Warriors Die When They Charge

Don't write about such legendary events in the early stage. It feels like it's not something that the protagonist can cope with at this stage. Writing it once in a while feels good and has an epic feel, but when you write it continuously, it changes. This is not the protagonist's journey of growth but a puppet dancing on the line for people's entertainment.

At the beginning, I wrote that the protagonist is a strong man, and then I wrote that he only weighs more than 100 kilograms. Later, I wrote that the orc is half a head taller and stronger than the protagonist, but only 95kg. You know, when I lost weight at 188, I was 96kg. If you don't know how to calculate weight, just use Jackie Chan as a template.

I feel there's a problem. The protagonist is supposed to be a time traveler, but he acts a bit like a native.

It was okay in the early stage. Even the gambling with the female mage that was criticized in the comment section was not that poisonous. After all, it may have a spell effect. But after that classic half-elf beauty appeared, I really couldn't hold myself any longer. I originally looked for dwarves as teammates at the beginning, and I also said that we finally have hardcore adventurers.

The scene where the protagonist suddenly starts playing cards with the mage was really inexplicable. The cloak of intelligence, which was supposed to be a joke, also fell flat. The author provided an explanation, but in my opinion, it was due to insufficient character development and felt too abrupt.

It's very uncomfortable to read. The first few chapters felt inexplicable, and the later ones were equally nonsensical. The author successfully turned me off with just over ten chapters.

It's absolutely awful. The beginning is incoherent and the ending is still somewhat readable, but what era are we living in? To spend an entire chapter describing how a minor female villain is oppressed and then murders her entire family is just ridiculous. It's clear the writer has gone overboard, lost in their own world, and completely oblivious to the realities of life...

The author writes interesting stories with vivid character portrayals, but now it's becoming increasingly difficult to understand the story's progression, especially after leaving the starting village of Linhe Town. The writing becomes disjointed and haphazard, with various side quests appearing out of nowhere and ending abruptly.

The protagonist's passive ability to be inexplicably foul-mouthed is really vicious. It's understandable to use foul language and taunt during wartime to attract hatred, but to be constantly foul-mouthed in daily life is disgusting. It's normal for the protagonist not to be a saint, but to inexplicably unleash malice on everything, constantly berate others, and belittle others is just too cruel.

The protagonist is a gambler. The initial lottery draw aside, the card game with the mage in chapter 10 is truly ridiculous. His intelligence seems questionable as well. I don't want to read any more.