Disaster Strikes

It's quite ordinary. It's a routine from ten years ago, team combat, a lot of space about setting, positive characters, and a little bit of poison from time to time. I don't understand how the author dares to do it. Even if you look at the rankings, you will know that the one who writes about the best team performance only dares to arrange a dog or a cow as a teammate. The advantage is that he can appreciate the elegance of different worlds.

I couldn't stand it until I reached the third chapter. The protagonist's silence when being robbed of his bed could be said to be wise, but when his teammates were bullied, they cowered even if someone took the lead in resisting, and he despised the captain for not daring to resist. His cowardice and double standards made me quickly lose interest in reading. As a protagonist, he was too "sensible".

Is there an egret? There is a saying that it is easier to succeed than to fumble in the dark by listening to others' advice and working hard in the field you are good at. For example, I don't know if the author has read "I Am God". After this author became popular when he wrote "Low Dimensional Game", he resolutely gave up what he was good at in order to become a god and chose to write traditional fantasy and immortality novels. Not surprisingly, he was praised directly. Later, after being persuaded by countless readers, I returned to what I was good at and wrote a book called "I Am God" which became very popular. The most recent "I Am Immortal" even entered the top ten on the monthly ticket list. It can be seen that choice is more important than hard work. Your "The Wizard's Journey" is definitely a magical book. It achieved such good results at that time, and it can be said to be a novel that is not outdated at all now. I suggest writing a wizard-like novel after this book. If the outside changes, but the core remains the same, it will be OK. Even if it is a traditional magician, it will be fine personally.

Briefly review the history of macro wizards The ancestors of the original world competed with the sea people for hegemony. After winning, they officially changed their name to wizard civilization. The first war of civilization fought against the alien nightmare civilization. Elemental wizards came on the stage and turned the alien nightmare world into a back garden. The elemental system began to lead the wizard world The second war of civilization fought against the abyss, and was beaten by the abyss and fled. Antonio became the second civilization The protagonist of the war sacrificed himself to escape from the wizard world. When he arrived at the new world community, the old black witch led the cleanup of the abyss dragons and demonized creatures left behind in the abyss, leaving behind the underground abyss academy. The abyss body refining wizard appeared. The seventeen-round true spirit Prometheus proposed a demon hunting expedition plan. The six-ring true spirit six-ring alga cleaned up the remaining abyss moss in the wizard world. The wizard world was united like never before. The elemental wizard body system leads the wizard world In the third war of civilization, wizards first learned from the war of alien nightmare civilizations and then gave birth to the nightmare wizard system. In the new world community, the war started with the newly born indigenous metal destroyer civilization. As the protagonist of the third war of civilization, under the leadership of the real spirit, the wizard civilization defeated the metal destroyer civilization and officially renamed the world community to the wizard world community. The last link entered the eternal nursing home. A handsome boy has quietly disappeared After quietly developing, the elemental system declined. After unification, Skynet wizards were created. Abyss body-refining wizards and mechanical wizards began to rise. Then came the birth of the first generation of wizard kings. They integrated the wizarding world that was constantly fighting among themselves and developed sea wizards. Then they started the first step of the demon hunting expedition, clearing a road to the abyss civilization, which triggered the fourth war of civilization The fourth war of civilization, the protagonist of the war As the first generation of wizard kings, he defeated the wizard civilization in a crushing battle with the dark world community. The mechanical wizard system first showed its strength and began to lead the wizard civilization The fifth war of civilization started suddenly, and the war with the chaotic world community began, and the wizard civilization also defeated it in a crushing manner. At this point, the wizard civilization commanded the three world communities, and the potential of civilization was fully realized. After the war, the first generation gave way, and the second generation wizard king came to the world with a round of true spirit. Absolute advantage and strong succession, the mechanical system reaches the top The Sixth Wizarding War is the revenge of the Abyss Civilization. The protagonists of the civilized war are the Mechanical One Wheel and the Mechanical Seventeenth Wheel. The Abyss Civilization is at war with more than 30 world communities at the same time. The Abyss Wizard battlefield is only a small part of the combat power of the Abyss. It is also correct to win the local war of the Abyss with a greater advantage when most of the wizarding world's civilization heritage is revealed. It was the defeat of this war that made the Abyss Civilization give up the Void Horizon plan and choose to move to higher latitudes by marching into the dimensional esophagus. Finally, the wizarding world community returned to the original world community, and the heart of the world was saved. The second generation of wizard kings stepped down, and the third generation of wizard kings Andersen Seymour came to power. The false protagonist, the first generation of wizard kings, ascended to seize the white egret, and the writing level declined. The real pig-footed uncrowned wizard king Lao Hei continued to rule the wizarding world, and wizard literature Ming's story is still going on. After defeating the Abyss Civilization, the Abyss Body Refining Wizard System has begun to take shape. The financial rule system may collapse at any time. After losing the demon hunting expedition plan, whether the three generations of Witch King Antu Seymour can lead the declining elemental system to compete with the mechanical wizard system and the Abyss Body Refining Wizard System in its period of strength. Everything is in the second part: the old coward Sea King Festival waits and sees Lao Yin's journey with the bloodthirsty three-star cruel Lao Hei.

Let's write a plot similar to the wizard's journey in the next book, changing civilizations and starting a dimensional hegemony. Much more popular than this. You need to know what you're writing about that's popular and who your audience is. If it's a hobby, then feel free to write. If you want to make money, then you have to restart your old business to cater to your audience.

What impressed me most about Bai Luda's novels were the strict rules, the wonderful world, and the cold cosmic order. I don't know why I chose vulgar, routine-based interpersonal interactions in this book. The tutor's concern for Chen Mo (the library scene) has a abrupt turn, with obvious deliberate guidance from the author. There are also some other trivial problems that lead to a poor viewing experience. The plot from entering the academy to using the small top to fight back almost made me lose my desire to watch. Let's just say that if you don't know how Chen Mo can narrow the gap with others, you don't have to write about other people's bribes. After all, I really can't figure out how to catch up with them. Although it may seem ill-considered, it is not so unreasonable. If you insist on writing, at least think twice about this major progress. How should I put it, although I like Bailu's book very much, the first few chapters of this book almost persuaded me to quit. I will continue to read it, but I still hope that I can find time to revise it in the future. (In the past, I didn't understand why others would find fault with the novel, but now I know that it feels so uncomfortable to open the lid of a long-awaited feast and find it is sloppy)

I don't want to say anything, but the author's usual novice writing style is still criticized by some people for the rigid setting of the writing style. I suggest you lock in the author and write a damage calculation formula in one or two hundred words of calculation process. I am afraid that the readers have not graduated from elementary school mathematics, right? The main thing is that the abrupt setting is really disgusting. The plot has no connection and is set up in sections at once. I feel that it is better to find a student from high school to write than the author who knows how to throw out the setting. I can find a book written more than ten years ago, and the writing is smoother than the author's. Going to the undergraduate college can only be described as a bland and tasteless drink. This is a drink that makes your mouth full of sand.

I'm quite disappointed. Is the account sold? This is what I wrote. . Is it written by the same person as Journey of the Wizard and Bewitching the Demon King😥

It makes sense to write so many things and still have such poor results. The positive feedback from this book is too poor. The protagonist practices all these things and is a powerful profession and spends n times more time than others to practice. However, in a fight, it is difficult to fight and there is no leading edge. There is no point of view in the system. The growth curve and difficulty are very inconsistent. After practicing so much, he is still a useless little Karami.

It's unreasonable that Egret's level is not that of a master.