Farming and Building a Fief in Another World

If I am either going to fight or on the way to fight, I will give in and I will not be able to farm well.

Yongye has finally released a new book. Are there any who have been waiting for it since the last arcane book? Come and gather some!

The plot of the first chapter was a bit cliche and I almost missed it. The following content is really exciting, and there is no such bad routine as making gunpowder and queuing up to be shot. Pure magic farming, very good

How come no one reads such a beautiful book? Is this a free promotion?

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The poisonous point is that after 450 chapters, he is still a level 3 psion/mage. The leveling up is inexplicable and very disgusting. Moreover, the author also self-righteously explained in the article that there are two systems, so the upgrade is slow. The destiny milestone is of little use. Plant some fields because the protagonist is not even a level 10 extraordinary, and there are people everywhere trying to grab food. Then The protagonist moves reinforcements everywhere, which is very ridiculous. He needs to be tough in the fight without even explaining it clearly. The fighting is better than shit, and he wins inexplicably. It all depends on his teammates and equipment. To put it bluntly, he is still a noob. He only uses his professional skills in the early fights. In the end, it is impossible to tell what profession he is. He fights dragons at level 4 and demigods at level 6. Can you believe it? I don't know what he wrote, but there is a chapter about 400 years old, where he laughs at himself and says that he didn't deliberately suppress his level, so why are people and gods angry? After hearing this, I felt a little want to vomit.

I am considered an old reader. I have read more than fifty chapters. I would like to make some suggestions, as far as farming articles are concerned. 1. The author's narration cannot be said to be bad, it's pretty good. What I want to say is that if you want a book to be popular, the narrative must be detailed. For example, where does the protagonist take root in a rocky place and sleep? Field? Mine? The description of the living environment is poor, and the supplies and food provided are enough for how many people to eat for how many days? How many people can feed one cart of food? What tools are used for mining? Paw? Where did the tools come from? Where did the weapons and equipment come from? How many kobolds, old, weak, women and children are there? How many are adults? How far is it to go out to fight? How many people are there across the street? How many people do you have? In what type of terrain? Is there anyone watching over the house? How to solve the problem of soldiers' rations? All without description. 2. The description of the background history is not detailed enough. For example, there is no clear division between continental geography, forests, oceans, lakes, mountains, rivers, regional history and culture, the history of various tribes, the history of human empires, human forces and various human-like forces. There is no description at all, there is no room for imagination, and the story has no texture at all. 3. The framework and level of power should not be too high. The further you go, the more your combat power will collapse. Either there are as many saints as dogs, or there are god-level people all over the place. It is a bad routine. It is best not to have direct interaction with the gods. In farming articles, just farm, make money, equipment, and combat power. 4. The collapse of IQ. Don't write all your opponents as bad guys, which will make us readers look like bad guys. Creating an opponent with an online IQ is also an important means of characterizing the male protagonist, including No. 1, No. 2, No. 3, Or any unimportant character. We are all intelligent beings. If you judge others as bad guys, you are smart. You always scheme against others. Why can't others scheme against you? Why do so many people follow Feng Huo Xue Zhong and Jian Lai? 5. The character dialogue should be in-depth. Some words do not need to be written too straightforwardly. You can add a bit of cunning and humorous personality of the appropriate characters to make the readers feel less boring and boring. 6. The hierarchical framework of war, small, medium, large wars, equipment, logistics, strong fighting races, weak races, flying races, commanders need to have a clear description. A hundred well-equipped kobolds will never be able to defeat a hundred ogres. Appropriate battlefield reversal is also very important. Don't push it like a novice. You can learn from Jing Guan's "Beast's Blood Boils". 7. It is not easy for readers to recognize the author's work, it is not easy to stand out in so many novels, and life is even more difficult.

Can anyone recommend some novels with plots similar to this book?

When I saw that the protagonist spanned three territories, and even a carpenter could beat him when he went to a poor village and had to endure hardships, I knew that this book should be abandoned.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing more than 450 chapters. The title of the book talks about farming, pure fraud, and the combat is better than the one in the book. Fighting dragons at level 4, and fighting demigods at level 8. Keep leveling up, euphemistically called dual systems, levels are useless, and then I almost let the opponent kill me with the finger of death. From the beginning to the end, I change the map, cause trouble, ask for help, and then insist that the levels are useless. One chapter has fourteen pages, and seven pages contain data. Being an online author is really easy, just post the data 😄

The first fan picture, my heart is trembling with excitement and my hands are shaking! ! !

