The Ravenclaw of Hogwarts

To be honest, I just read about 10 chapters, but the author's writing style is really good!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Out out out out of out out of necessity all The author really wrote about the protagonist's past life as a gangster in the United States. That kind of ruthlessness, that kind of uniqueness (not a typo), the taste is unmistakable. But when I saw the protagonist drowning a pure-blood who humiliated him without hesitation, I felt a little panicked 😓. . . Anyway, it feels great!                                      ，

I have always felt that Aunt Rowling's writing of the relationship between Dumbledore and Grindelwald as *** was a huge failure. I think they should be friends who respect each other and are enemies like Naruto and Sasuke. There is a kind of friend that can only be understood in terms of a wand versus wand battle

Without further ado, readers can leave a message below, whether it is a female (note! Female!) Character in the original novel that has appeared or has not yet appeared. In the end, I will choose the most popular one to be the heroine. This book has only one heroine. I thought about it but forgot about the harem. In addition, we are now recruiting for supporting roles. If you have any characters you want to appear in, you can leave a message below and I will select some and write them in.

I once heard a story about a desperate author who wrote a novel and couldn't finish it halfway through. This little Poujie was originally planning to enter the palace to serve the emperor. As a result, many readers in the comment area of ​​the book were discussing the plot behind the book. So that little guy started writing according to the plot guessed in the comment area. As a result, he not only finished the novel, but also got good results. Before I wrote a novel, I always thought it was a joke. It was only now that I started writing a novel that I realized that it was not a joke at all. Readers' discussions about the plot are very helpful to the author, especially a new author like me who is writing a book for the first time. I don't know exactly what kind of content readers like to see like those great masters. I can only explore the readers' preferences a little bit. Fortunately, the readers of this book are of extremely high quality, and there was no abuse as I suspected when I first wrote the book. They also enthusiastically discussed the plot with me, a newbie. I am truly grateful to the readers of this book! Thank you for not saying bad things to me because of my scummy writing style, but for giving me enthusiastic suggestions. Thank you very much! With the great help of all readers, I have revised the details of the outline again and again, and I don't know how many times I will revise it in the future. To be honest, this is a tiring thing. But I don't want to let you down. No matter how hard or tired I am, I will finish writing this book. This is the only feedback I can give to you readers who have helped me. Thank you!

Regarding the original novel, I have always felt that Hermione was extremely jealous, and he could not tolerate others being better than him. This was not obvious before, but you can see it in whichever movie you watch Half-Blood Prince. Harry got Snape's notes, which strictly speaking can improve his experience and abilities. But Hermione couldn't stand it, so she questioned Harry, and even persuaded Harry to give up the note in the end. After Harry put the note in the Room of Requirement, she was relieved. I feel that what Harry did after getting the notes was normal, and he even became excellent, but Hermione just couldn't accept it. I think she just felt that a scumbag could surpass me, a top student, and I couldn't accept it. In the finale, the Room of Requirement was burned to the ground. It was such a pity. There were so many mysterious books.

Abandoned, another fan author who follows the plot of the original work

Speaking of Hermione, don't you think there are many Harry Potter fan fiction that makes Hermione the heroine?

In the end, I still didn't insist on subscribing to the chapter. I will finally complain about the shortcomings and dislikes that I think. The main character is Mike, who travels back in time to Love 5, an American with abnormal views. Different views lead to different thoughts and behaviors, which makes people dislike it and makes it difficult to embody it. In addition, the author chooses an American but still uses the Chinese accent, which is simply not enough to make the drama. The second is that the protagonist's behavior is repeated and the good brothers will give you two blows. The author may want to write something different, but in my personal opinion, it just gave me a sense of psychosis. Of course, maybe because I love Mike, he is a psychotic person. Third, there are some problems with the setting of the original work. I don't want to complain about money and currency. It doesn't matter. The main reason is that the character design is too OOC and makes people uncomfortable. There is also the original plot that makes the characters OOC. That's probably it.

The writing is good, but how do you say it? The protagonist of the original work became intellectualized. The supporting characters become darker. It doesn't feel like Harry Potter, but it feels like a second-rate junior high school in China.

Why do so many people like to get involved with the original protagonist Triangle? Don't you think it's an idiot? What you wrote is a dark trend, and it is a mess. This is not a dark trend, it is a diseased trend.