Disaster Strikes

Toxic... The first chapter at the beginning gave me high expectations Then I was directly shocked The most earthy character conflict, unattractive supporting characters, inexplicable skill settings and numerical flow Is this... Selling out?

Not to mention the problem of finding mosquito repellent on earth in a different world at the beginning, there are also some strange psychological descriptions in the middle. For example, the protagonist says that he wants to be admired by women, and then writes that he does not want to have too much to do with them to cause them to like him. When it was put on the shelves, the author said that the protagonist's period as a level 1 natural disaster victim was a period of refreshing writing. As a result, Tiantian was almost killed when we read Chapter 185. The protagonist could only hug her and say that you have to support similar NPCs to speak. In the end, he saved her life by killing the boss and feeding her the essence potion. The most embarrassing thing was that the protagonist was still on guard against him. When you put it on the shelves, you told the readers that the protagonist of the cool article turned out to be an NPC character. The number one team member you selected was almost killed, so you could only scream sweetly and hug her, but there was nothing you could do, right? I can only say that the author's pleasure and the reader's pleasure are indeed different. Anyway, this episode seemed to me like a plot about suffering, and the main theme is incompetence. It's not like I didn't get addicted before, but I managed to endure it and thought it would get better and better. As a result, when I saw 185 today, I was really stunned. You said that one's character will soon be ruined as soon as one work is done, which is true.

Although this book feels a bit like an online game at first, it feels really good as it gets better. It's time to replenish your tickets.

I saw the latest updated chapters in one go, and I am looking forward to the subsequent updates. I decided to catch up and replenish my tickets depending on the situation. After more than 500 chapters, the amount of information in the text is much higher, the content of the article is much more substantial, the setting is a bit complicated but still quite interesting, and the writing structure has gradually gained a sense of design. The main focus is still on the world view and novel settings, and there are occasionally some cool points. Although I like the later content very much, reading the first chapters is really a pain. If you are not an old fan and it is really difficult to persevere, I must complain: Setting narration: more than rigorous but not efficient enough The description of the setting is too long and the text is not refined enough. Often the contents of several chapters only need to be summarized in a few sentences (fortunately, this is no longer the case). Reading it is like reading an instruction manual. It has neither story nor interest. It doesn't tell much, so it's painful to read. The solution I thought of: Narrative novels are based on stories, they are not essays. Therefore, you can write the story first and give an overview of the setting. When readers become interested in the setting, you can either reveal the foreshadowing of the setting or create another free chapter to describe the system framework. In short, there is no need to put the reader in God's perspective and tell the story straightforwardly. Writing these first, I personally feel that this is a flaw in the previous hundreds of chapters. If a suitable solution can be found, the popularity will be much higher, and I may add more later. Looking forward to the follow-up updates of Bailuda!

A guide for newcomers, mainly talking about the setting of this book: 1. An independent and complete worldview system, unfolded from the perspective of the protagonist, including this world, another world, world communities, and dimensional gaps (detailed settings can be transferred to the novel The Witcher's Journey) 2. The protagonist upgrades slowly, and there will be a lot of foundation work, preparing a lot for the future peak 3. The main theme of world war, war is usually the main theme between worlds, and there are also cases of subordination and cooperation, but the main theme is expansion and war. There are various means of war, and the general process is divided into positioning, erosion, structural stabilization, violent force means, local war, and total war. For an invaded world, failure would be the end of the world and the end of civilization. 4. The power system is diverse. Different worlds will breed different civilizations. The world setting determines the foundation of civilization, and the foundation of civilization determines the direction of the power system. 5. Only in the world can genius be born and grow, and genius changes the form and tone of the world of civilization. The form of civilization constitutes the worldview of individuals living in the world, and the level of power determines the aspects that different individuals come into contact with. In turn, when a master or god appears in a world, his rules and power forms will in turn affect many lives in the world. 6. In this book, it seems that the high-level combat power and the will of the world are not of the same mind, and there have been several instances of high-level combat power defecting. 7. At the high-end power level, level 7 masters the law, and level 8 has authority. Authority is not simply a law reaching its limit, but something similar to representing kingship in the universe constructed using laws as materials. 8. To be continued

The power of this book is not bad, but I beg Bailu to stop using elementary school words such as being stunned and his eyelids twitching wildly. Really, as soon as these words come out, the character's character is instantly gone. {"NickName":"Author Bailu","UserId":190734863}

Without the sun or stars, without daylight or light, how can we see things in this world? That's outrageous. Can someone explain it to me? Otherwise it's really hard to put it into context 🙂

I feel like I can let the Scourges participate in the Holy Grail War. The Servants just happen to come from history. It fits very well.