Picture 1 is the entire map of Faerûn (it has high definition, but the starting point cannot be transferred). The blue area is the "Northland" area, and the red area is "Tethyr". Picture 2 is a clear picture of the Tethyr region Picture 3 is the Northland region

The writing line is good, but the stallion is really a negative. Forget about one or two. 90% Of the better partners are women. What the hell is it that they are having an affair with? . .

Dear book friends, hello, welcome to read this book. If you have learned about this book through some channels but have not read it yet and are ready to read the comment area, I sincerely hope that you can turn off paragraph comments and read the first three chapters of this book. Because different people have different definitions of poisonous points, which leads to different views on different contents. And because they think the book is well-written, they generally don't leave comments in the comment area to praise it. This leads to a situation where the comment area is likely to have one-sided criticism (for different plots) due to the survivor effect, but the actual content of the book is very good. So in order to avoid missing the book you like very much, it is recommended that you read it for a certain period of time without reading the chapter before deciding whether to read it or not. (The reason for not reading the chapter is because book friends who don't like the book are likely to leave comments in the first few chapters. In order to avoid being affected, it is not recommended to start the chapter when testing the drug 😐) 1. If you still decide to read the comment area first, I hope you can stop scrolling down and listen to some of my suggestions: 1. Before reading the comments, check the other person's fan base. If you are a trainee, you can laugh it off. Because being an apprentice means that he most likely doesn't like the plot of this book. In this case, his opinion is not suitable as a reference for evaluating a book. (Note: When the fan value is less than 500 even if fully subscribed, this article can be ignored) 2. If you see comments that think this book is poisonous, please try not to comment, because this will make him go up. (Unless you really can't bear it) 3. Treat good and bad reviews objectively and comprehensively. Don't just read bad reviews and believe the bad points they describe. Ignore the good reviews. (I can't do this😐) 2. If you read this book and like it very much, come to the comment area to read everyone's comments, I hope you can listen to some of my suggestions😊: 1. If you see some comments that are offensive, but you think there is no problem there, unless that comment is at the top, it is not recommended to comment below it. Otherwise it will be pushed to the top. (Or comment under other normal comments after rebutting, so as to prevent new readers from seeing the negative comments at first sight) (You can also choose to start a separate post in the comment area to say what you think is good about the book) 2. Do not randomly post spoilers in the comment area. Even if it is a spoiler, add a sign at the end that "the following content is suspected of being a spoiler!" (From a reader who was disgusted by spoilers when reading fire books 😭) 3. If you like this book very much, you might as well make some more complimentary remarks without spoilers or with special spoiler-proof warnings. While attracting new readers, it can also give the author the confidence to continue writing. 3. Please try not to post any comments that you would like the author to be a eunuch. Also try not to echo the wishes of the eunuch. There are only zero and countless times for the eunuch - because after the author reads the eunuch once, some readers will choose to read the new book after finishing it, which will lead to unsatisfactory results of the new book and then read the eunuch again. This leads to a vicious cycle. When the author writes a book later, he will most likely give priority to eunuchs when his grades are not good (after all, there is a precedent). At that time, only book friends who really liked the book were hurt 😐 So I am begging you here to try not to make comments that make the author eunuch. (Coming from a reader whose favorite book got poor grades, and then a bunch of people asked for eunuchs, causing the author to update it randomly 😭) The above are some of my suggestions and opinions, I hope they can be helpful to you. My Chinese proficiency is not very good, please forgive me. If you have any good suggestions, I hope you can make them😊

Let me complain after reading it. It is a farming article, but it is either fighting or on the way to fight. There are not 100 chapters in total about the real farming construction and development!

I have read almost 50 chapters, and the writing is indeed pretty good, but I came here to farm like this. The protagonist is either fighting or on the way to fight, and there is no sign of going to farm. Maybe I haven't found the content about lord farming that I want to read, and I got angry while reading the book. I felt that the content written by the author was too bloated (I should say that), and I wrote a lot of words that were unnecessary to write in detail. I was too tired after reading it.

Really, writing about something can often involve a lot of things, and then occupy a large chapter. A simple thing can be written into two chapters. I'm not here to read the setting, I'm here to read the novel.

