to this book, the fate of the trio before they intertwined was actually a tragedy. Xingjie, my father was entangled in a distant place due to unfortunate chance or necessity. Facing distant and malicious humans, his power was too small, and he made one wrong step after another. The mother left behind neither understood the truth of the matter nor had the ability to support her child independently. His father was stripped of his memory and forgot his wife and daughter; his mother was tortured and was reduced from a hero to a container; and Qingyue herself was tortured day after day, living with stronger paranoia and self-destruction, facing others with a false face, waiting for her own collapse; But they finally defeated and reconciled, with hard work and mutual help. The reconciliation I mentioned before does not mean forgiveness or forgetting; will Xingjie forgive the man who beat her? I don't think so, even if the man kneels on the ground and apologizes, even if the man becomes a mess of meat. But she will reconcile, and reconciliation means she no longer cares about this matter. She will not be clouded by this, nor will she refuse close contact with her friends. Reconciliation means that she has become a free and strong person again. Please note that what I say below does not mean that I approve of this character's behavior, nor does it mean that I am against readers who despise this character. It only represents my own feelings. In addition to the trio, another character in this book has the keywords "fate" and "tragedy". She didn't write much, but she caused a lot of controversy. As you can guess, I am referring to Lin Xingjie's mother. The reader's first impression of her comes from Xingjie's words. Xingjie's mother has no sense of responsibility, is incompetent, timid, and stupid. She has committed herself to several unreliable boyfriends, which has caused a lot of trouble for Xingjie and herself. The second impression came from the meeting between my sister and Xingjie's mother. Xiang Yang watched from a distance as she was persuaded to send her underage daughter to a neighbor's house. The third impression came from Xingjie's birthday party, where she was scolded by Qingyue Xingjie and left. The fourth impression came from when the stargazing club took action against Xingjie, she took the blame for Xingjie. The last time, from Xingjie's childhood. A workaholic man and an ordinary woman are united through a blind date. At that time, Xingjie's mother was still an ordinary housewife, average cook and a bit lazy. But it's obvious that both Xingjie and Xingjie's father like her and they are enjoying a peaceful life. Then, the peaceful life was torn apart and the world collapsed. I like Xingjie very much. When I know the story behind it, I can't forgive her mother's irresponsible behavior. But then, if you ask me to despise and attack this mother, I can't do it. She's not evil, just incompetent. I don't want to judge her morally. I can only sigh and say: "AИAΓKH (Fate)" In other words, moral judgments are often powerless and meaningless. Let's make up a plot: a farmer loses his source of livelihood because the developer does not conduct soft demolition and illegal organizations intercept most of the demolition money. His report failed, so he had to go to the city to work, and was discriminated against because of his identity. One day, he used a hammer to kill the foreman who was in arrears with wages, killed people who looked down on him on a daily basis, and killed passers-by who looked at him too much while eating. Should you judge him morally? Do you think he has low morals? I can't. I will not admire his desperate revenge, nor criticize his actions. I will only condemn the injustice he suffered. But if you want to condemn him or agree with him, I won't object, as long as you don't press my head and do the same as you. The wonderful thing about this book is that it not only retains the beautiful relationship between each other, but also reflects the impermanence of fate, which provides comfort to most readers. In other words, there are places that make people comfortable and places that can be remembered, and try to take care of the viewing experience of most people. The above are my feelings about this book. (End) HTML 6128 Bytes 85

The writing is excellent and the emotions are very delicate. But I always feel that this book is a literal translation from Japanese. Students who have studied Japanese may realize that like me, the dialogues in the book can be translated into Japanese very smoothly. All in all, it is a very good-looking novel about Japan with a Chinese background.

