The Shopkeeper of All Worlds in the British Wizarding World

I just read the first few chapters and I want to ask if the heroine is Hermione again? It's very annoying to always be the best at school. In reality, this kind of character is actually not likable, and the appearance is not good in the setting. Qiu Zhang, Luna, Gabri, who is of Veela descent, etc., Always feel that Hermione is written just to prostitute Emma, which is disgusting Also, I would like to ask if the heroine can wear it with the protagonist in the later period. I didn't see the back. If I can't wear it together, I would be honest. The protagonist's living situation is not suitable for having a heroine. Every once in a while, he will experience a few days to several years, and outsiders can't understand it. To be honest, I and I have been together for two or three years. In the past, I would not be able to connect with many memes due to the information gap, let alone other people. For lovers who live together, it is really a kind of torture to gradually have nothing to say and the two people are not on the same level of thinking. It is for both parties Especially if there is a smart person in a setting like Hermione. A smart person should be able to guess that there is something wrong with the protagonist. If you want to write a heroine, it is best to work together in both roles. Otherwise, one person will be busy with trivial matters for his career, and the other person will be busy in various worlds to improve his power.

In the first few chapters, the author emphasizes that the protagonist is an adult and needs to learn magic. It is very illogical to read elementary school textbooks and have a foreign background. As an adult or an adult who has gone to college, what should I read? What is the essence of magic? And the Taoism of Mr. Zombie. This hodgepodge can easily collapse. If the author wants to write a cool article, he should go through time travel several times. There are so many eras of high demons in the world, and just trading some basics is better than low demons.

After reading the free chapter, I felt that the character of the protagonist was not very outstanding and the plot was too bland, but the author's writing style was not a problem, but the fantastic ideas about magic were not mentioned much, and I felt that it had failed to live up to the magic of this magical world. Keep up the good work! 😳

After reading more than thirty chapters, it's still too bland.

Well written, but too bland. There's nothing exciting about it

I feel like Fudge is the same as Trump.

Why does sixth-year Slughorn pay attention to the protagonist and Hermione on the train and during his first Potions lesson? Earlier when you wrote that Harry went to summon Slughorn, you stated that he was concerned about the protagonist receiving the Order of Merlin. How could Slughorn not collect the protagonist based on his personality? 🤔

The exchange student part was so boring. It was either boring or just a transitional chapter. Also, the copy of Fallout 4 felt unnecessary and too watery. I don't know what other people read the fanfic for. Anyway, I just read the fanfic to see myself cut into the drama in the author's writing. But the two paragraphs you wrote about radiation and exchange students are too tight and have nothing to do with the original plot. Of course, I don't mean that they have to follow the original plot. It's just that these two paragraphs you wrote are too boring. What you wrote earlier is very good. Even the paragraph about the Sorcerer's Stone is better than these two paragraphs. Fallout 4 and exchange students are not exciting at all. The first one is a running account and the second one is too bland.

I felt that the protagonist was too indecisive and too eager for stability. It's okay to be stubborn, but if you're too stubborn, readers will think it's too much. Didn't you see that the protagonist next door is either making a revolution or pacifying the wizarding world (funny)

It's very interesting, but I have almost never read the copies, and I couldn't quite understand them when I read them, so I skipped the subsequent copies.

Isn't it going to be an inexplicable plot? And the love-hate relationship with Grindelwald's organization?

Generally speaking, there are three types of characters in time travel and human novels: 1. Follow the original characters, 2. Subvert the original characters, and 3. Make a certain degree of originality based on the original characters. Personally, I think the setting of this book is very good, because you wrote a fan fiction rather than an original novel. I have seen some cover books that seriously rely on settings. They are just like the original books, and almost all the contents are based on settings. If the setting of the fanfic you write is completely different from that of the original work, you might as well write an original work. If you rely on the original work and seriously eat the setting, it is just to gain popularity. Subversion of the original characters is also a problem, and some books actually put the original decent characters in the skin of the apocalyptic villains as tool men, doing things that the original decent characters with extremely upright views and the halo of the protagonists are simply impossible to do. In addition, there have been cases of the original villains disappearing en masse, which is also extremely bad in nature. Personally, I feel that fan fiction is not something you can write however you want. It must abide by certain norms. The author of this article did a good job of retaining the highlights of the original work, and allowed the protagonist to quietly change the course of the original work behind the back of the original Chosen Son, advancing the plot in light and dark ways, so as to make up for the regrets of the original work without causing the plot to collapse in the later period. Of course, as the protagonist, he has his own golden finger, but it is not like other fan novels, which immediately marginalize or demonize the original chosen one. In this way, the setting of having his own principles and developing the original protagonist seems very easy and very consistent with the routine of making up for fan fiction!

