My Wife Isn't Human

The first dungeon sparked my desire to read, the second dungeon immediately dampened my enthusiasm, and the third dungeon was just... Ugh!

What was the point of Volume 3? If you wanted to bring about change, then design how to write it properly. If that wasn't your goal, then make it a side story, with more interaction with the girls and exploration of the unknown. Instead, Volume 3 made social change the main plot, and then it was all about Deus Ex, basically just killing everyone he saw.

I've finished reading it, so here's my review. The author should take a look. From the author's comments, it's clear they believe there are many reasons why they didn't write it well: realistic emotions, limitations of the subject matter, insufficient foreshadowing, and various other reasons. Based on my many years of experience, this novel is actually quite good, at least not bad.

Here's a brief review of the book's pros and cons: First, the pros: The first volume is a perfect start, setting up a huge plot hole, and the shifts in perspective are very interesting. The most charming character, Miss An, becomes incredibly popular in this volume. Miss An's background and her romance with the male lead are, in my opinion, the biggest highlights of the book.

In the morning, her hair was as black as silk; by evening, it had turned to snow. Looking back, they were already strangers. "Heh, Wang Quan, how could you die without my permission?" In the desolate void, Bai Xiyao leaned over a ball of flesh, feeling Wang Quan's aura gradually weaken. Whether it was his plan with An Wanying or his schemes with Kexila, He didn't care at all.

The first volume was a fantastic start, but the rest felt a bit anticlimactic.

Seeing Miss An fight with Luo Xiao and Ajiu made me want to stop reading. In my opinion, one of the book's biggest flaws is that Miss An's love is too prominent compared to the others. It makes me wonder what right Luo Xiao and Ajiu have to compete with her. What has Miss An sacrificed for Mr. Wang?

He's good at making awkward jokes and his writing is quite good, but the third volume lacks a proper understanding of the world. Productive forces determine relations of production, relations of production determine the economic base, and the economic base determines the superstructure.

Long, straight black hair (this should count as long, straight black hair (´｡･v･｡`))

A message to the author: Your writing is excellent, your imagination is boundless, and the plot is good, but you stubbornly refuse to change your tendency to go overboard when you're really into writing. Blizzard might go overboard and add their own personal touches, but since they don't have a substitute, they can tolerate it if they want to play the game.