I was completely confused by the dialogue between several characters from the beginning, and they even used the first pronoun, which made me even more confused.

It's quite ordinary. It's a routine from ten years ago, team combat, a lot of space about setting, positive characters, and a little bit of poison from time to time. I don't understand how the author dares to do it. Even if you look at the rankings, you will know that the one who writes about the best team performance only dares to arrange a dog or a cow as a teammate. The advantage is that he can appreciate the elegance of different worlds.

I couldn't stand it until I reached the third chapter. The protagonist's silence when being robbed of his bed could be said to be wise, but when his teammates were bullied, they cowered even if someone took the lead in resisting, and he despised the captain for not daring to resist. His cowardice and double standards made me quickly lose interest in reading. As a protagonist, he was too "sensible".

Is there an egret? There is a saying that it is easier to succeed than to fumble in the dark by listening to others' advice and working hard in the field you are good at. For example, I don't know if the author has read "I Am God". After this author became popular when he wrote "Low Dimensional Game", he resolutely gave up what he was good at in order to become a god and chose to write traditional fantasy and immortality novels. Not surprisingly, he was praised directly. Later, after being persuaded by countless readers, I returned to what I was good at and wrote a book called "I Am God" which became very popular. The most recent "I Am Immortal" even entered the top ten on the monthly ticket list. It can be seen that choice is more important than hard work. Your "The Wizard's Journey" is definitely a magical book. It achieved such good results at that time, and it can be said to be a novel that is not outdated at all now. I suggest writing a wizard-like novel after this book. If the outside changes, but the core remains the same, it will be OK. Even if it is a traditional magician, it will be fine personally.

Briefly review the history of macro wizards The ancestors of the original world competed with the sea people for hegemony. After winning, they officially changed their name to wizard civilization. The first war of civilization fought against the alien nightmare civilization. Elemental wizards came on the stage and turned the alien nightmare world into a back garden. The elemental system began to lead the wizard world The second war of civilization fought against the abyss, and was beaten by the abyss and fled. Antonio became the second civilization The protagonist of the war sacrificed himself to escape from the wizard world. When he arrived at the new world community, the old black witch led the cleanup of the abyss dragons and demonized creatures left behind in the abyss, leaving behind the underground abyss academy. The abyss body refining wizard appeared. The seventeen-round true spirit Prometheus proposed a demon hunting expedition plan. The six-ring true spirit six-ring alga cleaned up the remaining abyss moss in the wizard world. The wizard world was united like never before. The elemental wizard body system leads the wizard world In the third war of civilization, wizards first learned from the war of alien nightmare civilizations and then gave birth to the nightmare wizard system. In the new world community, the war started with the newly born indigenous metal destroyer civilization. As the protagonist of the third war of civilization, under the leadership of the real spirit, the wizard civilization defeated the metal destroyer civilization and officially renamed the world community to the wizard world community. The last link entered the eternal nursing home. A handsome boy has quietly disappeared After quietly developing, the elemental system declined. After unification, Skynet wizards were created. Abyss body-refining wizards and mechanical wizards began to rise. Then came the birth of the first generation of wizard kings. They integrated the wizarding world that was constantly fighting among themselves and developed sea wizards. Then they started the first step of the demon hunting expedition, clearing a road to the abyss civilization, which triggered the fourth war of civilization The fourth war of civilization, the protagonist of the war As the first generation of wizard kings, he defeated the wizard civilization in a crushing battle with the dark world community. The mechanical wizard system first showed its strength and began to lead the wizard civilization The fifth war of civilization started suddenly, and the war with the chaotic world community began, and the wizard civilization also defeated it in a crushing manner. At this point, the wizard civilization commanded the three world communities, and the potential of civilization was fully realized. After the war, the first generation gave way, and the second generation wizard king came to the world with a round of true spirit. Absolute advantage and strong succession, the mechanical system reaches the top The Sixth Wizarding War is the revenge of the Abyss Civilization. The protagonists of the civilized war are the Mechanical One Wheel and the Mechanical Seventeenth Wheel. The Abyss Civilization is at war with more than 30 world communities at the same time. The Abyss Wizard battlefield is only a small part of the combat power of the Abyss. It is also correct to win the local war of the Abyss with a greater advantage when most of the wizarding world's civilization heritage is revealed. It was the defeat of this war that made the Abyss Civilization give up the Void Horizon plan and choose to move to higher latitudes by marching into the dimensional esophagus. Finally, the wizarding world community returned to the original world community, and the heart of the world was saved. The second generation of wizard kings stepped down, and the third generation of wizard kings Andersen Seymour came to power. The false protagonist, the first generation of wizard kings, ascended to seize the white egret, and the writing level declined. The real pig-footed uncrowned wizard king Lao Hei continued to rule the wizarding world, and wizard literature Ming's story is still going on. After defeating the Abyss Civilization, the Abyss Body Refining Wizard System has begun to take shape. The financial rule system may collapse at any time. After losing the demon hunting expedition plan, whether the three generations of Witch King Antu Seymour can lead the declining elemental system to compete with the mechanical wizard system and the Abyss Body Refining Wizard System in its period of strength. Everything is in the second part: the old coward Sea King Festival waits and sees Lao Yin's journey with the bloodthirsty three-star cruel Lao Hei.

