Achieving Immortality at Hogwarts
我在霍格沃茨成就不朽
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 942k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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247Chapters
1kRecommendations
5.4kFans
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I've always felt that to write fantasy, you have to first write a good Harry Potter fanfiction. Just think about it: distinctive characters, a logically consistent magic system, seven stages in total (one year per stage), and vividly portrayed villains. It's simply perfect for practicing fantasy writing.
The protagonist seems a bit conflicted; he has the rationality of an adult, but sometimes he suddenly becomes very childish.
Reading your books makes me not want to read about Hermione as the main character anymore; I hope you maintain that.
Why go to Gryffindor and join the trio?
Without any memory, why was the protagonist sorted into Gryffindor? The Gryffindor lion cubs are reckless and noisy. In this situation, how could the protagonist have a quiet place to study? He even childishly argued with a child and thought Ron was being funny. Is this how an adult handles things?
It makes me feel nauseous.
After reading a few chapters, I felt nauseous. The author set the protagonist as a transmigrator who had read Harry Potter, but then the author wrote him deliberately unaware of certain things, such as wanting to buy a second-hand wand and thinking someone was trying to harm him by walking through walls in a train station… Anyone who has read Harry Potter knows what's going on, but the author's attempt to pad the word count is truly disgusting.
What kind of writing is this? Author, your three golden chapters successfully drove away half of your readers.
Don't ruin your character
Only by truly finishing a book can you improve with each new one. If you abandon every book, you'll ruin your reputation by the end; not only will no one read it, but your writing will also get worse and worse.
This is written in such a stream-of-consciousness style, and deleting all the original pages at the beginning doesn't affect the readability at all. What was the point of writing those pages?
Regardless of whether there's a female lead or not, please don't let it be Hermione; her performance was too over-the-top!
Dear author, if I may ask, have you confirmed who the female lead is? Please, please, don't let it be Hermione! No matter how beautiful she is in the movie, it can't compare to how she keeps looking down in the latest chapter! It's like she's been bewitched by Lockhart! Lockhart makes things difficult for William in class, and Hermione offers to help!
The protagonist knows absolutely nothing about the plot; he's clearly a transmigrator who's never read Harry Potter before? Why not just write about a native?