The Cautious Path to Sainthood: A Golden Trait from the Start

It's indeed a slow pace. Everyone next door has built a foundation, but you haven't refined your Qi yet.

The plot is okay, and the logic is good. The year before was mediocre, and then it was okay. There is a big contrast between the front and the back. The protagonist felt immature in the front, but it was okay in the back. However, there were too many typos, so I still need to check.

There are typos, the data does not match up, the author does not seem to know how to self-check, and the general logic is okay. Have a clear understanding of the content you are writing, think more about the internal logic and connections of multiple factors, and the results will show some reasonable surprises, and the content will be better

I've read Chapter 92. It's okay. You don't need the golden finger. I feel like it's not very useful.

The seven disciples flew, and Ge Changqing chased him, leaving him to sit on the fire in the middle of the night, practicing hard day and night without retreating, killing Baicao people with three swords, sneaking down the mountain without returning at night, encountering Ling'er sister in the forbidden area, who else became famous in one stop, returned to Jianmen and was dying, and fled all the way to the south.

I don't know what you think, whether you want to be steady or not, it doesn't mean that the plot is stable. The conflict between senior brother's stability and stability is very obvious. It's not that simple to write in this genre. You have to have an intense plot to be stable. Otherwise, how can you attract people by just looking at daily practice?

The logic is okay, I still feel immersed in it, don't be a eunuch.

I want to see how long it takes for you to be equal

I have seen a few spiritual roots that have traveled through the world of immortality. They are good things.

The protagonist is too weak, the newcomers still need to work hard, let's become a god as soon as possible