Hardship Realm: One Trait a Year

Please write this book well, don't worry about your bad AI, you should have a longer memory after being iron fisted, and have a little bit of that flavor in the beginning.

Author, you have to describe the maid's clothes every time you go to a place. Aren't you afraid of being punished by the iron fist again?

I really don't blame the big guy for giving you an AI appraisal. It's just a mistake to write the part about "collecting ten thousand tribulations" at the front. It's not a big problem. The part about the strange dragon in the sky is so wrong. What does "killing it in the name of a god" mean? Can you be more responsible for what you wrote? Today's Xuanang Sword Niche is even more abstract. What are the "two swords of Hongmeng Five Wonders and Daitian Xingdao"? What if you watch the show yourself and check it out?

After all, too many authors name their protagonists who are ordinary or extraordinary, and they all have to be named after Ye Tiandi, which is really annoying after reading it too many times. It's better to be more careful in naming!

The narrative ability is too weak. I read more than 20 chapters, almost all of which are about the daily life of the protagonist and the maid, either looking for martial arts or practicing. The plot is bland and boring

Dian, so Dian, a peerless genius maid.

To be honest, I don't like the character of Waiting Girl. Not feeling better

It's dull and boring. I originally watched it because of the creativity of Sword Banished Immortal and Immortal Yuan, but now it can't be separated from Sword Banished Immortal and can't use mechas. The plot is less exciting and bland. It would be better to reincarnate as Jian Fengyun in advance and activate the mecha to make up for regrets and change lives to counterattack. While the plot is easy to write, readers also know that there is something exciting about it and they are willing to continue to follow up. Cliché but useful Just my personal opinion, the current plot is not poisonous but not explosive either. It is like tasteless food and it is a pity to throw it away. Of course, I can't see the background data. Maybe many readers like the author's development like this. Only the author knows whether it is popular

Dressed in the skin of a Pili puppet show, I scribbled it out to fool fellow Taoists, and the characters were changed. It should have been written by al. If you look at it on Baidu Encyclopedia, you won't find it written like this. It's okay for Xietian Yuwu to change his gender and fall in love with the protagonist. The latest one says that Haiyu fights to the death for the Scale Clan? Don't make your brother Yu laugh

This maid really steals the spotlight from the protagonist, because the reader becomes the protagonist, and the result is that the maid is obviously not bad, but she just feels like an eyesore.

Can those paragraphs dealing with colors be written off in one go? Ever since the characters in the book started playing with color, they have been playing around with it. Have to do it from time to time. Author, if you want to show off your depression, please solve it yourself and don't post it here.

The top masters can actually be controlled.

I came here to see the thrill of upgrading the protagonist's strength, or to play with intelligence. I'm not here to watch two monsters fall in love.

Although the old book is a bit watered down, it still has so many chapters and it suddenly disappeared. It's a pity 😭 I'm still waiting for the AI ​​to add more content after it's finished! I didn't expect you to finish it with AI first 😥

When boundaries appear, you know it is a mentally retarded book.

I've seen the puppet show, and I feel like it's a bit difficult to watch.

After thinking about the matter of the Donggong Divine Seal, assuming that the size of the misery is similar to that of the earth, the flight height of the Donggong Divine Seal is not high, which means that it needs to accept air resistance without landing, which means that its speed needs to reach 7.9Km/s. After flying for a total of ten years, the aftermath of the attack suffered by the Donggong Divine Seal is equivalent to 12 billion tons of TNT, which is about 5 times the global nuclear equivalent in 25 years. This move should be the Flame of God, and it is specifically intended to kill Lord Bozo. After Jianzi, Hen Changfeng, Bo Zangzhu, and Donggong Shenxi joined forces to attack, they beat Bozangzhu to death. The Donggong Shenxi went up to the sky, which is the aftermath of the aftermath. Such a huge energy impact, even in a difficult situation. Just blow up some rocks. It's so terrifying. You still have to be a little cautious. At least you know that the friction and heat caused the Donggong Divine Seal to fly in the sky covered by the gas mask. Otherwise, it would have been burned to death. Now the gas mask blocked the nuclear bomb. A mere technological weapon, no matter how powerful it is, can it compare to my hard-finished true essence?

Yekouyue people are okay, there are basically no rebellious people, and most of the members can dedicate their lives to the mission. From Wo Jiangzi, we can also see that if they are taught, at least the combat power of the leader level can be improved. The strength is not unchanged, and he is very qualified as a subordinate, and the combat power is really not weak. He was crippled by Aoxiao Hongchen's forbidden move, and it must be because he has been in the game for a long time.

For example, the golden entry "God rewards those who work hard"? If there is no upper limit, God's rewards will always improve. All power will never regress. Once you have a permanent certificate, you can imitate the heaven and earth, nature, all things, create all magical moves, magic, magic, magical powers, etc. For example, if you get started with the method of death, time or space magic, you can master the effects of different abilities in time or space. If there is no upper limit, you can become an all-round and supreme powerhouse with no weaknesses. For example, I can master other people's ordinary life or resurrection magic and become the law of life or the law of resurrection and other skills!

Obviously the author did not just say that the surname Jian and Jian Banxian are the same. What nonsense is the name Xianjian: Jian Feixian? It is better to choose a name with three characters that rhyme, such as Jian Piaomiao, Jian Xiaoyao, etc., Choose another title, and also choose a poem name!

I'm addicted to AI. I don't know if this book is AI or not, but the words and sentences still have an AI flavor. I suggest you change your writing style. Otherwise, I will still be killed by AI later.

Brother, let me give you two white entries. The left fist does a little more damage than the right fist, and the right fist does a little more damage than the left fist 🙂

Did you remember it? The two swords in the sword niche are called Daitian and Xingdao respectively.

If you write about your plight alone, you will be thrown into the street

Dilemma is better than Warhammer 😵

There are many typos, incorrect sentences, and even inconsistencies. Hope to change it

In this fast-paced era, everyone's time is precious, but you're still slow to get started

Only when I came to the comment area did I know why the first part was not updated. It did not advance the plot, hydrology, and there were a lot of little emperor uncles. However, there were too few people writing about Pili, so I still want to support it.

Slow-heat invincible flow says yes

From the business class to the middle and late stages, it's all a plot briefing. Everything is covered in a few sentences. Just tell the other person's name and you'll die.