I’m a Zombie Tomb Raider, So This Is Perfectly Reasonable

There are gods in the world of Ghost Blowing the Lantern, and even in the same world view, there is more than one. I think the author should know what a ghost cave is if he searches it himself, and is he talking about science? Why does the protagonist act like he has only seen the ancient city of Jingjue?

If I am bitten by a general, I will go to the west to burn, kill, and plunder.

Fly to Hong Kong, shed blood to save people (the problem is too big), and develop the company (a bit off the main line). If the system hanging and storage space is not a fantasy novel, it is not easy to make it too large. A few cubic meters are enough (to hold some daily necessities and a few weapons and equipment, and a few high-quality cultural relics after robbing the tomb). It can provide help but cannot completely solve the problem. This way, it is not easy to deviate from the main line, and it will not steal the spotlight from the protagonist. Otherwise, the force is invincible and there are tens of thousands of cubic meters of space. Once the tomb is looted, wealth will be free when you come out, and there will be no motivation.

The author of the deadlock is really stubborn. The story of the deadlock itself is full of bugs. If you are not good at it, don't try to embed it. It's better to sew the Tomb Raider Notes in than to make a blind date.

In the world view of Gui Blowing the Lamp, there is more than one god. ·Snake God: Underneath the ghost cave in the ancient city of Jingjue. · Big Meat: From "Jiuyou General", the ancient god enshrined in the Golden Ancient Kingdom can control illusions, possess corpses and resurrect souls. · Entropy: From "The Kingdom of Mysteries", one of the two gods worshiped by snake worshipers. It can distort time, create "time boxes" and hallucinations. · Guifang Strange Tree: From "Nuo Shen", the god worshiped by Guifang Ancient Kingdom has the power to destroy the world by "exterminating Yin and Yang and reopening the world." ·Nine-Headed Insect: From "The Endless Wonderland", the god believed by the Quanrong people can reverse cause and effect and go back time. · Door: From "Absolute Loop", insects that feed on time and space can distort time and space. · Tree of Life: From "Chasing Bandits in the Tiankeng", it has the power to cause a time vortex. Compared with these real "ancient gods", although the Xianwang Corpse Cave, Pangu Corpse Moss, etc. That appear in the book are also top-level monsters, their levels are much lower, and they can only be regarded as "entry-level" powerhouses.

If you basically have a deadlock, you can't help but regard him as the main line, and then it will definitely be unfinished.

After reading the updated chapters, I was a little speechless. I was still determined to join the world of deadlock. I didn't know what the plot was. To be honest, it is easy for a book mixed with deadlock to be unfinished, because the show itself has all kinds of bugs and twists, all kinds of annihilation and reset timelines, and the combat power is easy to collapse in the later period. In my opinion, the person who can write about this world is the long-legged Ma Xiaoling, but the author's book has not had a female protagonist so far. What's the point? Second, it was a mistake to say that he was in line with Queen Jingjue, but now it seems that he has no sense of existence except for the occasional appearance of water, which has no effect, and his character has not been well-shaped Third, it is 2026 now, not 2006, and it is just a small plot occasionally. It is really boring to write too much. If someone at home still watches TV, it will be annoying to watch it every day Fourth, as you said yourself, there is no guarantee of loyalty in developing bloodline subordinates. At first, they were developed in the hospital, and later they were rescued from overseas and developed by old men. They were all men and had their own families. So the question is, facing you, the so-called master and family, how do you choose the other party? You, the master, have no blood pressure on him. The other party can develop himself behind your back, and finally collude with foreign enemies to betray you.