It can be a student or a passerby. The more detailed the background setting, the greater the chance of appearing. The only requirement is that the name is normal and fits the context of the article.

When writing about Harry Potter fans, they are obsessed with Hogwarts and Hermione. Even if Hermione is so beautiful, we readers will really be tired. The world is so big that other than Hermione, it is hard to see? Of the ten fanfics, eight are about Hermione Most of those who wrote about this said that when the protagonist knew that he had traveled to Harry Potter, he said that he wanted to leave the protagonist or something, and then it slowly became more and more popular You might as well write some, get the system and develop it, and in the process slowly understand the world you live in

I just came here because of the gimmick of opening a grocery store to sell magical products from another world, but it turns out that this is selling dog meat over sheep's head.

Can you please stop bragging about Hermione? Hermione's talent is really average, she just needs more hard work and self-discipline. The best talent in their class should be Harry, not Hermione. In addition, Hermione is an academic master, but she is just an ordinary academic master. Harry can counterattack by relying on Snape's notes from his student days. This shows that Hermione is not very strong in terms of physical talent or learning ability. She is far behind Snape, Dumbledore and others, and even inferior to several of Ron's brothers.

Why do people keep saying that the original version of Hermione is ugly? It's not ugly if she was chosen by a big star and dressed up in fourth grade to stun the whole audience. Don't forget, of course, there are Veela on the same stage, and Harry and Ron were selected through auditions. Hermione was selected by Rowling and the director team from many elementary schools. Doesn't everyone understand what this means?

Collection, I hope I can write better and don't enter the palace

I asked for one less last time, so I want to ask again now.

I feel a little bit unaccustomed to it. For example, I licked Harry and the others too much in the front. If I don't say too much about Huo Min, you probably want to write it as a heroine. But every time Harry and the others got into trouble and made Huo Min sad, you would go to her and say that Harry and the others were good people and it was not intentional. Why do I feel that Harry is the heroine, and the protagonist wipes his butt vigorously?

I haven't read much, just over a hundred chapters. I feel like the protagonist is always saving the world when he goes to a certain place. I don't quite understand if the protagonist is not the store manager. The world has its own savior, so I don't need you.

When we watched Harry Potter, we may have thought that the three main characters were quite good. It would be strange if you really get along with them and get along with them. The two men cause trouble all day long, and the woman competes with you all day long. Can drive people crazy😡😡😡I don't believe you don't avoid them.

So weak, maybe the author has a misunderstanding of strength. If you have a superpower worldview, don't use your personal power. No matter how powerful you are, it will never be able to compare with the power of the collective. I'm really speechless. Those who have this concept should go to the urban department to create. If nothing else, let's just say that one nuclear bomb is more powerful than countless weapons in deterrence. Not to mention that the collective power of the extraordinary world can defeat certain individual powers. What's more, the collective will compromise with some individual power, and the collective wants to possess this power. I don't know if the author is experiencing some collective power. Superhumans are more like natural disasters in reality. Some of them cannot be resisted with collective strength, such as the instantaneous disappearance of all oxygen on the earth and the eruption of magma on the surface. This can be easily solved in the extraordinary world. You want to say that those with the strongest strength will join the collective. That's impossible, the power is never the same. There must be strong and weak, and the strongest one can beat them all. There is nothing to sanction yet. There is one layer after another.

If you want to see Bankai, you can leave. Most of them are about Harry Potter plots and have nothing to do with Bankai and the store. There are not many customers and interactions.

I feel that the protagonist is very timid. He wants to do things but dare not do them. He is surrounded by several pig teammates and he often gets tricked. The story and power are good, but the character of the male protagonist is really annoying. What the hell is this kind of two-dimensional daily male protagonist? Wouldn't it be better to be more mature...

I've read so many chapters, aren't I the shopkeeper of all realms? Where is the store? What about the products in the store? What about customers? Why did I get caught up in the plot of Harry Potter?

The logic of this book gets worse as you go to the end. If you have a higher level than the Harry Potter plane, you can change the level at will. As a result, you can't defeat the boss at the end of the Harry Potter world.

I have only read the first volume, and the plot of Harry Potter is just a one-volume anecdotal copy of the original plot, which is bland and boring. There are also logical errors in the author's quantitative description of some data, such as the acquisition and use of offset points, the value of gold, etc., Which is difficult to convince people and also reduces the sense of substitution in disguise. The life experience of being a man for more than thirty years in two lifetimes has been emphasized many times, but it has not been written out, and the description is often embarrassing. To sum up, it can only be regarded as a passable book. It doesn't have too many bad points, but it doesn't have any bright spots. I wish the author will write better and better in the future.

Pray from the bottom of my heart not to be alone

I always feel like the protagonist doesn't look like an adult