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All aspects are okay, but I read the introduction and thought it was a light-hearted novel about non-human teammates, such as recruiting ogres, bugbears, orcs, werewolves, beholders, etc. As a result, the dozens of chapters written so far are too weak. In the early stage, the main line mainly followed a high-level human adventure group that was completely unequal to the protagonist's strength. Now he goes out with the transport team to take on tasks. The plot says that the protagonist will become independent, but it is not as fast as expected. At the moment, I can't tell whether I want to write about a harem or a single female protagonist. However, there is a subplot of a promiscuous woman with succubus blood, and the charm of the protagonist is specially set very high. It's really hard to tell whether it is a single female protagonist or a harem. After all, it is normal to be romantic in Western fantasy. At first, I thought that this charm is similar to the special attack on humanoids or monsters. The result is a normal charm that attracts women.

What does it mean to write such a controversial plot on the eve of the release of Fantasy Prison Zone?

First of all, I would like to thank all readers for your support. I am nothing without you. Every comment and vote you make is the motivation for my writing. As for whether I have used AI, although I am a little Kalami, I would also like to clarify that AI is so convenient for checking information, who would not use it, but for AI polishing, expansion, and direct printing, I have absolutely no use for it. My editor does not accept AI. If I use it, I will not be able to pass the internal submission. Finally, readers who don't believe it can report it. In short, it is definitely not a joke that Diedi rejects AI. Let Diedi decide which one is best.

The writing is a bit awesome and looks very comfortable.

The other plots are okay, but Aliya's emotional line is too abrupt.

Writing a half-succubus drags and twists and turns, and it takes a lot of pen and ink to make the character unable to stand up. The dialogue with the young lady feels like a domestic campus TV series, and it doesn't sound like a normal person. I feel like the positioning has changed? It will take a lot of effort to write a few more, so it is recommended to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses.

I couldn't stand it any longer, so I slipped away.

The front is okay, but the back is too watery, a batch of Xihuantong sick water

A very good novel, but the exposure rate is a bit low. I suggest you promote it with other authors.

Ogre teammates are very unique. Arya and the protagonist met for the first time in the chicken garden, which is a little bit poisonous.

Dnd type, very good writing style. Did the author forget to correct the mistakes? There are too many typos.

In Baldur's Gate 3, there is a circus full of monsters. The leader is a necromancer. There are dragon-born elemental creatures in red hats. I guess the author wants to write about this.

I have a question that I don't understand here. What are the main attributes of the priest?

🙂 I have finished reading the current twenty chapters. The author has written quite well. It would be nice if he could proofread it after finishing it.

Why are updates less frequent? Please update quickly.

It's okay. It's a rare book in the fantasy area that almost doesn't use AI to write. The remaining words are too few and I can't tell much. I hope the author can work hard.

There are only two chapters in a day, so I will use a magnifying glass to read it. If you update ten chapters in a day, I am a retard, and I will also analyze the scriptures for you! Update soon!

Please write more, the chapters you changed are a mess.

It seems to be a very good book so far.

So what type is it, harem or multiple or dual, or single?

A coward at a critical moment, the protagonist is the embodiment of the author's will. From the current point of view, he will definitely suffer from literary youth disease in the future. I can only say, either don't look for it, or be more magnanimous if you do look for it. Those who are neither good nor bad are true cowards.

First-level author: Could it be that some old eunuch was reincarnated? 🤫

Nothing else, I just want to ask why there are 100 chapters and 230,000 words are not on the shelves. Is it because I am not satisfied with any of the data?

There are typos and missing words in some of the chapters that have been revised, and the meaning is not clear. I hope the author has time to fix them.

I've seen you face off against readers, and I've seen you say nothing. It's the first time I've seen you so humble. I read it specifically, and I'm still fine-tuning the problematic chapters. Actually, it's not necessary. I'm not just reading your few chapters. Although the cleaning is a bit abrupt and the boss at the end of the level appears on the mini-map, it's not like other people said. Maybe it's because I didn't see it before the modification. You can rest assured and write. A book cannot be perfect. Depending on your writer level, this should be your first book. My Age of Magic has so many flaws, but it does not affect its overall enjoyment. Write according to your own ideas, and you can completely create the customs and customs of another world while taking risks. Then there is the issue of female characters. I think you either don't have a female protagonist, don't write any emotions at all, or you just mess with girls of various races. Don't add female characters to the adventure group. They can be your sex partners after completing a dungeon, but they shouldn't take up too much of the scene. Finally, don't show any normal people in the adventure map. Your current tanned ogre with both physical and mental abilities is very interesting. Later, try to invite some contrasting races into the group, such as a kind-hearted mind flayer priest, an orc bard who loves to sing, and a tauren monk who likes to expose his breasts. Anyway, come on, it looks good, I like it very much

It's well written. Although it uses AI, I still give you a thumbs up. Hurry up and put it on the shelves. I'll order it all for you. There is no need to explain too much. I believe that you have finalized the plot and other details.

Not bad, has the flavor of Western fantasy

I need pictures to enrich my fantasies

The book is quite nice, but there are still some small problems. For example, there are too few or too many words in some places, and some sentences are not smooth. I hope they can be corrected.

After reading five or six chapters briefly, the details, dialogue, everything is right. Keep up the quality and you will be successful, bro. The temporary evaluation is: Liangcao+, let's see how it goes in the future.