First of all, I feel that this needs to be clarified. Is there any way to enter the Zombie World? I haven't seen the relevant plot yet, but my personal opinions and suggestions are not to sew it. The best way is to add a prologue patch at the beginning, or modify the first chapter. Let's say that the protagonist first travels to the Zombie World, and then happens to be bitten by the general, and then awakens the golden finger. This golden finger can be recharged with Yin Qi to strengthen himself. Ability, as well as traveling through the world. The protagonist used the shuttle opportunity given by the novice gift package and came to this fusion world The second question is the ability improvement problem. Since the ability of rigid contract is used, the way people improve their abilities should not be changed. They rely on love to improve their abilities. If you can't write about women and don't want to write about it, you can either rely on golden fingers to absorb Yin Qi to improve as I said above, or another book Those who have written about similar zombies have written about improving sex, recruiting more women, turning them into the next generation and then taking them into the crotch. Love is not something you talk about, you can just say it in one stroke if you are afraid of being killed The third question, I think finding a dying person to become a subordinate, resurrecting the Queen of Jingjue, and turning this old man into a subordinate in the latest chapter are all failures For the first subordinate, there is nothing wrong with trying to make him a loyal subordinate. It is necessary to go through such trouble, and a man who has nothing to do with you. Since he sewed some Hong Kong women into it, he directly sewed a little Jew into it, and then accepted her as a harem and let her manage the business in Hong Kong. She can cure her illness or cure her grandmother. She can do anything. I think it is too small to sew in a few other heroines of the plot. Isn't this person who is my pillow more loyal than you? If you recruit outsiders as your subordinates now, even if you are loyal at first, what will happen next? They all have their own homes and families behind them. Your essence and blood are not some brainwashing loyalty plug-in. Even if you don't betray, if you stand for you, the so-called master, or for the family, how will he deviate? The same goes for Queen Jingjue, what are you doing? Does she have a strong body odor after being over 2,000 years old? According to the original work, she is not a good person, she is just a puppet. No one believes this, there is no need, unless it is for the sake of income in the harem Another problem is that the protagonist hides it from Lao Hu and they absorb Yin Qi. In my opinion, it is also a problem. Also why haven't I played the pre-dungeon of Jingjue Ancient City? Where did your notebook come from without making a front-end copy? The plot of Kunlun Mountain is missing, right?

The last four or five chapters are basically a retelling of the original work. What do you want to do, author?

Being cursed, Shirley Yang didn't know what was going on 😥😥😥

This writing level needs to be improved! Don't apply mechanically

Overall it's pretty good, and some details can be seen. The author should have seen "Ghost Blows Out the Lamp", but the snowy mountain plot was skipped directly, and skipping it meant skipping it. Also, did the author want to incorporate "I Have a Date with a Zombie" into it? And Jiang Chen's Hou Yi. Written this way, it feels a lot different, but not very similar, because the protagonist has been to Hong Kong. If it were a world where I had a date with a zombie, I would have noticed that it was a zombie or a Taoist priest, but it felt like the protagonist had no feelings. That's a parallel world. Otherwise, if people are saving and destroying the world in Hong Kong, and you're digging graves in the mainland, that's nonsense.

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Why does your protagonist's name keep changing? Yu Qian, Yu Xian, Yu Qian

The writing feels quite good, but it was brought down by the Sewing and Tomb Raiders. At least my expectations have been rising since I read Jinjingjue... I look forward to finishing the book with 2 million+ words. Take my full subscription and the leader as proof (I won't post it for those above the hall leader, most of them are black history)

The main character is a zombie and you still talk about science? You zombies are the biggest unscientific.

Pure begging

Waiting for a soft-hearted god

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Don't say you are a zombie, even if you are, Shi Lime, I just want to ask, single female protagonist, or multiple female protagonists, if you write a eunuch novel, please make it clear in the tag.

Is this considered a fan of a fan? Is it interesting?

I haven't read Ghost Blowing the Lamp, so I don't know if the original work is like this or something else. This book is full of one long dialogue, not divided into paragraphs, and it's really uncomfortable to read. Also, the main character's name was wrong and not changed.

Crush it all the way and finish it in one puff. .

What is it about? In Chapter 206, the protagonist's name changed again.

Why do I feel like everything I see is half of it? Especially after dozens of chapters?

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I read a little I don't know if the writing is good It was uncomfortable to read The sections are too dense

It only represents my personal sense: there is a strong sense of dislocation, and the protagonist's worries are too great in the text. The world view style is not harmonious and balanced enough. The main character is not likable enough. It's a lot like watching a cheating adventure story. Short, flat and fast. Not enough depth. Once you see it, forget it.