A Certain Magic's Hogwarts

Naruto fanfics are basically finished, while HP fanfics are basically unfinished. After reading a lot of fan works, I found this very interesting thing. After thinking about it carefully, I think the key point is that HP is a fairy tale with few characters and a boss fight from the beginning to the end. As a fan creator, you must create your own creation to expand the world view and find the meaning of the existence of the fan hero, and you must not ignore the role of the trio. Nowadays, some books with less poisonous points adopt the method of staggering the time period of the protagonist and the trio to avoid the poisonous points. Although there will be some die-hard fans of the trio, the world view can be less constrained, which is also a good method. There are also many poisonous points in the construction of the world view. Many books in Naruto fandom that allow the protagonist to have other Japanese comic abilities have survived because they are all passionate anime with the same cultural background and similar styles. Those authors who added Chinese Taoism to HP, have you seriously added them? Are you sure you are not adding the upgrade monster-killing flow in fantasy novels? Magic in General HP is just an element of life, playing the same role as electric coal. The real highlight is never the fighting, but the stories and emotions between people under the strong sense of immersion in living in a magical world. Fighting is just lubricant, you cannot put the cart before the horse. Therefore, I think a good fan work should be as close to the original work as possible in terms of the power system. The storyline of a good HP fan should be able to show more details of life in the British wizarding world, or build a reasonable humanistic outlook on the wizarding world in other parts of the world. The Fantastic Beasts movie is actually a good example. Don't write the protagonist as one who is overwhelmed by strength and destined to be his destiny, because it is a low-demon world, and it is difficult to guarantee that it will not collapse, with different enemies popping up all the time. Moreover, HP is really not suitable for writing conventional white articles. I have seen many good ideas being wasted. In short, I hope that all authors who are willing to spend time writing HP fan fiction can focus more on the plot, and use writing techniques that are stronger than HP fairy tales to show us a more magnificent or vivid HP world view. There should be a masterpiece about this.

William Stark Wand

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In fact, I quite like Hermione. As a wizard who came from an ordinary family, not only did she not give up on herself, but she worked harder to strengthen her beliefs and never gave up. Moreover, the way Hermione, who had just arrived in the magical world, protected her little hedgehog, was like a little wolf cub that had only left the group. Even if she showed her teeth and grinned, she would not be scary, but rather cute. Moreover, she is a serious and cute-looking little girl holding a big book and looking for the truth seriously. She is really cute and adorable.

Finished spreading flowers! My two favorite HP fics, Bloodline and this book, are both finished one after the other, ah——! I stayed at home during the Chinese New Year this year and finished the HP movies in one go. I was deeply attracted by this fantasy world, so I have been reading HP fanfiction crazily since the Spring Festival. I have memorized many of the plots by heart, and I have also read many interesting stories and second stories, but only these two are the most suitable for me. The author's creativity is very suitable. Reasonable, there is no stiff feeling of forced stitching, and there is no setting that goes against the world view. It is very comfortable to watch. I feel reluctant to let go and look forward to it when it is about to end. I bought Lego Harry Potter in July and read it for a while, but the game did not bring me much joy. Gradually, many fans started to look down on it. There are not many surprises, because most of the books basically overlap with the original story line to a large extent, and the ending can be seen at a glance. This is also where many fan authors are conflicted. If they don't copy, they are afraid that readers will be dissatisfied, and if they create their own, they will be afraid of poor writing. If they copy, many people will dislike it. Many fans are stuck in the fourth or fifth grade or the Goblet of Fire. It's a eunuch, but this book adds many of its own stories to the original story line, such as going to destroy the city (crossed out) to save the world during the summer vacation. Many of them are the protagonist's own stories, which makes people sure that this is another person's story and not a re-read of the original work. This is a highlight of this work and one of the reasons why I recommend it. With the completion of this book, I think my HP craze will have cooled down. There is indeed no interesting work that attracts me now. I also understand what I really want to find in fan works. The story of Harry Potter has been completed. No one wants to read a story over and over again. Readers want to pursue their own stories, the wizarding world in everyone's heart, where they make whatever changes they want and write their own legends. I wish the author's next book will be a hit, and I wish you flowers when it's finished!

