Longevity Martial Arts: I Have a Blackwater Snake Clone

The author should dig deeper into the protagonist's character, it's too hypocritical and contrived. From the beginning to the end, everyone was kind to him when he was weak, and he repaid them with similar small favors when he grew up. If nothing else, Le Congtian is just a tool man. He has been a friend for decades. If he gives birth to a child and takes the protagonist as his adoptive husband, is he following the trend? He also allowed his younger brother to mock him, haha! After the protagonist gains momentum, everyone who approaches him is a snobbery! Well, Huang Shanshan, you accepted investment from your father when you were weak, and you blame Le Congtian for bringing her to see you. Then Zhang Fan has become your little brother and is convinced, so he has to jump out and challenge you when you become the son of destiny? Does it feel good to write like this or is it just pretentious? The book is a good book, and the plot and progression of the story are very good, but the main character is neither positive nor negative, hypocritical, delicate, and contrived. Everything is fine, but people's hearts are too bad, and they are very angry! The story kept me watching for more than half of it, and the protagonist's behavior behind it made me really unable to follow it.

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Do you have any misunderstandings about Gou Dao? Gou Dao is someone who does not stand out and does not seek the limelight. He will eradicate the root of any problem. If you don't use a good weapon to kill someone with a borrowed knife, aren't you afraid that he will be killed in reverse? This is forcing oneself to suppress one's intelligence and being irresponsible for one's own life. They don't even feel good about you, and they want to kill you if they feel even the slightest bit bad about you. You are a Taliban traveler, Mai. You don't feel anything when you read it. You kill people at every turn, and you don't even feel that you have the outlook on life and values ​​that a normal person would have if he traveled through a few days and decades.

The biggest highlight of the article is that the protagonist's avatar wears a vest, which sets requirements for the personality of each avatar. The plot emotions brought by different identities, personalities and experiences are particularly attractive. But in the latest chapter, has Bo Qing's character collapsed? He also laughed and made other martial saints laugh with his shocking words. . . . When I saw this, I almost picked up the knife and cursed him for being possessed by a monster. Seriously, isn't the ruthless setting a cool guy with a cold face and a fierce fighting spirit? Want to cry.

Now this plot has been stuck at a stage. The dormant growth of the demon body cannot be changed, nor can Bo Qingzhan's high concerns be changed. The most critical main body is the time for sharpness (under the suppression of the Rebellion Holy Formation). Tang Tianlong was assassinated by the demon clan. Didn't the Daxuan Dynasty want to frame Hong Yuan's main body? The main body also learned the quasi-emperor method given by Fengyuan Great Sage. Isn't this all set up for the conflict? Let's start wearing special clothes and killing. Under the Rebellion Holy Formation, Hong Yuan I ruled the roost, with one man and ten thousand troops (bees) overwhelming the Daxuan Dynasty. Put it on! Fire it up! The boring transition period will only make more people choose to keep books, and it would be too embarrassing to keep them to death.

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I don't know why the author deliberately overpowers the protagonist even though it's just a novice and the external hexagrams are written so well.

Come on, author! I have been following this book "The Martial Arts of Immortality: I Have a Black Water Snake Clone". The character of the protagonist in this book is perfect, but there is no heroine. I hope she can add it in the future.

The early stage was fine, but the later stage was a mess. He's a clone, he's a Gu, he's a blacksmith, he's a swordsman, he's a waterman, he doesn't even know what he's majoring in.

It's enough to write only one clone and proficiency panel, there is no priority. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is hard to describe in one sentence, and he has no personal charm at all. As a reader, I want to step on him a few times. . .