Quantum Will

My mother sold it in batches, and after raising it for several months, I forgot the title of the book. I have been looking for quantum warfare, atomic consciousness, atomic war, and atomic will. Then I never found it. Later I searched Chiyo Chiyo on Baidu. Then there is quantum will. I originally wanted to search Wang Chen on Baidu, but there were too many names and I couldn't find it.

I'm still finishing it slowly, but after reading some of this chapter, I expressed my support for the author's writing style. What else is left of the same routine text except a momentary stimulation of the cerebral cortex? Is a novel without the author's painstaking features and spiritual connotation really interesting? How much do you remember after reading it? How many people have you seen in real life who are the kind of villains who are brainless and get slapped in the face? What I like about Peach Blossom is that the supporting characters also have stories, with flesh and blood, such as Gu Xiang, who are both enemies and friends; such as Fatty, who will not belittle the protagonist in order to set off him, and will not be willing to make progress. This is proof that the author treats every character he writes with care. Villains who are slapped in the face for the sake of being slapped in the face have no soul. (But some concise and clear descriptions and foreshadowings in some cool fights can be appropriately incorporated. For example: how to arrange the structure of the plot, how to unfold the entire world view: the competition between the major federations, subsequent competitions or tasks, and how the final potential war is thrown out one by one or together, which can give people a sense of expectation that the protagonist will gallop into it.) And although Taohua is suspected of controlling the harem, it can still be accepted happily. 🤝 But I don't think pretentiousness and slaps in the face are necessary elements for good writing. Too many of them would be boring. Are there any popular Mystical Lords now? Good articles all rely on characterization and story or unique writing style. These are all based on the careful consideration of one's own characters and the elaboration of the story and plot arrangements. Taohua's writing style and seriousness about each character, and his interesting daily clips can also make people laugh while making them laugh. Not every author has it, and it is his unique advantage. After that, you can work on the theme, story setting and plot, how to enhance the protagonist's sense of substitution, set goals for him at each stage, combine the tension before preparation with light daily life, the appearance of supporting characters and more interaction with the protagonist, so that readers are eager to continue to understand the development of the story, etc. There are many areas for improvement, and they are all more attractive than superficial pretentiousness. Why should we cater to some people who have little experience and immature minds, while leaving others to write about the protagonist's character that they don't fit in and don't like? --The reason I write so much is that I hope Taohua can calmly analyze her own strengths and areas for improvement. She can look at the works of other great masters and do more publicity, but what everyone is writing is not necessarily good or suitable for them. Learning from each other's strengths, carefully crafting stories, honing writing techniques, and adhering to one's own style and original intentions are the right ways to not be lost to everyone. I said in the first book that I will always read your novels. I hope this book can also have a good ending, and the next book will go further. ✊

Taohua has been illegally controlled many times. Investors, please be careful.

Game? Modern magic? Fantasy? What the hell is the introduction?

Now I realize that this story takes place in the Red Alert world without Comrade Yuri. No wonder the technology tree is so strange, and a super scientist can create inventions that transcend the world.

If Qian Qian had the body of a mechanical life form, she would then form Wang Chen's left hand. Emmmm Then Wang Chen can achieve full-level cooking skills, full-level mechanical engineering, full-level wilderness survival, quick access to information, and unconscious self-defense... Xiaoyou: System, I can't beat her, she's cheating

I've read less than a hundred chapters, so I'll briefly share my thoughts. Personally, I feel that the author's priority in shaping the characters exceeds the consideration of the rationality of the plot. It is obvious that in order to deepen the character, more dramas and dramas are added continuously, until the drama becomes more important than the main role. It seemed like everyone was a boss behind the scenes, which made me feel the fear of being dominated. If this is the effect you want, just pretend I didn't say it. Those who have appeared so far and have names are almost all main actors, or they all have the possibility of continuous exploration. For online works, writing like this is really tiring, and readers will have a hard time reading it. There were too many names to remember in a short period of time, and too many characters that seemed important. I just don't know how many of them will really be able to retain enough roles if we expand further. Although the author's writing is very strong, he can flesh out a character in just a few words. But this fullness can also turn out to be a wasted effort. Disposable characters can save some pen and ink. If it is possible to reuse, you can also wait until next time to add explanations. It should be appropriately plump according to the needs of the plot, and there is no need to give the main character treatment at the beginning. The reason why I say this is a small problem is because your writing method makes you invest too much energy into the characters, resulting in too little consideration for the plot. You have applied many classic models, but the values ​​behind the birth of these models are actually different. In the novel, there is a mysterious and powerful organization that seems to be behind the threat to the federation around the world. Ordinary people are not eligible to enter the Central District. If they fail in the draft, they will become repairmen. The polarization appears to be profound. Titan is obviously not a virtual reality VR, but closer to an augmented reality ar. But the physical fitness is all digitized, and the elderly can walk quickly, which makes me feel a little confused. If you are not using your own body, then what is the purpose of this kind of military training? Entering the college draft model seems to be about personal heroism. But the subsequent training model will definitely be to strengthen cooperation and train tactics. All countries possess destructive weapons, and it is impossible for a real war to break out. The purpose of selecting and cultivating talents should be to create a perfect team to handle small and medium-sized operations. It is conceivable that the organization behind the scenes must have ace soldiers with extremely strong combat capabilities, but the Federation seems to have no way or difficulty in dealing with such an opponent. So in the later stage, you should fight in reality, and you must use your own body, not virtual values ​​​​in the game. So I don't quite understand, what's the point of training these children? How do you go from a game master to a super soldier? Okay, I'd better keep watching. (Continuously updated)

I don't know how to subscribe. It's obviously a pretty good book, but it feels like it's not popular in reviews or lists. As a bookworm for ten years, this is the first time I've felt this way. . .

A suggestion to the author, don't put the book in the fantasy category. Use the modern setting in the city and the ancient setting in fantasy. See how the mystery works. Write a good introduction, preferably one that is attractive. Almost all readers read the introduction first when looking for a novel. If they think the novel may be interesting, they will read the content.

I looked through the bookshelf and found a book that hadn't been updated for a long time. I looked at the results again and saw that they were much better than Taofa. Only then did I realize that Taofa had no tj and it was really good for us.