Hogwarts' Lone High Dragon

The reviews for this book are average. The content is very good, the number of updates is too high, and the average is just average ()

The author should try his best to keep dialogues and descriptions closer to the original work, and use less words like "you, he, mua, stupid", etc. It is quite funny to read, and it is still necessary to maintain proper literary seriousness (don't criticize if you don't like it)

As far as I know, anyone who dares to put a lot of effort into writing emotional dramas will fail.

What does the author want to do? I picked Boruto at the climax of Shippuden. The protagonist fell under an illusion and entered the world of illusion, right?

From the current point of view, the protagonist is a realist, and the power is attributed to oneself, so the shaping of the heroine is very important. In my opinion, the best one is a kind-hearted but smart person like Lily, who can act as an anchor for the protagonist and knows who is good to him. After all, we readers do not want to see a virgin heroine who has double standards for the protagonist and the opponent. I hope the author can work harder. Please vote first to respect me.

What are you writing about? Is John's storyline over? Or write another sequel? To be honest, you wrote the Goblin War very hastily and the story line jumped too fast. And with this character creation, can Jack be blackmailed even though his last name is Safit? No matter what, John would never raise his son like this, even if he is not his biological son. The Jack you wrote is like a Muggle wizard who has just entered the magical world and is bullied by a pureblood without any magic skills. Again, John is the best, and Jack can teach him even a troll with his father's ability, and his father is also a Slytherin. The background and setting of this character are very contradictory. But if this character is someone you designed for other purposes, such as having his memory tampered with and his life fabricated, just pretend I didn't say anything about it.

The original novel doesn't like the four Predator kids. School bullying is a disgusting thing in every country.

I just wanted to say that this one is better than your previous two. Is this gone?

Should we really change the heroine? Silly Baitian is really silly Baitian. The heroine was still a bit charming before, but now, she is not as good as Alice. His arm was broken by a goblin, his lover was chased by the goblin and kicked out of school, and almost died. However, the heroine pretended that this had never happened and continued to be stupid and sweet? Not to mention how much it helps the male protagonist, but at least support the male protagonist, right? As a result, the heroine couldn't even do the most basic things, and she still doubted whether the hero who wanted to wage war against goblins was bad, and even wanted to fight. Dumbledore had to come out to persuade, "Sister, you are so entangled, why not just go neutral and leave it alone." Comparing the dedication of the male protagonist to the female protagonist, I am really speechless.

? ? ? The protagonist just reached his peak and jumped to his son? Doesn't the author only write stories about children? The storyline behind this is completely uninnovative... I'm really speechless. There isn't much content in each chapter. I've been holding back for a long time. Three chapters is equal to one chapter for others, and it's poorly written. It's a waste of my money. 😅