Let's write a plot similar to the wizard's journey in the next book, changing civilizations and starting a dimensional hegemony. Much more popular than this. You need to know what you're writing about that's popular and who your audience is. If it's a hobby, then feel free to write. If you want to make money, then you have to restart your old business to cater to your audience.

What impressed me most about Bai Luda's novels were the strict rules, the wonderful world, and the cold cosmic order. I don't know why I chose vulgar, routine-based interpersonal interactions in this book. The tutor's concern for Chen Mo (the library scene) has a abrupt turn, with obvious deliberate guidance from the author. There are also some other trivial problems that lead to a poor viewing experience. The plot from entering the academy to using the small top to fight back almost made me lose my desire to watch. Let's just say that if you don't know how Chen Mo can narrow the gap with others, you don't have to write about other people's bribes. After all, I really can't figure out how to catch up with them. Although it may seem ill-considered, it is not so unreasonable. If you insist on writing, at least think twice about this major progress. How should I put it, although I like Bailu's book very much, the first few chapters of this book almost persuaded me to quit. I will continue to read it, but I still hope that I can find time to revise it in the future. (In the past, I didn't understand why others would find fault with the novel, but now I know that it feels so uncomfortable to open the lid of a long-awaited feast and find it is sloppy)

I don't want to say anything, but the author's usual novice writing style is still criticized by some people for the rigid setting of the writing style. I suggest you lock in the author and write a damage calculation formula in one or two hundred words of calculation process. I am afraid that the readers have not graduated from elementary school mathematics, right? The main thing is that the abrupt setting is really disgusting. The plot has no connection and is set up in sections at once. I feel that it is better to find a student from high school to write than the author who knows how to throw out the setting. I can find a book written more than ten years ago, and the writing is smoother than the author's. Going to the undergraduate college can only be described as a bland and tasteless drink. This is a drink that makes your mouth full of sand.

I'm quite disappointed. Is the account sold? This is what I wrote. . Is it written by the same person as Journey of the Wizard and Bewitching the Demon King😥

It makes sense to write so many things and still have such poor results. The positive feedback from this book is too poor. The protagonist practices all these things and is a powerful profession and spends n times more time than others to practice. However, in a fight, it is difficult to fight and there is no leading edge. There is no point of view in the system. The growth curve and difficulty are very inconsistent. After practicing so much, he is still a useless little Karami.

It's unreasonable that Egret's level is not that of a master.

