I’m Your Natural Enemy

First of all, I have not turned on my privacy. I don't like to troll people when looking at my profile! Okay, let's start. There was an author who wrote something toxic. I told him that he would permanently ban me. I changed my account and asked him why. He also blocked my account. I decided that every time I read a book, I would leave a trace of him in the book circle to let everyone know!

This achievement is all due to the writing, and the character creation is difficult to describe (it is too powerful as described above, and it will be useless if something goes wrong, so it relies on the mechanical deity of the protagonist. In order to set off the protagonist, it does not need to be to this extent). The ability of Goldfinger in the early stage was not written clearly (don't be ridiculous, everyone in the chapter review is just making up their minds and guessing). The first few chapters are like talking in sleep, but I have to say that the writing style is really good and comfortable to watch, but the plot, alas

It's really just "making dumplings". The plot after the protagonist starts cultivating is that the holes that are not conducive to unity cannot be filled, the plot that is not conducive to the people cannot be written, what is beneficial should be fought for, and the outsiders cannot be the first to shoot,,,. . . The last chapter is about family reunion and making dumplings, this. . . I don't have any objections to the ten good young people who are the protagonists, but when I look back at the topic of the last chapter, it's really just the plot of the Spring Festival Gala, which makes me speechless.

Personally, I feel that the content is quite well written. After reading it, I didn't find any obvious poisonous points. The protagonist is brave enough to add some tricks. After all, the protagonist is just a martial artist, so he doesn't ask for too much. Some of the character creations are also good, at least in the early stage, especially Cai Heizi. After offline, I felt that the pace of the plot began to speed up significantly. Basically, the protagonist worked from beginning to end. There is basically no description of the little zombies and sparrow cats until later, and probably not much after that. As we get to the back, there are fewer main supporting characters, and we start to fall into a plot loop, where the protagonist discovers a problem, the protagonist uses his authority to investigate, the protagonist quickly goes over to blow him up, and then shakes him off if he doesn't blow up, and then continues to blow him up. After blowing him up, he goes home to rest for two days, practice for two days, and then discovers the problem again. ,,, A non-stop cycle, I don't remember how many chapters this cycle started, but basically this is the step after that. The protagonist has no time to practice, and he is either fucking others or on the way to fucking others every day. This is not bad, but it would be better if the plot rhythm is slightly slowed down so that I can take a breather. Then let's talk about the villains. The few supporting characters mentioned are mainly protagonists. There are a lot of villains with all kinds of heaven-defying abilities. Some of the abilities are even used as templates for the protagonists in other novels. But unfortunately, here they are supporting characters. As we go to the back, there is actually a gap between the protagonists and the villains. The protagonist has no time to improve himself and has begun to be unable to keep up with the version. To be honest, with the few heaven-defying villains I have seen, the protagonist can't compete with the protagonist on his own. The protagonist has reached the end. Judging from the previous progress, unless the protagonist can step out of his own way in one go, the protagonist will still enter the plot loop mentioned above when fighting the villain, because the villain he fights is too high-level, and the natural enemy profession is actually too useless to face those late-stage villains, yes, that is It's useless, because if you look at the back, everyone will know that the protagonist's so-called plug-ins and natural enemies are of no use against the villains. They all impede the protagonist's abilities, and because the protagonist cannot practice Taoism, the way to quickly change combat power is given to his stupid son. Alas, to be honest, I have said too much, but I just want to say one point. Let the protagonist have the opportunity to develop and greatly improve his strength, instead of always relying on the boss to paddle K heads on his own, which does not improve himself at all. The early writing is quite good, but the later part is too compact.

If you want to be a part-timer, you can leave your name. If there is a suitable one, I will use it.

How many people know about the release of the new book?

The author's imagination is ok. The novel looks smooth but I can't understand it. I'm very sorry to the author. I've read dozens of chapters and the plot is pretty good but I can't understand it. I just don't understand what the protagonist's abilities are and what the setting of the world is. Sorry, it's my problem. Let's go.

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Generally speaking, the setting is good, and the author's writing style is very comfortable to read. However, there are many logical flaws in the plot. The author looks down on the government's organizational planning ability. He portrays the protagonist's IQ as very high and can think of many solutions that the government departments cannot think of. The result is that many people in the government are dull and have no smart people. In fact, the protagonist's ability is very special. It can be written around the ability, not the protagonist's intelligence. The quotient should be the protagonist's IQ limited by the author's IQ. Author's IQ > Protagonist's IQ > Villain's IQ > Protagonist's teammates' IQ. The result is that the protagonist's teammates, that is, the government departments, appear dull and stupid. In fact, this is impossible. A person may be stupid, but a special department under a political organization cannot be as stupid as an ordinary person. Basically, I have not seen many well-written protagonists with IQ types.

After reading Chapter 18, there's nothing exciting about it.