Peninsula: The Grand Slam Is the Goal

In what age is this kind of compulsory system still in place? Don't worry, it's on the new book list now. You can continue writing. If it's on the high-quality list, I'll take it.

The plot development is too slow, and sadistic main stories are no longer popular nowadays. It has been dozens of chapters and it has not yet entered the main line.

I don't know if it's the author's style or something, but the writing is too literary. The tennis part is okay, but the Korean entertainment part is particularly awkward. It's a bit uncomfortable to read like this, and tennis and Korean entertainment are a bit incompatible. You just played heartily on the court, and suddenly you cut off the emotional line of Korean entertainment and all kinds of literary youths. It's so disconnected.

It's so shameful that I only have 4,000 words after using AI.

The writing is very good, but it is too literary. It is okay to write about love, but it feels awkward to write about sports. The passion for sports events is not written at all. It is only written to be awkward and hard to read.

See the latest chapter so far. How can I put it, the overall flow of the story is pretty good. There are many AI sentence patterns in the early stage, but it will be relatively better later. I don't know why the Korean Wave as a whole treats the protagonist with a condescending attitude whenever he appears. Then the classic belittles it, and then later finds out that the protagonist is a child or some real situation, and then suddenly the reputation is good and the story changes. This writing method has been used several times. The most commonly used writing method is to write a lot of depressive writing methods for Balabala, and then after a while, you find out that the protagonist is actually Balabala or something, and your favorability begins to increase. Then the entire novel feels dull, not at all like Korean entertainment or sports literature. It seems extremely boring. There are interesting parts, but it is still a bit boring. It is kind of interesting to read, but it just doesn't make you happy. I have wanted to delete the book several times, but I thought the story was okay, so I kept it.

Irene

For example, if Faker and Son Heung-min want to play female stars, it may be as easy as drinking water. The main character is set to be the most handsome and can win the championship. He will definitely be out of the industry. In Korea, his social status cannot be soared like a rocket. The female stars he talks about are considered to be high-flying.

In fact, the tennis goal has been given by the system. First win a Grand Slam from the three masters. The Olympics will have to wait two years. There is no rush. As the easiest one, the Australian Open should be a must-win, and the more suspenseful ones are the French Open and Wimbledon. In tennis, as long as the author gets rid of the water problem, there is actually no problem. I would like to give you the following three suggestions: 1. For games that are not against strong opponents, try to shorten the description of the process as much as possible to two sections. 2. Interviews before and after the game are also subtractions. 3. Make additions to the matches of strong opponents, and transfer the subtraction of 1 and 2 to 3. The system can develop more tennis skills for different opponents. Idol's relationship: 1. You can write more about Jin Dong, because this person is in the same team as Liu, so you can have more topics to write about, and there are many materials for their team to refer to. Sister Qiaosi's character design and Dongyou CP are also famous. 2. The two main heroines, Sister Pei and Liu, can be detailed. In fact, they are already well written. These two are considered outstanding. The main conflict is between Zhang Yuanying and Liu's five-girl relationship. You can write about it extending to the tit-for-tat confrontation over the male protagonist's resources. 3. I don't agree with Jang Won-young and Kim Ji-soo having pure emotional scenes with the male protagonist, because Zhang is obviously the type who wants to rely on the male protagonist to get more traffic resources, and does not expect her to have too many feelings and just focus on taking advantage of each other. Kim Ji-soo's acting skills are not as good as those of a layman like the male protagonist because of her transition to film and television. This can have an abusive mentality, because instead of you being jealous of you, I will pester you, this kind of emotion. To be honest, in my mind, among the female protagonists currently appearing, I agree with Jin Donglong as the third female lead. Sister Qiaosi is a very naughty type. After all, she is a teammate but she is weak and does not want to give up. I only have so many suggestions for idols who are struggling with their relationships. Daily plot: Rolex's upgrade endorsement needs to be gradually promoted as the protagonist gets more masters. Many Korean idols will also participate in Dior's show, which is a good place for you to write about the interaction between the protagonist and the idols. Then the main line of the novel will soon enter 22, and the A group will slowly rise, and there will be more performances abroad. You can write about the interaction between the protagonist taking time out to go to their stage when competing, or they go to watch the protagonist's competition to increase the concentration of ambiguous scandals. Then I don't recommend that the protagonist's car be a Kia. It's really not high-end. At least drive a BBA. Then if you, the author, get stuck, contribute your account, and the brothers will help you write. Also, the Korean entertainment memes created by you, the author, are indeed very good. I hope you work hard, I will always support you, as long as you are not a prisoner.

In fact, the number of fans and the huge population base of the motherland give people the illusion. In fact, Kpop is a niche circle, and Korean entertainment is a niche among niches. There are many authors who use love to generate electricity, but few can really make money. There are many people who start writing articles as soon as they have an idea, but there are only a few who have the energy to finish the book. Tennis + Korean entertainment, cabbage + Dragon Dream, at least for me, they all hit my heart. I sincerely hope that the author can get better and better, write better and better, and leave a good story to Qidian Korean entertainment industry. I don't have any suggestions, and I don't recommend that authors listen to too many suggestions. Some people are born with bad things. If you change yourself to look less like yourself, you won't be able to retain such readers. That's what I said. Finally, I wish the author and all book friends good health and all the best. Ps: Also, please recommend the book, thank you.