Unfettered on the Path to Immortality
仙路纵横
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 3.8M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2d ago
- English
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The protagonist's character is a bit toxic: he has to run away when his family goes to war with the Zhou family. This is different from characters like Lu the Turtle, Lu the Talisman Master, and Han the Old Demon. Those characters were treated so well by their families and uncles, yet the protagonist didn't repay them much before abandoning them and running away.
The story claims to be about a lone wolf, yet the protagonist thinks of his family in everything he does. Can a reborn person really have such deep feelings for a completely unfamiliar family? Even if the original body's owner had some connection, and the protagonist provided some good things or inheritance, that would be enough. Why write something that's a bait-and-switch?
Author, please stop. I felt a little nauseous after reading this.
To cultivate immortality, you must first be a human being, right? No one else writes about cultivating demons in such a bird-like manner. Profit-seeking, ruthless, narrow-minded, cruel and murderous. Could it be that you are not writing about cultivating immortals, but about cultivating animals. What kind of thing did you write about the theme of cultivating immortality?
The protagonist prioritizes his own interests.
This is good, because the path of immortality values personal cultivation, and cultivation is ultimately a personal matter. It is already very commendable that the protagonist is willing to give back to his family appropriately. Families and sects are formed for the purpose of enabling individuals to cultivate better, and this should not be put in the wrong order.
The author is really feeling uncomfortable.
It is said that it is a mortal abortion, but it is written that it is more terrifying than cannibal abortion. You don't need to ask anyone for directions. You can directly find a person with low cultivation level to kill people and search for souls. If you encounter an important treasure, you will find ways to kill people and seize the treasure.
Why so many explanations? All sorts of explanations—too many explanations become meaningless.
It's a bit wordy.
I'm not nitpicking, it's okay that there's no female lead, at least there's a spirit pet. However, the interaction between you and your spirit pet is pitifully small. You're really like an ascetic monk, spending your days meditating, cultivating, and plotting for resources on the ascension platform.
It's a pity that the author just made the protagonist a robot that can only upgrade.
128, 256, 512... Are you cultivating immortality or making a hard drive?
It's a bit of a shame that there were too few fight scenes, and there are also some logical issues. Tian Lei Zi could kill a Foundation Establishment cultivator and break through their defenses, but he couldn't break through the protagonist's Qi Refining defenses? The logic is quite flawed.