This author can only reach level 13 with 700 pictures. The leveling is too serious and the combat power is seriously unclear.

A Chinese-style fantasy wrapped in a Western fantasy skin. When Chinese-style descriptions appear, there is a strong sense of separation. If you feel a little integrated, you will be poisoned immediately.

After reading the first hundred chapters, he said that he had no idea about the specific level of the protagonist. The upgrade of the supporting characters was described very happily, but the protagonist seemed to be stagnant. I only knew that he relied on the legendary fighting spirit to inflict psychic shock in melee combat and was very useful. Nothing else was known about it. In a hierarchical world, the upgrade of the protagonist is deliberately obscured. As the author, do you have a clear understanding of what you wrote?

This book... Has vague combat power. Level 3 professionals + ridiculous equipment and vague combat power can kill legendary beetles by beating teammates... Then there are all kinds of performances by the protagonist. A kind-hearted protagonist is really uncomfortable. He has to compromise and have to talk to a wild elf and is scolded. After half of reading, the protagonist is still a third-level psychic warlock, with a thousand chapters of legend and ten thousand chapters of gods?

Let me tell you, this pig's trotter behaves like a man who has gone through many vicissitudes of life, or an irritable young man. This is also a common problem with these rebirth articles. Their analytical skills are poor and they rely entirely on so-called future memories. Those who have watched the Super Brain Wizard show are indifferent to this kind of imbecile. There are 10,000 ways to change, and then they choose the most cowardly and humble method, watching others show off.

The pace is too slow, with more than two hundred chapters and only level 3. He has a lot of fancy skills and relies on inexplicable explosions when fighting bosses. A level three guy can actually intervene in a battle that is close to the legendary level.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I was very distressed by the profession of the protagonist. He is a level 3 psychic and a level 1 mage. The way of fighting is to wear a good armor and swing a kitchen knife. If you can't beat him, you will take out a gun. I know that the author is using the legendary soul as a patch to allow the male protagonist to leapfrog and hit people in the early stage, but the problem is All the experience gained from making trouble in the early stage was used to develop plug-in specialties. The higher the level, the slower the Psion. In order to patch this slowness, the Psion's structure was scrapped and replaced with a Psychic Hand Cannon to specifically strengthen his only psychic bullet skill. The written reason was that it was difficult to select early specialties for upgrading. Then he turned around and took out some divinely enhanced pistols. I am very worried now that I saw that the only spell damage of the male protagonist in the latest chapter is the psychic sniper rifle. Extraordinary intelligence is of no use at all.

It's old wine in a new bottle. In fact, farming articles don't need to have too many new things, just a little bit of freshness and solid presentation is enough. No poison points have been found so far, and developing the kobold force is considered a relatively unpopular start. It should be able to bring out a lot of new things to see. In terms of psychics, especially the protagonist's psychic abilities, I began to worry about so-called mind control, hypnosis, etc. If the ability to control people's hearts must be written, there must be strong restrictions, otherwise it will be like playing a game with invincibility, and all the fun will be lost. Fortunately I didn't write about this. Hope it will be faster. Generally speaking, it is not very good to read farming articles in the early stages. I am used to reading them after they are mature... Being faster can make up for some of the disadvantages in the early stage. In addition, it is recommended that the concentration of pretending to be slapped in the face should not be too high. It is better to maintain a relatively low intensity of pretending to be slapped in the face, and no one will be offended. Personally, I understand that farm stories are really not suitable for showing off and slapping people in the face. The main interest is how the power develops. Personally, I prefer to see how to plan strongholds, develop industries, and research new technologies and new arms.

Build a monster building specifically for posting various monsters

The writing is really good, why isn't it popular?

The more you write, the less interesting it becomes. The plot is good, but it takes nonsense literature to the extreme. You have to add hundreds or even thousands of words of setting to a few sentences of text, and add a few small examples to prove the setting. There is nothing left to pick and choose in one chapter. Although it makes money, it completely destroys the coherence of the book. The first third is just a lot of data, which has no impact. The middle third starts to write more and more, and seriously, the whole chapter is all setting.

Can't you just farm well and engage in some disgusting plots? That's not how the harem is accepted.

Is there too many roles for Lord Vikini? I don't think it's appropriate for her to be the first heroine. It's okay to just be a lover. Being the first heroine is poisonous.