Open Your Adventuring Party Log

What does it mean to write such a controversial plot on the eve of the release of Fantasy Prison Zone?

It's alright in all aspects, but based on the synopsis, I thought it was a lighthearted, comedic novel about recruiting non-human teammates, such as ogres, goblins, orcs, werewolves, and beholders. The current dozens of chapters are too weak. In the early stages, the main storyline mainly follows a high-level human adventure team whose strength is completely unequal to that of the protagonist.

First of all, thank you all for your support. Without you, I am nothing. Every comment and vote you give is my motivation to write. Regarding whether I used AI, although I'm a junior editor, I want to clarify that AI is so convenient for researching, who wouldn't use it? But I absolutely did not use AI for polishing, expanding, or straight-out-of-line editing.

It's written really well, and it's a very comfortable read.

The character of the half-succubus is drawn out and awkward, and despite the amount of writing, she doesn't feel believable. Her dialogue with the young lady feels like a Chinese campus drama, lacking any sense of normalcy. It seems like the character's positioning has been altered. Writing several more of these would be incredibly difficult to read. I suggest playing to your strengths and avoiding your weaknesses.

The rest of the plot was fine, but Arya's romantic subplot felt too abrupt.

I can't stand it anymore, I'm outta here.

The beginning was alright, but the later parts were so damn padded—a common problem with Western fantasy novels.

It's difficult to understand the protagonist's logic, or rather, the author's logic. What is the purpose of making someone who can eat a lot eat even more? A perfect match? What makes it a perfect match? This is so stupid it makes me want to cry.

It's a very good novel, but it hasn't received much exposure. I suggest promoting it more with other authors.