Harry Potter and the Book of Sin

I have read 1,000 chapters in ten breaths, and I have only read a few Harry novels. This book expands the world view of the original plot through non-main characters in the original work and a few words from myths and legends. From the hints left by Ravenclaw to the real reason for Slytherin's escape, all the foreshadowings are laid, turning the world view of fighting only one big devil, Voldemort, into fighting more big devils. From the perspective of the plot progress, it is not a problem to serialize to 2000 chapters, but from the perspective of emotional progress, it is not a problem to serialize to 3000 chapters. However, this is mainly due to the author's "inaction" in describing the relationship. The relationship progress is slow. It seems to be a natural progression and then blocked. The subtle relationship between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists has led to this situation. Overall, this is a fan fiction that I personally feel is good.

This book is a rare masterpiece of HP fan fiction. I'm afraid it's impossible to say it's the best, after all, everyone has their own favorite genre. But as for me, who has caught up to chapter 700, I am already worrying about the days of waiting for the update after finishing the game. My original intention of reading HP fanfiction is because the original work left too many regrets. Let every beautiful or kind soul in the HP world have a better ending. I believe everyone who has read the original book or movie will have this idea. And this book fulfills my wish. Whether it is the protagonists like the Gryffindor trio and Dumbledore, or the supporting characters like Snape and Hagrid, or even the minor characters mentioned briefly in the original work, they all have a better life of their own. If you have ever experienced the indescribable complex emotions that linger in your heart after closing the Deathly Hallows, then this book will satisfy you. The author's writing style is impeccable, the plot is compact, major events are almost one after another, and leisurely daily life is interspersed in the middle. Sometimes it is simply impossible to stop. But what I like most is not the grandeur of the main plot, nor the extension of the HP world, but the many small details. While reading, I would sometimes giggle because of a very magical joke (I was scolded by my roommate, "Anyone who is always holding a cell phone and giggling is either a wretched man or a fat nerd!" I can't bear this blame.) Sometimes, because of the author's ingenious and immersive narration, I would be involved in the mood of the protagonist or other people, making people feel emotional. And there is another point, while reading this book, I will also think about it. I even think that in some plots, the author used the plot and the protagonist's words to write part of his feelings about life into this book. There are definitely flaws, but they cannot hide the flaws. Some flaws cannot prevent it from becoming an absolute masterpiece for HP fans. Maybe this book is just a fan derivative work, a niche reading. But let me say, it is definitely suitable for you to be patient, read slowly, and immerse yourself in the different HP world presented to us by the author.

The author should note that Merlin lived more than two thousand years ago, and Hogwarts was founded by the four wizards more than a thousand years ago, so Merlin could not have gone to school there. The author's creativity and writing style are still very good, I hope you will continue to work hard!

After reading more than 200 chapters, can anyone tell me how the emotional line develops later on. . . The emotional line of this book is simply poisonous in just these two hundred chapters. . . The single female protagonist is not like the single female protagonist, the harem is not like the harem, nor is it like the Shura field, the whole thing is different. The author decided that Luna is the heroine, which I don't think is a problem, but! Since you recognize Luna as the heroine, please don't write about the emotional lines of Hermione and Vitti, especially Hermione. You have been hanging on this emotional line for two hundred chapters. On the contrary, in these two hundred chapters, Hermione's psychological activities are described a lot. As the designated heroine, Luna is just like the background every day. There is no psychological activity and no large amount of description. The interaction with the male protagonist is to be around the male protagonist every day. . . There is almost no detailed National Day interaction. The characters are very dull. . . In addition to the emotional line, the plot line lacks a lot of description when the male protagonist is making his so-called plan. As a result, I often look at it without knowing what the male protagonist is doing. . . The perspective is often on others. Today we can't find the male lead, tomorrow we can't find the male lead, this month we can't find the male lead again. . . Even the reader doesn't know what the protagonist is up to. 😅

1. The protagonist likes Luna, and Hermione has an unrequited love 2. The style of this book is dark and depressing 3. It complements the world view of the original work very well 4. The supporting characters in this book are quite brilliant, depicting people's personality changes and growth after a series of things Personally, I like the protagonist's character very much. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that I prefer to endure suffering and any uncertainty by myself. As a bystander, I am always anxious and worried for the protagonist, especially I feel sorry for the protagonist's strength. If this story is true, I especially hope that the protagonist can live a happy and quiet life, free from these sufferings. After Lao Deng left, Maka was really tired. It seemed that she didn't sleep well a few times, but she always showed her confidence in front of others and kept forcing herself to grow. She didn't care about the damage caused to her soul by using the time and space converter many times. I can't accurately describe Maka's tiredness, but I always feel heartbroken when I look at his hard work in the book

Throughout this book, I feel unworthy of Hermione! Personal sense: Of the three girls, Hermione is the only one who is worried about the protagonist and wants to share some of the work with the protagonist! But what about the other two girls? Although the two characters are entertaining themselves and have no other ideas, the protagonist intentionally does not want them to know about the battle related to Voldemort. This is a fact! In this case, you clearly know that Hermione likes you, but you just look at this situation without any explanation of good or bad! This is a failure, both for the protagonist and the author! For the protagonist, I hope the heroine beside him will be like Hermione! But for excellent works, looking at the current situation, I will also say sadly: Either Hermione looks away and gives up, or the protagonist needs to show me a little bit, Because as mentioned before, the protagonist's senses are quite good and he has a favorable impression of Hermione. But later they became very ordinary friends, not even as good as that Willy!

Why not write an ending to the emotional line? In the original timeline, Hermione and Luna will never meet the protagonist again In the new timeline, the protagonist is an aborigine and no longer a time traveler. In other words, the entire emotional line has almost been reshuffled! In other words, this is an emotional line without an ending,

The writing is pretty good, and the description of the environment is particularly good. It's just that a lot of the plot is very baffling. After seeing about three hundred chapters, there are many poisonous points: 1. Adopting werewolf sisters, a pair of sisters who cannibalize human flesh. Can't accept it. 2. Dumbledore's death was inexplicable. Even if he was pursuing a higher realm, he shouldn't have died at that time. At least the protagonist didn't have to worry about Hogwarts. It also destroyed the military morale that had been stable during the previous live broadcast. It felt like it was forcibly following the plot of the original work. 3. The protagonist releases the prisoners of Azkaban to help the enemy. Knowing that no one under Voldemort could use him anymore, he forcibly sent Little Brother Bo away. After doing this, when he met an Auror again, he was still fine. If that crazy Moody doesn't catch him, will Voldemort believe the protagonist? It's also a stupid thing to forcefully follow the plot of the original work. 4, Willie. Such a big thing happened to Willy, and the protagonist rushed back from the future. Didn't the diary given to the protagonist contain any content? The logic of the plot before and after is wrong.

I think this novel is generally well written. I think the author's completion of the world view is very reasonable. I was a little confused in the second half, but after the ending, I suddenly realized it. Wen Feng tended to be dark and depressive in his later period, which is my favorite type (you ask what made me become like this? Of course it's Jiangnan's old thief Qi Bai Qi!). It's just that the protagonist was wavering emotionally in the early stage, and then was delayed due to various things in the later stage. As a result, in the end, we didn't even know who the heroine was? For many people, this may be a poisonous point, but I think this only enhances the authenticity of the story. After all, the protagonist is just an ordinary person! A coward - he said so himself. Overall, I enjoyed this novel.

Let's put it this way, this book I read in my freshman year of high school is almost over. When can you finish it?