A Survival Journal by a Fake Human

The pseudo-person didn't see it, they were all ghosts. The protagonist, the pseudo-person, had a clear heart and behaved more kindly than the real person. So what about the fake people?

The plot is a bit nonsensical, but it doesn't explain how ghosts should be dealt with. They usually contain them. A few things happened in the story, but it was kind of nothing. Because the protagonist is still crossing the river by feeling the stones. . The overall reading is not bad, but I feel that the ghost may not be particularly perverted. This is in the eye of the beholder. The writing is still successful, there are no big pain points. 🙂 You are the first one who made me feel that it is not watery. When I think about it carefully, the plot has not advanced at all. The beginning is suspenseful, and everything after that is running away 😍. Let's see how it progresses later.

Advantages: 1. The author's writing style is solid and does not look like a novice. The introduction is well written and the overall writing style is smooth and engaging. 2. Some ghosts have their own ingenuity, and the design can be said to be a surprise. For example, the design of the ghost bus's escape route and the twin ghosts in the hotel (let's use the twin names first, otherwise there will be spoilers), the author has carefully conceived them. Disadvantages: 1. The title of the book is "Pseudo-Man", but in fact, the characteristics of the protagonist, the Pseudo-man, only target humans, not ghosts, and do not have any special attacks against ghosts. Before I opened the book, I fantasized about how the inhuman protagonist would use his pseudo-human qualities to survive the monster crises. However, after reading the book, the protagonist would only show off his pseudo-human side when facing passers-by and supporting characters. He smiled brightly and transformed into Gu Yue Fang Yuan's various calculations and uses in his heart. But I will still be scared when facing the devil, or I will turn into facial paralysis. The basic description is "a frown", "pupils shrink" and so on, which is very boring. 2. The description of the horror atmosphere is about zero. There is no place that makes people feel scared or chilled after reading the whole story. Even in some plots where ghosts appear, the author will describe it like this: "The ghost has a pale face and stares at the protagonist sinisterly, as if to say "I see you"". At least in my reading experience, this kind of personification of ghosts seems to be saying something, which quite destroys the atmosphere... Of course, the fact that it is not scary may be considered an advantage for some readers?

My protagonist has written a record, so the record will be discovered by others in the future, right? 😏

Doesn't the beginning look a bit like that book that starts with the analysis of ghost stories?

The author should write less emotional scenes, it's a bit awkward, but other parts are good

I am currently reading Chapter 60, about two plots later. The character of the protagonist is similar to the character of the protagonist in the book "Mayuri Pocket Watch". He flaunts his egoism, but it has almost collapsed. The first plot, Ghostbusters, is pretty good, which is worthy of praise. The second plot of the class reunion is very ordinary. After the protagonist discovers the ghost at the class reunion, he does not want to escape, but still wants to continue to finish the class reunion, and regrets why he did not run away earlier in the subsequent plot. The impression is very poor The transition between the two plots of the water ghost plot is even more unsightly. The protagonist just got off the ghost bus and saw the deep In the middle of the night, a woman fell into the water and jumped into the river to save her. It was also very reasonable that she was entangled by a water ghost (the author explained that there was surveillance by the river and the protagonist was photographed, so the protagonist had to go into the river to save her. You can judge whether the logic is correct or not. You can judge for yourself if the logic is correct). Later, when the woman died, the protagonist was also directly treated as a suspect and tortured at the police station, leading to the plot of a beautiful policewoman. Another common problem in male videos is that when a female character appears, first write a description of the body, stockings, high heels, etc., And then write a description when you see the face of the protagonist, you will directly become a nymphomaniac, and the impression is average I can only say that the performance is worthy of the quality.

I tell you in the most straightforward and understandable way that I don't understand.

The author should change his name and concentrate on writing ghosts. There is no need to force the protagonist to be a dummy.

At first, I thought the protagonist was really a pseudo-human. It was strange to think of a pseudo-human being trying to survive in a modern city. As a result, I unknowingly read more than seventy chapters before I remembered that I was not here to see urban supernatural beings.