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words A boy grows up with two completely different girls. The background is a strange background. The world is gradually overlapping with reality. Super powers, supernatural gods and other elements are interspersed in the ordinary but not peaceful daily life. From the opening to the confession, it was a top-notch enjoyment for me. There were enough weird elements, and it felt a bit entangled, but it seemed to be delayed because there was no commitment. The beginning of the confession was the beginning of facing all this seriously. It was entangled and uncomfortable. I wanted to look back and ease my uncomfortable mood due to these impacts. In the middle and later stages, I can only say that the rhythm was messy and the story tension was not as good as expected, but at least the ending was a growth story full of hope. For me, this is a novel in which various elements of tangle, sweetness, joy, and bitterness are intertwined. It feels like I can't push too much progress in one day. To be honest, this kind of writing about the relationship between two people is clever, but it is very stressful to read. When I glanced at the description, the deep and three-dimensional characters appeared before my eyes, and my heart was filled with guilt and pity. The most praiseworthy part is the ambiguous and testing part. The author writes it in a subtle and alluring way, but the really sticky part is too hard and repetitive. It can only be said that there may be something wrong with the writing in the middle and later parts, and the weird main plot of these two powerful characters is too separated from the sticky part, resulting in a rhythm separation. It is also the world's weird power system that is just like Qingyue described it, like playing the role of a family wine. From meeting Xingjie to meeting Qingyue, and then gradually becoming intimate, this ambiguous process is the sweetest and most beautiful. And when the relationship with the stars begins, the story turns sharply into a winding path with nine twists and turns, where the twists and turns make people feel stomachache. The three gradually reveal their background secrets and twisted dark psychology. Then they establish a relationship with the moon, and the stars are disconnected. They gradually adapt to this abnormal relationship and begin to face it. , Deal with their incomplete past, but the reasons for the stars to adapt are not that strong, more like accommodation, dealing with fragments of the incomplete past and the destruction of the main story line. To be honest, I think the rhythm is very bad. It is not a story that people want to concentrate on, but more like pressing pause to insert a branch line in the middle of dealing with the relationship. I blame Xingjie's growth on the fact that she was under too much pressure. Later on, she almost completely transformed into the image of a cold-faced girl, trying to pretend not to care about anything. In fact, the girl who was a bit silly and impulsive but very gentle and slender at the beginning can only be left in the memory. I agree that I gave her confidence and helped her grow up, but after the disconnection, she seemed to have grown up overnight. She no longer revealed her inner weakness to Xiang Yang or Qingyue, another rival who could be called a good friend, and always treated people calmly. This is too much like a switch between the two poles of the spectrum, which is shocking. Perhaps the only reasonable guess is that she is now more confident and independent, but the weakness and pain in her heart are still there, but they are no longer visible to Xiangyang and Qingyue. The most important pressure she bears is whether she is the big devil who may destroy the world in the prophecy? Regarding the uneasiness of losing control, Xingjie, who was mentioned earlier, would probably choose to express her uneasiness of being out of control, or maybe not, just because one is a boyfriend to whom she is unwilling to reveal her feelings, and the other is not a female friend to whom she is willing to reveal her feelings. ... And what made her most uneasy was that dream, the dream that came from the vast dark sea. In the dream, she was walking on the shore. There was no one on the endless coastline. The feeling of loneliness was so real and strong that it drove her almost crazy. The process of decrypting Xingjie's memories as a child was honestly a bit bad. Meng Zheng's image was purely vulgar and annoying. Maybe the character setting was too strong, and the background was too riddle-y and not solid enough, which made the whole viewing process just like this? Feeling. And as I grew up, I always felt that there was a subtle sense of distance from Xingjie, maybe because of pressure, maybe because of majesty, but it was always not as lovable as the Xingjie in my memories. From the beginning of the story, the girl who shrank and relied on Xiang Yang, was full of inferiority for herself, and was full of gratitude to Xiang Yang and hoped to get something in return: "——Then... Have I met your requirements now?" Xingjie wants to go out to play but doesn't want to cause trouble to Xiangyang. "Uh, um... If you don't want to go, that's okay." She looked at the boy's actions and said cautiously, "However, I won first place in the running competition today, can this be regarded as a reward for me..." "... It's better not to go?" Xingjie noticed Xiang Yang's annoyance. "Are you having troubles recently?" "I have become different from before... Of course, I still may not be able to help you, but Xiangyang has always been helping me, and I also want... To share a little bit with you." The girl who is so in love that she can't even believe that she is so lucky: "Tell me honestly, Xingjie." "——Are you disgusted and repulsed by that kind of thing... I mean the thing between men and women?" "It's just that once I remember that the person is you, I can't help but want to be more careful." I don't want her to be hurt in the slightest, so I need to be extremely cautious and test it a little bit. Although Lin Xingjie felt that she already liked this boy very much, at this moment, her heart began to beat like never before. Xiangyang saw through what Xingjie was afraid of, and then carefully tested and confessed. However, in addition to the joy of Xingjie's happiness, I felt that more emotions stemmed from the uneasiness towards Qingyue. Suppressing her eagerness to improve herself and want to satisfy Xiangyang's girl (maybe some of it is my imagination): "When we were at the reservoir, Qingyue admitted to both of us that she liked you, and she admitted it openly. So from that day on, she and I were love rivals, and we were still at odds." "... Although... "In addition, I still feel very happy when I am with her, and I am happy that I can put this worry behind. If this friendship can be maintained and not affected by this, at least I think it is a good thing now. As for Qingyue..." "I think she and I should have the same idea." Xingjie confided her conversation with Qingyue to Xiangyang. Xiangyang's idea here is that his girlfriend is too over-hearted, but from my point of view, it's not that your girlfriend is too over-hearted, but that your girlfriend hopes that you can find a way to make her accept it naturally, and she is willing to humbly accommodate you. "Don't let Qingyue wait too long." "You can't leave her there alone. Of course, the most important thing is that you promised me yesterday." "I want to believe you." Xingjie let Qingyue steal the house, I am more willing to believe what she said is that I don't