The Night My Family Was Slaughtered, I Perfected the Yijin Jing!

The heroine has to be followed wherever he goes. Several of the books are conjoined twins from beginning to end. To put it bluntly, your character creation is mediocre and the heroine you create is a beauty. In addition, the things you write are so watery. The heroine follows the protagonist every day and is just a tool of hydrology. When I read this book, I thought the heroine could finally be a flower vase at the base camp, but in the end she had to keep up with the protagonist. Can you write a more free-spirited protagonist? He has to take his family with him wherever he goes, so he doesn't feel like he's carefree.

If I write about the female protagonist, a bunch of unknown creatures threaten to abandon the book. I haven't won the classic vote, I haven't lost with my voice, and I love all the war cries and threats on the Internet.

I read two hundred chapters The writing is smooth, the plot progresses smoothly, there are occasional small demotions, and there are small strategies to adjust the rhythm. As an invincible style, it is already a masterpiece. 0 But there are two points that I have to complain about First, this is not martial arts at all. It is closer to the fantasy martial arts like Fengyun. Ordinary martial arts people smash a big rock with one palm and are already famous masters in the world. However, top masters can shatter a building with their inner strength revealed when they are angry. The gap is too big to give the town a middle score with one stroke The second and most serious point is that I am too bad at mathematics. I don't want to say that those everywhere are top masters who can easily defeat everyone in the world, but they have to be sewer rats and don't know where the resources are to support their subordinates. The most egregious thing is that a mysterious organization, and it's an assassin organization, has pulled 4,000 people across a region and carried out covert operations to assassinate the protagonist. Who has so many assassins? What conditions do you have to raise 4,000 off-duty martial arts assassins? How can you 4,000 people operate in secret? Whose assassins form a group of 4,000 people? Do you know that 4,000 people can stand in a football field even if they stand in a square formation? Do you have any mathematical knowledge?

This book is not too outrageous. I will read the whole book 🤫

Invincible at the start, how to create an entry point? Come on, the author will teach you, if you get to know a woman, her troubles will become your troubles, her family's troubles will also become your troubles, and even her school's troubles will also become your troubles. OK, now that we have solved it, what's the next entry point? It's okay, let's meet someone else

A sect that is not very powerful in the Central Region dares to look down on a person who has penetrated several rivers and lakes? The Eastern Region can be said to be a small fight, the Northern Region, the East China Sea, etc., You can tell that they are not ordinary people. They just wiped out all the Southern Territory gates. Is the delivery of information so bad? Having killed a large number of people several times, doesn't it mean that there is no point in having more people? Even if you don't know that it can absorb internal force, you can still tell that the battery life is very strong. Although it has been stated early on that people in the Central Region look down on people from other places, it is really speechless to be able to say "You should kill yourself". Not to mention being prepared, at least try to kill them with a large number of elites. What a young boy, he only has an appearance, what sentence he said, I forgot it for a while, it can be said that I have to mention it every time. Probably because he may be just showing off. It's just semi-invincible. You are invincible, but others always look down upon you. At least that's how it was expressed in words at first. Can't you change it? Or is this all you have in your vocabulary? If it hadn't been for a really horizontal push, I would have stopped watching it.

The emotional scenes are written like 💩, and you keep writing about the female supporting characters flirting with the protagonist. The writing is so bad, the supporting characters are also bad, and you keep writing. What are you showing off? Are you afraid that others don't know that you are writing 💩? Your strength is the invincible exhilaration of the protagonist. From Su Mo's book to now, your emotional scenes have not improved at all, and you are still showing off your shitty emotional scenes. You really want to persuade people to quit.

I heard that I have subscribed, so I came to read it. I have read fifty chapters so far. I feel that the writing is quite average. There are also many flaws, such as falling off a cliff and never dying. It's quite scary to have thousands of orders.

Dear young readers, think about it in your mind, how can a great person only have one woman. Let alone the martial arts world, in the real world, it is unreasonable for any awesome character to have only one woman.

I got to know the author after reading it for a while. To be honest, I think the author's writing on martial arts invincible is quite good. His basic skills are not bad, and the characters in the article are not only resourceful but also have online IQs. As for the traditional scheming little witch, the character of the leader sister can be regarded as a master, but the only shortcoming is The point is that the overall story of Invincible lacks ups and downs, and the direction of the story is clear at a glance. It is a type with a high lower limit and a low upper limit. However, the author handles these shortcomings very well. If there is no ups and downs, he uses foreshadowing and suspense to make up for it. The character's online IQ also makes the withdrawal of foreshadowing and suspense bring a sense of satisfaction. I have to say that the author's grasp of the refreshment points is very good. But the flaws of the invincible novel are huge and innate, so I think it is not an option to align the narrative focus with the supporting characters without destroying the rhythm. Spend more words on the supporting characters, show their growth under the shadow of the protagonist invincible, and see the impact of the protagonist's invincible on the world. The benefits of this are obvious. The supporting characters are more vivid, the world view is more real, the articles are more in-depth and innovative, and homogeneity is avoided. Moreover, the fate of the supporting characters is not as easy to guess as the protagonist. This can make up for the lack of ups and downs in the plot to a certain extent. Of course, this is entirely my personal brain test. My thoughts are very shallow and I talk a lot of nonsense. The risks of writing like this cannot be underestimated. The biggest risk is that the author takes up a lot of the main plot rhythm in order to write supporting characters, which is a small gain. Secondly, there will be more characters to focus on, which will put additional burden on the author. Finally, if the supporting character cannot dominate the main character and the image of the supporting character is solid, then it will inevitably take less pen and ink to shape it well, which is a huge challenge to the author's writing ability. I wanted to make a brief mention and throw some light on it, but I never thought I would talk so much nonsense. If you can see this, I am very grateful to you for reading through a stranger's nonsense. Thank you very much.