The Night My Family Was Slaughtered, I Perfected the Yijin Jing!

Can you please stop having the female lead following you everywhere? Several of your books have had her inseparable from beginning to end. Frankly, your character development is mediocre to begin with, and the female lead is basically just a pretty face. Plus, your writing is incredibly weak. The female lead constantly following the protagonist is just a tool for padding the story.

Read two hundred chapters The writing is smooth, the plot progresses smoothly with occasional minor demotions, and there are clever little schemes to adjust the pace. As an invincible protagonist story, it's already a masterpiece. However, there are two points I have to complain about. First, this isn't wuxia at all; it's closer to fantasy martial arts like "Storm Riders."

Whenever I write a female protagonist storyline, I get bombarded with threats from unknown creatures and I abandon the book. I've never won a classic poll, but I've never lost a shouting contest. I'm the internet's biggest fan of battle cries and threats.

I got to know the author after reading for sixty years. To be honest, I think the author writes the invincible martial arts novel quite well. The basic skills are not bad, and the characters in the novel, while not necessarily invincible, are at least intelligent. The author also handles the traditional character types such as the scheming little witch and the neighborly older sister with ease.

I'll read the whole book as long as it's not too outrageous. 🤫

Having an invincible start, how do you create an entry point? Here, the author teaches you: get to know a woman, and her troubles become your troubles, her family's troubles become your troubles, even her sect's troubles become your troubles. Okay, all solved. Next entry point? No problem, just get to know another one.

A sect from the Central Region, not particularly powerful, dares to look down on someone who has conquered several martial worlds? Their actions in the Eastern Region are minor, but their presence in the Northern Region and the East Sea shows they're no ordinary force. And they just wiped out an entire Southern Region sect. Is their information dissemination really that bad?

The romance scenes are written like garbage, and you keep writing those stereotypical female supporting characters flirting with the protagonist. The writing is so bad, the supporting characters are poorly developed, yet you keep writing it. What are you trying to show off? Are you trying to make sure everyone knows you're writing garbage?

I heard it had over 10,000 subscribers, so I came to read it. I've read up to chapter 50 so far, and the writing is pretty average. There are quite a few things to criticize, like the character who falls off a cliff and never dies. It's quite astonishing that it has over 10,000 subscribers.

Dear naive readers, think about it. How could a truly powerful person only have one woman? Let alone in the world of martial arts, even in the real world, which powerful figure only has one woman? It's illogical for someone to only have one woman.