want you to wait too long, I want to believe that you will find a way to make me accept it. "I'm just a little too impatient. The summer vacation is almost over, and we will be in our senior year of high school soon. We will soon be adults, and maybe in the blink of an eye, we will all become adults... I don't know how long we can live together, and how long you can stay with me and help me like this... The time is too little, too little, I still want to work hard, and I want to become better. Show more and be more independent." "——Because only in this way can I be worthy of you." What I feel about Xingjie's growth is another thing that I can't express. "Qingyue is so good. If I remain good, I'm afraid you won't want me." The girl who grew up to be independent and strong after crying: I hurt Xingjie after taking her on a date for a whole day. "I'm very grateful that you invited me out. I'm really happy today, so I'm willing to listen to whatever you say." "The day before yesterday... The day before yesterday, I confessed to Qingyue." What caught his eye was a face full of tears. She turned her face to the side and rubbed her face hard with her sleeves, trying to wipe her face clean. However, the result was that the more she wiped her face, the dirtier it became, because the tears were still flowing, and there were even snot bubbles between her mouth and nose. It was rare for Xingjie to imitate the look of a class leader. She thought she was going out with her boyfriend, so she put on light makeup, but this time she suffered a complete disaster. Big tears rolled down from her long eyelashes, completely destroying the beauty of her innocent face. "I'm sorry... I'm sorry... Xiang Yang... I'm sorry..." "Actually, I have long thought that such a day would come... Especially after Qingyue confessed, so I have been trying to convince myself to accept this matter..." "I also like Qingyue very much, and want to be friends with her for life. Our days together are so happy... So I am thinking, if I can convince myself, even if you or Qingyue propose it, I can accept it happily; I can even take the initiative to expose the truth and agree with you two. Being together, so that no one needs to feel sad, is a happy ending. The three of us can be together forever -" "But I'm sorry, I still can't do it... Wow ah ah ah..." "... Why do you want to Apologize?" "You can't apologize, Lin Xingjie. You shouldn't apologize to anyone. You didn't do anything wrong, never!" "Lin Xingjie, you are not wrong! So..." "-Don't say "I'm sorry"!" Xiang Yang's answer at least saved some points. But the worst thing is that he was not willing to put aside his pride and apologize to Xingjie at this time. Xingjie should not apologize here, it is Xiangyang who should apologize. The kind of girl who is independent and generous and reconciles with the past: The lonely back not far away looks very thin, as if a slightly stronger wind can blow her whole body into the sky; there are obvious signs of rickets on the elderly back, and the hair that has not been carefully taken care of is like a handful of dry weeds. She was wearing sneakers that were exactly the same as Xingjie's before, and they had already been washed and turned white. The dim and dim street lights were like the setting sun, dragging the woman's shadow on the ground. "I mean, of course I will not go back to that home again. Because I have grown up and can no longer stay with you, there are bound to be some things that I don't understand. But -" "-If you are bullied by someone, remember to tell me!" "You are an irresponsible mother, but I will never be an irresponsible daughter!" I especially like this description of Xingjie's mother, which gives a detailed and vivid image of this woman. "I want to say that I regret it. For such a long time, I have been resentful of my biological father. I feel that it was because of his irresponsible departure that made my life so bad - yes, I really want to say this, but I Clearly, things are never that simple. ""I have been blaming him, maybe just because this is the only way to find a reason for my current situation and not feel sorry for myself, or maybe... I don't want to admit that he has left us, as if we just don't stop. Scold him, remember him, one day he will come back, I am not a poor child who has no father from the beginning. "Now? Now I am sure of one thing: he really chose to leave to save me and protect the family. So, I I can't even complain. I will tell my mother the truth about the past and tell her that I have a father to be proud of... Although he always hides things from his wife, he may not be a qualified husband." Xingjie knew the truth but still chose to reconcile. The uneasy girl who bears the heavy fate of the world: "... I knew it was like this. Even though this is the situation, I can't do anything. I really don't want to make a mistake, not even once, because like If someone like me makes a mistake, it may cause serious consequences." "You'd better leave quickly. If you really want to help me, leave me temporarily and leave this dangerous place. Qingyue is outside now, very soon. It just so happens that you go meet her now. The two of you will leave Jinjiang City together to find someone for help. You will come to rescue me when you are fully prepared... Promise me, okay?" "How are you going to convince me..." "Convince me that I am not an uncontrollable monster, but the girl you once liked?" This is Xingjie's shortcoming. She always seems to be under pressure that she dare not relax at all. The world will be destroyed by a female high school student, so she can't make a mistake even once. Fortunately, Xiangyang here at least offers salvation: "Don't decide on your own what kind of you I like... The words you said and the things you did before may have been an opportunity for me to fall in love with you, but now, can I still let you go?" "I said, we will take the same road." "... No matter whether this road is good or bad." "Don't cry, don't cry, it's me who really kills people, right? Even if you are caught by the police, you just have to give me away." Yes, I want to be with you. If you say you want to "love me forever," then never let go. "Maybe I am really some kind of big devil destined to destroy the world? He will disappear from the world later, maybe it is related to my affairs." "So, I have been thinking wildly, and what I am thinking is that there are indeed many things in this world. , It was decided a long time ago. Since I am a created medium, I am destined to be burdened with something. It may be a good thing or a bad thing. If things develop in a bad direction after I awaken, I cannot control my own power. Whether you have to become the Great Demon King or not, what should I do if you leave me behind... I don't care about others, but Xiangyang, only you..." "I'm sorry, you made an agreement with me last night, and I know you are a person who does what you say, but I still I can't help but feel suspicious. Repeatedly like this, over and over again..." She murmured in a low voice, "I am really a hopeless bad girl..." "It doesn't matter, it doesn't matter. It doesn't matter how many times." Repeatedly confirm whether the other party will abandon her? This question is actually like this. At a certain period, we always ask it again and again, and we feel relieved after getting the same affirmation. However, while getting the affirmation, there is still no guarantee that the agreement will be effective. In fact, there may still be completely opposite behaviors. Even if we all know this, we still hope to gain a sense of security over and over again.