I'm halfway through the book, and overall it's a good book. The only drawback is that the character of the sister is too contrived and unlikable. It reminded me of the book "Hogwarts on the Tip of the Tongue". The heroine was so capable of acting like a monster, as abnormal as a mental illness. I gave up after reading a few chapters.

I feel like the main character is a little too naive. People who are not my kind must have different minds. Humans will never be able to get along with house elves as equals. After servility was eradicated and their minds were liberated, the house elves would only breed deep-seated hatred when faced with the differential treatment by humans.

In France, Hermione pretends to be William, kisses and seduces other women, and deliberately ruins William's reputation to prevent other women from approaching. This plot is really a bit poisonous. From another perspective, it is equivalent to kissing other men in front of your wife's face, making her have the reputation of a slut and a scumbag to prevent other men from grabbing her. Your wife, don't you feel bad? Even if Hermione apologized to the male protagonist in private later (not even afterwards but only after the male protagonist expressed her love), it was still disgusting. It's really a bad taste 😐 Looking at other comments, it seems that the male protagonist's sister also did this kind of thing.

， I've read 90% of Qidian's Harry Potter fics, and this book ranks among the top three.       ，，       ，，，， I am a legend, it is very amazing at first glance, it is very awesome that a new author can write like this. It's a pity that Wen Qing started to play in the middle period, and the heroine died. It was so sad that I didn't dare to read further. Although it is not true that literary youth cannot write, I still want to relax when reading online articles, so I stopped reading them after putting them on the bookshelf. The alchemist's daily style is a bit slow, the blood wizard is a bit watery, the poisoned egg is a bit exaggerated, and the school beats the second-year Slytherin students until they don't know whether they are alive or dead. I didn't finish it until I drank black tea, but it's still a good book. These are the ones I have read and am currently reading, and I have not read the others. These are all good books, but I still think this book can be ranked in the top three. The plot is reasonable, the characters are a breakthrough based on the original work, and it follows current events. There are not too many bad jokes. It is funny and not too sensational. It is really great. Believe in yourself, and even your colleagues can become great gods. In a word, the author is awesome! !

I regret that I spent 200 subscription points in the early stage just to be able to comment on the chapters. The results became more and more ugly as I read them, and I had to give up before I could even subscribe. He is honey, I am arsenic, the following is my demining, you can judge for yourself: 1. Excessive jokes, three sentences and one joke, many obviously inappropriate Internet memes have to be stuffed into it. It can be seen that the author is very self-motivated when writing, but it is not certain whether others will be happy or not. 2. It is full of uncomfortable pornographic jokes and inexplicable plots. How should I put it, it is not smelly, but you can clearly feel that the author is like a boy in a university dormitory. (For example, the frequent "milky white liquid splashed on the face" (not necessarily a woman's face) is actually milk/porridge or something) 3. Professors are too useless and have no crisis response ability at all. Anyone can cause a teaching accident that requires the professor to be hospitalized. Such a person should just be a professor and go back to farming. 4. The hang-up is too great. Even if it is an adult's learning ability, he almost completed the second-year course by himself in the half summer before entering school without any magic foundation. In the original work, no matter whether it is Hermione, a top student with strong learning ability, or a pureblood from an aristocratic family, no one can say that they can speed up to this level in half a summer without formal teaching, but this is still bearable. Later, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I thought I would at least look at the few pictures I subscribed to, so I turned to the back - although I don't know what happened, in just one year, our first-year protagonist has already won the Order of Merlin, and completed all the courses of Potions and Defense Against the Dark Arts in the time loop. What's the point of looking at such a big score? Forget it, Voldemort is even A in the third grade. 5. The original character is ooc, but this matter is a matter of opinion, so I put it in the last one. But at least I can't accept it. When I first saw Qiu, I thought, "If I do what I want to her, I will be sent to Azkaban." ? Above. New users are asked to make their own judgment.