Lord Harland

Died in Chapter 41. After buying a slave, the status will be restored after 5 years, and the land will be distributed equally to each person, regardless of age or age, with 5 acres of land. And the land is being reclaimed bit by bit. I don't know how much can be reclaimed in 5 years. You are more Lei Feng than Lei Feng

Your opinions are opinions, but please don't destroy the books I want to read. Try to stop reading.

A force that starts from scratch and comes from the bottom has a weak backbone but strong cohesion and can withstand risks. In addition, the lord starts in a few steps at the beginning, and then comes to nothing. With the resources delivered by express delivery, the heroes defect to recruit, and the game has a strong sense of visual immediacy. Farming and development in the family stream are definitely a clean slate, and the road is paved by family members. The foundation is solid and stable. Evergreen is a classic, and it's really rare to see a family story in a Western fantasy setting.

The King was not enough to read, and the book was recommended by others. It turned out to be a bit intellectually depressing at first glance. Prices collapsed, territorial development collapsed, and later even the gold finger collapsed. There was also a group of people wearing it. They were obviously still minions who insisted on doing something different. I didn't understand. Others charge 70% of the tax, but you have to charge 30%. The slaves bought by other nobles can be used casually, but the pig's feet have to work for 5 years to upgrade them all to free citizens. It is a complete intellectual reduction. The author should write upgrading and exciting articles. Farming data flow is not suitable for you. Farming flow at least requires reasonable data, and it is easy to be criticized by old readers like me.

1. I don't know why the author wants to cancel the golden finger. Originally, when writing a novel, the protagonist must be extraordinary. Otherwise, why does the protagonist rise if others don't rise? The golden finger is a good attraction and reason. If it is just to suppress the realm, it can be like playing a game. It can reach a certain level and the experience value that needs to be upgraded is increased. The total experience gained in a battle is enough. There is no need to write too detailed. I think this setting will be better. After all, every reader likes to be the protagonist. Explaining the reason for the golden finger is not necessary for a reader like me. Instead, I hope that the protagonist has a golden finger to be unique; 2. I don't know why group dressing is required. Most people who read time travel novels hate group dressing. This is a poisonous point. It is equivalent to the director inexplicably using one male, two male and three male characters to steal the protagonist. It can easily make everyone disgusted and abandon the book.

I fell down on Chapter 43 and couldn't stand it. Why was this heroine added? It can't be written without a heroine, right? What the heroine added was really disgusting. She was just licking for the sake of licking. When I saw that, I could guess that this girl would definitely become the heroine. I felt that just starting to lick like crazy didn't feel very demeaning? The previous ones are all fine, and some of the poisonous points can be ignored, but this is the only one where I really can't stand it, and I feel sick. The next few pictures take the dog-licking to the extreme. The author wishes the protagonist could kneel in front of Sophia and lick her soles. Then Sophia stepped on the protagonist's head, and the protagonist wagged his tail. It was really unbearable. Can't he survive by practicing alone? I had to add a girl, and she had to lick it. In my opinion, the level of discomfort is second only to Ziyang's cuckold playing the flute 😰

As for the materials that the protagonist's territory can produce, the prices are extremely low. In order to suppress the protagonist's rise, they do everything they can to completely violate the laws of economics. What is this? This is a reflection of low plot design and data design capabilities.

Call the protagonist smart, but I always feel like his brain is stuck. You could call him a fool, but the supporting characters all thought he was brave and resourceful, and they all believed in him. To be honest, except for the positive attitude, I didn't see the protagonist using his brain at all. You are the defender and have nearly three years to prepare! What do you think, you can only build castles? The road to the north is so long, should it be reserved for the orcs' spring outing? Well, building a fort is the foundation of your life. But after being defeated, he actually stopped cultivating and went to develop the economy! Is there any difference between a city wall that is 13 meters high and a city wall that is 20 meters or 30 meters high? Let's talk about the setting issue. Previously, there were only 10,000 to 20,000 people in total, and nearly one-tenth of the population was recruited, which is equivalent to recruiting one for every two households. The tide of beasts occurs almost every three years. A defensive counterattack requires hundreds of casualties. How many more times will the orcs fight? You have three territories in total, and there is a lot of space to defend. How much will be lost in a beast wave? Coupled with all kinds of support and rescue, Xie J once again killed and injured hundreds of people. Even if you plunder a little of your property, it will only take three rounds, and every household of your people will have to hang a white cloth. How many people must be plundered to make up for the consumption? The people below are widowed when they get married. I died as soon as I became a free citizen. Is the pie you drew useful? And the protagonist is so awesome and looks like this. How did those weak barons survive in the North for hundreds of years?

Author, prices are about to collapse. How can sugar cost three copper coins per pound? Even the cheapest modern sugar costs three or four yuan per pound, let alone ancient sugar. Ancient sugar was eaten by nobles. Your bread only costs a few copper coins. How come sugar is so cheap?

After reading 50 chapters, there is basically no problem that the protagonist's IQ is not online, and it is considered to be stable, but there are a few main problems: The most important ① The writing is simple, like a narrative expository essay. The entire chapter is unremarkable, with no emotional fluctuations, no side descriptions (psychological descriptions, etc.), And even the entire novel consists of a few chapters and a few dialogues. You can change the name to "Documentary: Lord Harland" (Want to be like the Crazy Lich?) ② There is no "supporting role" and no sense of existence. It is even better not to write it if it is written!! For example: the author wrote about the death of the second brother, and the protagonist was sad for several days. If he didn't write about the second brother, I wouldn't have known that such a person existed, so why was he sad? Is there any problem with his death (hydrology?), And what insights and improvements did the protagonist have? Is it just to show the danger and tragedy of the battlefield? It's better not to write!! There is no little brother next to the protagonist. This is not an adventure novel (even in adventure novels, there is a ten thousand year old Pikachu among Pokemon)!! Isn't there a little brother who is trustworthy or has a deep memory by your side in the middle ages of another world? There is no contradiction, conflict is fatal, there is no interaction and contrast! Let readers just want to read the article quickly. Is this an advantage or disadvantage? ③ It can be seen that the author is not very good at writing system articles (indeed, many people say that it is not easy to be recommended if you don't write about systems). The value added by the system each time it is upgraded is not clear and not intuitive enough. It even makes me feel that there is any difference between adding points and not adding points (big taboo: adding points, but trying to dilute the sense of the system's existence). The author can read how the cool article "Da Touch" written by the first few dark blues who added points at the starting point (for a while, I really felt good reading this kind of article). ④ The points that can easily cause misunderstandings are, first of all, price can be eliminated (I don't want to make a cliché: I have never seen prices in fantasy and otherworldly literature that are not stable); Then the slave tax is 30%. I don't know what I think. Don't slaves only need to produce? (The black man was furious) The slaves got the seventh floor instead. How much agricultural tax did the free farmers charge? Others have also talked about the issue of slave liberation, so I won't mention it. ⑤If you really don't know how to write about a female protagonist, don't write about it. This book is a "narrative". The heroine suddenly pops up. When we meet the protagonist, she bows and apologizes in a nonsensical way (Am I the eldest brother?), Which makes me feel awkward. ⑥