About Lily: I have read half of it and have fully subscribed. I personally do not feel that I have a serious Lily tendency, which is acceptable Regarding "the three of them love the other two people equally", in fact, it is more about friendship, not the "Lily" kind of love To put it "ugly", it is almost the mutual redemption of three orphan superpowers (mainly the male protagonist versus the two female protagonists) At least in the first half, love is not even the main theme of the story, and there is no need to consider the so-called "lily" element The characterization is great, the characters of the two female protagonists are definitely the T0 level in the Qidian novel It is not a cool novel, the male protagonist is more like a template for Riqing, I like the male protagonist's suggestion of "killing decisively" and turn right out😋

It's a very good work. I was attracted by the author's writing style, which is very delicate, but the subject matter and content determine that it is likely to be a niche one. I came here with the intention of reading articles about supernatural reasoning. Until Xing Riyue became powerful, I had the feeling of my heart beating faster when I read this book (especially when Sun and Yue were in school) and worried about the unknown future. But after watching the part (the complex emotional drama between three people), I thought the author was using something personal to get high. At this time, I temporarily put down the book because I read the author's previous book, The God of True Names, out of trust in the author's writing style. Then at the end, the author told me that the next book (this one) was essentially a love triangle story. It's very good. After changing my mentality, I was very happy to watch it. After all, it is indeed rare to write a threesome that can still taste interesting. In short, this is a work with a supernatural background and full of nostalgic feelings about the delicate emotions of adolescent boys and girls. (The update is very unstable, and the author has some fetish for feet) 😵

Personal book review: I read the early campus chapters where the protagonists awakened their abilities and immediately ordered the entire book. Now that I have read half of the chapters, I feel increasingly unreadable. I feel that there is something wrong with the author's rhythm. Judging from the writing alone, the author's level is at least far beyond that of most fast-food writers. Although the characterization of the characters is really good, this book also has a supernatural attribute. The protagonists' incredible ability directly reduces the supernatural attribute to 0 sense of existence. Most of the chapters at the beginning of "Monitor" are about the little thoughts of adolescence and feeding dog food. The protagonist has almost grown into an emotional expert, but he has encountered several supernatural events and dead people and has not yet had the awareness to enter the supernatural world. Xingjie's dream is not written anymore either. It felt like watching Fate Coyote summon Saber and then fast forward to dinner at Emiya's house after the first scene. If you don't like your personal feelings, don't comment.

