Kusou: Is the World Ending Today?

The author has gone through difficult times and did not write randomly, taking it for granted.

To be honest, I was a little tired from watching the farming development and the behind-the-scenes work. According to the logic of Pili Puppet Show world change, this writing is correct, but it lacks explosive points and exciting points. I really have no motivation to pursue it. Occasionally, I skip to read the driving chapter. I checked the comment area and it's not the same. I am the only one who thinks that the most enjoyable part of a novel comes from pretentiousness and showing off one's holiness in front of others, even in Jin Yong's novels. For example, Zhang Wuji suffered a lot of hardships, but there were more pretentious scenes, including three chapters of extermination, a battle with six major sects, and Wan'an Temple rescuing people. The passage is both exciting and explosive. At the end of "I Only Have Six Days", the protagonist feels refreshed for a while while picking peaches, and then disappears. The protagonist spends most of the time holding his breath, pretending to be weak, farming, and doing things behind the scenes. The excitement plummets, which makes people less and less moved. I will continue to pursue it. Secondly, some "Yingxue" writings are written over and over again. This problem needs to be corrected. I accept if you write like this in one or two chapters. The key is that you output a set of "Yingxue" values ​​like this every now and then. It is too lazy. Why is Jianlai being ridiculed as Lilai? Without him, there are too many private goods! Novels should still focus on plot. You should learn to write with restraint and restrain your unnecessary desire for expression. Alas, if the author writes about Pili in the next book, I hope he can write it in a different way. Your book, The Second Generation of Immortals, can basically be regarded as a farming development type. I am already a little tired of aesthetics. Come on!

The whole text is about win-win-win. This kind of thing only appears three to five times in the whole text, but it turns out that hundreds of chapters are all about this kind of thing. It's really tiring to read. Originally, a bunch of restrictions and restraints were depressing enough at the beginning. After reading a few hundred chapters, I still kept holding my breath and Shen Ao stayed in the gutter like a bastard. Yes, there are many bugs in the predicament, but it shouldn't be so uncomfortable. If I really want to play with you, if Tianhuo is gone, let's continue with Tianhuo pl. Us, it's just a patch, it's really boring to look forward and backward, oh, there is also the unique gay love between brothers in Misery, the unique women are not as good as brothers, you don't have to write about women if you don't want to write about women, anyway, the female characters written in the script are also particularly bad. In addition, it is difficult to evaluate the time traveler who is so messed up. It feels like the protagonist's mind has been played by Misery to become his own slave. . . In my opinion, this book is a thick and dark book about officialdom covered with Pili skin. It is entirely because other Pili fans are really pulling their crotches and all eunuchs are doing better. It is because I have no choice but to think about how good the book is. Now I am totally stuck in both directions. The tone at the beginning was very depressing. After being depressed for a long time, I have been assimilated. If I want to change it to be more enjoyable, the main drama will be full of b. Ug, and I can't write without the original text. Unfinished fan fiction is so difficult. I've seen more than half of it so far. I only looked at the table of contents and the last words of the author's volume. It can be seen that the author wants to make up for it, but in the author's words, some people are talking corpses. The same is true for this book. It is basically a dead book that automatically updates. . . I feel like after finishing this book, why don't the author try something original? The suffering seems grand, but in fact it is all coded by history. No matter how it is written, it is carved in history. Like Henglian, it is a broken path. . .

I 😏 have a shocking and "genius" idea💡! ! ! Why not include Tian Xia Shi, Tai Xi Shenzhao, Ji Wu Xia, and the trouble-loving Nv Rong into the harem to form the ultimate villain version of "The Eight Immaculate Harem"! ! ! 1. Xizai (Daozhen Shenjun, one of the three masters of heaven and earth) 2. Yunmeng Xiangying (Lord of the Six-Day Heart Wall + Top Great Innate + "Dafan Zhenwu Jue" + Shenwu Motian Key + "Wanxiang Shenluo" + Wusheng Taisui), 3. Taixi Shenzhao (an alien demon who masters the law), 4. Ji Wuxia (Ji Wuxia is one of the three bodies of the demon Buddha Bo Xun, destroying her is equivalent to fighting the demon Buddha Bo Xun, and requires a calamity coffin sacrifice) 5. Misfortune-loving Nvrong (Buddhist Twin Female Body) 6. Tianxia Shi (Yunmeng Huaju, the Lord of the Three Prefectures of Taishang Prefecture, mastering the Wanxiang Divine Luo) In this case, if you want to kill Xi Zai, you will have to do it within 7 days Deal with several big forces at the same time, eliminate 5 super first-line bosses, and one first-line boss. Looking at the entire Thunderbolt series, almost no one can speed through it in seven days. The difficulty of the task can be called the nightmare level of hell! ! ! Xizai directly becomes the ultimate undead character, and the "safety" is directly maximized! Become the Great Demon King of Misery👿! Public enemy of the entire territory! ! ! I am just playing tricks, the dog head is to save my life

It is known that Xizai's superficial identity is a white dragon that evolved from the sky python. Here is a little question? How did Xizai evolve into a white dragon in one step? Maybe it's some bonus brought by the real body-taking Azu? Then from the foreshadowing at the beginning, we know that Xizai's fate is to avoid "fire in the sky", to Chapter 75, it is said that he will be hunted down if his identity is exposed, Chapter 95 mentions that Xizai is a gasification body, Chapter 31 of this volume says that Xizai has secrets that cannot be known, Chapter 34 mentions that someone among the masters of heaven and earth left early, and the latest chapter, Chapter 36, says that a gasification body came to Wanjian Cemetery five hundred years ago, Summarizing all the foreshadowings, let's make a bold guess. The first true body of Xizai's time travel is most likely to be the evil king who represents the vitality of the first generation of Lords of Heaven and Earth. After he woke up from time travel and found out that he was the villain boss, he decisively chose to run away with a bucket, go to seize Azu, turn into a dragon and wash himself ashore? ps: If the guess is wrong, I hope everyone will not criticize it. You are welcome to analyze and add corrections in the comment area. In the end, the author's description will be the main one!

I'm not saying I'm disgusted, but there are two updates every day, and basically one chapter is about driving. I skip to read it every time. The author said that the subscription data is good. First of all, everyone likes the setting of this book. The author's writing style is the most comfortable to me among so many Pili fans. So maybe it is not because of driving that the data is maintained well. Finally, this book is positioned as a harem novel. You can drive normally, but don't drive too frequently.

Trail Period

Dear Senior Chijin ran away.

Some pictures of people

Deep in the clouds of the stream lie the pine waves, and the shadows of the pine trees accompany the cranes for a long time. A feather falls, rising and falling with the tide;