The more I read this book, the more awkward it became. This book has very twisted values. If you are completely focused on profit, I can accept it. For the sake of growth and profit, you will do whatever it takes, such as Zhenren Gu or Zhenxian Haoyu. Or if you are kind and keep the rules, you are not trying to become a saint, but you are maintaining something and having a unified value system. But this book uses the greatest malice in the underlying logic of morality, using all kinds of lies, hypocritical performances, and cruel killings to deceive and harm the target, and then constantly exaggerates kindness and good people are rewarded. This kind of conflicting values ​​disgusts me. The protagonist is really a cruel and hypocritical person.

It has been going downhill since the Witcher's Journey. The first book was obviously a success, and even the imitators made a lot of money. The Knight's Journey, Lord of Ashes, made a lot of money, but as the creator, it was not as good as it was.

There are more than 360 comments, and 300 of them are saying that the author is on the decline and is going to quit. Among the remaining 60 comments, ten of them are refuted by the so-called die-hard fans. I don't want to say anything. I will express my personal opinion. It is tasteless and there is no regret in discarding it. It's just so so! There's no sense of excitement, there's no story, and I can't even pass the time.

It can only be said that the journey of the wizard is the pinnacle of your life, although the writing of the wizard in the later period was also terrible.

Forcibly gathering skills has always suppressed the protagonist's combat power. After advancing to the first level, there are a lot of data and damage calculations, and the protagonist's character keeps changing: one moment he calls himself a wise man and has everything in mind, and the next moment he looks like an idiot. First he is plotted by others, and then he suddenly realizes that he "feels uncontrollable and dare not be his captain." He daydreams about being a "captain" all day long, and wants to be included in the team whenever he sees someone. I wanted to shape the protagonist into a qualified captain, but what I wrote was an idiot with low strength, complex skills, various equipment, high and low intelligence, a precarious life, no responsibility, no brains, no plan for himself, lack of courage, and overwhelming self-confidence. After being bullied, he swallowed his anger and comforted himself by "revenge him in the future", so when others took advantage of his interests, he didn't even dare to die. In the end, he relied on the author to arrange an accident for him and was killed by others. Having a time traveler talent is the biggest loophole. Don't others know the speed of time in another world and this world? You stay there for hundreds of days and three or four days have passed since you came back. As a result, others have no doubts. They can't calculate how long you stayed there and how many points you need? If you have a talent, but you don't take advantage of it, you will have extra time to practice boy skills, live in seclusion, and live in a dirty and messy room. There is a beautiful woman next door, you fall in love with her again, and then you reject her cruelly. . . It's the same plot every time, not very strong, but pretty cool to play. During the few days to half a month during the mission, you went crazy killing monsters and leveling up. After a few hundred days of extra talent, are you still living a normal life? I no longer have the desire to complain. I have read your wizard before, and I was looking forward to it, thinking it was a good article, but the more I read, the more I was fed💩.

The squad system is the biggest flaw of this book. I wonder why in a world with such a high mortality rate, it's not funny to have such a high penalty for dying a teammate 😅😅😅😅

If not, then write the prequel to The Witcher Journey. In the wizarding world, the sea tribe dominates the world. . The rise of human ancestors. . Sea Clan Human Race War. . Dark Wizard The mechanical wizard system is established. . Unifying the Wizarding World Encountering the illusory world of nightmares for the first time, I can write about it until I am defeated by the abyss. . Forced to pry the wizarding world to escape

I think it's very interesting. Why do everyone say that the author seems to have exhausted all his talents?😅

If you write another book based on the truth research style of Grimm Beast, you can become popular again. Instead of writing a book that hits the street, you still miss the first generation of wizard kings who are full of Jie Jie Jie villain temperament.

What kind of thing is this written? It's a forced intellectual attack. The protagonist is a bit of a virgin, so it's better than Xiao Bai's novel.

Although I haven't read Egret's new book, I still cast my monthly vote. It's been a long time since I've come across a novel in Qidian that allows me to read paid chapters. I hope Bailu will return to his old profession in the next book. By the way, Egret, your idea of ​​world war is really great. I think you can completely integrate your previous experience in writing wizards and open up a new track in fairy tales. Immortal cultivators, like wizards, stand on the shoulders of their predecessors and develop their own unique skills and magic. Instead of the current conventional immortality novels, they only know how to practice the skills of the predecessors according to the script. Coupled with world wars, immortal cultivators colonized and plundered other worlds. If a wizard wears the skin of a cultivator, he will definitely have a large audience.