The Leader of the Kunlun Sect in The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber

Why did the protagonist suddenly become a loser? Didn't he level up again after injuring King Yin Ye? I didn't say anything to you when you were beaten to death. You were packed up and taken away. I was convinced. What I wrote before was so awesome. What kind of genius is arrogant and arrogant? You suddenly turned into a chicken. You are so beautiful. I saw the protagonist of 108 being arrested. I persisted for a few chapters and it was really hard to bear. Can't help it, there is no main mission in the clouds and mist. There are so many adventures and martial arts secrets in Yitian, but I haven't found any of them, and I haven't explained why. I am no different from the natives. I traveled through time in vain, thinking that martial arts is not easy and will finally provide food and grass, so I withdrew.

The foreshadowing is how the protagonist has amazing talents and unparalleled combat power. This chapter is unimagery even when written down. Jin Yong Back then, I was scolded bloody when I wrote about Zhang Wuji's arrest and serialized it in Hong Kong. It was only after I finally wrote it that I was able to save a little bit of my reputation with my great success. How many years have passed? How long has this out-of-control adventure been going on? More than ten years ago, Squid wrote The Supreme Being Meng Qi was arrested in the Western Desert and was sprayed with many chapters. In the end, he quickly changed the chapter, completed the copy and immediately killed him and put an end to it. How many times have the writing methods and readers of the novel been iterated? . To put it in layman's terms, either the description of the protagonist's aura has been suppressed in the early stage, and it is logical that he will be captured and have an adventure. In the previous hundred chapters, you kept highlighting how awesome the protagonist is, but in the end, he was treated like a pig by putting on a bag and begging for mercy. The image you created step by step in the reader's mind was ruined. No matter how much you write about how charming and suave he is and how unparalleled his fighting prowess is, it still can't make up for it.

Where did Yang Buhui get such a high talent in martial arts? Thinking that everyone is like Zhang Wuji (not everyone can practice magical skills, is it true that Xiaowu lacks magical skills? In the end, he didn't become two idiots). It took Jue Yuan several decades of practice to master the Nine-Yang Magic Kung Fu, but he failed to clear the last entrance. The conditions for Zhang Wuji to quickly master the Nine-Yang Magic Kung Fu are: 1. A solid foundation in martial arts, memorizing Wudang sect martial arts and the martial arts principles taught by Xie Xun since childhood. 2. I have been tortured and tempered by the true energy of the Xuanming Divine Palm since I was a child, and the true energy was transferred by Zhang Sanfeng to nourish the meridians. 3. Learned the Wudang Nine Yang Kung Fu to lay the foundation 4. Learned medicine from Diegu Medical Fairy, and understood the meridians and medical principles of the human body. The original book describes that when you encounter something you don't understand in the Nine Yang Manual, you can combine it with medicine to confirm each other 5. Food supplements, the flat peaches and big white fish from the Kunlun Mountains are both for replenishing vitality. A great tonic 6. Have a good mentality, see through people's appearances, and I will be the same. The original work describes that Zhang Wuji felt that he could not get out of the valley, so he practiced martial arts very casually.

It started out well, then became more and more cliche.

In the latest chapter, Chasing Soul Sect has lost all face and face. Not only has the Kongtong Authentic Sect that it persisted for decades turned into shit, but it has also kneeled down and begged for help from all the major sects. Not to mention that all face has been lost. Whoever comes to the rescue is a big favor. How can the protagonist pay it back in the future? ! This chapter is such a failure! ! ! It's okay for the protagonist not to look for Jiuyang, or it's okay for the protagonist to be obsessed with Kongtong martial arts. Then the protagonist must be awesome enough. As a result, the protagonist has traveled through time for five years and has become like this. He is completely crushed by someone who can't be said. If the protagonist doesn't look for Jiuyang, wouldn't it be a big joke! ! ! I already felt awkward when the protagonist asked for advice on swordsmanship from Annihilation. Aren't you bragging about how talented the protagonist is? ! How can I learn swordsmanship and still ask for guidance from others? ! Now, let's make a big deal out of it, and it will completely destroy the whole sect's face. This is really a scam. Author, you must think your results are too good! ! !

Ji Xiaofu's part was really baffling. She almost had to fight Ding Minjun? Too many people are killed and your brain is damaged. Can you just say that the rescued orphan girl was saved by Ji Xiaofu? As for Ji Xiaofu, is she so stupid that she doesn't even tell her daughter not to call her mom? You can just tell me in advance that you can cover up the past, so why do you just recognize me as your mother? Then how did you know that Ji Xiaofu has so many things? Do you want others to know you have a problem?

But depending on the situation later in this book, I will most likely not follow it. . . Because I feel that the author must be the kind of person who has a literary problem. Sooner or later, he will make a serious mistake and offend all readers. The simplest example is that he cannot not know how much the readers and audiences hate the character Ji Xiaofu. But I just want to write it, and I have written it again and again. The protagonist has no use in it. Then if you delete the relevant characters and the plot, it is not hello, me, everyone, okay? Secondly, the author's personal thoughts are too strong, and he does not consider the audience at all. As long as he thinks it is reasonable, it is obvious that the book review opinions will not be consulted. If the writing is bad, it must be because the readers have insufficient taste. There is nothing wrong with the author. .

The protagonist has no skills at all. He has to jump up and down, kill this and which, attract powerful enemies, and be kicked like a dog on the roadside. It would be better to practice his kung fu to the first level first, at least he will not be kicked like a dog. If you write like this, I might as well review the original work. After the original work was frustrated, there are two exciting points: Jiuyang and the Great Shift of the Universe.

I gave up the book after reading the latest chapter 155. It was too clever, it was either kill or let go, but in the end, I gave someone acupuncture and was framed by outsiders. The update is too slow and I am speechless.

😥😥 I started to suppress the protagonist's combat power. I wanted to spread out the group portraits to reduce the protagonist's sense of existence, but the writing was a mess, which was refreshing but not satisfying. Recently, I also started to do the martial arts and literary youth style, and the more I wrote, the more I was drawn.