Hogwarts' Strongest Badger

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I've read a few chapters, but I can't see how good the writing is. The plot is a bit awkward and brainless, and I really can't stand it anymore.

The divine edge is invisible!

The protagonist's Death Eater family has such an awesome background. After all the clan members died, only my mother was left. Then the entire magical world would surround their mother and son and respect them? Even the teachers at Hogwarts take care of them in every way, better than Harry?

It's amazing that you wrote Badger Yard like this. I can understand if you want to say it's Snake Yard.

Are you sure it's not like Slytherin or Hufflepuff, a group of upright and kind-hearted people, must have a troublemaker? Do you think the Sorting Hat is just a decoration?

It's so boring that it's boring to death. The classic routine is just used to gain popularity among the fans. The bullshit written is not all trivial. 🙂 Can you believe that the people in the Badger Academy will isolate and discriminate against people? A person from the same hospital came out and said, "Humph, then it's useless and useless." Trust me, you will see it in this book, so run away!

He died of poison at Professor Snape's place and retreated The protagonist forcibly suspected Snape's human experiments He was tough with the professor and asked the professor to drink a portion of the medicine. The key is that your mother paid for it and asked the professor to do it. What about you just now?

Hufflepuffs are basically autistic. When writing fan fiction, it is recommended to read at least some Harry Potter. Hufflepuffs in the entire school have relatively few pricks, and even poor students generally do not have pricks so obvious.

The author can try to put himself into the reader's perspective and read the book from the reader's perspective. This will help you discover a lot of stupid flaws. Seriously, does the protagonist you describe look like a detective? 😁 Your protagonist is at best Detective Conan - his three useless friends

When I first started watching it, it wasn't too toxic. I kept watching it and it felt pretty good. But then, what the hell is that Emily? I really can't bear it. The author is a girl. She writes the protagonist as a powerful and affectionate character, but she wants to kill the protagonist... And she still forgives her. She is so affectionate and doesn't want it. I'm so speechless. Even though it's a misunderstanding, I can't bear it. I wrote a cool article from the beginning and kept writing cool articles. Why do I want to abuse the protagonist? Shouldn't the woman who is the protagonist trust him? And Emily probably likes the original Link, so why should she be chosen as the heroine? I didn't read the later ones either, so I don't know if there's a twist. Anyway, I can't stand it now, so I'm giving up the book!

This book is much better than the last one

It's quite speechless. The protagonist is always planning something, but the plan will never be achieved, and the plot will always be repaired.

Our original Hufflepuff book has not produced a dark wizard for seven years. The house with the smallest number of dark wizards in the history of Hogwarts has produced something like this 🤔

Basilisk

I have now read Chapter 25, why is it so poisonous? . . Will it be better in the future?

When I saw Chapter 18, one word came out, 🐮 Damn, Snape gave you the medicine and you directly attacked with a magic spell. How dare you, considering you are a time traveler? Because other professors treat you better than others? Or is it because you were a detective in your previous life? Also, I wrote a diary in my predecessor and you didn't read it carefully (you didn't read it seriously, it's not that you didn't read it, and you were drugged before you read the details. You are very good! The book friends are right, let alone the protagonist who used to be an adult who worked as a detective. Writing that he was a mentally retarded person with a third-level brain disability in his previous life is more suitable for your plot. Also, how long has it been since you entered school? How many times have you been pumped into your body before this time? Does attacking Snape show that you don't believe others want to express the protagonist's caution? Or do you think that you are special because you dare not do anything in so many novels?

I feel that the writing of these chapters in recent days has not been strong at all. The Foley family, where the protagonist lives, needs money and someone with assets spread throughout the British wizarding world. Then Emily and the protagonist are in love again, but Emily's dad always comes out and jumps around and demands so much from the protagonist. I just can't stand it anymore.

Good guy, the part where you were confronting Snape was really stupid to me. Where is the logic? The plot is as hard as bricks. I thought I was watching the firing of bricks.

Hufflepuff, are you sure you are staying in this house? Haven't the readers noticed? What is the spirit of Hufflepuff? Integrity, loyalty, honesty, and not afraid of hardships. Be loyal to nature and have great love. Silence is not ignorance but perseverance. Diligence is based on ideals and practice; never retreat in the face of right and wrong. Will the descendants of Death Eaters reach the level of the author's writing alone? If there were many such people in Gryffindor, even Harry Potter's father would bully others. What kind of people are entering Hufflepuff? Will they be hostile to the protagonist for this reason? At most, they can do their own thing without interfering with each other. The only houses where disputes, hostility, and bullying are most likely to occur are Gryffindor and Slytherin. To put it bluntly, the students in the four houses are classified according to their personalities. This can be seen from the spirit of each house. However, Hufflepuff students will not have the personality described in the book.

Let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. I only read more than 200 chapters in sequence, and then started skipping chapters to about 350 chapters. The protagonist still doesn't know what's wrong with his body or what's going on with him. Except for the protagonist, everyone who has a name and appears in the original Harry Potter knows what's going on with his body, so they won't tell him. Starting from 350 pictures, there are no more than three chapters in each subsequent chapter. This does not mean that there are more chapters in the front, but since it was put on the shelves, the readers have become less and less. I don't know how the author wrote more than 700 pictures. I skipped directly to the ending. Although I was confused, I was not interested. I went to the front to see what happened in the front. I was not interested and couldn't read it. If you are looking for a hp fanfic, I don't mind reading this one. In the comment area, I saw someone saying that this is the author's second hp fanfic. This makes me feel unbelievable. I don't know how bad his first one is. Forget it, I don't recommend reading it.

After reading so many HP fans, you are the first one to let Voldemort torture the protagonist with the Cruciatus Curse. If you don't know how to write cool articles, don't write them. There are all kinds of sinister smiles, evil smiles, etc. It's totally lacking in character. It's really just for the protagonist of the dark wizard. The protagonist who can be seen is a show-off in small things but a failure in big things. He has facial nerve failure and mania. He thinks that after all the agencies have calculated, he is still a pawn of Dumbledore and others. I really can't accept this so-called cool article.

What do you mean by feeding me knives after you put it on the shelves? What's with Emily's distant attitude towards the protagonist? The protagonist felt like he was being deceived, and Lao Deng really didn't notice at all. Lao Deng was most concerned about the safety of his students. Four of them died this time, haha ​​🔪

The writing is really good. The main storyline and characters are reasonable, but the heroine still prefers Hermione. After all, she loves her greatly, at least not to Ron 😢. Please update more (the recommendation vote has been voted)

Why do I always feel that the protagonist seems to be very awesome but is inexplicably frustrated? 😂

Ah ah ah, I want to read Emily yysy, forget the heroine Hermione. She is the heroine in every book. It's very funny 😒

After reading Chapter 22, I felt too tired. I read novels to relax my mood. I don't really like the kind of puzzles that make people read inexplicably and then slowly solve the puzzle. It was too tiring to read. However, some people commented that the badger courtyard you wrote is the same as the snake courtyard. I think it's okay, because Brother Flathead is also a badger.

He lost his memory at the beginning and didn't handle it well. Feeling stupid.

Ye Qi

To be honest, I have always thought that Arkham is the female protagonist hahahaha In addition, the protagonist and the original owner have different feelings about how this is handled. It is a bit inexplicable. For the protagonist's own parents, the son is gone, for the original owner's relatives and friends, a new person has been replaced, and for the protagonist, it is inexplicable that he has changed his home and his brain is still sick, so it is better to wear it since he was a child... Also, the protagonist seems to be very strong, but he feels inexplicably aggrieved 😂