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words Xiangyang's image at the beginning gives the brilliance of humanity just right, but later in the story, he regresses back to impulsiveness. Immature teenagers only have the beauty of girls in their minds, leaving those sticky thoughts, without really using the mature image at the beginning to give people a satisfactory solution. I think it's a pity. Maybe it's not enough space, maybe it's time to wrap up. At the end of the story, I was still confused and confused by the thinness of this character's image. I was still surprised that there was no solid relationship between Xiang Yang and Tai Sui, but there was a process of reconciliation with the past. The answers to the extra chapters of Qinglian and Xiangyang are more like outline answers. The boy who cried with delicate empathy: "What I fear most is that I may not be able to survive this year and a half." "In this world, there are always people who have no choice." "Is it because I am too stupid? Is it because I am not brave enough? Because I believe Don't you know enough? If it were you, you would definitely be able to do better. There must be a smarter way than me. I just want you to know that at that time, I really had no choice." Then, she was surprised to find two clear tears streaming down the boy's pale face, which was illuminated by the light of the TV. This paragraph is very well written, delicately and perfectly depicting the glory of Xiang Yang's humanity. A boy who understands that he is not so special: "I am really different from them." Xiangyang is an ordinary psychic, although it is revealed in the end that he is not ordinary. I want to let the Tai Sui God reveal it early and give Xiangyang a not-so-ordinary experience, which may make up for the status inequality that has been vaguely dissatisfying since the middle part. Compared with the dazzling specialness of the two girls, Xiangyang appears too dim. The boy who said beautiful words in the haunted house: "Qingyue, one day... Maybe just a possibility, but will you really say such things to me?" "——Qingyue, I... I like you very much." "Of course, That's not what I meant! It's just that I heard Xingjie say that you regard me as someone worthy of respect. When I heard this, I was really happy because it was me who said this, and I have always regarded you as the target of learning and catching up." But I gradually feel that just being together as three people is not enough. I want to get closer to you and Xingjie..." "So, I decided to give it a try. It may be a bit dangerous, but this is what I want to do... ..." This is Xiangyang's dialogue about the monster in the haunted house. His self-esteem and his unique inferiority complex caused by his not being special enough. However, when facing the monster, he still immaturely tries to disguise himself as a good boy and does not dare to sincerely face his inner desire for monopoly. I think it's a pity that Xiangyang made the declaration at this time. Xiangyang wanted to prove that he could stand in front of the two girls as an ordinary boy and wanted to get closer to them. This was equivalent to saying that he wanted them all, but his subsequent actions were not as beautiful as these empty words at this time. "I want to become someone special... Especially for you and Xingjie." "It's just boring pride." "Even others can see it, you are already 'special' enough for both of us. Have you ever seen other boys with us? Are the two of you on good terms? Your "turning a blind eye" is really shameless. "This is one of the few shining points that I admire. I want to be special for the two of them, but being ridiculed on the spot is caused by boring pride. Is there anyone else who can win their favor like this? But I think his idea is correct. If he really uses this special feeling in their eyes to be pampered and proud, then the relationship between them will become two mistresses and dogs. Maybe being a mistress and a dog is a reward in the industry. What I want to emphasize here is equality. If it is always a mistress and a dog, then I can't see their happy future. If it is occasionally a mistress and a dog, occasionally a male owner and a dog, and occasionally a male owner and a female owner, then I think this equality is the blueprint for happiness. The disappointing boy pretending to be an ostrich: "I just want to know your true feelings. No matter what the result is, I will not laugh at you. Even your best friend is unwilling to tell the truth, who else can you communicate with?" "There is no point in saying it." ——What's really important is that I'm Xingjie's boyfriend now. How do you want me to respond to you? Do you want me to betray her? Will you be happy if you do this? ""——I will not agree to your confession." "So, your idea has not changed at all, "As long as you maintain the current status, you will be happy." Really?" "I won't be willing to lag behind all the time. I've been this kind of person from the beginning." "Even if I live a life of misfortune, I will definitely grab what I want -" "This is who I am." However, Xiangyang's rejection here is disappointing, the kind of straightforward rejection that pretends that he has never noticed Qingyue's intentions. Absolutely, I think this is where I start to feel that Xiang Yang's image is going backwards. From the mature and shining point of humanity in the beginning, to this point, he would rather be a coward and regard the promises he made before as disappearing, using Xingjie as an excuse, and falsely thinking that maintaining the happiness of the status quo is an acceptable answer. And Qingyue's writing here is indeed seductive enough, with the twist of misfortune that would last a lifetime. "Stop pretending, Xu Xiangyang. The relationship between you and me, starting from