When Harry Potter Meets League of Legends

I went and looked at Anne who suddenly came and exploded. Sorry, I originally liked this book, but suddenly I lost interest. Sigh😔 What I wrote before is pretty good, why did I suddenly release poison? If there was no Annie, wouldn't it be a good idea to just give Tibbers a skill? It would still be interesting.

How to say it? The writing style in the early stage was a little wordy, but it was really good. The plot design is also good. Opening a copy is also a highlight. There are also things like borrowing World of Warcraft. All good. Just this section of Shurima. The author may be trying to suppress the story and drag out the plot. But it's too poisonous. I started reading literature in 1989. It's really rare to be so poisonous. This poisonous point directly downgraded the book by one level. Because the poison is in the front, no matter how good the writing is in the later stage, it will directly drive away a group of people. After all, there are only so many HP readers.

What amazes me most about this book is that before Harry appears, the author uses his own writing power to vividly describe the protagonist's school life, and at the same time, he greatly complements the originally poor magical world. Accomplishing these two tasks without taking the article out of the scope of the original work is almost the best Harry Potter fan fiction I have ever seen, and it made me stay up all night to finish the book. But when Harry appeared on the stage, the book was limited by the so-called "main plot" and turned into "following the team", becoming an ordinary fan novel of acceptable quality. Originally it was just like this, but I guess the author himself was aware of this problem and wanted to get rid of the shackles of the original work. However, he fell into a quagmire at this time, which resulted in frequent stalls and delays in the text (by the way, not deleting the leave note has a great impact on reading through), which made me very disappointed with this book. Let's put it this way, what I like about this book is Alan's own story in the Harry Potter worldview. As for Harry Potter himself or Voldemort, they can occasionally participate in it, but if it is taken as the main line, it will be aesthetically tired.

Originally, the part about going to the African school and the trip to the United States seemed a bit interesting Then came the big part Heritage was robbed by Voldemort, and then defeated Voldemort, leaving a trace and then fainted!!! This part is really disgusting, and the commentator said that the real recapture is in the paid chapter. Then the heroine is Hermione What this book reviewer said The poisonous point is that the male protagonist and Hermione are in a relationship, and then some things are too bloody. The male protagonist, Hermione's memory has been washed, and she is ready to chase her again!!!

There's nothing to say, so Dash persuades you to quit. The author is tempted to use dashes instead of commas, which looks tiring and uncomfortable. I read an article before that I like two words and one comma. The two authors can communicate privately. I guess they will have common topics.

I have an inexplicable desire to report this book, it is disturbing the public every day.

It's been a week since I read the last chapter. Don't mess up

No, are you really a eunuch? How long has it been and still no update?

Author, why don't you just renovate this novel? The writing can be improved to a higher level, and the plot can give you more time to think.

Every time I see the compound potion, I have a bold idea. The protagonist has time to discuss it with his roommate.

When Harry Potter met Tiantian asked for leave.

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I thought it was pretty difficult at first, but when I saw that the inheritance was taken away by Voldemort's Horcrux, and he didn't come back after killing the Horcrux, and it was related to Percy, I couldn't do anything to him. I was as disgusted as if I had eaten a fly... I read the comments that the inheritance was brought back after Chapter 90, but I couldn't stand it anymore because of this setting. It was a cool thing to get the inheritance back, but the author didn't know what he was thinking when he wrote it like this.

Come and offer incense to the eunuch in the old book list

What about dialogue? Plot? It just kept narrating, kept narrating, couldn't be brought in at all, it just kept going, but, but, but yet. . . You can read it yourself and see if the whole book revolves around these two words.

The subject matter and plot are good, and it is considered a masterpiece in the same genre. However, there are too many self-deprecating and so-called jokes by the author, which makes people lose the desire to read...

Angel, Time. The wet nurse didn't choose, but the wheel mom. She said it was for the shield, but it turned out that the shield lasted for one second and cooled down for half an hour...

Why are there so many random and inexplicable "complaints" that are cumbersome and boring?

There is too much nonsense written, and there is too little dialogue between the characters in the novel, with at most three or two sentences in one chapter. Also, reading this novel is like listening to someone telling another person's life story.

The second time I read this book, I couldn't stand the part where Voldemort in the Diadem saw that the Slate inheritance was no longer useful. Your restrictive plot is so awkward that I can't stand it. 88

It seems, it seems, maybe, Qi Ye took leave to go to Nanjing to watch the game. Looking at the time period, the more I thought about it, the more likely it was. I conclude that we can see a week's leave during the National Championships.

This protagonist is a semi-reckless man, he has brains, but does things (no matter good or bad) without paying attention to details! ! ! ! ! The protagonist has been in big trouble several times because of some details that he didn't pay attention to! ! ! ! Whether he is being hunted by Aurors in the United States or his heritage is stolen by Voldemort! ! ! !

It is a classic. The author thinks that the writing is very funny and humorous, but in fact, the readers think that he is insane. This kind of random complaining and nonsense style is unacceptable to most people. Also, I bought the 0.1% Off version from Pin Xixi. You can tell without even watching it that the plot is definitely very twisted. The more you watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes.

I came back to visit the tomb and finished it three times. In fact, the author's writing is quite good. It's really amazing that he can write so much when the combat power system collapsed. I think the combat power completely collapsed from Japan, but he wrote more than 200 or 300 chapters later, which is really amazing. What I wrote before is quite good and does not completely follow HP's route. It is basically the author's own imagination. The battle scenes are also well written. The biggest mistake is probably that the protagonist's current strength is basically inferior to that of Dumbledore, and knowing the plot, it is very difficult. Writing about daily life is not willing to fight, and writing is just cruelty. It can be seen that the author wants to use his own imagination to write about why magic is not open to ordinary people, and create a big map or create a new opponent, because the fragments of Voldemort are simply not enough for the protagonist to fight. There is no way to advance the plot. The protagonist's strength has increased too quickly. With the heroic inheritance, this strength will take off immediately. The alliance's combat power is too high.

I haven't updated for so many days at home during the Spring Festival, which only shows that the author is really a eunuch╮(￣▽￣)╭

I really couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 10. There was too much nonsense and overall it was very boring.

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On the last day of 25 years, burn incense and worship

2026.1.20 Incense

Do you have any recommendations for League of Legends Goldfinger novels?