Nuo

The beginning and the following may be too confusing, the main line is not obvious, and there are too many titles. Not parents, grandparents? The word "crazy criticism" can be used more than ten times in one chapter, and it's still "crazy criticism" or "crazy criticism". Who knows how many there are. If the roll is not neat and tidy, it will get zero points.

"When people are in trouble, they do Nuo; when Nuo dances begin, all diseases disappear."

The writing is very good, but there are some poisonous points. Maybe the author has never been chased by a girl. The things you write are usually things that boys can do. The story is very good, but if you can't update it, I won't have much desire to read it.

There are more than 20 chapters in the worldview. The worldview has not advanced at all. Except for the protagonist, other areas are covered. It is difficult to substitute the modern background and make it impossible to follow. A bunch of girls like it too much. How talented the author is, how could he write such a plot.

Nuo dance has been around since the Zhou Dynasty. It was formerly known as Xia Shang Wu. Now there are only a few places where Nuo dance has been passed down in Guanzhong. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

It's a female channel author, the male protagonist's emotional line is disgusting

Recruit some supporting actors, don't be too exaggerated. It's really not okay to be all over the place. It will affect the plot. If you have a story, you can write it down. After reading it, Straw thinks it's good, so you can consider writing it in...

It's okay, it's pretty, too little, I'll take care of it first.

What is the relationship with Nuo Mian Zhixia?

Save it first and see what book friends say 🙂

Author bacteria, is the span so big?

Has anyone written something that I always feel like I've read? Or the author rewrote it

It feels like the early stage of the corpse hunter.

When I read the fourth chapter, it felt like a traditional novel. Although the beginning was not as fast-paced as the current online novels, it had its own rhythm and writing style. The writing was solid and the story came smoothly. As a Shaanxi person, I felt particularly moved when I read it.

I fell in Chapter 15, alas :-(, as a northwest person, I found this article quite friendly. Although the writing style is a bit dry, for example, when writing about the umbrella of the protagonist, the description is like a running account, but the first story of Lin Junhou is really touching, which moved me a little. In Chapter 15, there is a female character who is inexplicably fighting for the protagonist, and there is no such thing as "crazy criticism". It feels like a drama.

It's so beautiful. I just wanted to look through it to see if there are any works of this type. I found out that the author used to write historical articles.

Author, have you ever counted how many teenagers you wrote about in a chapter?

The first story is good, but you repeat words a bit too much. Don't wait until you are judged as AI.

I have opened a new book, and the span is so big. You must read it.

If you read the book written by the author, you will know that he is an honest person, because your book has no hook, is not attractive enough, and lacks skills.

The beginning of the story about the wheat cutter who lured the male protagonist out seemed okay, but the subsequent chapter about his boss would be a bit long-winded🤔It feels like the pace has slowed down.