the time in the haunted house, is destined not to stay at the level of 'friends'. You have always been just deceiving yourself." "It doesn't matter, I will not force you. Since the agreement made at that time, and several opportunities since then, I have thought about using my ability to force you. You achieved your wish. But -" "... But, I held back everything." "Obviously it was you who said it... You said it first. You said that just being together as three people like this is not enough and not satisfying. I hope that we can have a relationship that goes beyond ordinary friendship and love... It is precisely because of what you said in your heart that I can make up my mind. Work hard in this direction... But now, do you want to leave me alone and enjoy your youth? ""I don't!" "I still think so! No matter what our future is, our relationship will definitely overcome any obstacles! No matter who it is, even if it is Xingjie or Sister Lian, I will never agree to it, no one will. It won't affect us—" Qingyue once again urged Xiang Yang, who was still deceiving himself. This is my disappointment. Xiang Yang was not as decisive as he was at the beginning, but changed from active behavior to passive, urging the two heroines to change again and again. The grievances of the two heroines shown in this process made people see the entanglement and helplessness. I don't see what Xiangyang has to be excited or aggrieved about here. I'm only sad for Qingyue. "It doesn't matter, we still have time, and we can think about it slowly. Qingyue's matter is our matter, and we won't leave her alone, right?" I can't see why Xingjie Xiangyang is still using delay to evade responsibility. I don't see what he has to be dissatisfied about. If you like two people, you should put in blood and make more efforts. Ordinary people will never have such an opportunity. Xiang Yang, who still wants to appear innocent, normal and innocent, is the most disgusting one. (Maybe it's my imagination) Xingjie is here to continue to encourage him to give her an excuse to convince herself that after all, Xiang Yang wants it, so how can she stop it. The boy who finally made up his mind to break through an attempt to move forward: "So you gave up? I don't think there is another option, which is to do nothing what you like most and continue to work hard to maintain the current state of life." "Yes, do nothing. That would be great. Wait, wait, continue to act like a qualified boyfriend in front of Xingjie, and talk to her every day. In fact, she doesn't need it anymore. She just uses this excuse to satisfy my psychological advantage over her." "You will call me out every week. God, when I go shopping with you, you dress up beautifully every time, put on nice clothes, don't shy away from physical contact at all, and create ambiguous situations to make me fall into a trap. Every time I am tempted, my face turns red, my heart beats, and I say "Don't do this", but in fact I am being treated like you. Who wouldn't be happy with such a perfect girl? To be honest, it really makes me happy. ""What about when the three of us are together? Wow, that would be even better. They are just small characters who wander around the city and solve supernatural events, but they provide us with excitement. Chatting with pretty girls all night long, flirting and joking with you, holding hands secretly, I also like to watch my cute girlfriend jealous, and I can easily move between the two of you... I never thought that I still have this ability to be a playboy, it's so amazing, I definitely would have been a year ago I admire who I am now, after all, I didn't even have friends I could talk to at that time!" "I really hope it can last forever. Waiting for one day, waiting for a major event that can change our destiny, such as the end of the world, it will definitely make me and you. The relationship will become even closer. It would be best if there is some thrilling scene of mutual rescue that can make the relationship between you two better, to the point where you feel like sisters, and then... Maybe by then Xingjie will be able to smoothly accept our relationship and be willing to break up. Enjoy your lover, and the three of you will live a happy life together that you call "beyond family and lovers" -" In fact, he knew it, knew that the two of them had made humble sacrifices for this twisted relationship, and there was never that kind of good thing. Xiangyang's good thing was just the girls' unspoken humble contributions. "I fell in love with two girls, and I am a bad person. By delaying time, do you mean that I will become more mature and become a scumbag who can be more comfortable between you two? Or is that growth? Looking forward to the future If there can be a turn for the better, or if I can change myself, and then continue to enjoy the present with a guilty heart, isn't it because I have chosen to shirk responsibility at this moment and refuse to face the problem? "" If my feelings for Xingjie are really firm, even if you confess to me. A hundred times, I will refuse without hesitation; even if the result is to break up with you and give up the friendship with you, I should stand by her and never waver;" "If I make up my mind to be with you, then I should be good to Xingjie To explain it clearly, even if it hurts her heart severely, even if she won't be forgiven for the rest of her life... But the result is that I can't do both." He just kept getting warmer and warmer with his cohabitant as he got along day after day, until it became sticky. Especially after learning about the endings of Zhao Le and Chen Hongying, who were in a similar situation to them, they had several passionate kisses that lasted all afternoon, vowed to make a lasting alliance, and regarded each other as the treasure of their lives——

Youthfulness, passion, sincerity, shyness, the power to change the world, the restlessness of adolescence, the redemption of boys and girls, the love story at the end of the century So many interesting keywords have sublimated a beautiful, delicate but extremely concise work. The surreal elements add novelty to the story, and also give the parallel time and space of 1999 a layer of mysterious and dreamy color The most touching thing after reading it is Xiang Yang's sincerity, uneasiness, restlessness, confusion in the face of feelings, but loyal to his inner self-analysis, which makes me feel more and more that Xiang Yang is an adolescent high school student. So just as the author revealed his creative ideas in his speech, if Xiang Yang had the luxury of a reborn person and the power of an extraordinary system, then the youthful spirit in the book would be gone. Perhaps every teenager dreams of changing the world, controlling destiny, and having the power to resist the ups and downs of fate during adolescence. The opportunity may come from family disharmony or the sourness of love, but in the end, not every story will have a beginning and an end. Life doesn't always have answers. It was at such a powerless, immature, and youthful age that Xiang Yang made choices time and time again that he would not regret, which was true and full of nostalgia. So compared to the two heroines, I actually prefer the portrayal of this boy. Maybe he is not perfect, but his warmth, sincerity, and hard work are all things that I yearn for but have not achieved. So sometimes, like Qingyue, I have the same respect for him. Going back to the novel itself, it goes without saying that the writing is exquisite, and its characteristic lies in the control of the characters' emotions. Every little detail can make the characters come alive, and it cleverly depicts the emotional awkwardness and shyness of adolescent boys and girls. Compared with the same youth novels, this article does not particularly highlight the nostalgia for youth, nor does it deliberately introduce love elements such as Shura field and palace battles Instead, it focuses on the growth of the characters, allowing the feelings to flow naturally in the story, and allowing the characters to be fully formed through the many interactions between the three people of Sun, Moon and Star Perhaps I have not read many novels, but this novel reading experience is indeed the first time. It is also the first time that I have seen a male protagonist in a harem romance feel guilty about the number of boats he has stepped into. He analyzes himself, refuses to deceive and conceal, refuses to settle for half-measures, but faces the problem itself. Even if the ending is bruised and fragmented, he must bravely make a choice. I am indeed a layman. I like to watch the sweet love between the male and female protagonists, and I want to see the harem male protagonist's fateful encounters, which makes me feel secretly happy. But I also like stories that are truly youthful and touching. They may not be able to change everyone, but they will really impress readers who are willing to appreciate them. Although my insignificant youth has ended long ago like this book, I sincerely hope that Xu Xiangyang, Lin Xingjie and Zhu Qingyue can live happily, sincerely and beautifully together forever. I won't be discouraged because of the ups and downs of life I won't get tired of each other because of our long-term companionship Nor will we be separated because of changes in the distance And we won't be separated because of the long years... I wish you will always live in my heart and never fade 2024.4.17 14:23 Goodbye

This work is set in the millennium and combines strange stories with youthful love. The early portrayal of the heroine and the emotional changes between the male and female protagonists are very detailed. It tells the story of young girls taking risks together, supporting each other in the face of difficulties, and licking their wounds. Unfortunately, the relationship between the characters is too single, and the entry of extraordinary forces is too abrupt, which leads to a lack of follow-up. However, it is still a good work.

The last time I read this book was two years ago, when I was a junior in college. Now I am in my fifth year and about to graduate from college. Thank you very much for the story A Clockwork Orange. The scene that remains fresh in my memory is the story of Xiangyang taking Xingjie to the beach to confess, and then Xingjie burst into tears. . I once had a Xingjie like this. Great book, thank you

I saw a bit weak at the back, just average in terms of fighting. As for youth love, it was well written, but I did feel like I wanted to skip reading it. The characters are also well drawn, especially the squad leader.

Recently, when I was reading the book for the third or fourth time, I realized that I had never written a book review. It was obviously said that this is my favorite novel from the outside, but when I looked at it, there were no reviews at all. It really doesn't make sense. Looking back, I was quite emotional when I first encountered this book, because Mengmeng's last novel "Girls in Difficulty" left a very deep impression on me. I never thought that there would be such a powerful novel in Mao, so I read Mengmeng's new book with great enthusiasm. Although it is a different background setting, the writing power and excellent atmosphere of Invading the World are like the heroine, and furthermore, the narration of the emotional line. This is actually the focus of my reading, that is, the dialogues and interactions between the characters slowly make the relationship between the male and female protagonists gradually become deeper. This should actually be a very slow process, but most authors either do not have enough writing power, or are limited by the fast-paced environment, and can only speed up the emotional line to a speed that I cannot accept. In addition, the awkward feeling of multiple people's emotional entanglements also made me want to stop. Shura Field is not just a simple quarrel between the heroines, it must have a very intense emotional collision, otherwise how could it make me feel excited while watching it. These parts are all advantageous areas under Mengmeng's delicate writing style. They are also the reason why I felt so disappointed after reading it. It is so difficult to find a replacement. Of course, the strong sense of atmosphere made me feel deeply involved throughout the whole process. This all depends on good writing and scene description. I think this is the threshold of a masterpiece in my mind. Failure to create an atmosphere that allows readers to immerse themselves in it is unqualified. The result of the superposition of these two points is that when reading the book, I have the illusion of youth. My so-called youth, like most people, was spent in endless study and exams, so reading this book gave me the illusion of making up for my youth, which is quite scary when I think about it (laughs). Therefore, I will not use normal standards to judge this book, because for me, invading the world is youth in a sense. It certainly has its shortcomings, such as the instability of updates and the collapse of the rhythm in the later period, but these do not affect it from becoming the top 0 in my heart. After all, my youth is like this, full of irreparable shortcomings.

It's finished, and it's still very good. But the regret is that the plot didn't continue to unfold, and the ending was very hasty. I thought that after the two girls successfully became magic matchmakers, they would have a lot of daily life. Fast forward to the college entrance examination, interspersed with college career and foreign travel, but I didn't expect that it would end in a hurry. The writing of this book is still very good, and the two heroines each have their own characteristics. I recommend reading it.

What is truly touching about this book is the radiance of hope in memories, the dim lights in longing, and the girl's looking back and smiling like the spring breeze blowing on her face... Maybe it is the feeling of loss that she once had, or the unforgettable memory that will never have an echo! ! It is said that you should not meet the most amazing person when you are young. But that is not the color of youth ~ Thank you for writing this book. This book makes me feel like a junior high school. If the ending is ugly, I will go to you on the plane and treat you with a fist as big as a sandbag👊

The long-haired delinquent girl who is beautiful and good at running + the ignorant boy who is an honor student. You almost didn't break my guard when you wrote about the part where you grabbed my hand and ran out of the classroom and we went shopping together after the sports meeting and bumped into a classmate. It's a pity that life is not a novel, there are not so many ideals and beauty. You don't want to know the subsequent story, more than ten years have passed. I wish Xingjie and Xiangyang finally get married.

I drew the squad leader ❤️ First of all, I have a lot of personal subjective impressions, which may not completely match the original description, but I generally used the white dress design when I went to the mall for the first time, and I wanted to highlight her expression and character Depending on the situation, Xingjie and Xiangyang will also be added later, but there is no way, who called me Miss Yue Qingyue🐶 ()

Well, after a few months, (after being busy at work and addicted to games), I finally came to fill in the gaps. This time I painted Xingjie, and I still painted based on my personal understanding and impression. In my impression, Xingjie is a cheerful, lively, and somewhat cool beautiful girl. The dynamic design is expressed by moving or jumping. The clothes are also more sporty than the squad leader said. Some minor adjustments have been made to the original text description.